it was, is and will always be you -twinj story….(Character sketch and intro)

It was, is and will always be you-intro and character sketch
Thank u soooooo much guys for such a warm welcome….felt sooo homely….it is coz of ur encouragement nd faith in me that I have planned to write this story….hope u all would lyk it…nd plzzz do tell me in ur comments a to how can I improve my writing …as i have already told u all that I’m not good in pening down…
Sorry for the mistakes occured..plzzzz do comment and tell me ur opinions would love to read them and act upon it. So let’s begin….

Character Sketch

kunj sarna- son of famous buisness tycoon manohar sarna..
Loves his family unconditionally and can do anything for their happiness..married to twinkle taneja..has started falling for his wife but not yet realised.
Twinkle sarna taneja- beautiful, cute and bubbly 22 year old girl daughter of the famous buisness women leela taneja. can sacrifice anything for her family’s happiness. Married to kunj sarna…started falling for him but not yet realised her love.
Yuvraj luthra-1st villan of the story. an obsessed lover of twinkle. Can do anything to get her. Son of anita luthra, the biggest rival of leela taneja. Is married to mahi taneja sister of twinkle.
Maya sharma-2nd villan of the story. Maya is chilhood bestfriend of kunj and loves him from then but never got a chance to confess as she shifted to U.K. with her family. Her love has now turned into obsession and wants to get kunj at any cost.
The other characters are bebe, usha, rt and rest of the characters of tashan-e-ishq
Introduction

“Why twinkle!!why!!why did u leave me??kahan chali gayi hai tu twinkle…did u not trust me??I hate you!!but you know what..I can’t hate u coz I luv u way too much”said a man with swollen eyes and a pale face sitting in a dark room lit by a night lamp holding a picture frame of beautiful girl and crying vigourously.”though im married again bcoz of my one fault i cant love her and give her ur place….Coz it was, is and will always be you who has my heart.”
A girl standing outside the same room and watching the boy cry was fuming in anger.
The man is revealed to be kunj, the girl in the frame is twinkle and the girl standing outside the room is maya.

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Phew….finally done with the first step of my few shots story.
Guys I don’t know it would be of how many parts…initially I’m planning to go for 1o parts only as it is my first story..

Plzzzz do comment☺☺ and tell me how is it and how can I improve my writing…
I’m sorry if it is not up to ur expectations
But plzzzz do tell me which are the areas I should improve myself in…pllzzz also tell me if i should change the title nd do give me your suggestions for it☺☺☺☺
Thank u sooo much once again for bearing my drama
Luv u all loads😙😙😙😙 keep smiling😊😊😊😊 byeee

32 comments

  1. Sohi

    Sohi

    |Registered Member

    Hey kulsum would you mind If I can you kulsum
    The plot is very interesting and thrilling
    Waiting eagerly for further episode
    Do continue and post

    • Twinjsidminfan

      Twinjsidminfan

      |Author

      No not at all…infact even my mum calls me kulsum wen everyone calls me by my pet name nida…..so u can definitely call me kulsum☺☺☺sooo happy dat u lyked it…Luv u😙😙

  2. RUTU

    Hey Kusum lovely the plot is really amazing eagerly waiting for next one so plz post soon…..love you 😍😍😍

  3. Priya23

    Omggg…m soo much happy to see u back.. Well it’s too good that finally u start writing m very glad… U told ur not good writer but u wrote character sketch soo nice..this plot is too good…I love it.. Its ur beginning start in writing word so Don’t wry slowly slowly u will be a best writer in TU…
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    Ab maya new villain hai twinj ki life ka…But oh shit after twinkle left kunj is married to Maya..naii kisne karwaya kunj ki shadi of course usss usha nay..but kunj se Maya ko durr rakhna..chudail kahiki..
    Now m hell excited to read further..waiting naii hora ha… Plz plz plz plz plz plz post soon..
    Stay happy.. Love you..

