i will always love u…(part 23) udaan

Hey guys ur prayers actually worked got a good result but yet dint posted as I didn’t wanted to take a risk…so sorry.but yup lets start.hope ul enjoy it and one more thing guys lets pray for liya that she gets well soon……..enjoy reading..

Chakor goes in the class…….
Chakor: what the hell…that mad girl…..how can she hug my sadu……and sadu how can he hug her.he told he just used to like her so why the hell did he hugged her and why was he happy……..dont know what he saw in tina……….
Chakor was in a dam angry mood……….but her anger burst more when she sees tina and suraj coming in class holding hands her focus was only on their hands…….every bench was full…….suraj came beside chakor and sat there……..chakor got happy after a long time..but all in vain……
Suraj: chatterbox..can u please go and sit beside arjun…….
Chakor: why should i…….
Tina: because I want to sit with suraj………
Suraj: yup and even I.so please get up and sit beside arjun……..
Chakor gets very angry and sits beside arjun…..she was in a very angry mood……vimli and tiraj were happy seeing her mood……
Suraj:so finally my cute love is getting jealous ha………..sorry jaan I really want to see u happy but have to do this..please realize ur love for me so that I can end up this nuisance…….
Vivan: its ok suraj.
Imli: yup…….. u r doing this for di only……….so forget it………
Vivan: and yup control ur emotions or else……..
Suraj: I know yaar…………I m trying…..

Teacher comes and starts explaining………..
Arjun:so chakor how r u……..
Arjun ask her many times but chakor is busy in staring tiraj……….who r laughing and talking……
Chakor was not knowing what to do…….but it was too much for her to control now…..so she suddenly got up….
Chakor: miss……
All were shocked with this…….but suraj was just smiling as he understood that chakor is getting jealous….
Teacher: yup chakor say what happened…….
Chakor: miss I m unable to sit here……..please tina could u let me sit in my actual place……
Suraj understood but still asked….
Suraj: why u wanna sit here…..
Chakor was not knowing what to answer when she remembers suraj’s reason when he was jealous seeing arjun and chakor talking in actions…….
Chakor: miss because sunlight Is coming on my face………
Suraj now gives a very cute and a big smile……….
Vivan in suraj’s ears: bro ur plan is working….congratulations….
Teacher: tina get up from there and sit where chakor is sitting……..
Suraj: no miss if tina will sit there……..sunlight will come on her face too……..
Chakor: oh so what about me sadu…….
Suraj: its ok na yaar…………sit there or make arjun sit that side……
Chakor: sadu………
Bell rangs……….chakor runs from the class……
Vivan: great bro……
Suraj: go behind her yaar………
Imli: yup I will handle her…
Suraj was making her jealous but at the same time was very worried for chakor……

Chakor sits in the canteen…….
Chakor: how mean sadu.u care for that tina and not for me……….i saved ur sister but then too u r behaving in this manner………….u used to say that u love irritating me………and after that tina came u don’t want to even see my face……….
Chakor wanted to cry very badly……….she was angry on tina but was sad due to the care that suraj showed towards tina……..
Vimli comes in the canteen……
Vivan: why did u came here……
Chakor: so what should I have done…..
Imli: di what happened why r u so angry..
Chakor: why shouldn’t i..that sadu and tina r too much now……..
Imli: why r u getting angry because of them…….u hate suraj na….
Chakor: no I don’t……
Chakor realizes whats he said….
Vivan: it means u love……
Chakor: no.r u mad.i mean I dont hate him…..cause he doesn’t even deserve my hatenes……..
Imli In mind: its ok if u don’t tell but the truth is this that u love him di……….and we will make u realize it….
Vivan sees suraj who gives him a action…….vivan realizes and says….
Vivan: btw guys don’t ul feel that we should unite tina and suraj…..
Imli: yup vivan..i too think the same…..
Chakor: but how can ul do this….
Vivan: what do u mean by that.
Chakor: I mean without know that they love each other how can ul unite them……
Imli: oh common di don’t u see the love and care in their eyes for one another…….
Vivan: yup imli is right……..chakor r u with us or not…..
Chakor: no….
And she goes there in anger……suraj smiles seeing this…..vivan gives hi fi to imli and imli hugs him…..
Imli: hope di realize her love soon…..
Vivan: yup imli.
She kisses her forehead…..

