Will you be without me? Chapter 45 The Final Chapter

Mission rockstar accomplished…….

Pragya was little bit nervous but was keep on telling herself that all this is for him and he will surely like it. She was trying to be positive as much as she could. Pragya reached the venue of the musical event and Abhi was also there as he felt she was quite nervous about the event. But until now he was unable to figure out why she was like that for this event as this is not new to her.

Pragya went to the backstage as for Abhi; he was also with her by giving moral support. The event was going very smoothly. A lot of singers performing to various hindi songs. Abhi“Pumpy! You see all is going off smoothly! And can you just calm down! Why are u still having the worried face?”

Pragya said with a faint smile “Ok! I will not be worried…”
Just then, one of the staff of Pragya rushed to her. The staff “Mam! We got a huge problem now!” Pragya “What is the problem?” The staff “The singer….I mean your friend….is unable….” Pragya “Unable to what? Just say it out!” The staff “Unable to come…He just texted us saying he won’t make it to the event and we tried to call him but his phone is switched off!” Pragya “What? How can he do that? It’s a very big opportunity for him! And he just said he won’t make it!” Abhi “Relax Pragya! Wait when his performance is?” Pragya “After two more performances, it is meant to be his performance already and what do I do now? If he is not here…then the entire schedule will be affected!” Abhi “Calm down Pragya! We can think of something!” Pragya “No Boss! Time is running out! Wait! Boss will u….. help me?” Abhi “Yes of course I will! And that’s what I am here for!”

Pragya “Can you.. don’t mistake me….but…perform instead of him?” Abhi “What? Are u crazy Pumpy! I don’t even know what he is performing for and I never even practice for it! And this is live performance! How can I? You know right I don’t have interest in all this already! We shall think of something else!” Pragya “No! There is no time to think of something else! Do you want your Pumpy to be pumped by the organizers? No right? Please help me Boss! I have no choice!” Abhi “This is totally ridiculous!” He left from there and Pragya was lost on how to convince him now…..

It was time for his performance and the stage was dark and spotlights were on….There was a voice saying….I am sorry if this performance is not up to the mark but I am doing this for my love….

Pragya heard it and knew it was him! Yes finally he is there! And Pragya now you have to do your part!

Abhi performing to soch na sake

tainu itna main pyaar karaan
ik pal vich sau baar karaan
tu jaave je mainu chhad ke
maut da intezaar karaan

I love you so much,
love you a hundred times in a moment,
if you leave me and go,
I’ll wait for death.

ke tere liye duniya chhod di hai
tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chaahata hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake

I’ve left the world for you,
my breath stops at you only.
How much I love you,
you can’t even think..

kuchh bhi nahi hai ye jahaan
tu hai to hai is mein zindagi
ab mujhko jaana hai kahaan
ke tu hi safar hai aakhiri

this world is nothing,
if you are there, there is life in it.
now where else do I have to go?
You are my last journey..

Pragya enters the stage and sings the upcoming lines and Abhi is surprised that she is here to perform with him but controlling his surprise, he continues to perform with her……

ke tere bina jeena mumkin nahin
na dena kabhi mujhko tu faasley
main tujhko kitna chaahati hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake

it’s not possible to live without you,
don’t ever keep me distant from you.
how much I love you,
you can’t even think..

tere liye duniya chhod di hai
tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake

I’ve left the world for you,
my breath stops at you only.
How much I love you,
you can’t even think..

Pragya: aankhon ki hain ye khwahishein ke
chehre se tere naa haTein
neendon mein meri bas tere
khwaabon ne leen hain karwatein

this is the wish of my eyes,
that they don’t stop looking at you..
in my sleep, there are twists and turns
of your dreams only..

ke teri ore mujhko le ke chalein
ye duniya bhar ke sab raaste
main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake

all the paths of the world
take me towards you only.
how much I love you,
you can’t even think..

tere liye duniya chhod di hai
tujhpe hi saans aake ruke
main tujhko kitna chahta hoon
ye tu kabhi soch na sake

I’ve left the world for you,
my breath stops at you only.
How much I love you,
you can’t even think..

Everyone over there cheered once the performance was over and Pragya hugged him. Abhi “Pumpy later u can hug me too! Now we should move from here to give way for the next performance!”

