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Home»Fan Fiction Original»Who am I? (part 16)
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Who am I? (part 16)

administratorBy administratorJanuary 12, 201629 Comments5 Mins Read
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Must be the longest wait in my life. Each seconds past like a year. Every second I looked at the door. Suddenly fear swept me.. But sleep overcame it and I slept in sofa itself…

Sun rays woke me and I did all daily chorus in an hour and sat with a coffee near tv… News may come right? I said to myself and switched on the tv..

The news came at last

” due to the great effect of our Indian army the one who is responsible for the Mumbai blasting Junaid Khan is killed by our army”

Hey great.!!!

” the fight lasted for about 5 hrs”

Omg! Armaan must be really tired..I must make something for him. I got up and started to go to kitchen and that time I heard that.

” 5 terrorists along with Junaid Khan is killed and 2 of our soldiers gave their life”

What?? No way I may not have heard properly. I stood near tv and started to read the news feed. Yes tats true.. Fear crept slowly. I should talk to him now.. Telephone!!

I went near phone and started to dial the number ( all thanks to Khushi, I know his no)

Called 4 times no one picked.

5th time..
??? : hello
Me: hello!! Can I speak to Armaan? ( I’m little shouting)
??? : he’s inside the room. He’ll come after treatment.
Me: treatment??? Is he ok?
??? : yeah just few minor injury don’t worry mam. Mam r u Mrs. Armaan?
Me: m… Yeah..
??? Oh ok( I can hear him laughing). I’ll say sir to talk with you.

After 15 mins 7 secs the phone rang.

Me: hello Armaan..
Armaan: Hey Arohi relax yaar… Nothing happened.
Me: then what about injury?
Armaan: I’m ok yaar seriously… Its just a normal wounds it’ll heal in few days.
Me:hmmmm k… Can I come to the hospital?
Armaan: I’ll there in half an hour..
Me: ok then..
Armaan: bye..
Me: bubye.. C u

Just half an hr.. Wat can I make 4 him. What about a briyani for my hubby.. Ok lets get started. I’m totally immersed in doing the briyani. Suddenly a voice came.

??? : hello ( very bad mimicry)

I dropped the plates in shock. As I turned, I saw Armaan

Me: why Armaan ? You scared me.
Armaan:haha so you are scared of ghost..
Me: oh so you tried to sound like a ghost
Armaan: Hey its ghost sound..
Me: oh oh.. ( I slightly hitted him)
Armaan: ouch
Me: sorry sorry..
Armaan: it’s just a small wound. May heal in 3 days…
Me: great!!
Armaan: hmmm what’s that smell? Is tat briyani?
Me: hmmmm yeah..
Armaan: come lets eat.

We both started to eat.

After eating..

Armaan: hmm hmm ( he made sounds)
Me: what Armaan?
Armaan: so? ( he rounded his eyes)
Me: so?? ( I mimicked him)
Armaan: Hey..
Me: hehe what’s the matter?
Armaan: I just feel like we should learn a lot about ourself. So lets date ( he rushed)
Me: OK.
Armaan: ok? I rehersed a lot to say these words..
Me: Armaan you turned a lot… Like a lot innocent..
Armaan: I’m innocent only..( he said as if that’s the true)
Me: Oh the innocent one only yesterday k.. (what am I trying to say…)

I totally turned red.

Armaan: yesterday? ( he smiled mischievously)
Me: nothing..
Armaan: nothing ah?
Me: yeah nothing..

I got up but he pulled me towards him and I sat on his lap..

Me:Armaan ( I tried to get up.. But his grip tightened)
Armaan: are you sure nothing?

He started to come close. The door bell rang..

Me: Armaan.. Door..
Armaan: lets open tomorrow.
Me: Hey..

I pushed him and opened the door… It’s Shasha

Shasha: Hey darling ( shasha hugged me)
Me: hello future bride
Shasha: hehe ( she smiled and blushed)
Me: so what’s up? Y sudden visit..
Shasha: baby!! I’m totally messed yaar.. Totally.. I want a person while shopping.. And I want you to be in my wedding shopping..
Me: aww.. Sure yaar.. When shall we go?
Shasha: now.. (she turned to Armaan) sorry Armaan but I want her now..
Armaan: ok… But come soon..
Shasha: we’ll finish dinner and come… So sorry today…. Hotel..
Armaan: oh not a problem at all.. I’ll manage..

I excused to get ready and came down.. Can notice that they were having a little chitchat

Shasha: she love that…

I can only hear that. They stopped talking when I came down..

