I WILL WIN BACK MY LOVE…SHONA (SWASAN) (EPISODE 1)

Hi guys mahi here..this is my first ff …so I want u all to comment…plzz ..in this ff all the characters are same …no difference except one that in this ff swaragini have an elder brother (Shlok)..coming to the point of writing this ff in English…everything will be written in English except POV ….so here we start …fingers crossed

MAHESHWARI MANSION
IN SWASAN ROOM
IN MORNING
our beautiful love birds are in deep sleep….hugging n cuddling each other..but our suraj dada (sun) didn’t wanted this moment to last long( uff suraj dada?)as soon as the first ray of sun fell on swara …her sleep was broken.so wen she turned she saw sanskar hugging her in his sleep.she smiled n blush at the same time.but as soon as the reality hits her mind..her smile vanishes

SWARA’S POV
no swara u cant fall in his trap again.i know yeh pyaar yeh care sab kuch ek dikhawa hai..ek baar iss admi se pyaar kar ke pachtava kiya hai .aur ek baar nahi karna..agar iss baar bhi iska pyar jootha hua to mai jeete jee mar jaugi..i cant trust him again (sighs) kitni ajeeb baat hai aaj humari shaadi ko 5 mahine ho gaye .aur inn 5 mahino me mai phir se isse pyaar karne lagi aur yeh aaj bhi joothe pyaar ka dikhava karta hai..kaash ye pyar,yeh care asli hota mai bhale kitna hi keh du ki I hate him but truthto yeh hai ki I love him but I cant let him know this…..o shit o shit …. toh uthne wala hai abhi mai kya karu
POV ENDS

as soon as swara realises that sanskar woke up she makes angry faces
Sanskar:(lovingly)wat happen Shona
Swara:how many times should I say u that stop calling me…. Shona I am not ur shona only the person whom I love has the right to call me that..n today again u hugged me in ur sleep…stop ur all this non sense sanskar….stop showing fake love??
Sanskar was heart broken after listening this
Sanskar:this is not any fake love swara this is my love.n I will prove u one day n rahi baat hug karne ki to neend me kya pata kon kise hug karta hai m.shayad tum bhi to mujhe hug karti hogi (winks)
Swara blushes a little bit at the last sentence…obvious noticed by our sanskar
Swara:(fumbles) mai….mai….mai tumhe koi hug nahi karti
As soon as she says this she takes her clothes n goes towards washroom

SANSKAR’S POV
pagal …..but I love this pagal …inn 5 mahino me maine bahut sare changes dekhe hai swara me …i know she started to love me again..kabhi kabhi sochta hu ki itna acha hota agar 2 saal pehle woh cheez hui na hoti to….par koi nahi mujhe bhagvan ne ek aur mauka diya hai aur me iss mauke ko apne haath se nahi jaane duga…dekhna swara main tumhe phir se apna bana ke hi rahuga aur tab tak ke liye mera pyaar hi hum dono ke liye kaafi hai ….but soon I WILL WIN BACK MY LOVE…SHONA
POV ENDS
*************************************************so here episode one ends ..guys plzz do comment..
One more thing this story is totally different from the original one
Byy guys take care

Credit to: mahi

16 comments

  1. sanky fan

    Awsm…..
    One suggestion yr mainly there r reader who prefer to read in eng.If u can post next part in eng.

  2. SHAN

    |Registered Member

    Nice…. U told only pov in hindi but other things in english… In ur ff 90% is pov…. Then everything is in hindi only…. U wont get many comments as many do no hindi and they wont read it…. So if u can update in english…. Bcoz even i do no hindi…. So pls…. Hope from next epi u will update in english….

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