Pragya realized what he said and felt very shy. Both of them left the stage after thanking the audience. Abhi “Pumpy u go first and get changed! I will be back in a moment!” Pragya “Why? Are you angry with me? I want to ask u something!” Abhi “You go first and wait for me in the green room!” Pragya “Ok but come faster! I will be waiting for you!” Abhi “Ok I will be back!” Pragya went towards the green room and was keep on looking back to see him. Pragya, now I don’t know what is he thinking about me! Is he angry or what and where did he went? Now I have no mood to get changed too! I feel my head is going to burst thinking all about this!”

Abhi entered the green room where Pragya was….Abhi “You didn’t change?”
Pragya “No mood! First tell me something….Are u angry with me?” Abhi “How can I be angry with my love? But all these is your plan right? A surprise for me?” Pragya “How do you know that?” Abhi ” For the past few days itself I was doubtful about your activities and today when I wear the outfit that we bought that day…Everything had fall in place…And when you came to perform with me…It was confirmed that all this was your plan!” Pragya “Sorry Boss! I just want u to perform again…I know this is not a rockstar performance but at least you are performing na…and the rockstar in you will be also revived…With that in my mind, I had planned all this!” Abhi “Look up Pumpy! You no need to be sorry for this! I understand that the love you have for me made u do all these…But I had something in my mind too” Pragya “What’s that?” Abhi “Close your eyes and I will ask u some questions and u have to answer them!” Pragya was confused on what he is up to but did as what he said. Abhi “Will you be always the support of my life?” Pragya “Yes I will be as my support is also from your life!” Abhi “Will you be the answers to my questions?” Pragya “Of course I will try but my questions are always answered by you too!” Abhi “Pumpy this is a very important question! Listen carefully! Will you be without me?” Pragya “Never will I be myself without you! So I must be with you Boss!” Abhi “Now you can open your eyes!” Pragya opened her eyes and was surprised to see him on his knees. It was just like the way that she had dreamt long time back… Abhi “Will you marry me?” Pragya “Yes I will!” Abhi made her wear the ring and hugged her tightly. He told Pragya “I know you must be with me but let me tell you something…. I am destined to be with you!” With that their journey of love, friendship and companionship continued forever……….

That’s how this story of will you be without me? Comes to an end. It’s just a simple story where two individuals who know each other have been the questions and answers to each other. They did not involve others to interfere in their problems. They always had the mindset to understand and help each other. This mindset is achieved through their unconditional love for each other. Unconditional love will always never have any conditions on how you behave or get along with your loved ones. So have unconditional love for your loved ones!


I am not sure whether u all even liked the ending but to me I felt this is the right time to end before u all lose interest in this ff. I don’t know how to express but as much as u all had enjoyed this ff, I had more emotional attachment towards this ff. Every episode is directly or indirectly expressing my thoughts, emotions and pain….So whenever u all appreciate with comments, it made me feel better in terms of my feelings or pain that I was having. Writing here is just my way to forget my worries and pain….While writing all this itself I am feeling a bit emotional….I have a special attachment to the title itself, when I first decided to write this I was thinking that this time the title should be something that express my feelings and after so much of thinking I came up with this title! First I thought of will I be without u? Will we be together? Will this happen? And then finally will you be without me? I was like literally cracking my head to confirm this one….This is just a small thing that I felt like sharing with u all…. And of course no matter how busy I am I really like the feeling of seeing your comments and replying to that, even if it’s just a one word….If I am not wrong I started this habit when I got to know that I can reply you all from my prev ff…Ya initially I didn’t know that I can reply u all so I will just reply to the comments in the upcoming update….and now I also have to be thankful to TU for the notification function as it really helps me to check out on comments! And lastly about what I always feel about the comments… it may be a bit cliché….but I shall still tell it…Maya always mesmerized by all your mesmerizing comments….and yes to whoever told me that its magical whenever i write something….for them I also came up with a line but it’s not in English…it’s in Tamil….Maya endraal mayangal alla…manathil ulla mayakangale maya….haha its sounds so lame right? I don’t feel like translating it too….

Once again thank you so much for each and every one for reading this ff and commenting as well as silently supporting me…. I think all this support made my crazy mind to think and write until so far…..Words are not enough to express my gratitude…With a lot of love and gratefulness I will always cherish the support that I have received so far. Thank u once again! Sorry if I had disappointed any of u all in terms of this ff….As usual I will always try harder and make u all enjoy through my writings….. Thank u also for bearing my doubts that irritate u all!
Special message to everyone here whom I consider as my friends: Stay calm, Stay in love as calmness and love will make u all blessed in all ways!
Extra info: I am the Maniac who wrote some funny one shots quite some time back. I was HH (happily happy) that nobody mentioned my name. Hehe…..

