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I want u in my life (kaanchi os)

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Hey guys I’m back with another os. Thank u all for ur continous love and support. I had never expected that I will get this much love and support. Silent readers pls do give comments because it really means a lot to a writer. I was also a silent reader 2 months ago.

Pls do ignore grammatical mistakes.

Let’s start the story.

Station scene.
There is rush as always.
A boy was talking on phone, suddenly a girl came running nd due to collision the phone from boy’s hand and paper file from the girl falls. Due to misbalance they both fall down and now the girl was on the top of boy. and they both share an intense eyelock. The paper was falling on them like a movie scene was shooting. The boy was completely lost in the innocent face of the girl.๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
(Background music plays
Tujhko dekha to dil hua milkha
Bada tej bhaage re……..
Manma emotion jaage re. .
Manma emotion jaage re. ..)

G – hey mister what happened nd she waved her hands.
( He came out of his dreamland ).
G – leave me
B – oh sorry nd he left her.
A lady helped saanchi to get up.
Lady – r u both alright.
Both – yes.
G (While collecting her papers ) some people don’t have manners at all. They just stand anywhere nd start doing their works as if the place is owned by their dad. Nd see that don’t even bother to help.

B – O hello miss nakchadi the fault was urs. Why u came running. Infact see u broke my phone.
G – what u said me? ? Just tell again.๐Ÿ˜ 

B – miss nakchadi
G – Mr. Manerless

B – what u said. ๐Ÿ˜ 
G – mr. Manerless .

B – I hate u.
G – even I’m not dying to love u , I hate too.

And they both showed fingers to each other
Nd left the place in opposite direction.

( So the boy none other than our hero kabir nd the girl is our beloved saanchi. )

The scene shifts to train.
Kabir is standing on the trains gate. The train starts moving. As he was looking outside he saw saanchi running. She asked him to pull her (just imagine the scene same as kajol and srk )
He forwarded his hands nd pulled her up.
Due to this she landed on his chest ( like shraddha landed on tiger’s chest in baaghi ).

S – thank u Mr. Manerless.
K – O wow I helped u nd u r calling me Mr. manerless .
S – u r.
Saying this she headed towards her seat.

There was a family of 5 people present there. A child of 3 years, his mom , dad and grandparents.
Saanchi smiled seeing the child while adjusting her luggage. The child too smiled back.
Saanchi sat down to drink water as she was thristy. Kabir came and sat infront of her.
Saanchi coughed seeing him.

Grandma – what happened beta.
Saanchi (While cleaning her face)- nothing aunti Ji I’m ok. ( While kabir giggled).

In between their talks they came to know that the family was going to jaipur nd kaanchi were going to Delhi.

Kabir went to the upper berth while saanchi was playing with the child.

Kabir was mesmerised to see saanchi while she was playing with the kid.

Night time.
As it was difficult for the parents to sleep in the upper berth so kaanchi gave their seats to them. (Aakhir yhi to hota h ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ humare saath bhi)

They both were facing each other. Nd giving dead glares to each other.

Saanchi’s pov – kaise ghur ghur ke dekh rha h jaise aajtak koi sunder ladki nhi dekhi.

Kabir’s pov – kaise dekh rhi h mujhe jaise aajtak hot ladka nhi dekhi.

After that the lights were off nd all slept.

Next morning.

All woke up early but saanchi was sleeping peacefully.

Saanchi woke up nd as she was coming down her dress stucked into the seat. Saanchi was about to fall just then kabir catched her. (Same as when kabir catched her in record room in the show).Again they were lost in each others eyes.

