i will always love u…(part 8) udaan

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Chakor hugs a boy and that boy is none other than our Suraj. He gets shocked by such a quick reaction. Chakor starts crying loudly. Suraj hugs her back and console her.
Suraj: Chatterbox its okay I m here u r safe i won’t let u happen anything. Plz stop crying… Other side Vivan takes imli to the camp and consoles her.
Imli: Vivan I love my di very much she’s my life if anything happened to her I won’t be able to forgive myself.. Vivan: Calm down imli Suraj is an angry person but not bad if he told he’ll get ur di back he will definitely.. U don’t worry.
Other side Chakor realize the hug and get apart.
Chakor: Sadu u??? What r u doing here.
Suraj: Arey yaar u went from there except for u I don’t have anyone whom I can irritate so I was getting bore and I came here..
Chakor: Sadu…

Suraj: I m sorry but did I spoiled ur date..
And he laughs Chakor turn and was about to go when Suraj hold her hands
Suraj: Chatterbox plz don’t go anywhere..
Chakor: Why r u getting so much worried for u..
Suraj: No I am not worried for u I just don’t want that u go and then get frightened and then hug me.. In short I don’t wanna give u a reason for hugging me.
Chakor: Get up from ur dreams if I would have known that it was u I would have never hugged u..
Suraj: K fine now listen we can’t go anywhere or else definitely ur boyfriend will come and kill us..
Chakor:sadu just shut up.
Suraj: U naughty girl.. Shut up ha..
Chakor:u know what..
Suraj: Go to hell.. I know
Chakor: No this time it was its useless talking to u.
And she laughs…

Suraj meanwhile sees a place.
Suraj: I think that place is best for staying for tonight..
Chakor: Excuse me who’s staying for tonight we r leaving for the camp.
Suraj: No we r not as its dangerous.
Chakor: Why do u care..
Suraj: I care because..
Chakor: Because…
Suraj: Because…. Ur sister won’t leave me if something happened to u.
Chakor: Yup imli must be worried..
Suraj: No Vivan is there… But if u go anywhere then definitely she’ll be worried tomorrow..
Chakor: I can’t even tolerate u for a single second and now the thing is of whole night..
Suraj: But I’ll be loving it as I’ll get a chance to irritate u. Chakor: Ahhh….. ( in an anger) god plz save me.
Suraj:yup he’ll try now just come.
He takes her they see a rock actually it wasn’t a rock but just as an bench it was soft and two people could sit comfortably on ot.. They sat on the rock. Chakor was felling very cold Suraj saw this and started searching something..
Chakor: What r u searching… Sadu.
Suraj: Knife to kill u..
Chakor: Very funny.. Tell na.
Suraj: I m searching for sticks.
Chakor: Why

Suraj: For hitting it on my head… Of course to lit a born fire Dumbo I don’t wanna fall sick due to this cold.
Suraj lots the born fire ?
Chakor feel relaxed..
Chakor:really feeling hungry… Suraj: Thank god I bought my chocolate at least can eat them.
He remover the chocolate.
Chakor: Thank god at least for one time u used ur brain I don’t have to remain hungry.
Suraj: Excuse me chatterbox how my chocolate is related to ur hunger I told i can eat them u search ur food..
Chakor: How rude sadu.
Suraj opens the packet and was about to eat.
Suraj: Want this..
Chakor nods.
Suraj: Ok.
Chakor was about to take it.
Suraj: Listen to full thing first chatterbox. Of u want this than first request me for this..
Chakor: Sadu plz give me this…
She says it as if she’s doing formality.
Suraj: U cant do anything u say that Suraj u r very great plz do give me ba this plz. And ha Suraj not ur sadu.
Chakor: Ii want say this..
Suraj: Ok don’t say.
He starts eating and Chakor just look at him Suraj purposely teases her and enjoy it.
Chakor: Ok fine … Suraj u r great plz do give me this chocolate.
She makes a cute face.
Suraj: Take.
Chakor snatches it and eats it as if didn’t ate food from a long time and Suraj just stares at her lovingly.
Chakor: Sadu u r not that sadu..
Suraj: I m not at all sadu u just call me that.
Chakor: So even u call me chatterbox
Suraj: Cause u r chatterbox..
Chakor: U know what…

Suraj: What.. Go to hell or useless talking to u.
Chakor: Nothing from these… I don’t care.
She laughs…
Suraj: Looks like by staying with me even u became intelligent..
Chakor: I was born intelligent.
Suraj: Whatever..
On the other side.
Imli: Vivan di didn’t came yet. Vivan: Yup nor Suraj.. Can be they both r together u sleep they’ll come in the morning and if they don’t we’ll search them.
And he goes.
On the other side..
Suraj: Must say chatter box….
Chakor was asleep and she slept over suraj’s shoulder.
Suraj: She’s sleeping thank god she’s fine…
Meanwhile chakor heads slip and her head is now in suraj’s lap…..

Precap: Next morning imli tells Vivan to accompany her in jungle to find Chakor and Suraj as they turned to go they r shocked…..

So that was it guts hope UL enjoyed it one more think I don’t think so there’s any vimli fan here so I m concentrating more on sukor I tried of writing lengthier ff hope I did so and didn’t made ul feel bored Plz do tell me that was it nice or not… Thanks for reading ?

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  1. It’s very very very good and superb part ya…. I really enjoyed it. Awesome ya. Keep it up…. Waiting for next update…..

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks nisi…

  2. I like your all ff stories.its really so gooooood.

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks alot Nisha…

  3. AMkideewani

    Awesome dear❤️

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks alot Sam…?

  4. It was so cute… Nice epi…..sukor was awesome..

    1. Komaljanu

      Thank you Mira…

  5. It was very interesting…I LOVED IT…plzzz make more os ff ss…bcoz we love to read it

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks alot dear and definitely I’ll be making more ff ul just keep supporting me like this ?

  6. It’s so nice?? loved it ….update next part soon ????

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks vinni…?

  7. Loved it ?????????and ya I am also a sukor fan so concentrate on sukor ???you just nailed it dear just amazing. ????????????????????????????????????

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks alot gungun.?

  8. It was superb i luvd it dear but don’t say about the ending of this ff otherwise i would cry…

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks megha

  9. It was superb i luvd it dear but don’t say that it would hav a last part otherwise i would cry…

    1. Komaljanu

      And don’t worry if ul will give me such support I would never end this ff

  10. sneha maheshwari

    It was damn cute episode just loved it
    Sorry first time i m commenting but yeah it was damn cute from the begining

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks Shreya…?

  11. Pls keep it up its really nice

    1. Komaljanu

      Thans Ankur…

  12. Lovely update ?good going dear…thank u for the update. ..?

    1. Komaljanu

      Thank alot vinlora?

  13. Suraj is great… Can I have a bite of his chocolate,please???

    1. Komaljanu

      I know he is great but for having a bite of his chocolate u have to go on the set of udaan ??

      1. yupp….I am Vivi.. that means VIVAAN…( pet name )………

      2. Janu…can Vivaan have a bite of chocolate??

  14. FF was really superb….. eagerly waiting for the next part….

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks alot…

    2. Komaljanu

      Oh so u mean ur name is Vivaan…

      1. yeahhh……i am a Vivaan (Paras Arora) fan…..so I changed my name…

  15. Gr8 going dea 🙂

    1. Komaljanu

      Thanks priya

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