i will always love u…(part 25) udaan

Hey guys sorry for not posting yesterday but my mind was diverted to all that nuisance…….i know ul r there for me but….ul can understand that person commenting all that things from sasha’s name which he or she wouldn’t have…I was confused whether should I right ff or not…..and all thanks to ul just due to ur love and support I m writing it…sorry guys for spoiling ur yesterday’s mood but hope ul will understand……… enjoy reading………

Everyone lits a bornfire……suraj was sitting there wearing a jacket..chakor saw him and sat beside him as she saw even tina was about to sit there……poor tina was just standing and our dear suraj was happy with this but then to make chakor jealous…
Suraj: its ok tina lets sit there.
He himself gets up and sits beside tina.chakor was upset due to this but arjun goes and sits beside her……….

They were chatting and doing all fun over there……….when chakor was feeling cold.she saw suraj as she thought that suraj will give him her jacket……..
Chakor: its very cold yaar……
Suraj looks at tina.tina understand what he wants to say….
Tina: really even I m feeling cold…..
Suraj: then why didn’t u told me.take this jacket…..
Chakor gets very very angry and vimli were just laughing..
Suraj saw vivan and he gave chakor the shawl which was there behind him…..
Chakor: I don’t want.thanks a lot…..
Then they began dancing……

Chakor was dancing with arjun…so even suraj started dancing with tina..chakor stopped her dance she saw tina and suraj dancing and were completely lost in each other…arjun gave him a glass of water…now it was too much for chakor……so chakor breaked that glass in her hand.
all were shocked by that voice….suraj was heartbroken to see that he was about to go to her……
Chakor: sorry for disturbing ul.
And she went from there crying……
All went in their rooms…arjun went behind chakor.
the moment vivan imli tina and suraj came in room…
Suraj started throwing everything.he was dam angry for what happened today……
Suraj: it all happened cause of me…..

He hitted the mirror…..all were shocked blood was coming from his hands…
Tina: r u mad suraj look at ur hand…
She goes and hold his hand.suraj removed his hand.
Suraj: oh please…today just because of me chakor breaked the glass………..even she is hurt……….its all cause of me I should not have made her jealous if I would not have done that she would have not broken the glass…….what if she wouldn’t realize love for me.but I would be happy with my chatterbox irritating her and smiling on her cute fights but now……….
He hit on the wall with the same hand
He starts crying…….
Imli: suraj listen.
Suraj: what should I listen..
Vivan: shut up ok just shut up…….listen suraj I can understand ur feelings it wasn’t ur mistake.
Suraj: yup u wanted to leave happily with her no one was knowing that di will do these………….and anyways u should go to her now it means straight that she loves u…….

On the other hand……….
Chakor was crying….arjun came behind her…..chakor realized that there was someone behind her.
Chakor: sadu u go to tina….

Arjun: I m not suraj…..
Chakor turns and sees suraj now she gets more sad.
Arjun took his hand for bandage…..
Arjun: chakor I told u before only na……just let it go….the person who don’t care for u how can u hurt ur self for him,,see now also he doesn’t care…….he is not here with u………..u thought that ur sadu will come but he didn’t………
Chakor: u r right arjun.i was a fool to think that..but he is more interested in tina……
Arjun wipes her tears………
Chakor was really hurt so she hugs arjun….
Arjun in mind: right time to do that..
Arjun: chakor stop crying I want to show u something……….
Chakor: what????????
Arjun: first come with me……
He takes chakor with him blindfolding her………

On the other hand..
Suraj: whats the use of such love where she hurted herself for me……..
Vivan: listen suraj arjun went behind chakor before he do anything u go and search her……….

Arjun takes chakor to a room………
Arjun: I m removing my hand but u just close ur eyes.
Chakor: ok.
He removes and goes and plays a song……

On the other hand….
Suraj Is searching for chakor………
Suraj: don’t know where r u chatterbox…hope u r fine……..i m sorry………
He was repeating this when he hears some sound from one of the rooms……..he runs in that direction……

Chakor opens her eyes listening to that sound she gets shocked to see suraj…
But perhaps it was arjun.
He comes near chakor and ask for a dance.as chakor thought it as suraj…………she accept dancing with him..they dance on the song………dil mai chuppa lunga….chakor thought she was dancing with suraj but ul guys understood who it was…….
The song stopped……
And arjun went on kneels…
Arjun: chakor u know I really wanna say u something…from the day I saw u I was in madly love with u…
And today I got a chance to say u that I love u…………
Chakor still thought it was suraj…so she made him stand and hugged her cryingly..
Arjun: it means u love me too.
Chakor: hmmm
Arjun gets very happy..