    • Twinjsidminfan

      Twinjsidminfan

      |Author

      Thank u thank u thank u soooooooo much😊😊😊😊sooòo overwhelmed with ur words….will surely try to post soon…hahhaaha😂😂😂don’t worry I’ll make sure Maya is out in another few posts nd never comes back in twinj’s lyf…Luv u too😙😙😙😙😙

  4. Presha

    Presha

    |Registered Member

    Hey umme its awesome loved it I think itsca suspense wala story post soon next love u byee
    And u write very good

  5. Sohi

    Sohi

    |Registered Member

    How cute your pet name is nida 😘
    I will call you by ur two name if you agree
    Luv u too dear Allahafiz

  6. SidMin

    SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Loved it 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
    Awesome start
    It looks interesting I mean ….Kunj’s talks …. the girl Maya standingboutside the room and Twinkle in the frame ….💔
    Love you
    Post soon❣💝❤

  7. Chiku

    Chiku

    |Registered Member

    Woaaah!!loved it. It’s amazing.
    I have one confusion. Its continuation of tei original story.. so how kunj is married to maya??
    Plzzz clear the confusion 😅😅
    Post soon💜😍

    • Twinjsidminfan

      Twinjsidminfan

      |Author

      Thank u☺☺☺ no chiku the only situation is a bit same but not the plot okk☺☺ and if u r still confused then do read my first post titled”an idea thats in my mind…New here” then u may surely understand okk☺shall surely try to post soon😊

  8. SidVee_Yashvee

    SidVee_Yashvee

    |Registered Member

    Wow see you are an amazing writer.. this was an awesome start.. and it has already become very interesting.. loved it.. eagerly waiting for the first part ❤

  9. Twinj

    Hey Kusum,
    Firstly a warm welcome to our crazy TEI TU family.Hah hum sab log crazy hae. Introducing myself I m aakriti but u may call me aaku.I am 16 n u.I m a registered member.

    Today after almost 3 weeks I decided to visit TU n I saw ur fs I really liked it.Starting was too gud.Kunj has already fallen for twinkle…wow n what about twinkle yaar? where is she? Has she also got married?Many question are running in my small mind.Luved ur writing in ur ff as well as os.Sry due to my hectic schedule couldn’t cmt in ur os n kya tum meri dost banna psand karogi?Sry if I won’t be able to cmt on the next part but I will be regular after March 24.Ok bye till then.Keep writing.

    Lots of luv,
    Twinj

    • Twinjsidminfan

      Twinjsidminfan

      |Author

      Awww thank u sooo much aaku ☺☺☺
      My name is umme kulsum nd im 18 year old….I would love to be ur frnd..so nw we r frnds 😃😃😃u can call by my name or my pet name nida……
      I’m glad u lyked my story bt dear this is my 1st story on tu. .I haven’t written an os…my 1st post was on my intro nd idea and this story..U must hv mistakened…will surely continue soon.
      Luv u😙😙😙 keep smiling☺☺☺

      • Twinj

        Hey nida di,
        U are 2 yrs elder than me.So can i call u dii.N I am really very sry.I read meethi’s os n thought that u wrote it n I even read ‘an idea that’s in my mind’ n thought that meethi wrote it.This is how the confussion began n I am so sry for that.But I really luved ur idea n concept.

  10. Shalini15

    Shalini15

    |Registered Member

    Hey Nida, its interesting plot with too much suspence… looking forward for it…. but a request to you pls don’t make kunj n maya married.. you can show them engaged but pls don’t make them husband wife… bcz I can’t see twinj married with some one else… pls don’t mind its just mine wish… you can do what ever you want to show…

    Btw Nida is my friends name too… well I’m Shalini nick name Neha… 22years old college going girl… writer of “TEI-Ishq chupta nahi chupta nahi chupane se(A possessive & blind love)-Twinj ff” and “Dil ka rishta- A unique love story (TwinjOS) Part 1”

    Would you like to be my friend?

    Well post first episode asap and your title is perfect its matching the story…

    Lots of love and support
    Keep smiling

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