On the other side…..
Chakor: don’t know what is wrong with them……….but why am I getting angry……..is it so that I really love sa……….no no it cant be…….anyways even now I will show sadu…..if he can be with tina even I can be with arjun……..
Suraj comes and smiles seeing her……..chakor ignores and goes and sits beside arjun……
Suraj: oh so now u r thinking of making me jealous……..thats great my love……but don’t worry I will only win this jealousy game as I understood that even u love me…….and I will make u say that….
Bell rings…

Tina vivan and imli comes all sit in their places……
Teacher comes…
Teacher: as u all know that our hostels were getting rebuilt……but now they r finally done so from tomorrow ul have to stay in hostels…….and today ul r leaving early as ul will get ur rooms and everything…..so check the notice board today and tomorrow early morning start living in ur rooms……………

All get happy…as now they could meet each other any time…….
They leave……..
Tina: so finally we will be able to meet each other any time…..
Suraj: yup tina……..thats great.
Chakor wanted to draw suraj’s attention…
Chakor: it means I have to tollerate this sadu now….
Suraj: no u don’t have to tollerate me as now tina is there for me……..
He smiles seeing tina…….
Chakor gets dam angry……
Chakor: imli I m leaving.if u wanna come then come or else stay with this stupid people…….
Imli: I m coming..
She hugs vivan…
Imli; I love u…..
Vivan: love u too..
And she leaves……
Suraj: oh my jaan..u look so cute when u r angry……and I love u more by seeing u in that expression……….
Vivan: yup that’s it she went…………..lets come home from tomorrow u will be with her only………………….
Suraj: yup…..unless that arjun don’t come in middle……
Tina: suraj…………that’s great u r making her jealous and u urself r getting jealous……
Suraj: its not jealousy tina……..i m worried for her as I know that arjun properly……
Vivan: so my brother is now possessive for my bhabhi ha…….
Tina: of course vivan.cant u see his face…..
And they both laugh….
Suraj: stop it guys.just hope chatterbox soon realizes that she loves me………

Precap: they all pack their bags and comes in college……..tina is about to fall suraj holds her and chakor comes meanwhile…….

So that was it guys………hope I didn’t bored ul……..i know ul understood but still to clear ur doubts tiraj is tina and suraj………keep supporting me….love ul guys….and ha please do let me know how it was…….thanks for reading….hope ul enjoyed it…….

64 comments

  1. Aaru Vivi

    Great dear and congrats for ur result…
    And ur ff is really good… it is getting more interesring day by day…
    Well done..

      • Shriya

        Hey…wat happened??till now u were liking this ff and now badmouthing komal…u know wat komal is great u just cant say these things for such a lovely author like komal..😬😬😠

      • Komaljanu

        |Author

        gungun sorry if my words hurt u but do mind ur language..if u dont like my ff u may say that but no need of giving badwords………and yup u dont have any right to say me kuthey ki bachi………..u r giving badwords to my parents and i wont hear it………so please just mind ur language and if u cant then go to hell…….sorry if u didnt liked my ff but u cant give me badwords for that reason..

      • Shriya

        Don’t say thanks…u r too good..i didnt like gungun’s attitude..she was just saying these things coz she didnt like ur ff??!! But its rubbish..ur ff is fantastic but still i cant bear this!😢😢

      • Megha

        Komal plz don’t get angry dear,if gungun’s words hurt u then i m sry but i think u should talk 2 her may b her intention is not what u r thinking.But really gungun should not say that 2 ur parents,it was unbearable.