Arjun in mind: sorry suraj its just the end of ur love…
Chakor for a while just see at the door and is shocked……….as there he was our suraj..chakor immediately broke the hug and was shcked to see that it was arjun.poor suraj he thought that chakor told arjun that she loves him……….the hand in which he got hurt.he closed it and was very angry..he was trying a lot to control his anger…..
Chakor was about to go to him..when arjun holds her hand……
Suraj gets more angry………….
Suraj: sorry for disturbing ul……..
Suraj was very hurt…….he was feeling like killing himself…….

Precap: chakor tries to explain suraj but he goes chakor too goes behind him…..
Arjuna sk tina doesn’t she loves suraj….tina thinks……

So that was it guys sorry once again but I hope ul can understand how bad it feels when someone comments such nuisance things any ways thanks a lot for ur support from now my ff will be only for ul guys…….plz do keep supporting me and tell me how it was..love ul and sorry once again

37 comments

  1. Liya

    |Registered Member

    I will kill that arjun! Always nuisance…and now manipulating Tina too…Sukor are hurt😭….hoping to see an interesting sukor union.

  2. Mitha

    Ho no SUKOR r hurt!
    After reading the precap, I feel like Arjun is going to manipulate Tina also.
    Good going!
    Don’t be woried beacause of few ppl who r not valuable to u dear!

  3. Dil dhanushi

    It’s awsm. Hp u ll clear the misunderstanding btwn sukor fast.cz I lkr thm as a couple. Oh no in precap Arjun is manipulating..n u should nt think abt n person who try to discourage u instead think so many ppl praises ur writing Skill cz u r a great writer. Eagerly waiting fr next part

  4. Aradhya

    Hey Komal just don’t mind others. Ok…
    There are people who love u and ur ff…
    So don’t worry…
    And plz don’t turn tina negative….
    One villain is enough for sukor…

  5. Aradhya

    Hey komal don’t worry abt others words….I just wanna say dat u and ur ff is amazing dear….
    Bakhi sab tumse bas jalthi hai..
    Tum tension mat karo….
    And just update ur ff regularly…. and plz dont make tina negative yaar… Ek villain kaafi hai sukor ko….plz!!!!

  6. Gungun (angel )

    AMAZING work dear … You are growing your writing skills day by day….. You should at least write this ff’s 200 episode… Don’t be discouraged by some ugly people…. Keep it up.. you will surely achieve your aim …………………

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  7. Priyashini

    |Registered Member

    Hey very nice yaar….. Pls make them join soon. And take care too … Never mind stupid things in life. Keep smiling😆 . Good night sleep well.

  8. priyadarshini

    Hey Janu, don’t worry. We are here and are always with you. There are a lot of people who luv u and ur ff. Don’t worry about fake people. My actual name is Gopika. And I am using this name ‘priyadarshini’ because I luv this name. It is the surname name of Indira Gandhi (Indira priyadarshini). I am not fake and also note my symbol ( yellow coloured symbol). I really luv ur ff. I am from kerala and I am studying in 12 standard and I am a girl.
    Coming to the ff , oh 2Day’s was very sad episode. But you nailed the expressions well. I luved your creativity and I expect that SuKor will unite soon.
    We really missed you yesterday
    IF U HAVE ANY PROBLEM ,PLEASE SHARE WITH US. THEN YOUR BURDEN WILL BE DECREASED. DON’T RUN AWAY FROM PROBLEMS AND YOU HAVE THE COURAGE TO FACE THE PROBLEM BECAUSE YOU ARE ‘THE GIRL’ . We are always here to support you. When you are hurt, don’t hide your pains. Share ur pains and worries and we are here for you…
    If someone hurts you anymore then just say that ‘ if anyone didn’t like ff then just stop reading it and do their work. Don’t judge others. THERE ARE PEOPLE WHO LUVS THE FF. And it is written for them…..
    If any of my words hurt u Janu or anybody ,then forgive me.
    And…. Janu waiting for nxt epi.
    Good night and take care.
    If anyone betrayed you then just remember the ones who luvs you a lot and who supports you….
    Bye

  9. priyadarshini

    Oh my god. Hey Janu I really didn’t knew abt ur problms bcoz I didn’t read everyone’s comment. But now I read every commend and I understood ur prblm. How can some bcome low like this??Is that their manners??? Very bad pple….
    U don worry Janu . We r here.
    SHRIYA, must say you are awsome and
    I liked the way you supported Janu . U rock yaar… And luv everybody who supporteg OUR JANUUU..

    I really luv u guys…..
    U pple are like my best frnds…..
    Really good pple….
    Abd Janu I must say you are very sweeettt …. Luv u….

  10. Sia

    Wow Yaar I always wanted sukor to propose each other but that arjun spoiled everything but nevertheless I think ur ff is mind blowing so keep going komal v r with u….

  11. Sonia

    You have one of the best ffs I ever read and don’t get discouraged by someone who doesn’t appreciate your ff.You keep writing your ff, and don’t keep that bad comment in your soul .

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