Background song plays (khabar nahi from dostana )

Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi
Ooohhhh
Jab Se Aaya Hai Sanam
Mujhko Khud Ki Bhi Khabar Nahi
Khabar Nahi
Hoooohhh
Hosh Gul Sapno Ki Mein Bandhu Gull
Aankh Kab Khuli
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Hoo Hoo
Kis Taraf Hai Asmaan
Kis Taraf Zameen
Khabar Nahi Khabar Nahi

Mere Maula Maula Mere Maula
Maan Matwala Kyun Hua Hua Re
Maan Maula Maula Mere Maula
Mere Maula

They came back to their senses when the kid clapped.
Kid – ale wah mere hero untle ne meli pyaali si aunti to bacha liya ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Both were embarrassed after listening this.

Kabir made saanchi to stand while the elders laughed slightly.

Now the train reached Jaipur and the family was going just then kid holded saanchi’s nd kabir’s hand and said untle jab aunti mere liye mera chota sa baby layegi to aap mujhe bulaoge na.
Kaanchi were shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
Then his mother told him to shut up and apologised behalf of him.

Saanchi got teary after listening this .
Kabir noticed this ๐Ÿ˜ฎ

After the family went kaanchi were alone there.
Then they heard an announcement that the train will be 3 hours late due to crossing.

They both were busy in their own.
Now the Internet connection was also not there.
So finally saanchi broke the silence.
Listen may we be friends just forgetting what happened in the past.
K – I don’t want to talk to u.
S – ๐Ÿ˜ฏ๐Ÿ˜ฏ she started seeing outside the window.
K – btw why r u going to Delhi.
S – I think few minutes ago somebody told me that he don’t want to talk with me.
K – ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
S – actually from tommorow I’m joining kapoor industries as PA of company’s CEO.
K (was shocked ) – now don’t tell that u r saanchi mishra.
S – yes I’m but how do u know.
K – bcoz u r going to be my PA.
S – (shocked ๐Ÿ˜ฒ) I’m really sorry sir . I behaved very rudely with u. Hope u won’t mind whatever happened yesterday.

K – oh god, kaha fasha diya mujhe, ab ise mai kaise sambhalunga.
Kabir went away from there and called someone.
K – veer ye tune mere liye kaisi PA chuna h.
V – bhai bharosa rakh wo bohot talented ladki h. Tu bohot jldi samajh jaayega.

Kabir came back to his seat. While saanchi was busy playing candy crush.

Kabir (in mind ) – oh god she is not less than a child. How will I handle her.

Train reached delhi.
While departing kabir told to saanchi.
Tomorrow come early in office. There’s an important meeting. We need to discuss the things. While saanchi nodded.

Next day in office.
Kabir explained saanchi about the case.
After meeting kabir was impressed by saanchi due to her excellent performance.
Day by day she proved him wrong with her work.
In between these they became very close to each other Nd even they started feelings for each other.
They became very good friends.

One day saanchi didn’t came .
He was restless whole day . Infact he was dying to see her coz his day started and ended with her only.
So in the evening he decided to visit her.

Saanchi was alone in her house. When the doorbell rang. When she opened the door kabir was mesmerised to see her in hot pants and a sleeveless top.
S – are sir aap. Koi problem thi to mujhe call kar lete.
K – now it’s only kabir for u. It’s not my office.
S – ok kabir, ๐Ÿ˜Š come inside.
K – how r u.
S- m fyn.
………………………………………..
Their conversation goes on. Then kabir said it’s very late. Maa might be waiting for me.
And kabir went home.

Both were not able to sleep whole night thinking about each other.

Kabir’s room.
K – O god what’s happening with me. Why every time she comes in my mind. Why I feel restless when she’s not with me. Why I feel jealous when she talks with another guy.
A voice comes from his inner mind – u love her Mr. Kabir kapoor.
K – yes I love her, I love her. O yes kabir kapoor is in love.

Saanchi’s room
S – why everytime I feel strange when he is around me. Why I my heart beats fast when he sees me. Why I feel jealous when he talks with other girls.
A voice come from her inner mind – u love her miss saanchi mishra.

S – yes yes yes I love him…………..
But another moment she become sad no I can’t love him nd she starts crying.