      • Komaljanu

        |Author

        shriya………i have to say u thanks dear……..really love u and thanks too gungun too…..i m sorry if my words hurted u gungun but i love my parents and cant hear anything against them so i m really very very sorry..do forgive me…i was in anger and wrote everything rubbish.but its just ff lets not get personal and yup next time i will try to write a better ff..lov u too gungun

      • Komaljanu

        |Author

        u dont need to say sorry megha…….its ok i never take things in my heart but was hurt when she went on my parents but lets just forget it .the thing already went and now we cant do anything in it……..so its fine…….

    • Sia

      @Gungun n Sasha, What the hell she is saying??? bl**dy….U both r characterless girls even mujhe Sharam aati hai ki tum donon ek ladki ho….n Sasha tumein Sharam nahi aati ek baat betide baare mein yeh Sab bottle hue….Shayad tumare saath tumare baat ne joh bhi gande baatien tumne boli hai woh sab kiya hoga toh apni asliyath ko doosron pe mat thopon aur for ur kind information kutte hi bhokte hai aur itne der se toh tuhi bhok rahi hai toh kutte ki bachi toh tu hui Komal nahi aur kaash tu meri saamne hoti toh main Teri gandi chappal uthakar Teri mooh pe maarti….aur tum donon (gungun n Sasha) beti ke naam par Maa baap ke liye kalyani ho….

      • Komaljanu

        |Author

        thanks alot sia for supporting me.but just a sec let that person say whatever but u dont say them kuttey ki bachi we r not like that person to go on someone’s parents and anyways why should we talk to the people who dont understand english…

  2. Fatimi

    Well done author..

    Do u know something today is my birthday… But no one in my house wish me.. It’s really heart me 😢😢

    • Megha

      No 1 wished u…So sad…It’s okay i will wish u a vry happy b-day.I can feel how much it hurts when no 1 is there to talk with at such a special day

      • Fatimi

        Thanks for the wishes.. Shriya, megha and our best author 😘😘

        I think my parents were busy with 😊they works… I dont mind about that…😉

        I’m happy with your all wishes…
        Thanks again everyone..😄😄

  3. priyadarshini

    oh i luv it so much. your ff is interesting me day by day. I am a 12th student and i always visits tellyupdates. The writers are sometimes destroying the story of many serials but you are improving your story day by day. & i luv it so much janu.
    waiting for next epi…

  4. Sasha

    Good one komal!!!!!

    To u miss gungun, , y dont u change ur name to miss desperate attention seeker ???btw u should really learn how to spell things…, u r just a jealous nincompoop, discouraging the author shows ur standards too. The author doesnt need people like u

    • Komaljanu

      |Author

      and yup sasha thanks for ur support to.but i feel u as my sis and with that right i want to say u something……..hope u dont mind……dear i never care whatever the people say about me unless and untill ul r there with me……so its ok let gungun say anything but plz u dont say anything to her cause i dont want someone to point my sis……..let it be na sasha i should say thanks to gungun cause just because of her i understood how much ul guys love me……so just forget it..love u my sis…….

  5. Shriya

    Ek baat boloon Gungun ney na bilkul theek kaha tha kuthey ki bachi hai yeh komal kuthee na Ho toh.Sahee kuthey ki bachi hai meren jogi larrki😤😤😤.koi therey saath nahi hai seb rukh sey nefreth kerthey hai.chal hett kuthey ki bachi.just go to hell.

  6. Komaljanu

    |Author

    Listen whomever u r god has given me brains to understand that its not gungun Sasha or Shriya….its one person who is using others Nam and writing all those nuisance comment….u know what u r a dam
    Coward….if u have guts use ur original Nam and comment anyways whatever u told me thanks alot I got to know u all do such nuisance things……so just go to hell and yup u r a dam bl**dy coward use ur own name don’t spoil others name……

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