I will cure you and make you see again with those eyes…. Episode 3

I will cure you and make you see again with those eyes…. Episode 3
Guys every episode has a title so I will always add all the links if you missed any episodes… If you want I will make it longer… I think you guys know me…. But hi guys I am… any guesses….… This is my second story based on Ragsan… I already have written a Fan-Fiction calllledddddddddddddddd (Destiny vs. Love.) And I am still writing it… I hope you guys can read it and tell me if you liked it or not… But anyways this is my second Ragsan story with a few episodes… Please don’t hate on me… I am not from Asia I am from England so please do bear with me!!!! If I do anything wrong… Anyways let’s start!!! (I am Nusz aha)
Link for episode 1:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/heart-belong-hiding-guess-wrote-episode-1/
Link for episode 2:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/know-blind-finally-met-rainfall-episode-2/
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“Mental Health Care”
Ragini smiled at everyone… She knew not everyone could see, hear speak; walk or move and she always wanted to help them… Some of the people smiled back at her… But there was a guy sitting under the dark at the back of the corner… She saw him sitting there all alone and wanted to speak to him…. But he didn’t even reply back to her… So she started introducing herself to everyone… But then a voice echoed…
“Hi… Can I ask you something?” A little boy asked…
Ragini looked at him… She nodded her head…. It was a little kid who couldn’t walk properly…
“You can ask me anything” Answered Ragini with a smile appearing on her face….
“Why are you here to help us, when you have better things to do with your life” He asked
Ragini knew the little boy went through a lot… But she didn’t want anyone hurt because of her… So she answered back with a smile on her face…
“I love helping people… It’s always been my dream and I know how you guys feel each day… I really want to help you guys with everything… and I promise you guys I won’t let anyone go through a hard time anymore… I know many of you can’t hear or speak and I want to make that easier for you guys… I also know many of you can’t walk and move and I want to promise you that I will make you guys move again… please guys try to understand me… Also I want to help people who don’t have the vision to see anymore… and I want to make them see again with those eyes… Will you guys support me?” She asked while her eyes went red….
The little asked her something again…
“Can I ask you something again” The little boy asked…
She nodded…
“Ofc you can” She said with a smile on her face…
He started laughing and she looked at him….
“May you please come here” The little boy asked…
She came towards him and bended down…
“Yes” Ragini asked
He quickly kissed her on the cheeks and she was a little shocked but smiled after….
“You’re a very sweet teacher… I like you hehe…” He said with a little smile…
Ragini was so happy after meeting the little boy and she kissed him back….
“You’re a sweet little boy too” She said
Ragini stood up and everyone was happy after listening to her except that boy who was sitting in the dark by the window…
“Okay everyone I want to tell you something”
Everyone looked at Ragini and waited for what she wanted to say…
“Hello everyone I am Ragini and I am here to treat you guys with all the happiness around you, today we will be working in groups!! Are you guys ready for this…?”
Everyone nodded and got into groups with people that they could work with….
Ragini went near every table… One table was making painting; another was teaching people how to do tricks with their hands… Ragini was happy seeing this… Then she remembers that guy who was sitting near the window under dark… She turned around and saw him still sitting their… She looked at everyone who was still working happily… So she went towards him… She bent down and asked him to join everyone….
Ragini: Hey, what are you still doing here under the dark by the window, come join everyone
He still sat there and ignored her…
Ragini: Are you listening to me???
He still didn’t answer her…
Ragini: Why aren’t you answering me, that’s not very nice…? I am trying to help and you’re ignoring me…
Sanskar start moving his hand around and then touched hers… He pulled her closer towards him… and she fell right back down on the ground… Sanskar then said something to her…
Sanskar: I think it’s better if you leave me alone?
Ragini: Why are you acting so mean?
Sanskar: Let me ask you a question
Ragini: Okay
Sanskar: Do you know how much it hurts when someone breaks your heart??
Ragini: What do you mean?
Sanskar: You kind of girls… just use guys for fun and then leave them after… please get away from me….
