Will You Be My Better Half (Episode 6)

Hey guys… Thanking you all for your support. My next episoe is ready… Hope all will enjoy it..


Sumo::(in shock)woh…

She was looking to his eyes deeply. After sometime she came to her sense and push him away…

Sumo:: stay away from me.. Ok.
Juz stay away…

Shravu:: (in a soft voice)i really love you suman… I didnt want to do all this but it happend and ho sake tho please forgive me.. I love you from that day when i saw you first… Mere liye it was important to cnfess you that i love you..

Sumo stand there silent. But tears fell down her eyes.. He came closer and cupped her face to remove her tears.

Shravu:: i dont know what you think nd feel about me. And also i didnt expect the same love in return..

He rubed her tears and was going to leave when finally she spoke…

Sumo:: wo… Sambhalke jaana…
Pipes are weak and there are chances that you may fall.. (She smiles while saying it)

Shravu:: mere fall hone se thumhe kya he…. Its better to fall than living without you…

He stands in the balcony to get to the sideways.. He again hang on the balcony and was trying to get the pipes… When she came there.

Sumo:: agar yaha se khudkar kuch hua tho mera kya hoga???? Wht abt our love? Marrage? Babies? Grand babies?

Shravan::babies tho 10 chahiye mujhe..

Sumo:: 10?? Thats enought?? … Kam hai na..??

Shravu:: ok ok… Wht about marrage??? (He repronounce marrage strangely and finally he sense whats happening)marrage?? You mean you and me?? Marrage?? You love me??????? Marrage????
(He smiles deeply)

Sumo:: (scratching his hair)nai nai me aur my neighbour..

Shravu:: who neighbour??? Is he living in the neighbouring flat?? (He shout loud)Oye neighbour waale chaaachaa… Aap kisi aur chaachi se shaadi karo aur ye chaachi ko chod do…

Sumo:: chaachi??? U think i m looking like chaachiii(she bcme angry)its better thum yaha se khud jao.. Warna i will push you down… Idiot.

Shravu::haha… bt i like fattu more…(He get in to the balcony)phir se bolna…. And say once, YOU love ME

She turned away as she is naaraaz with him…

Shravu:: acha me jaa rahi hu… If you are not talking, then no need of mine…

He turned to go when she said in loud voice..

Sumo::i love you fattuuuuu..

Shravu turns and walk towards her smiling and bend on his knee…

Shravu:: will you be my better half?????

She smiles and catch his hands… Both of them smiles looking to each others eyes….. There their love story begins…

And my story ends….

Thank you soo much for all those who suppprted me… Im extremly thankfull to each one of you…. Exams are going on.. Ho sake tho pray for me….

Thanking you all…

You may see sad peopl and happy ppl in ur life ahead…. To be happy, you can catch the hands of happy ones… Its your wish… But dont leave the hands of sad ones…. Because they also wish to be happy by catching your handsss…


Credit to: Karthik


  1. Tanya

    tearful and happy ending………so ncy thought in last ……….best of luck for ur exams

  2. lovely lady

    Extreamly nyc story…….
    Btw i wll Reallyyyy miss this .. bcoz nowadays a jst opnd this site fr readng this story…..
    Heart touchng end……
    All the bst for your exams…. n wish me too for my admission ….
    Waiting for your another ff………..

  3. Karthik

    Thanks yaar…i did notice your support in all my episodes….special thanks for thatt…..and sure i will pray for you…and will miss your cmnts tooo..?

    • lovely lady

      Thnxxx fr wshing me……. i really need wshes for admission….
      N plz cm back soon wd new ff

  4. lovely lady

    I too hv posted a ff – abhi na jao chor kr ( edkw) reaf n cmmnt plz…….
    I hv posted almost all the parts. Jst the last epi is pndng…….

    • Karthik

      Yaaar i didnt even think abta school lve stry using shravu nd sumo….your thoughts and the way u expressed it
      was awsm….from now i will be the most waiting fan for your ff.loved it yaar…post the next part soon
      …bt y last part??such a nice story and you should go on wid it…

      • lovely lady

        Actually i hv lost my phn in train.. i can only cmmnt wd my dad’ s phn cnt post.. so u hv to wait for a week for the next part….
        It is real life story n i didnt see much cmmnt on that so i was a litl bit dissappointed n decided to end it..
        Bt now i will surely tell the rest story n will not end it….
        Ur cmmnts were reall very supportv. They seems to be vry true….

  5. lovely lady

    And let me tell u one thng bro……
    Whn i asked u to read my ff n reply. I nevr thought that u will really read whn your exams are gng on….
    Thnk u frm my heart…….

    • Karthik

      First i juz thought to read one epi…
      And socha will read like one day one strategy…bt school life story was unexpected and seems very interesting….and while going through one comnt,i came to kn that this is your story…it makes me read the whole epii.
      Its really nice yaar.please dont stop it..

  6. Karthi,…it was really awesome…more than the story i loved the words you wrote at the end of story…i was a cute story,…pls come back with another ff…Thanx for your support in my ff…?????

  7. shweeto/angel

    aryyyyy itni jaldi end 🙁

    not fair

    i usually read ur epis silently and enjoy thm alot 🙂

    but end was nyc happy shappy

    all the best for exams 🙂

  8. sorry I read this sterday only and sorry for d late comment ur wholr ff was fab u’ve done a gr8 job but after ur exams I hope u”ll write another ff.and all the very best for ur exams

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