Will we get united forever – Ragak fs shot8

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Will we get united forever 8
Hi friends…do you remember this ff…am really sorry for taking long time in updating my ff’s…am little bit feeling weak and not well these days…that’s why I took time in replying to your comments too…am really sorry for that…
Ok I will stop my blabber…here we go…happy reading…
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Raglak stares eo painfully…
Ap gets shocked and collapsed on floor…
“Maa!!”laksh screams and rushed towards her…
The ghatbandan cloth tied between them falls on the homagundam…it starts burning…
Ragini’s eyes turned moist and the next moment her hands got hurt because she blown off the fire using her hands…

“Ragini!!”sona rushed to her and caresses her hand…while ragini’s gaze falls on laksh…
Laksh didn’t even looked at her…he lifts his mom in his hands and asked prathap to start the car…
“chaliye…Mr.dixit…”police drags dev while he argued with them…
RagSona goes towards dev and they pleaded the police men to leave dev…
“please sir…my bhaai haven’t done anything…please leave him!!he is innocent”Ragini pleaded them…
“achcha…that court will decide…now stay away and allow us to do our duty orelse I need to arrest you guys too..”police pushed ragini’s hands aside which made her wounds deeper…
“laadoo!!”dev screams and frees himself from police grip and rushed to Ragini…
His tears touched his cheeks seeing the wounded hand of Ragini…
Police takes him away by kicking him…
“dev!!”sona screams and ran behind him…
Dev stares RagSona painfully…

Sona cries badly falling on the floor…
Ragini wipes her tears and goes to her…
“sona…kuch nahi Hua bhai KO…Mein hoon na…chalo let’s go to police station…”said Ragini composing herself…
“Ragu!!am thinking about you dear…i know dev will be out somehow…but what about your’s and laksh’s relation…”sona cries even more…
Ragini(controlling her tears):sona!!don’t worry…laksh will understand us…he know that bhai won’t do this…
Ragini and sona reached the police station and Ragini argued with them about the arrest warrant issues…
Ragini then asked about the proofs…
“we have proofs madam…we have the knife which dev used to kill durgaprasad…”police men said…
Sona heart broke down…Ragini consoles her…
She then called her senior and conveyed him about the case…
He said that he can’t do anything now since it’s a holiday and dev have to be in jail for another day since tomorrow is Sunday…

“don’t worry bhaiyya..i will bring you out somehow…i believe you…”Ragini holds dev’s hand…
Dev:Ragu…am happy that atleast you two believed me…sona will talk to my lawyer laadoo you need not worry…you have to be with laksh laadoo..go na…go from here…(controlling his tears)…

“waah!!”they hears a clap sound…

“laksh!!”dev gets shocked…
Ragini stares him painfully and she didn’t uttered anything…
“waah!!what a bro-sis combo…”laksh said in full of anger tone…
Dev:what do you mean…
“oh…really dev…you can’t understand still …but I understood you both..you brother and sister played in my life with your tricks..”said laksh angrily…
“laksh!!”dev roars…

“shshh…just shut up…what I said was nothing wrong…you played your cheap ethics and you used your sister in this game…chi…”laksh shouts…
Next moment Laksh was holding his burning cheeks which Ragini gave him as a return gift for his words…
“don’t dare say anything about my brother…orelse I won’t spare you…got it….”Ragini roared like a lioness but still tears were occupying her eyes…
Sona controlled her whereas dev was hitting his hands hard can’t able to hear laksh’s words…
Laksh:hit me…hit me more…i deserves it…i lost me in your love but what your brother did with my family…my mom is the one who took my side…just to see my happiness she stands against her husband but your so called brother murdered my dad…have u heard the proverb don’t judge by external looks …but nowadays we can’t even judge anyone by their affection too…all were liers…my love itself cheated me!!