K – tommorow after office i will propose her.

Next day in office.
K – saanchi do u have some work after office hours.
S – no sir. .
K – ok then be ready we have to go somewhere.
S – ok sir. ๐Ÿ˜ฏ
She left the place

Evening.
Kabir blindfolded her and took saanchi to a beautiful decorated hall which he specially booked for them.
When she opened her blindfold she found kabir on his knees.

K – I LOVE U saanchi. Will u marry me. Will u give me the chance to become ur life partner, will u accept to become Mrs. Saanchi kabir kapoor. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

S (excitedly ) – I LOVE U TOO kabir. I will marry u. I will give u the chance to become my life partner nd I will love to be called as Mrs. Saanchi kabir kapoor.

He removed the ring nd made her wear.
She hugged him very tightly.

Next moment only she became sad nd she pushed him.
K – what happened saanchi? ??
S – no kabir I can’t love u. ….I can’t marry u.
K – but why saanchi. ….u only told me that u love me nd now u r saying that u can’t love and marry me.
S – will u accept me after knowing my truth ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข
K – in any condition but pls first tell me what’s the matter.
S – i can never become mother. When I was 18 years old I met with an accident nd after my operation doctors told that I can never become mother.
Saying this she turned to leave but kabir held her hands and pulled her towards him.
She landed on his chest.
K – what do you think I won’t accept u just because u can’t become mother.
No saanchi u r wrong I want u in my life. .. not a baby producing machine. When u will be with me I will be more happy.
Saanchi got teary.
S – thank u kabir for accepting me after knowing my truth. I love u kabir.
K – but I love u more ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

Before saanchi could say anything he sealed her lips with his. Nd they both share a passionate kiss ๐Ÿ’.

THE END.

Guys how was it. I hope aaplog ko pasand aaya. Agar nhi mujhpar kuch v phek sakte h. ๐Ÿ‘ž๐Ÿ‘ž๐Ÿ…๐Ÿ… mai inka intejaar karungi. Or haan kuch logo ne mujhe ff start krne ko kaha tha par mai ek baat batana cahungi ki ff likhne ke liye dimaag naam ki chiz honi cahiye jo mere paas bilkul nhi h. Mujhe short stories bohot pasand h. So I will continue to write os , ts or , fs for u. Because ffs ke liye meri pyaari behene moonlight, abhilasha, khamoshi, niyaa,ashanita, trisha, riyarocks. ……h.
After this I will complete my fs “we were meant to meet like this ” nd then I will think about another os nd fs. If in future mere chote se bheje me koi idea aayega to mai zaroor ff suru karungi but abhi aapko mere short stories se hi kaam chalana padega ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚.
Bohot ho gya mera bakbak. ..I know aaplog ko bak bak pasand h par aaj ke liye itna kaafi h.

Keep laughing.๐Ÿ˜‚ coz laughter is the best medicine.
Bye
Take care.

34 Comments
  1. Aafiya

    Mind-blowing

  2. Veryyy nyc priyu…๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dearโ˜บโ˜บ

  3. Dhruti

    superb os and i love the way you describe the all scenes, dialogues, situations…………..and i’m follow you on instagram and i love all vm what you post today……………

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear. M glad u r supporting me โ˜บโ˜บ

  4. ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™ awesome dear

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear โ˜บโ˜บ

  5. Rajnandini

    Priyu dear it was a mindblowing os….loved it a lot…tumne toh concept aur soch hi badal diya!….the sentence u r not child producing machine touched my heart…..really very unique concept…and also a beautiful story….love u loads dear…

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u dear. M glad u liked it. But the credit goes to a writer coz I also read on another ff nd I was inspired by that nd I presented in my own way. Hats off to the writer of” u r not a baby producing machine “.

  6. Anonymousaa

    This was awesome. As u even mentioned some filmy scenes I felt like I was Watching a movie.
    Suppppperb!!! Luv uh a lot!

