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War turned into Love (DevAkshi an OS) By Rithika

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Hi guys Rithika here
I came up with a idea of an OS first time I’m posting one…so do tell me how’s it

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Dev’s POV

Ugh!!!! I can’t believe it I got married to my enemy I don’t know y I said yes to this marriage I’m a buffalo to agree…..By the way I’m Dev..Dev Dixit Mumbai’s greatest business tycoon. I actually agreed to marry because her family found out that there’s a person stalking her named Rithwick, but I hate her and so does she hate me. In this I forgot to tell u her name Sonakshi but now Sonakshi Dev Dixit. We decided to take divorce after 6 months because we couldn’t stand each other.

Dev’s POV ends

Sona’s POV

Ugh!!! Y do I have to get married to this sadiyal person. Ugh!! He’s so irritating. If I stay with him any longer there will be a World War III in the Dixit house because we both can’t stand each other. Thanks god after 6 months I’ll be free from him, but these 6 months will be like 6 years!!!!!!!! God only help me spend 6 months with this sadiyal person. God!!

Sona’s POV ends

Third person’s POV

Dev and Sona were in the room Dev said,
Dev : Sonakshi u an sleep on the bed I’ll sleep on the couch ok.
But Sona is Sona she denied
Sona : No need for ur favor ok Dev I’m fine on the couch
She took the blanket and pillow and went to the couch and slept there

Next morning Sona was sleeping on the couch and Dev was sleeping on the bed just then someone knocked on the door and Dev got up he was about to open
Dev : What r u doing Dev if someone sees Sonakshi on the couch, problem ho jayga
He shakes her but she doesn’t wake up so he carried her to the bed and then opened the door
Dev : Nikki u here at this time
Nikki : Haan bhaiya actually ma is calling u
Dev : Ok u go I’ll come
They both left

After sometime Sona got up and she was shocked finding herself on the bed
Sona : How did I come here I was sleeping on the couch
Just then she saw Dev coming in
Sona : U…how dare u pick me up I told u na not to do any favor on me u still picked me up how can u??
Dev : Oh just shut up! Nikki knocked the door I woke u up also to go on the bed but u being a kumbkaran didn’t wake up
Sona : U called me a kumbkaran how dare u idiot buffalo fool stupid
Dev : How dare u call me names stupid
Sona : How dare u. I’ll kill u
Like this they both start a pillow fight and this live telecast is seen by Ishwari and she enters the room

Ishwari :(shouts) Bas karo dono
They both stop hearing Ishwari’s voice
DevAkshi : Ma!!

Ishwari : Haan ma kya kar rahe ho. Tum dono kar kya rahe ho haan
Sona : Ma inhone start kiya
Dev : Meine ne start kiya how dare u lie
Sona : Lying and me?? Ugh!! Idiot
Dev : If I’m an idiot ur a fool
Ishwari : (Shouts) Chup!!!! Jabse yahan aayi hoon tum dono lade ja rahe ho
DevAkshi : Sorry ma

Ishwari : Ok if ever again u both fight like this then u’ll be thrown out of the house

Everyday went like that they both would have war’s everyday which would be stopped by Ishwari. 3 months passed by their war’s decreased and they both developed soft corners for each other and Dev started liking Sona. 3 more months passed Dev started loving Sona but he was scared to propose her because of their silly wars. Next day Sona came with Ayan

Sona : Dev after our divorce I’ll marry Ayan my college best friend

Dev was shattered hearing that all his hopes broke down he didn’t know what to do except for putting on a fake smile on his face
Dev : Hmm…..ok congrats

Dev was broken from inside, he couldn’t bear his Sona belonging to someone else so he went to a pub

Third person’s POV ends

Dev’s POV

I reached a pub I was drinking this was for the first time I ever drank I was highly intoxicated after sometime my vision went black I might have passed out. When my eyes opened I was on my bed I don’t know how I reached there. I looked around and saw a note — MR. DIXIT U OWE ME AN EXPLANATION FOR YESTERDAYS ACTION COME TO THE PARK AT 1 O CLOCK ~ SONAKSHI — Oh so that means Sonakshi helped me but how did she come to know.

At 1 I went to the park I saw Sonakshi and Ayan standing there she started firing questions on the spot
Sona : Dev what did u do and importantly y did u do it. Thanks god Ayan saw u in that pub or I wouldn’t even know about ur state
Ayan : Ya and u were murmuring something also like ‘Don’t leave me’ and something. Anything the matter
Dev : No nothing

Sona : Then y did u drink. U wanted to see how alcohol tastes haan
She said sarcastically
Dev : No I said nothing happened

I said and left from there with Sonakshi following me
Sona : Dev I want a answer for ur actions

Dev : I don’t have a answer
Sona : Just say it,
Dev : What
Sona : That u love me

I was shocked hearing that how does she know about it as far as I remember I never told her this. I don’t know what to tell her

Dev : No there’s no such thing and if there was I would have told u
Sona : Oh is that so then what’s this

She took my wallet and took out her picture under that I wrote that I love her and she’s my life

Sona : I guess this picture has wings that it automatically entered ur wallet na

I had nothing to say

Sona : Say it Dev

I finally composed myself to say it what I’ve been longing to tell those 3 magical words