Sayonara actually no I am here only with the other ff….so meet u all there! May be u all have to wait for the arrival of the other ff as I am stuck with some assignments again….so sorry for that! But I will try to upload if i can…


  1. vigan

    im a silent reader of ur ff.. its was really awesome.. I hope u wil b back wit ur new ff soon.. all the best

  2. Riyashri

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    ” Happily Happy “……………….Superb Ending !!! Maniac….U r seriously Crazy …………What will I tell u ……..

    • Riyashri

      |Registered Member

      Astonishingly Amazing……..Brilliantly Beautiful……..Creatively Creative………Differently Different……..Extremely Extraordinary………Fantastically Fantabulous…….Generously Genius…….Hilariously Humourous…………Incredibly Impossible…….Jubilantly Jubilant……….Kindheartedly Killing …………Lovingly Lovable…….Marvellously Magical……..Naturally Noble……….Outstandingly Optimistic…………..Preciously Perfect…………Quintessential Queen…………Randomly Rocking………..Spectacularly Superb………Treasurely Talented………..Unexpectedly Unimaginable……..Valuably Victorious…….Wonderfully Wonderful……..Xcellently Xcellent………Youthfully Young…………..Zillionly Zealous ……………………………….
      All the words mentioned above defines only one person in the World and in My Life…….
      My MTMP !!!
      Maya – The Magical Princess !!
      I would only Love one person Unconditionally …and that is My Sweetie….
      Love u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo Much ……….
      For me U r The Best !!!! Keep Rocking in Your Life…….Keep Smiling………Live Happy……Be who u r…….Stay Blessed Forever !!
      Unconditional Love Forever and Ever
      From Your Cutie……..

      • Maya


        Omg! U describe with me from A to Z ah? Its so touching dr! U are so cute again cutie! Aww so touched by every single word of urs!

      • Maahi

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        uffo wat hppnd to dizz TTU always posting my cmmnts in smewere else tht was a reply to riyuuuu cmmnt but they posted it smewere else

  3. nannu

    superbbb yarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr…………………………………i loved ur ff alot

  4. Maahi

    |Registered Member

    finally FINALLY mission rockstar is accomplished but vrry sweet surprise frm my sweetheart nd haha he is too smart too tht he guessed tht it was prags plan nd finally dizzz was the best title dr nd I remember it always nd I shared one of its incident in my clg too naa in my physics class haha my fav song KI TERI ORE MUJHKO LEKHE CHALE DUNIYA BAR KI SABH RASTHE MEI TUJHKO KITHNA CHAHATHI HU THU KABHI SOCH NAA SAKHE spclly dedicated fr uuuu sweetuuuuuuu my crazy IB, CB, SOC nd I am tooooo connected thn uuu with dizz ur magic bcoz frm dizz nly I got IB naaa sooooo its a Bookmark in my heart nd wat u said in tamil I didnt understood dr but I am pretty sure tht it would dfntly nt b lame bciz watever u write is always awesome so nvr dare tht again nd cmng to Maniac issue did u remember in one OS I said tht the writing was vry close to my heart nd frm my loved ones ani I was sure abt it but if u really wanted to hide ur identity so I just nt revealed ur name dont think I am over reacting dr but prmse I really identified uuuuu nd yaar ur awesome mindblowing outstanding splendid no words to express my gratitude towards ur magic UR UNPREDICTABLE IMPOSSIBLE DR KEEP ROCKING I VIL B WAITING FR UR NXT MAGIC LV UUUU LOADS OF LOVE TONNES OF HUGS ND KISSES MISSS DIZZZZ BEAUTIFUL FULL EMOTION COMBINED FF UR JUST INCREDIBLE U NVR LEFT WITHOUT TAKING ANY EMOTION TO US SOOO VRY HUMBLED FR THT PROUD TO B UR FOREVER FAN DR KEEP ROCKING

    • Maya


      I rmbr that u told that can i know for what is this maniac abt? At the OS and u felt someone close you have written tis ani…after reading tat itself i don want to reply dr…btw whatever u said n feel abt my ff or towards me hav always touched me!???? so dont know how to express my gratitude again….