Ragini realized he was in pain and didn’t answer back so she got up and walked away…
Ragini went back to teaching everyone… She started painting with the little kids but Ragini was still depressed… The little boy saw her sad and threw a little paint on her… He started giggling… She smiled a little bit and started having more fun with those kids… Then she met the people who taught her how to do tricks with their hands she found it really interesting… Then after awhile it was lunch break and slowly the nurses came in and took them out for lunch while Sanskar sat there and told them to leave him alone… Ragini told the nurse I need to talk to him and I will make him understand…
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Ragini grabs a chair and sits near Sanskar….
Ragini: I know before you were sad and hurt… But can we talk about it…
Sanskar ignored her…
Ragini: Why aren’t you even looking at me?
Sanskar: What’s your problem? Huh? What do you want from me?
Ragini: I am trying to help you and you’re being so rude too me…
Sanskar grabbed her hand the second time and felt something different like he met this girl before…
Sanskar (In mind): Why does it feel like I met this girl before…? By her touch even the first time I didn’t realize it… But after touching her now… I feel like I met her….
Ragini: Are you okay?
Sanskar: Look I don’t want to talk about it…
The song Ankiyaan plays
Ragini: But does it look like you’re sad?
Sanskar: Just because you can see doesn’t meant everyone can’t…
Ragini realized he couldn’t see…
Tune plays…
“The wind started blowing heavily”
“Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley (x2)”
Ragini: Can I tell you something…
Sanskar didn’t answer her…
“Rondiyan ne chham chham karke Teri yaadon mein marke (x2) Bhul gayi’aan jindri de raaste Ankhiyan ne ankhiyan nu Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley (x2)”
Ragini: “I will cure you and make you see again with those eyes”
Ragini put her hands on tops his… Slowly tears fell from her eyes… remembering her moments with her father… He felt the drops…
“Duniya ki bheed mein main tanha si ho gayi Paakar jo tujhko khoya Khud hi main kho gayo (x2)Kya bataun tere bin Kajal se hai yeh din Taare bhi bujhe bujhe hain raat mein”
Sanskar realized she was going through a lot… Ragini was about to leave my Sanskar held her hand…
Sanskar: I realize that I shouldn’t have been that rude to you… It’s because I was going through a lot…
Ragini turned around and smiled at him…
“Ankhiyan ne ankhiyan nu Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley (x2)”
Tune plays….
Sanskar was holding Ragini’s hand even though he couldn’t see her… He knew she was a girl who was confident about herself… Ragini looked at Sanskar nonstop…
“Raahon mein baithe baithe Nain pathra gaye Khushiyon ke honthon pe Dard kaise aa gaye (x2) Sapne jo roothe roothe Jud ke jo dil hai toote Tooti hain lakeere bhi ye haath mein”
Sanskar then finally let’s her hand go… She then stops looking at him…
Sanskar: Sorry for hurting you…
Ragini smiled and then said….
Ragini: It’s okay I understand what you’re going through…
“Ankhiyaan ne ankhiyaan nu Rabb jaane kyun diye faasley (x2)”
Tune plays…. Then finally the music ends…
Ragini: I know that you’re going through a lot too… But I am here to help you… Can you trust me once?
Sanskar: I lost trust on everyone… You don’t even know my story…
Ragini: But can you trust me? (She touched his hand)
Sanskar: I need time…
Ragini: You can ask me anytime… Okay I have to go because class is going to start…
Sanskar: Wait…
Ragini turned around and answered…
Ragini: Yes Sanskar?
Sanskar: Um… (In mind): How do I ask her?
Ragini: You were saying something?
Sanskar: Um…
Ragini: Um??
Sanskar: Um… what…
Ragini: Sanskar what are you trying to say??
Sanskar: Um….
Ragini: Okay you think of what you need to say and then call me over because class is going to start in a minute…
Sanskar: Wait I will say it…
Ragini: What is it Sanskar?
Sanskar: What do I call you?
Ragini stood there for a minute and then let out a laugh….
Sanskar: Is there something funny? Are you playing pranks on me, just because I can’t see I know when someone is doing something wrong…
Ragini: No it’s not…
Sanskar: Then what is it?
Ragini: It took you forever to ask me that…
Sanskar: So…
Ragini: Okay I will stop making fun of you…. And you can call me Ragini… Look the kids, teenagers and adults are entering again… You can come and join us…
Sanskar: No thank you…
Ragini: Okay then just call me when you need something…
She leaves while Sanskar thinks about some things.
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*Flashback*
When Sanskar was a really well known business man….
Sanskar: Oh great I am going to be late for my meeting…
