i will always love u…(part 28) udaan

Hey guys thanks a lot I m glad that ul r loving my ff and want me to continue..i m sorry I m writing the ff too late…but had to complete my notes as missed school for a long time……..anyways hope ul will forgive me……….and enjoy this part…….

Sukor hugged each other and Vimli came in the room……
Vimli were shock to see the condition of the room…….it was so messed up…….
Vivan: what the ……
Imli: Vivan…..
Vivan: sorry.. but what is this guys….
Sukor looks at each other…
Imli: Vivan……cant u see their smile….
Vivan: yup I can.but imli few seconds before they were hurting each other………and now hugging each other………that’s grt
Sukor hugs them…………
Suraj: ul helped me a lot thanks guys……
Chakor: helped u……….means…oh no it means ul were knowing about suraj’s plan of making me jealous…
Vimli: yup…..
Chakor: that’s not fare……imli how can u lie ur sister yaar…..
Imli: di just because of our lies only u and jeeju r here……..
Suraj: jeeju?????
Imli: yup……..chakor is my di so u r my jeeju…
Suraj: no I m ur devar first my bhabhi???????
Vivan: yup so even I m chakor bhabhi’s devar……
Chakor: why r we fighting for relations……..the best thing is this that we will always stay together………..
Vivan: yup u r right……..
Suraj: ofcourse she is afterall she is inspired by me only…….
Chakor: oh really…
Imli: guys what nuisance yaar.cant ul stop fighting…..
Vivan: yup guys lets have a group hug plz……..
They hug eachother…….
Tina: can I join ul too….
Suraj sees tina and hugs her.

Suraj: thanks a lot yaar……………I got my life today only because of u…….i will be grateful to u the rest of my life and can never forget that just because of u I got my love my life my world and my everything………….
Chakor was touched by hearing all that..tears were rolling from her eyes……
Tina: its ok suraj u r by best friend and I can do atleast this much for u………
Chakor: no tina………thanks a lot…today me and suraj r together only because of u……..plz can I hug u too…
Tina: no u cant….
Chakor gets upset…..
Tina: stupid ofcourse u can yaar..whats the need of asking..come..
Chakor hugs her……..
Chakor: thanks a lot…….
Tina: oh plz now can we stop crying……..and yup now stop telling me thanku ok when my day will come even I will take everything from ul….so don’t get so happy……….
Chakor smiles………

Suraj: ofcourse u may yaar…………….now guys I have to go somewhere…..so bye……
Chakor: but……….
Before she could say anything he runs…….
Chakor: how mean….now who will clean this room…….
Vivan: I got a call.have to leave sorry……
Chakor: Vivan…
He goes…….chakor sees imli……
Imli: oh no I forgot something……I have to get it…
She runs……….chakor now sees tina……chakor keeps her hand on the waist
Chakor: u got a call or u forgot something……
Tina: no…….i have some work……
Tina was about to go
Chakor holds her hand…….
Chakor: no u r not going help me in cleaning
Tina: not fare yaar……….but still ok……..

They both clean the whole room………and gets tired so they sit on bed and take a breath of relief…….
Tina: now can I go??????
Chakor: yup thanku.
She hugs her…….
Tina: offo.yaar…………..u na get so centi.bye…….
She runs………..
Chakor gets a msg……….
It reads…….
COME TO UR ROOM QUICKLY….
It was suraj’s msg…..
She goes in her room and finds a gift and a letter too………
The letter reads…….
HI MY JAAN….HOPE U LIKE MY GIFT JUST WEAR IT AND COME WHERE OUR LOVE STORY STARTED……..
Chakor opens the gift it was a beautiful dress………she wears it….but the difficult thing was where to go……..as she wasn’t knowing where their love story started…………
She sits and try to call suraj but he doesn’t pick the call…………..
Chakor: where should I go……
She then remembers vimli’s love confession.that day they did a lot of fun and even their love started there…so she decided to go there……

As soon a s chakor comes there she finds whole dark…..
Chakor: sadu………where r u…..
She shouts a lot but doesn’t get any answer……….she turns to leave when suddenly she hears something…….it was suraj saying this from mike.he wasn’t anywhere but chakor could hear his voice………..
Suraj:I always planned that I will propose u in a very different way but never got a chance of doing that due to all the nuisance that happened…its night I cant shout but can say this in the mike as the speaker is just beside u……….just a sec……….one two and three…….
At his count of three chakor was shocked to see the arrangements it was whole lighting and at the centre was a cute table of two but where was suraj……..
Suraj: I know u r searching me so here I m just look up…
Chakor was shocked to see suraj up at the terrace……
Suraj: my dear chatterbox every person propose a girl by kneeling down but I wanted to do something different so here I m…… chatterbox I love u………..i really love u a lot.u r my world my life and my everything and I love u…….AND I WILL ALWAYS LOVE U……..

Chakor was shocked…..she quickly ran on the terrace………
As soon as she reached there she hugs him………tears were rolling from her eyes……….
Suraj: I did all this to make u happy and u r crying here…….
Chakor: sadu I never ever thought that a person will love me so much…….
Suraj: no ur sadu loves u more than so much love……….
Chakor: I too love u a lot sadu………
Suraj wipes her tears……
Suraj: I know u do…….but I love u more……
Chakor: no I love u more……
Suraj: excuse me……..i love u more…….
Chakor: I love u more thousand times more than u do…….
Suraj: and I love u so much that no number can describe it……
Chakor: ya so I love u thousand times more than that……
Suraj: ok baba fine I lost u won………u love me more got that…..
Chakor: that’s the spirit…..
And they again hug……

Precap: sukor dance on the song humdard and sukor cute romantic date……

So that was it guys…hope ul like it and I m sorry for posting it late………really sorry……..plz forgive me and one more thing I want to add a boy in this ff could ul suggest me whom it should be…plz I m very confused do tell me guys………really love ul..thanks for reading.and do let me know how it was……sorry once again..

44 comments

  1. dil dhanushi

    Its awesom dr. Thnx fr the update. Its k no need to say sorry. We can understand ur situation. .hw r u nw?

  2. shabdi

    Its extra ordinary…. I luv this ff soooo much its really interesting.. I missed ur ff 4 a week but nw im happy…
    .how is your health now??? Take care & we are always there for you

  3. vinlora

    Cute proposal. ..loved it…ok you can add any boy or girl but only one request plz nobody between my sukor…no love triangle. ..plzzz don’t separate my sukor. ..that’s it. ..😉

  4. Sukanya

    Finally Sukor are very Happy. So I am also happy. The ff is really nice. Hope that next part will be post soon.

  5. Vivi

    Oh it’s really really amzing.. loved each and every lines.. sooo interesting..😍😍.. dear sukor and didi.. I LOVE UL KORE THAN MILLION TIMES 💓💓.. missed u and ur FF so much..glad that u r back.. but don’t forger ur studies di..

  6. Vivi

    Loved each and every lines.. very amazing scenes.. I hv never read a FF lyk this.. dear sukor,di and di’s Ff..i love ul

  7. Liya

    Liya

    |Registered Member

    Super epi dear😘 sukor scenes were lovely😍! I was waiting for you too post! I hope Tina & arjun won’ t create any mess

  8. Mitha

    Hi dear!

    How are u?
    Just read this part!
    Amazing!
    Loved the proporsal scene and their competition on who loves more than other!

  9. ShriyaT

    ShriyaT

    |Registered Member

    Hiee…i m sorry to say but if u r not well and have too much work then u can discontinue writing this ff…actually i want u to write more but i waited for too long…now can’t wait more…I m really very sorry to say this😢😢

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