“laksh!! stop it…how can you lose your trust on your love itself…this shows that you have never loved Ragini…shame on you laksh…”sona bursts out in anger…
Laksh:haan…why won’t you say…it’s my fault of talking with you…
Laksh then moves towards the inspector and strengthen the case by producing the eye witness and filed FIR against dev…
Ragini doesn’t have any interest in pleading him so she stands simply turning her gaze towards dev…
“bhaiyya…don’t worry…whatever happens I will be with you always forever…”said Ragini wiping her tears…
Dev holds her hand and says”Ragini…please I don’t want to interfere in your life…i will talk to laksh…please once…”

Ragini:bhaiyya…promise me…(she place his hand on her head)you shouldn’t talk anything to him…he doesn’t believe my love and talking nonsense by trusting others…if he loved me truly then he would have supported me and he would have taken my side…but what happened was in reverse…i can’t see my brother pleading with someone else…(she sobs)…
“Ragu!!”dev gets emotional…
Laksh heard her words and hid his pain…
He then leaves immediately without looking at Ragini…
“laksh!!”sona shouts and ran behind him but Ragini blocked her way…
Ragini assured dev something and leaves with sona…
Laksh flashed in ragini’s mind…she closed her eyes tightly…
Ragini can’t control anymore and she sobs and broke down…
“Ragini!!”sona consoles her but she started crying even more…
Ragini:sona…I can’t bear this pain…one side my bhaai is in jail without doing anything another side my laksh lost his father…but I didn’t expect that laksh would blame us…he left me…how can he said those words…he killed me alive with his words…you know what sona he promised me that he won’t leave me…he said that we will get united forever…but he left me in the mandap itself…
“Ragu!!please da control yourself…he will come back to you when he knows the truth…”said she convincing…
Ragini:what!!coming again…he won’t…you heard his words na sona…he said that me and bhaai cheated him using his love…how bad he thought about us…how can I forget those words sona…eventhough if he comes back, I know I will accept him again because my heart can’t reject him…i consider him as my life sona but what he did with me…haan…he just thrashed me away…(sobbing)

“please Ragini!!don’t cry like this…i can’t see you like this da…”said sona hugging her…
“but sona I won’t leave him…he should regret his words…”Ragini words caught in her throats and she feels dizzy…
On the other side a man is shown with his evil smirk…
“what do you think about me dev!!I took revenge from you…hahaha!!(evil laugh)your soul…your sister’s life gets demolished…”villain said…
Prathap:haha!!yes sir ji…we finished the chapters of both dp and dev with a single move…

To be continued •••
Am sorry I know it’s an short update but still I want to end it here…you will know about the rest in next epi…and may be within two chappy this ff will end and don’t miss it…
So at the end it is clear that prathap and his gang trapped dev…what’s your opinion will laksh returns back to Ragu??
Keep guessing…
And my hearty congratulations to all the members who presented their works in champion OS competition…
Take care dears…
~Darshu

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40 Comments
  1. Jazzy

    Amazinggg

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear jazzy ? glad that you liked it…and wlcme bck dear…

  2. Really nice..keep it up….can I know who won the champion os competition???

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much ridita? glad that you liked it…

  3. Really nice..keep it up….update soon…can I know who won the champion os competition???

    1. IQRA222

      it is harinipriya di

    2. Fairy

      1.frst is Harinipriya(raglak os) -96 marks out of 100
      2.second is abhi (ragsan os)-95 marks
      N I don’t remember d rest sry….

  4. Mintu

    Awesome sisy..laksh Yen ipidi pandran.. Ragu pavam dhana..!! Atleast avan ragu va nambalamla..!!! Epidi nalum ragu laksh ah vitutu iruka mudiyadhu..bt laksh ku kandipa punishment kudukanum…!!! Take care of ur health dear..!! ??