  5. Maahi

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    honey I totally agree with uuu tht all these suits nly IB bcoz she is an chilling beauty in a dragon fiery forest soooo sweet nd cute cmmnt finally u nd somu accomplished ur mission by the end of diz IB magic as uu promised liked it a lotttttttttttttttttt it suits her alotttttt nd ya she is cent percent AN MTMP IB Keep rocking QOE

  6. rajesh

    Hey ur ff is reallyyy tooo gud…realllyyy i lyk it…credit it new one again…this ff is tooo gud…i really enjoyed it…each and every scene if this ff is gudd..don’t worry who told ur ff is not gud..v all ppl enjoyed and loved ur ff…v all happily read ur ff… ur also lyk my ladli(trisha(love of life and eternal luv director..))…i cal as ladlii so i told here as ladli….ladli also writting lyk u…v all ppl encourage u k this kind of gud director v want ever and welcome ever..

    • Maya


      Tisha is fab writer and pls don say she is writing like me! I mean she is vry unique…and pls dont compare her wit me…and thank u so much for the supporting me!??

  7. Abhigya

    Brilliant ending suga…I loved it to the core…I will miss this ff a lot……nd thank you soooooo much for giving such a fantastic ff…love u..??

    • Maya


      As usual I am always grateful for the continous support frm u! Thank u so much for that!?? ya me too will miss tis ff a lot…?

  8. mokshi

    Awesome end of this ff but ill miss to core by gods grace boss doesn’t get anger over pumpy for her attempt to get back her rockstar boss????????????

  9. Sonika

    I really love it and not only this even ur os also no words to express awesome yar keep rocking

  10. durga

    Awesome episode really nice ending really superb @last tat proposal s chanceless n ultimate I love it a lot

  11. Somiya

    |Registered Member

    Ahm so last chapter right? ? Okay doesn’t matters but the way u conveyed the content in these 45 chapters were so amazing that made me your jaabra fan, until now only surbhi made me jaabra fan but now i m jabra fan of your ff’s too! Today’s epi wasn’t above expectations as it was all unexpectedly unexpected! UU! And now i got answer for my question about uniqueness! Actually Uniqueness has got you and you are perfect for that! Pumpy and Boss are my fav! ????? the way they surprised eachother was a way too brilliant! I m always using short forms right? Today i will use full forms! Because this ff is just in my fav list and in my fav list it has got the top place! I mean its on 1st! So here we go with the full forms! Okay after full forms i will show you a word i have thought after reading today’s update! So….

    Oh so you have really made me Jabra fan of ur ff so here we go with the new word that i thought for you! and it’s SUGAFECTION! It doesn’t means infection ????? its SUGA+ PERFECTION=SUGAFECTION! Seriously loved this chap and whole ff to core

    • Maya


      Omg u also ah A to Z….hmm what can i say now? Really overwhelmed by ur words…i am not sure whtr i deserve tis…it really vry overwhelmingly overwhelming (OO)!???? And sugafection haha actually it first sounded like some infection to me but ur exp made it clear…but i am not at all perfect…imperfection is wht describes me the best in all ways…?? but as usual always feeling pleasant thr ur comment????

  12. Krish

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    diiiiii it was just Awesomeeeeeee sema endng i loved it nd tat line s superrrrrrrbbb diiii nd srrryyyyyy diii i didnt cmnt ur prev epii i thought i cmnted soo srrryyy nd always keep rockng diii……..luv uu a looooootttt diiii……….

    • Maya


      Haha no need to be sorry for that Krish! Its not at all big issue? thank u so much for the support so far ??and if u refering to the line in tamil…just ignore it! Haha??

  13. Trisha

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    Superb ending to an awesome ff… You are an extremely brilliant and talented writer so full of creative energy. Will miss this ff alot… All the best to you Maya… And hope you come back with another story soon…

  14. Pinky

    Just now I heard that song and you wrote it and its one of my favorite song and seriously I’m gonna miss this ff ‘will you be without me?’ And yes I’m eagerly waiting to read new os or ff from you so don’t make your fans wait for so long so post a os with your random thoughts as I told before I’m seriously in love with your random thoughts!

    • Maya


      Omg u love my random thoughts ah? As i told u b4 i think its now risky Pinky! But will try if any random thoughts come to my mind….thank u for the support so far too!??

