i will always love u…( part 13) udaan


Hey guys thanks alot for ur love and support. I know many of UL were sad as I didn’t posted on Sunday but I will really try my level best that it never happens again. I will post everyday… Enjoy reading..?

Suraj and Chakor have a cute eye lock..
After few seconds they realize their position so chakor gets up and suraj too gets up.. Chakor was feeling too awkward.. Suraj sees this and thinks of cheering her up.
Suraj: Chatterbox that day I told u na go on a diet.
Chakor: Just shut up.
Suraj: Really… R u serious.. Naughty girl ha.
Chakor: Sadu what should I do of urs.
Suraj: Sell me on olx.
Chakor: Sadu plz stop irritating me yaar.. Since morning u r doing this.
Suraj: Ok fine…
Chakor: Thanks.

She was about to go when suraj holds her hand.
Suraj: Hey chatterbox u didn’t replied to my three letter words.
Chakor: Sadu.. U
And they both runs again.. Suraj in front and chakor behind her.
Suraj while running: Pls now don’t dash with anything and fall on me..cause now I wont be able to tolerate ur weight..
Chakor: Sadu I really wont leave u.
Suraj: First catch me chatterbox.
They go downstairs and Vimli comes there.
Suraj goes behind imli.
Suraj: Imli save me from ur sister.
Chakor: Imli just get side. I really wont leave this stupid.
Suraj: Ae u call me sadu its ok but don’t dare call me stupid.
Chakor: Stupid, stupid , stupid.
Suraj: Chatterbox now I wont leave u.
Chakor: First catch me stupid.
Suraj: Chatterbox…

They run again this time Chakor in front and Suraj behind her..
Imli: I really feels that they both r small little kids.
Vivan: Really see the way they fight… Just like a small person.
Imli: Thank god we don’t fight like them.
Vivan: We will never… Cause I can never fight with u..
They both have an eye lock…
On the other side.. Suraj and Chakor runs full college and now comes on terries’. They both r tired.
Chakor: Lets stop I I really cant run more.
Suraj: Nor can I.. Lets sit here.
He holds Chakor’s hand and makes her sit on railing..
Chakor: We r really too much yaar.
Suraj: True we always fight like Ki.
Chakor: And that’s cause of u.
Suraj: Excuse me.. It’s because of u..
Chakor: Listen u always irritate me..

Suraj: So I love to do that…
Chakor: But i hate it na.
Suraj: So its ur problem not mine…
Chakor: Really its useless talking to u .
Suraj: So make it useful
Chakor: Sadu plz stop it. U know just because of ur stupid nuisance I didn’t ate anything.
Suraj: U know I ate many thing……
And he pretends to laugh.
Suraj: Even I didn’t ate anything yaar.
Chakor: Now the ball rang and I have to sit without eating anything in the lectures…
Suraj: As if I’ll sit with my stomach full.
Chakor: Just forget it..
Suraj: But I wanna remember it..
Chakor: Sadu..
And she leaves I anger.

On the other side. Vivan and imli r interrupted by Chakor…
Vivan: I think chakor is calling u.
Imli: Yup its time to go in class..
They go in class..
Chakor sits Vimli too sits. Everyone r inside the class. No wait where is Suraj.. He is not there. Chakor is continuously looking outside.
Chakor: This sadu will definitely die someday. Miss is about to come and this mr India didn’t came till now…
Chakor gets up. She goes outside to search Suraj. But as she comes towards the door Suraj comes.
Suraj: Can’t even stay a second without me..
Chakor: Oh just shut up..miss I about to come..
Miss comes from behind. They sit on their places.. She explains and Vimli again starts staring each other.
Suraj is looking at chakor.
Chakor: What happened.
Suraj: R u hungry.
Chakor: Ofcourse I m.
Suraj: See inside the desk.
Chakor sees a lays packet.
Chakor: Lays where did this come from..
Suraj: Ghost bought this.. Ofcourse stupid I bought this.
Chakor: But why.
Suraj: I didn’t wanted to hear ur taunts so.. And even I m hungry.
Chakor: R u mad.. Miss is explaining
Suraj: Look if u wanna eat then eat it or go to hell. I m eating this.
Suraj eats it and by seeing Suraj chakor too eats it…

Suraj: Well done ha.
Bell rangs.
Chakor was about to leave.
Suraj: Chatterbox who’ll say thanks.
Chakor: Thanks………….to u not even in my dreams.
Suraj: How rude.
Chakor: Thanks.
Suraj: Ur welcome….. U finally told it in reality not in ur dreams..
Chakor realizes that Suraj purposely told her how rude so that she could say thanks… Suraj laughs.
Chakor: Imli lets go home.
Imli: Yes di.. Bye vivan.
Vivan: Bye.
They go home eat food and go their rooms.
Imli: Di i wanted to tell u something.
Chakor: Say.
Imli: Di I love vivan.
On the other side vivan too tells Suraj that he loves imli.. Chakor and Suraj r shocked.

Precap: Chakor tells suraj that imli loves vivan and Suraj too tells her that vivan loves imli…..

So that was it guys. Thanks for reading?
Hope UL liked it. Do let me know how it was

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  1. I it was awesome dear and I love it too…

  2. Eppavumpola, Very sweet…….
    I like it…..

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks nisi.

    2. do u know tamil, nisi??

      1. Komaljanu

        ok was that tamil…thanks amna but do u know what she said cause u know tamil. and i really dint understood the meaning of eppavumpola.. so plz tell me

      2. “as always”…

      3. She told that it always sweet and best like that

      4. Komaljanu

        thanks for explaining fatimi

      5. Komaljanu

        thanks amna

  3. Wow.. I love it.. Thanks for upload it ??

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks fatima……

    2. My name is fatimi… I’m not fatima
      ?…. .. U r the best one on writing love story… ?

      1. Komaljanu

        ok sorry fatimi i didnt read it properly and thanks for complementing my writing.. it means alot to me…..

      2. When will u post the part14

  4. Superb!?

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks mitha

      1. Welcome dear!

  5. wonderful Sukor scenes!!! well done Komal!!!

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks my sis….

  6. I loved that eyelock and sukor scenes were amazing????????????????????????????????? waiting for your next episode desperately

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks gungun glad that u liked it…..

  7. Yaar it was aweeessoommm….I luvd it,i luv it and i will luv it its my favorite os

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks megha very happy to know that its ur favourite os…. thanks alot

  8. thrilling scenes… sooo sweet di..

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks zainab.. glad that my small sister liked it…

  9. wow dear…..I really love it. …..thanks

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks alot sonam..

      1. Komaljanu

        glad u loved it

  10. Super asually.waiting for next

  11. As usually nice…loved it. ?

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks glad that u luved it

  12. This is as usual very nice….waiting for next…no need to say sry if u can’t write one day….ur ff is so good that it is worth waiting…??

    1. Komaljanu

      thanks pia……. dont worry wont let ul wait again..

  13. Very nice..just i felt this one a little boring than all other??

  14. Very nice..just i felt this one a little boring than all other?

    1. Komaljanu

      i m sorry.. next time ill try to make it interesting

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