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Will she love me?? (Devakshi ff)By Akshada (Part-13)

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Hey guys srry fr being late……and i am a bit sad coz i jst got 4 comments in my last epi anyways lets start
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Dev’s pov:
Kya karoo?? She cam near me touched my face
Sona: omg!! I can even touch touch u!!!!
Arrey yaar i am so…..confused shuld i go or…..shuld i……
Arghh!!!!
Feel like killing myself fr cmimg at a wrong timimng….better let me do one thing….i took a coin frm my pocket……..heads-shuld be here
Tales-shuld leave
I tossed the coin…..
Hahahaha to my luck it cam heads
Wow!! Thanks god
( oho mr.devrath dixit u hav to thank me!!!! Hw dare u thank god when i helped u in this!!! πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜£πŸ˜£πŸ˜£)
Kk kk nw wht shuld i do…..like……
(stupid!! Of course romance)
Suddenly i heard hr talking wid me
Hmm i hope nw its better to listen to hr….
Sona: why the hell am i imagining u!!!!!!???
I jst hate this….i mean i like this….. But….. Omg!! Sona tumi ekdum bokha……u said u like this…. Shit!!!! I feel like kicking myself….
She saw me….
Sona: i hope this imagination is too……long….
U itself tell something na??
Is she aksing me!!!
Me: whtever ur heart says!!!
Sona: heart….???!!! Heart heart!!! Arghh!!!
I sat on hr bed i was jst staring at hr antics
Omg!!! She is jst killing me…..
Nw wht shuld i do….!!
She cam near me and sat nxt to me….
Sona: wht if everything wht i am thinking is wrong…..!!??
Me: but wht ever u saw in my drawer is true rite????
Sona: hw do u knw?
Dev u dont hav any sense!!!
Before i could say…..
Sona: ya ik u r my imagination so…..u would knw…..hmm….
Sona: do u really love me?
No……i cant ans this one….tht too nw…
Sona: waite waite waite waite……hw vil u knw u r my imagination and u vil the same brain as mine…..sona u r jst a buddhu…..i am jst gona become crazy!!! Whtever it may be….. Hw did u even get my childhood pics…..only i had those copies….
Nw wht shuld i say…i hav all hr pics i mean frm the time she was born…..till nw….i was curious to hav hr pics
Me: hmm…..maybe frm someone whom u knw….
Sona: ik??????……this is the biggest doubt i hav…..idk correctly tht u love me or nt….but we can jst imagine like u love…..but….HW CAN U EVEN LOVE ME???
Me: i did nt get ur point hmm!!!
Sona:… …iss duniya main mujhse zyada cute,gorgeous,smart,bubbly,sweet,beautiful,hot ect ect ladki hai…toh tum kyu mujhse pyaar karti ho….i mean u r world wide known super hero….hw can u even???!!!
She said this while leaning hr bak on the wall….
I got up went near hr…
Me: iss duniya main kinte sara ladki hoti idk par….un sab ladki tum aur tumari jaisa nahi ho sakta hai na???!!!
I said this confidently…
Sona: gud ans but i am nt satisfied….hmm…
Me: hmm….satisfied nahi hoti toh…..i can give u more…….
I went near hr
End of dev’s pov

Sona’s pov:

He cam near me….i mean so…..close to me….he got hold of my face in his hands….more than the before imagination i feel this as real…..(ohh!! So sad of sona….its real only buddhu!! πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚)
He cam more close to me…..i can feel his breath on my lips….i jst dont want to get lost in his eyes so i looked dwn….but he made me look at him….nt again…..but ya i got lost in his eyes…….they were again killing me…i heard him speaking…….
Mrdev: i love ur eyes….mujhe pata nahi ki….sara ladkiyan ko tumare jaise aanke hota hai….and ur nose….. Ears…..lips…..everything…. Is jst admirable…
Kk kk i blushed at his sentence bu…..really imagination main poetic baate bhi aate hai kya???? i bored of addressing mrdev…….so let it be short and sweet “D”
D: toh aap blush ne karte ho??? (so u blush too)
I tried to control my blush but waste of energy…..
D: aap blush karte hue cute lagti ho 😏😏
Nt again man….but again i blushed 😳😳😳😳😳
D: i hope main aise hi baat kana padega
Kk kk i understood his line….but again blushed
He cam more close….i mean….so…close tht our lips were jst inches away…..he stared at me like 2 mins…..i again looked dwn….he put my flicks bak of my ears….maybe it was disturbing his view…. He kissed both my cheeks….i felt really gud…..i got a positive vibration…. Frm him…….he roamed his thumb finger on my lips….when i felt his touch on my lips i closed my eyes…..i did nt wht was he doing…..but…but….but….before i could realise….he latched his lips on mine….god man…. I hope i am imagining so much….but i dont knw when i started to respond to him…..but it felt awesome…..he was kissing me….so softly and passionatly…. He bit my lower lips so softly….i opened my mouth….and he started tasting and expolring each and every corner of my mouth and lips too…….he broke the kiss coz of lack of oxygen……i did nt open my eyes my house…coz i felt so….embaressed…… I felt his hands off my face and when i opened my eyes he was nt there….
But seriously i was enjoying the kiss so…much….
But i did nt think i would imagine him so….much….like making myself crazy fr tht kiss….
I went near the bed layed dwn….and was totally thinking abt the kiss….
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Precap: dev’s pov and sona ignoring Hana and dev……

Plzs do bear me if there is any mistakes…..
Bye frm Akshada and Harshita

20 Comments
  1. Amazing Episode

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs vil post soon

  2. Akshita

    Plzzz Plzzz post soonπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ˆ
    it was fantastic βœ”βœ”βœ”

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs vil post soon😍😍😘😘

  3. DramaQueen1004

    Awsum epi yr
    Really loved it
    Devakshi ki pehli kiss…. ye sona apne pyaar ko realise kab karegi
    Sry fr not commenting in d prev epi
    Pls post soon
    Love u loads
    Nafia

    1. V.V.harshita

      She vil soon realise….and ya vil post soom 😍😍😘😘

  4. Awesome πŸ‘πŸ» post soon luv u dear 😘

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs vil post soon 😍😍😘😘

  5. MANSINAIK

    Hi I’m finally registered l’m happy πŸ˜€πŸ˜€

  6. Niceeeee plssss post soon

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs….vil post soon 😍 😍 😘 😘

  7. Awesome episode. Waiting for next

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs vil post soon

  8. fantastic epi next post soon

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thanxs vil post soon

  9. Darshana

    Wow what an episode😍😍😍😍😍…lovely dear..devakshi ki pheli kiss aur sona ko lagta hai ki woh imagine kar rahi hai…OMG!..when she will realise the truthπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚..would be fun to read….
    post really soon!!
    love u😘

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs…..and when she realises tht he was nt imagination…..thr would be a vry big dramaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
      Vil post soon

  10. Riti1107

    Sona bhi na seriously buddhu hai

    That Dev you should thank me & not god was so funnyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    First kiss❀❀❀❀❀❀❀

    Post soon

    1. V.V.harshita

      Thnxs yaar…… And i hav already posted

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