Dev : I……I LOVE U
Sona : But I don’t
Dev : Means everything was waste
Sona : Wait….I meant I’ll only say yes if u propose me in such a way that I won’t be able to reject

I just smiled and bent down in front of her with 2 gifts

Dev : SONA, YOU ARE MY LIFE. I DIDN’T KNOW, HOW, WHEN, AND WHY I HAD FALLEN FOR YOU. BUT TRUTH IS THAT, I’M HEAD OVER HEELS IN LOVE WITH YOU. THE NEXT GIRL, FOR WHOM I’LL BE BENDING ON MY KNEES, WOULD BE OUR DAUGHTER, AND THAT TOO FOR TYING HER SHOE LACES. SO WILL YOU BE THE PRINCESS IN THE CASTLE OF MY HEART? WILL YOU MARRY ME?(chill this is not my Idea I read it in some OS). I have 2 gifts for u
Sona : 2?
Dev : Yes this is our divorce papers if ur answer is a no and this is a ring my gift if u say yes. So now u chose what u want
Sona : Obviously the ring because I LOVE U TOO Dev.

Saying this she hugged me tightly but before I could reciprocate she left me

Sona : But if u want I can take these also not a problem
Dev : Bhadh mein jaye yeh papers

I said and tore of the divorce papers while she was laughing. I pulled her towards me in a bone crushing hug and kissed her on her forehead.

After 1 year we were blessed with a small cute girl we named her Amaya we loved her a lot. She made our family complete

THE END

Hope it was good and sorry if it was bad and boring

38 Comments
  1. Erina

    Awsum OS dear nd that best proposal I read on instagram yesterday nd I just love this nd for me its bsy proposal ever ……

    1. Rj12

      Thanks erina

  2. Awesome

    1. Rj12

      Thanks princess

  3. Asmita...

    whenever I read loved these lines, automatically a broad smile comes on my face –

    “THE NEXT GIRL, FOR WHOM I’LL BE BENDING ON MY KNEES, WOULD BE OUR DAUGHTER, AND THAT TOO FOR TYING HER SHOE LACES.”

    1. Rj12

      Thanks asmita

  4. Awesome os dear

  5. Dear please post my secret admire episodes soon

    1. Rj12

      Thank princess
      I’ll post the next epi soon

  6. Priya12

    Awesomeeee os rithika dr, and the two gifts divorce paper and ring was superb dr……and pls post the my secret admire ff fastly dr ….I am eagerly waiting for the epi……

    1. Rj12

      Thanks priya
      I’ll post the next episode soon

  7. Too good dear.. Love to read ff

    1. Rj12

      thanks richa

  8. When will you post next episode of my secret admirer.. Please post soon. I am eagerly waiting

    1. Rj12

      I’m just typing it I’ll post soon

  9. Aarti32

    Waise to pura os hi best tha..but d bestest part was “THE NEXT GIRL, FOR WHOM I’LL BE BENDING ON MY KNEES, WOULD BE OUR DAUGHTER, AND THAT TOO FOR TYING HER SHOE LACES” luvd dis part d most

    1. Rj12

      thanks aaru

  10. I have read this proposal in twinj ff….and I loved that…. But it looks more beautiful in devAkshi….. OS was fantastic…. I loved it…. It was seriously amazing….
    Great job… Will love to read more,
    ❤️❤️❤️

    1. Rj12

      thanks maleeha

  11. Bharti123456

    Wow😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
    Loved it 💘💘
    And please post my secret admire soon

    1. Rj12

      thanks bharti

  12. Manya

    Awesomeeeeeeeeee❤️😘😍💘❣❣😍😘❤️❤️😍💘❣💘😘💘❣❣😘💘❣❤️💘❤️😍❣😘❤️😍❣❣❤️💘❣😘❤️😘😘😍❣💘

    1. Rj12

      thanks ayushi

  13. SHAHEER

    This Os is just amazing….loved it from the core of my heart…amazing👌👌👌👌👌

    1. Rj12

      thanks shaheer

  14. Dr Bhal Thakkar

    Radha is a dead loss— she is vindictive,troublemaker,jealous of Sonakshi and creating poisonous. Mind to Ishwari.Because of her Neha is becoming jealous of Sonakshi and passing nett comments.Radha put SALT intentionally. And d roped Ladddoos. Deliberately as well.She has always a knife in Sonakshi though S. Is at no fault, a genuine ,honest person.Unfortunately I have got carried away though I realise it is only a FICTION.I wish Radha was thrown out.

  15. Awesome n so cute n their name n the pillow fight was superb

    1. Rj12

      thanks riddhi

  16. CuteVanshu

    Awesome os…

    1. Rj12

      thanks vanshu

  17. Anjali333

    So beautiful OS……really loved it.
    Please post more os

    1. Rj12

      thanks anjali
      If I get ideas I’ll sure post soon

  18. Niki645

    Amazing os!!!!!!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Niki

  19. Erika

    amazing ossss dear

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Erika

  20. AnShIta

    The OS was fabulous, di! And the line when Dev speaks of himself bending down to tie his daughter’s shoe laces literally touched my heart…
    Do come up with more OSs!

    1. Rj12

      Thanks Anshi

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