What to name this story?

“What magic have you done on me
Oh baby oh baby oh my sweetie
You are just awesome
I love you more than myself
I live for you and
I die for you
You are mine
You are mine
I love you till eternity”

Claps!!! Claps!!! A huge applause and hooting!!!

Yay!!! We have done it!!! Yes. I’m so happy. Finally we performed on our own song with our own band. I thanked all my buddies for coordinating so well. It’s just awesome. We are absolutely delightful.

Then we packed our stuff and moving to our gypsy. “You rocked Miss. Marta Fernandez!” a guy whispered in my ear behind. The voice sounded familiar to me. I turned around to look at him. My jaw dropped to the floor and eyes popped out. I can’t believe this. I froze then and there!!! He waved his hands to bring me into senses. Still I couldn’t respond him. He left giving a sheepish smile.

Then someone shook my shoulders from behind. It’s Mustafa! Drummer in our band. “What happened?” asked Mustafa. I said “Ben!!!”. “Ben???” Mustafa asked in confusion “well… Who’s that?”. I replied “Oh Mus!!!” That’s his nick name. “Oh Mus!!! How can you forget? It’s Ben!!! Ben Torres!!!” Mus thought for a while and exclaimed “Oh I’m sorry! I got it now. Ben Torres!!! The nerdy guy of the class. Our classmate in Westley school. Right?.. Wait… Why did he even come here? I mean he’s such a nerd!” I took a deep breath and said ” yeah Mus! You’re right. Not to forget he was a nerd. Two years ago. When we were in middle school. But now he’s completely changed.”

“Okay!. Shall we continue later. We are getting late. Gypsy is waiting for us.” Mus said while pulling me to our gypsy. I followed to gypsy and left home.

At home!!! I shared my first concert with my family members. They were happy for my success. I’m happy too to see them happy. I rushed to my room after dinner.
I was reminiscing about the day. “Ben!!!” Yes Ben talked to me finally. I was ecstatic about him though I was shocked. What an awesome day!!! Love this day!!! Thank you god. Then I prayed to Jesus and went to bed.

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Hi guys. Hope some of you know me through my previous short story. Well guess it.

And the title of this story is a question for you all. I request my story readers to suggest a good name for my story. Please!!!

You can take my earlier post also for reference while making this story.

I can continue this story if I get at least 5 comments. Please feel free to comment. No hard feelings. Comment as you feel.

Am I worth writing this story or not? Please do express yourself by commenting.

Thank you.

Credit to: you_dont_know

3 comments

  1. Bisha

    Continue please. I dont remember you first part of tgis syory. But i def remember that i read that. Umm, cant really think of any name not getting any. But do write. I guess you came back rewinding the story as u showed them hugging in love after a cute prank of Martha to break up! I really wanna see how u shape it. Regarding the title only u can give it a proper title as u have the full story man (or woman? 😉 lol) indide ur brain.

  2. Bisha

    Continue please. I dont remember you first part of tgis syory. But i def remember that i read that. Umm, cant really think of any name not getting any. But do write. I guess you came back rewinding the story as u showed them hugging in love after a cute prank of Martha to break up! I really wanna see how u shape it. Regarding the title only u can give it a proper title as u have the full story man (or woman? 😉 lol) inside ur brain

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