  15. surbhi

    I suga wait let me tell you gosh what to tell you ahm aaaannnn what to say not getting words now you killed me today maar dala re ladki aakhir kaar bachhe ki jaan le hi li oho oho oho the episode please some one punch me am I dreaming this wasn’t seem like end it was like beginning areh wait u made Abhi sung the song tere liye duniya chhod di hai right let me dedicate you some songs today usually I do it for somu but u forced me to do I can’t resist from this now so here we go first of all original song of tere liye duniya chhor di hai by hardy sandhu
    mai pyar to wadh tainu pyar karan
    tainu sajda sone lakh waar Karan
    je din nu tu keh de Raat mahi
    te mai Raat Samjh aitbaar Karan
    tere layi duniya nu chhadyan
    ke tere layi doori apne pare
    mai tainu kinna chaniyan
    ae gal teri soch to pare
    then ?????????????????????????????????????? specially the question answer part the proposal damn fantastic fantastic fantastic multiplied by 100 million

    • Maya


      Everytime u comment on my ff…I am actually lost for words…i am like in cloud nine and now u came up with song dedication for me! Iss comment ki main kya reply karoon? I am really lost for words…no actually lost in ur words…lost in the beauty of ur comment??????????????????

  16. Reshma Pradeep

    Sooooooooo…………Its Finished at last………..45 CHAPTERS……. Not Only 45 Chapters………Different Thoughts & The way You Conveyed it……….AWESOMELYYYYYY AWESOMEEEEEEEEEE………..Pumpy & Boss is AMAZINGGG AS USUAL……………&What did you said Above ??? ” Maya always Mesmerized by our Mesmerizing Comments….”Really!!! But I want to say that, ” WE ALL ARE MESMERIZED BY YOUR MESMERIZING THOUGHTS…..” GOT IT ??? Ur ffs are always Something Different………. Its Really an Enjoyment to all & At the same time, It will Compel us to think about Something New through Your Thoughts……..Loves Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu & UR Writings a lotttttttttttttttttt

    • Maya


      Aww so sweet of u thank u so much! For ur mesmerizing words and support frm the beginning of my writings here! I always appreciate that a lot Reshma! Words are not enough to express my gratitude for that!

  17. Nirmal

    Superb episode yaar… Will miss this ff badly….more over I’m waiting for your next ff or os whatever it is, I’m waiting…

  18. Pavi

    Awesome end da sweetu n girl dont u dare to say tht v’ll get irritatd if u con it u r one of the best writers n maya ku nee kodutha definition semma da k da meet u soon tc bye bye love u

  19. anu

    So loving ff u hav end we r crazy of ur ff u ended quickly pls continue it its not boring don’t dare to use the word boring ff r lovely we lvu ur ff very muchhhhh pls try to continue ur ff we will support u and pray for ur happiness hav a nice day good luck take care

    • Maya


      Aww so sweet of u anu! and thank u so much for ur wishes! I am not sure whether i can continue and so sorry for telling its boring…all ur craze for my ff really makes me emotional though….

  20. Nivethitha

    Iyyooo y ka??y ka?? Y u always making me to love u soooooooooooooooooooooo much.. U r always making me to love u soooooooooooooooooooooo much.. If I were a boy na I would have proposed u haha don’t get panic just joking I don’t know how to propose and all and I will not do that too moreover I have a boyfriend.. U know who is that yes it’s my books.. He itself enough for me..???? ok ok enough of my ooralles.. Again u r truly amazing ka.. I really really loved it.. I really really enjoyed it… Love u soo much ka.. Lots of love to u.. Stay blessed ka????

    • Maya


      U are always lovely in ur comment. Always pleased to see ur lovely comment! It really means a lot to me as its frm my sis na…u too stay blessed and always grateful for ur love ???????