Sujata: Sanskar did you eat Kheer before?
Sanskar: Oh not again Ma…
Sujata: Oh come Sanskar you promised that you won’t leave the house without eating kheer
Sanskar: Fine Ma just because you’re someone who always trusted me…
Sujata: Remember to call me when you reach the office…
Sanskar: Ma I go to the office every single day, and you know that I am always there…
Sujata: But still you need to call me….
Sanskar: Okay Ma, I will but can I leave now?
Sujata: Open your mouth first…
Sujata feeds Sanskar the kheer and he makes a cute little puppy face….
Sanskar: Happy Ma?
Sujata: Yes I am happy
Sanskar: Can I go now?
Sujata: Yes you may and remember to call me
Sanskar: Yea whatever (He runs out of the house into his car)
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There was a girl singing near the temple and then she saw the sun shining and ran down the stairs quickly… The girl started singing and people surrounded the place… Sanskar who was driving his car that way… heard her voice and got touched… The traffic was taking forever so he got off and followed her voice….
Teri galliyan plays
Tune plays
Girl: “O.. Yahin doobe din mere Yahin hote hain savere Yahin marna aur jeena Yahin Mandir aur Madeena… x2”
Sanskar follows the voice but didn’t get to see her properly…. She starts playing with her guitar….
Girl: “Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galliyan Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpavein, galliyan teri, Galliyan…”
Sanskar: I wonder who this girl is… I need to find her… He runs around the place looking for her…
Girl: “Tu meri neendo me sota hai Tu mere ashqo mein rota hai Sargoshi si hai khayalon mein
Tu na ho, phir bhi tu hota hai Hai sila.. tu mere dard ka Mere dil ki duaayein hain.”
She plays with guitar and everyone is clapping for her…
Girl: “Teri galiyan… galliyan teri, galliyan.. Mujhko bhaavein galiyan, teri galiyan Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri, galliyan.. Yuhin tadpaavein, galliyan teri, galliyan..”
Sanskar starts singing quietly…
Sanskar: “Kaisa hai rishta tera-mera Be-chehra phir bhi kitna gehra Ye lamhe, lamhe ye resham se Kho jaayein.. kho na jaayein humse Kaafila.. waqt ka.. rok le.. Abr se juda na ho”
Ragini is playing guitar while Sanskar is singing quietly… Then all of a sudden they both start singing together in two different places….
Girl and Sanskar: “Teri galliyan… galliyan teri galliyan.. Mujhko bhaave galiyan teri galiyan
Teri galiyan…galiyaan teri galliyan.. Yuhin tadpaave galliyan teri galliyan..”
The girl finishes the note with her guitar while Sanskar smiles….
Sanskar (In mind): Her voice is beautiful… I wonder who it is…
The girl finished her singing and everyone started clapping for her… The girl was wearing a beautiful long blue dress that was sleeveless… She then smiled at everyone and started walking away from that place… Then Sanskar reaches that place and realizes she was gone…
Sanskar: Dang it! I didn’t even get to see the girl… But how I do find her again…
Sanskar really loved the girl’s voice and then he found a ring of hers on the ground… He then asked someone…
Sanskar: Excuse me?
Man: Yes?
Sanskar: Do you know whose ring this is?
The man looks at it… and says…
Man: I think it belongs to the girl who sang here awhile ago…
Sanskar: Are you sure….
Man: Nobody stood here after she left… And you came right after…
Sanskar: Oh okay thank you…
Man: No problem (He leaves)
Sanskar: Great! How do I find where the girl is and how she looks with a ring…
Sanskar gets thinking…
Sanskar: Well someday I will have to find her….
*Flashback Ends*
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Sanskar remembers that day…
Sanskar (In mind): I still haven’t found that girl yet… Even though I fell in love with another girl who betrayed me… I really want to see what she is doing with her life… Probably ruling everyone in her own style… She was a selfish girl and always been rude to others… I will have to find her… But I need to ask someone for help because I can’t do it alone… But who should I ask for help??
He then remembers what Ragini said….
“If you need help you can just ask me…” Said Ragini…
Sanskar gets thinking…
Sanskar (In mind): Should I ask her?
Ragini was smiling and playing with the kids…. She made balloons and hearts for them… She gave each one a kiss on the cheek and they smiled and hugged her… Everyone loved Ragini has their doctor…. She then made ribbons and bandages for the adults and Ragini made them wear it… They all became happy… It was time to go everyone was helping and smiling, hugging and saying bye to Ragini…. She smiled and waves bye too them… Then she still sees Sanskar sitting in the corner and goes near him…
Ragini: Hey what are you still doing here, isn’t someone here to pick you up?