Me: what happened?
Shasha: secret..
Me: hmmmm ( I turned towards Armaan and made sad face)
Armaan: I’ll say 2mrw..
Me: OK ( my face lighted in joy)
Shasha: ah love birds..
Me: OK guys enough… Bubye Armaan.
Armaan: bye…

Precap: enjoying a beautiful date with my dr.. Full of joys

Hey buddies… Missed all… Xam ended well… Expect engineering physics… Everything was good… How r u all…? How is 2days part?

Love you all

And link 4 the previous part as asked by aparna

www.tellyupdates.com/who-am-i-part-15/

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29 Comments

  1. sara on January 12, 2016 2:17 am

    after long time. ..it is awesome

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 5:52 am

      Thank you sara

  2. Ananya on January 12, 2016 2:23 am

    Dhaara was waiting for ur story.. I was actually counting days to be 11th… Now I am happy.. And update nxt part soon also a looong one…
    And don’t worry ull score gud marks in exam….???

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 5:53 am

      Haha I just hope it will be gud…. Sur yaar nxt will be a longer one…. A lot loongg.. And I’ll post 2 parts 2day

  3. swara on January 12, 2016 2:39 am

    wow super pls dear update regularly iam really miss your ff.

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 5:54 am

      Sure yaar… I’m lost more free now i’ll post 2 parts 2day..thank u swara

  4. Cutiee on January 12, 2016 6:08 am

    Awesome dhaara and update next part soon
    BTW hw did you write yours semexams

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 9:48 am

      Everything was good except engineering physics ?

    • Cutiee on January 13, 2016 11:39 am

      Next part dhaara

  5. Liya on January 12, 2016 6:25 am

    U made us wait for litl long. . . Thank u 4 the updt. . . It was lovly 🙂 shasha toh kabab mein haddi bankar agayi. . . ;->

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 9:49 am

      Sry yaar…. Here the nxt update is getting ready

  6. Lakshmi on January 12, 2016 6:59 am

    Hi dhaara ,so ur exams completed. U’ll get good result dear.Oh u came back on 11th Jan as promised ….love u ????.Armaan became very naughty. Superb update yaar.Update next part soon.take care……

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 9:50 am

      Tq arshi…. Is naughty Armaan ok? ??

  7. arshi on January 12, 2016 7:47 am

    oooohhhh dhara.. such an amazing story with cute narrating… actually i was busy in the last month coulnd come to telly updates.. once i came back.. i started searching for your ff..i knew tat its not been uploaded in any serial page….so i searched through links by changing the part number.. so a small request.. dont change the title even a letter ever..
    coming to story.. marvellous story.. could visualize everything…

    by the way what are u studying

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 9:52 am

      Tq so much yaar 4 the compliments… I’m doing my B.E

  8. Hayathi on January 12, 2016 7:59 am

    Best of luck dr…… miss u so muchhhh yaar…. so how r u dr… awesome romantic update

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 9:52 am

      Tq yaar and I’m grt

  9. advaita on January 12, 2016 10:07 am

    Ty so much. Finally u r back!! Missed u so much!! Awesome part. Waiting for next update. Take care 🙂 🙂

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 1:20 pm

      Tq advaita

  10. Roma on January 12, 2016 10:32 am

    Awesome episode dhaara, missed you sooooo muchhhh dearrr, i wish you for great score in the exams…engineerung in physics wow you’re very smart …all the best…coming to today’s episode, it’s superb, Armaan is very naughty now n Arohi’s worry n her care for him so sweet, loved their sweeeeeet moments…keep it up buddyyy, eagerly waiting for the next episode, love you loads

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 1:21 pm

      Tq Roma

  11. Devga on January 12, 2016 10:46 am

    Really felt wat happened so long I dint get arohi and aarmaan. …..
    Thank u ?
    I missed who am I. ……
    Suddenly armaan turned sweet towards arohi so nice …….
    And arohi too reacted very worried after that news ….

    Cool awsome … Update soon next part

  12. nivedha on January 12, 2016 10:59 am

    Hi.. I am new to read ur story yaar.. Waiting for next update..It is great..

    • Devga on January 12, 2016 11:32 am

      U wil enjoy reading it yar …. Its awesome …. U read from starting it wil b ful of surprises mysteries cute moments ….. Etc ….etc

    • nivedha on January 12, 2016 12:20 pm

      U know what I was just enjoyingggggg Really I wont miss it hereafter Dharra.. I m a new fan to ur story..

    • Dhaara on January 12, 2016 1:22 pm

      Tq new fan… Tq devga

  13. Dhaara on January 12, 2016 7:56 pm

    Frnds a little problem… I went out so… The part will not updated today… A surprise 4 u all gonna write another ff..

  14. Shiya on January 13, 2016 4:17 pm

    Hey when r u going to write the next part..
    Super storyline i cnt wait 4 further updates..

  15. Ananya on January 13, 2016 7:20 pm

    Dhaara when will u update nxt part… I am waiting…

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