  21. Sharaya

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    I’m very very very very very very very very very no sorry today I read all the episodes that I missed and seriously all are so so so awesome I’m so sad that you end my favourite ff but I can understand but I will never lose interest on this amazing ff and the way you ended this ff is so lovely ???????????????????????????????????????????i don’t know what to say because the comments which are above snatched all the words so I have to use dictionary to praise you when I was searching my mom thought I was studying lol so no thanks for that and so here the words are these words especially for you, one of my favourite writer

    Astounding………..bedazzling……… Brilliant ……… Breathtaking …….. Classy………dazzling …..elite…… Flawless….. First class…. Inspired …….legendary …… Awesome ………amazing …….. excellent ………nice…….super …….fantastic …….fabulous …….. Out standing ……. Marvellous …… Majestic …… Cool……. Great ……fantabulous ….fantastic …..wonderful ….. Bravo!!…… Good …..stupendous …..so special beautiful ……lovely …… Super duper…..stunning ….. Phenomenal(excellent)…… Trés Bien(very good in French)……. Spectacular…… Soo Creative.
    … Extraordinary ………. Incredible ….. Soo unique… Hên hâo (very good in Chinese) ……erg goed(in dutch)……. Sehr gut(in German)…. Assai bonu( in Corsican) ….meget godt (in danish)……napakabuti(in filipino)……bahuth accha(in Hindi) ……rât tôt (in Vietnamese) …..çok iyi (in Turkish) ……. Dī māk (in Thai) ….. Cālā manci (in Telugu) …..muy bien(in Spanish)…… Otlichno(in Russian)……poly kalá (in Greek) …….foarte bine (in Romanian) …..muito bom (in Portuguese) ….. New(in Latin)….. Totemo yoi(in Japanese)…… semma …… Migavum nanraga irundadhu ……. Romba nalla irundhudhu ………

    I don’t know whether the translation of very good in different languages are correct or not but I search them in Google translator and I know words are not enough to praise you and I said legend its because you are really a legend for me in writing now I became a jabra fan of yours so I dedicate this lyrics to you

    main tera haaye re jabra
    hoye re jabra fan ho gaya
    main tera haaye re jabra
    hoye re jabra fan ho gaya
    o tujhe dekhte hi dil mein Dhan Te nan ho gaya

    I’ve become 
    your big, crazy fan.
    as soon as I saw you,
    there was a music in my heart..

    S- super
    U-u are awesome

    Y- you are excellent

    Maya name suits you because you really doing magic I don’t know what white or black or color or non color magic your doing but I’m so jeleous of you anyways leavethat o should not say this word but I have to say thanks you so much!!!!!!! Thank you so much for writing awesome 45 chapters!! Thank you so much for giving this ff!!! Thanks you thank you so so so so much for everything!!! Pls don’t kill me

    And congratulations for completing 2 ff and many os I love your random thoughts a loottttt??? As pinky told you should really write many os and pls come with a new idea by writing os or ts or ss or ff I would love to read it and you told it risky na? In what way it is risky? But pls write it for your fans if I see you means I won’t leave you I will give you a bone crushing hug forever so be ready for it and eat more foods and stay healthy then only you can bear my hug one day I will come to your home and will surprise you with many stuffs which will be in purple color I know you like purple so I will bring some purple things

    I hope this comment is not big and I hope this tu will at least post this comment this is 3rd time I’m commenting actually I’m so lazy to write anything but now I’m not even tired and no sorry! If I have bored you with my silly irritating boring talk bye take care! I wish you have a best future as you want and one more thing! Haha I think you must be thing why am I blabbering so much. If I become a director means I will your story, Soya’s story and subi di’s story and will take a movie by requesting shabbir alhuwalia and sriti jha I think they will be too old that time so I will call other new actors and actresses which you will select and once again I’m so sorry if I bored you and don’t kill me ?? I thank tellyupdates and kumkum bhagya for introducing you and love you so much????

      • Maya


        Haha i thought u forgot the frnship rules na…no sorry n thank u among frnds! I know u were busy dr thats y u couldnt comment properly…its not at all an issue…and whatever u have described in different languages are all correct…ya its from google translator na..but telugu its chala manchi…only that one is a bit off ?? love u for such a lovely comment????????????????????? abt movie i think u better take Surbhi’s story first as there is more content and scenes in it!???? mine is more like a short film lol???? Surbhi’s story can have sequels too! Soya ‘s story will be a great movie too! So i am waiting for ur director venture! I am also a jabra fan of ur comment today??????????

      • Sharaya

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        Oh! Then today I learned how to say very good in different languages actually I tried to say excellent in other languages too but what to do my laziness won ??

  22. Lakshmi

    hey suga really super… I know i am too late but I told u na… I am little busy in work…. but it’s really very emotional yaar… i am really going to miss this ff… u know this ff gave me so much happiness reminds my memorable past and got such a worldz best friend like u…… really going to miss this ff suga….. bye

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