Sanskar: Uh… I didn’t tell her…
Ragini: You didn’t tell that class ended?
Sanskar: Not exactly…
Ragini: Okay tell me your number and I will call her…
Sanskar: Wait can I ask you something….
Ragini: Yea sure…
Sanskar: Um…can you help me with something
Ragini: Yea but what is it?
Sanskar: Is there class tomorrow….
Ragini: Yes there is…
Sanskar: How about the day after….
Ragini: Nope there isn’t any class the day after…
Sanskar: Can you do a favor for me?
Ragini: Yes but what is it?
Sanskar: I need you to take me somewhere…
Ragini: But where?
Sanskar: I will tell you later…
Ragini: Is there something wrong….
Sanskar: Will you do it, or not?
Ragini thinks for a minute… She really wanted to see him smiles so she answered yes…
Ragini: Okay I will go with you on Saturday….
Sanskar: Thank you…
Ragini: Anytime…. And Should I drop you downstairs…
Sanskar: No I will manage… My mom is waiting on the other side….
Ragini: But you can’t go alone… I will help you…
Sanskar: I said I will manage…
Ragini: You’re so stubborn (She holds her hand)
Sanskar: What are you doing?
Ragini: I am helping you…
Sanskar: Smarty pants… I have a stick you know….
Ragini: I know but I still want to help you…
Sanskar: Can you please let me go…
Ragini is holding Sanskar and they finally reach outside and Sujata sees her….
Ragini (In mind): His is so stubborn… But I promise I will make him smile again… and I also promise that… “I will cure you and make you see again with those” (She smiles)
Sujata comes there and takes Sanskar into the car… and comes back to Ragini… Sujata holds her hand and says something…
Sujata: Thank you so much for taking care of my son…..
Ragini: No Auntie this is my job and I will try my best to cheer him up…
Sujata: Thanks for everything Beta… do you need a lift home?
Ragini: No it’s okay Auntie, My Ma will be here soon…
Sujata: Oh okay but thank you once again (She touches her head and leaves)
Ragini gets thinking….
Ragini (In mind): There something different about him… Whenever I am around him I feel like I met him before… And whoever broke his heart I will teach him a lesson… But I really want to see him laugh and smile again… But how will I do that??
She thinks about something….
Ragini: IDEA!!! I wish this will work!!!!!! (She smiles so much and sees her mom and runs towards her…. Ragini tells her mom how her day went…)
The episode ends….
“Each day you will feel something new is happening… But the story you’re going to see is making us happy aha”
Recap: Ragini tells Sanskar a joke and a funny story which makes him smile… She then takes him to a garden and near a waterfall and makes him feel the nature around him… He smiles a bit and Ragini smiles seeing this… One of the kids dares Ragini to kiss Sanskar on the cheek and she goes near him and does… He gets shocked while Ragini smiles (Ijazat plays) Ragini meets a girl who is selfish and Sanskar feels like he knows that girl… Ragini and that girl get into a fight…
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Okay guys I am planning to start my Fan-Fiction Sanskar: will you marry me? Ragini: Yes I will… again because of you guys said in the comments and you guys all rock aha.
Other Fan-Fictions by me (is below)
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Here’s the links (Other Fan-Fiction by me)
Destiny vs love (Based on Thapki Pyaar Ki, Qubool Hai and Jamai Raja)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=destiny+vs+love+Thahaan
A one shot on Ragsan (Based on Swaragini)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/sanskar-ragini-will-soul-mate-ragini-always-willmere-haath-mein-os/
Sanskar: Will you marry me, Ragini: Yes Sanskar I will (Based on Swaragini) (I will be ending this soon)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=Sanskar%3A+Ragini+will+you+marry+me%3F%3F+Ragini%3A+Yes+Sanskar+I+will+%28%28%3A
Qubool Hai love like Beintehha (Based on Beintehha and Qubool Hai)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=qubool+hai+Beintehha
The dark side that everyone sees but not the light side (Based on The Vampire Dairies with shorts stories of Ragsan, Thahaan and Asya at the ending for a treat)
http://www.tellyupdates.com/dark-side-everyone-sees-not-light-side-tvd-intro/
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(By the way, if you’re reading this ff, please do comment your ideas and how is the story going for you. Also love you all aha x)
Btw I’ll post the next episode when I have time after Ramadan, Thank you so much for enjoying this, please do comment and silent readers I need to know if you want me to make this Fan-Fiction longer or not!! Till then enjoy Episode 3!! (Also there might be some grammar errors because I didn’t read over my work aha)