    1. Darshini

      Sissy tq so much da…
      Avan situation la he is right da bt twist will b n nxt epi…
      Aama da Ragu won’t leav him bt chinnatha oru treatment kuduthuduvom…
      Tc too da thangam!!
      Health anda headache daan da…
      Eyes Ku pora nerves knjm weak da alrdy sonnenla adaan…

      1. Mintu

        I know sisy.. Athn sonnen.. Unga health ah pathukonga nu. Take care dear

  5. IQRA222

    darshuuu di the episode was really emotional for me
    as i can’t never imagine or see raglak separation
    but i know its needed for my didu’s story
    poor ragu she is suffering so much her loved ones are away from her
    i know laksh is right at his pov and anyone at his place will also believe it but i felt it was really unjust for ragu. despite the fact that he loves ragu, he distrusted her very bad. Didu do give him a hard punishment ok
    and didu only 2 episodes!!!!!! how can this happen . i am very sad
    waiting for the next part

    1. Darshini

      Am Cho chorry my sweet doll…don’t get emotional dear it will b sweet n nxt chappy..
      Thnks for understanding his Pov da…
      Sure there will be some twist n nxt chappy n one mre thing Ragu will giv him some small punishment da…
      Till then stay tuned…
      Since it’s an short story I don’t want to drag it mre dear…it won’t nice if i drag mre…tc da!!

      1. IQRA222

        Didu dont be sorry ok

  6. Fairy

    Superbbbbb superb superb superbbbb update dr..really mindblownggg????it’s emotional dr….still loved it so much???post nxt part soon…N thnx for ur wishes?????it ws really a new n gr8 xperience for me n I think for everyone else also??? n m so happy dat raglak n ragsan os were d winners???? ??? keep rockng n stay blessed sweety?

    1. Fairy

      N plz take care of ur self sweetheart?? get well soon…???

    2. Darshini

      Aww tq tq tq so much dear fairy??
      And sry for mking you emotional dear…
      Will post soon dear..
      And Congo for inseparable it was such a wonderful stry…i loved it…
      And abt I health am getting headaches often due to some weakness in nerves dear…
      Am getting well bt doc ask me not to use mobile often bt it’s not possible na…haha!!
      But am trying hard..tc dear!!

  7. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sinni ? glad that you liked it….

  8. Awesome episode

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ammu ? glad that you liked it…

  9. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear anju? glad that you liked it…

  10. Superb dear, laksh shattered our Ragu. Dharshu dear give laksh hard punishment

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear rehna ? yes dear he will get a punishment for sure don’t worry…tc da…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

  11. Asra

    awesome darshu dear…nenga sonengala raglak pirika madenganu…Ipa yean ipadi panenga…ellarumey pavam dear….feeling bad for everyone….emotional update dear…ragu sona dialogue than enaku rmba pidichathu…laksh thirumba vandha na accept panipen avana na love panren nu….superbbb dear adhu….Indha pratap avan boss aiyum kolanum dear…hate them…aduthavunga family and vazhgai ya kedukirathu la yeana santhosamo theriyala avungaluku….laksh emotional la mudivu yeaduthudano…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
    nenga Idha mudika porengala…yeana dear solrenga….tkcr dear…

    1. Darshini

      Tq da Asra..ippavum solren I won’t separate them nxt epi la puriyum unakku…bt na laksh side daan aana avan use panna wrds daan thappu…na yean laksh side nu sonnenu yosikatha nxt epi paatha u will understand da…
      Prathap uh senjduvom don’t worry da…
      Tc too dear..
      Will post soon…

  12. Dharani

    awesome darshu… first take care of ur health and then post anything this i am not saying i am ordering…. hehehe… get well soon darshu…

    1. Darshini

      Tq da dharu?
      Hehe!!I will obey ur order madam ji..salute!!jst kidding dear…
      Actually am getting headaches often due to weakness in nerves..
      Doctor suggested me to drink tonic for that nd d worst part is he said to avoid using mbles often..haha!!that thng can’t hpn na..don’t worry I will b normal soon…tc dear

  13. Akshitha

    Aww…don’t seprt raglak dear…but bls gv a hard punishment for laksh to use such harsh words

    1. Darshini

      Aww..i won’t separate them akshi…will give punishment to laksh don’t worry…tc dear…will post soon…

  14. AWESOME AWESOME

    1. Darshini

      Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it….

  15. Superb

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sherin ? glad that you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it…

  16. Very nice

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear malu ? glad that you liked it…

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