132 comments

  1. sujata

    Nice Nusz this episode was mindblowing… i love how the title is always added in the story… very good indeed 🙂

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you so much Sujata Hun.

      I am really happy you’re enjoying this Fan-Fiction xx.

      Really happy you love how I Change my titles xx.

      Keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx.

  2. Halima

    |Registered Member

    Awesome episode Nuchi!!!
    Loved it, it was amazing, precap seems interesting, can’t wait…
    Upload soon, waiting and RagSan scenes were cute… Even in da precap.

    Love you?
    Take care and keep smiling, you rocked today’s episode… Fee Amanallah. ?

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Bali, I am really happy you enjoyed this Fan-Fiction xx.

      More scenes of Ragsan are coming soon xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      Love you too aha. xx

      ~Nusz xx.

  3. Roshni

    Nice Nusz full of emotions in this episode..
    Kiss on cheek I can’t wait…
    can you post it tommrow?

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Yes Ragini will kiss Sanskar on the cheek aha.

      I will post the next episode when I have time Hun, I promise xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Wait who is Shona xx??? Do you mean Swara xx?

      But anyhow you will have to wait for the answers in the upcoming episodes Hun.

      Anyways keep enjoying and always keep smiling aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  4. bani

    Wow Nusz keep writing it’s awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The Teri Galiyan part rocked!!! Kiss and selfish girl awaiting!! ROCK IT

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Bani and yes I will keep writing aha xx.

      Thank you for enjoying that part Hun xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx

      ~Nusz xx

  5. priya

    Mami Tu (Wow you’re) this is very god concept… I mean come first the caring of the little boy…
    also that prt when Sanky was trying to avoid her but rag was helping laughing… Swa brke his heart… and the nature of the nxt epiosde was me so cool i loved the singing too

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you so much Priya, your comments make me happy xx.

      I am happy you enjoyed every part of the episode Hun xx.

      You will find out who broke his heart soon and yes you will enjoy the next episode a lot xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you for enjoying this episode Rina xx.

      You will indeed enjoy the next episode aha xx.

      You will find out everything in the upcoming episodes Hun.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you so much Vini for enjoying this episode aha.

      I will add more romantic scenes in the upcoming episodes when everything is fixed between them.

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx.

      ~Nusz xx

  6. tori

    The way you express the feelings are greatful because this episode was full of happiness on Ragini’s face, I want more scenes of them… I can’t wait for the next one 🙂

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Tori, for enjoying how I write it means a lot to me.

      Aw I am happy how you loved all the parts xx.

      I will post the next episode really soon Hun xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Virtina for enjoying the episode.

      I am not smart at all but thanks xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx.

      ~Nusz

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you for enjoying my storyline Viksa.

      Next episode will be updated soon xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Mimi, I am really happy when you saw this Fan-Fiction updated aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx

      Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Ragsan for enjoying the episode.

      The next episode you will see that part xx.

      I will post asap when I am done writing my other Fan-Fictions.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nus xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Belina Hun aha xx.

      I am happy you loved Ragsan in this Fan-Fiction

      Don’t worry I will try to do a Raglak Fan-Fiction soon

      Love you too xx

      ~Nusz xx

  7. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic Amazing
    Loved each and every scene
    Waiting for the next one………

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you SPP for enjoying the episode xx.

      I am really happy you enjoyed every part of the Fan-Fiction aha.

      I will update the next part asap xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always aha.

      ~Nusz xx

  8. nafi

    you ugly I haven’t been on this episode for ages and I find you writing a new story. you should have told me and Asana and you also left us I am angry 🙁

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Lol thanks Nafi Hun and I am happy you found my new Fan-Fiction xx

      Sorry but you didn’t even come visit me xx.

      Asana never tells me anything that’s why

      ~Nusz xx

  9. nafi

    But my little nus I loved this story and Ragsan which makes Sanskar blind dude you are marvellous!! Love you lots :* 😉

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you so much Nafi Hun!!

      I am so happy you enjoyed this Ragsan Fan-Fiction xx

      Love you so much and miss you too xx

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Akshata I am really happy you enjoyed this episode xx.

      I will post the next episode asap.

      Keep smiling like always Hun xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Harina Hun, I am really happy you enjoyed it xx.

      I will upload asap when I have time.

      Keep smiling like always Hun.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you A.R and I am happy it reminds you of a fairytale xx.

      Thanks for the compliments A.R it means a lot too me!! You’re amazing xx.

      Keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx

  10. aarti

    A silent reader of every ragsan ff and arshi… I comment on yours because it made me happy… als do u write a ff on arshi? plz let me know

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Aw Aarti I am happy you love Ragsan xx and I love Arshi too xx

      Oh I am happy you commented on mines that means a lot Hun.

      No I am not writing a Fan-Fiction on Arshi but I will do a short story on it soon if you want.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thanks Asana Hun, I am really happy you enjoyed this episode xx.

      I will come visit again xx and stop calling me tutu because it reminds me of tuna.

      Anyways keep smiling like always and love you too Hun xx.

      ~Nusz xx.

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Piya Hun and yes I will start the other Fan-Fiction again but really soon xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Priya Hun, I am really happy you enjoyed the plot xx.

      Yes I have already read and commented it xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always.

      ~Nusz xx

  11. Azure

    |Registered Member

    interesting…he has already bumped into her…i hope she is not going to give up her eyes for him to have them…showing her selflessness or something…hope she cures him as a doc instead…looking forward to the next part already. loved their conversation.

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Wow Azure very smart xx.

      Well love doesn’t happen so quickly but things will go slowly xx. Well you will see how she cures him even though he doesn’t want her help xx.

      Thanks for enjoying the episode Hun means a lot to me aha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx

      ~Nusz xx

  12. Fatarajo

    |Registered Member

    Wow nusz I m just in love with ur ff dear Ragsan man they r so cute love Ragsan here a lot and galliyan one of my fav song the little kids r so cute man loved their innocence 😛

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Data/Jo xx

      I am so happy you’re in love with Ragsan because of this Fan-Fiction it means a lot hehe.

      Thank you for enjoying every part of the Fan-Fiction that’s very sweet of you xx.

      I love little kids so I added them haha.

      Anyways keep smiling like always xx.

      ~Nusz xx

      • Fatarajo

        |Registered Member

        Even I love little kids too they are so adorable but they get irritating at times 😛 but I love them overall
        And ur ff is just beyond words too awesome u know my fav is destiny vs love and this one. Btw when r u gonna upload I know I have seen u thahaan ff

      • Nusz Khan

        |Author

        Oh my god I am so behind on my Fan-Fiction!! Don’t worry Data I will update asap!! go on Skype I will send you something xx

        ~Nusz xx

    • Fatarajo

      |Registered Member

      Hey nusz my laptop is spoiled which is why I can’t use skype for a while but I will try to install the app in my phone

  13. Zuha.

    Hey Nusz it is me, Zuha, Very nice! Liked your idea of different titles? And when are you uploading destiny vs love?

    And Galliyan song is one of my favorite Hindi song and also if my favorite actress (Teju di) is in that, then JHAKAAS??

    I love you my lovely sissy?

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Hey Zuha xx.

      Thanks for liking my ideas that’s very nice of you aha.

      I will be uploading Dvl when I have time, but I will next week probably xx.

      Thank you for enjoying every part of the Fan-Fiction that’s very sweet of you.

      I like others actresses but yea she’s cool too xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always and love you too…

      ~Nusz xx.

  14. Truelove

    |Registered Member

    very nice episode.our ragini aka tejswini is so beautiful. i imagine her as doctor. she is perfectly beautiful. i love ragsan.

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Thank you Sweta, for enjoying this Fan-Fiction!

      Yes Teja is a great actress and I love Ragsan too xx.

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun xx.

      ~Nusz xx

    • Nusz Khan

      |Author

      Hi Siddhi, I have read many Fan-Fictions by you and they’re pretty good xx.

      Well I am from England and Cad so my writing style is very different but I think you should write longer and make the title stand with the pictures!!! Write something you think people would enjoy reading.

      If you need help you can just message me!

      I hope that would help you xx

      Anyways keep smiling like always Hun.

      ~Nusz xx

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    awesome superb episode…loved the nature part the song perfectly goes with it…love their closeness also aha…gay waiting for next part shanky will remember her after listening the song and the girl i think his ex….ragsan is my favourite couple but in ur ff i love the surrounding around them…

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