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear M glad u liked my way of presentation. โ˜บโ˜บluv u too

  7. Riyarocks

    Priyu…..yaar….main tere kaan kheenchne waali hoon…..poochogi nahi kyun……tu hum logon se itne achhi writer se kyun nahi milwaya tha…….not fair……..tujhe toh bohut pehle hi likhna shuru kardena tha……..main toh ab tere paas jaane waali hoon tumse writings ke tips lene ke liye……..teri har ek story seedhe dil ko chhu lene waali hoti hai…….& iss baar bhi, waise hi hua…..kanchi tashanbaazi…….osm……love tak ka safar…..too good…….love confession…..splendid…….emotional touch in the end…..mind blowing…… in short…..this was a complete entertainment package…… & mujhe yakeen hai tumpar ki tum agar ff bhi likhogi, woh bhi khidkitod hogi, tumhare os ki tarah…….oho….tumhare dimaag ko bohut paka dia na….ab ke liye itna hi…….ek badi si jaadu ki jhappi for u…….luv u dherrrrrr saara……

    1. Priyanshipp

      Hahaha thank u so so so much dear. Mai abhi itni bhi achi writer nhi hoon dear ki tumlog ko tips doo.
      Or haan tumne mera dimaag nhi pakaya kyuki wo to mere pass h hi nhi.hahaha ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚
      Tujhe bhi badi si jadu ki jhappi.
      Luv u loads.

  8. Niyaaa

    Hey priyanshi superb yaar nd ye tum kya kah rahi hi tumhe dimag nahi h seriously to ye fadoo ideas kahan se aate h mujhe bhi batao m bhi lekar aa jau..hehehe.. Aisa majak mat kiya karo.. U r too brilliant nd jab tum ye scene describe kar rahi thi sath sath movie k naam like ddlj maja aa gaya.. Mujhe lagaa sach me movie dekh rahi hun.. Nd train scene padhte waqt ek baar to laga ab son of sardaar ka scene aayega ohh per aisa nahi hua.. Koi nahi per jo tumne kiya wo usse bhi achcha laga.. Hey someday ago i read a os on swasan blushingbeauty coincidently waise main kabhi kisi or page per nahi jati per mujhe ye title achcha laga usme bhi baby producing machine ke uper related …. Achcha laga…. Mujhe khushi hui aise topic pe hamare kanchi ke uper kisi ne os likha i m proud of u nd ur view.. nd u may be surprised my new Fs i have same ideas but wahan sanchi ko koi aisi problem nahi h per uski soch aisi h jo duniya ko dikhana chahti h.. M jaldi usse post karungi per diwali k baad.. I hope wo bhi tumhe pasand aaye.. Lovv u sisy aise hi derr sare khubsurat se os fs post karti raho or hamare chehre per smile late raho.. Bye tc gud ni8 ab aaj k liye meri bakbak ka quota bhi khatam hota h…gud ni8

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so so so so so much dear. M glad u liked it. Or haan maine bhi blushing beauty padha tha. Baby producing machine wala concept whi se liya or apne tareeke se present kiya. Jb maine wo padha tha to wo mere dil ko chu gya tha. Us waqt mai sirf reader thi. Par ab jab writer ban gyi hoon to yaad aaya or phir maine isi concept pe ye story bana daala.

      Luv u loads dear nd take care.

  9. RuCh23

    Awesome one Priyu ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ loved it

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank you so much dearโ˜บโ˜บ

  10. So so beautiful and sweet story…..

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thanks dear. โ˜บโ˜บ

  11. So amazing and so awesome

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear โ˜บโ˜บ

  12. Khamoshi

    Priyanshi dear..u agn nailed it yaar..what a story.. lots of love to u..and want ff from u yaar..don’t be too lazzy ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜›

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear. I told na jaise hi idea aayega soon I will start because at present show me jo chal rha h mai usi se pareshan ho gyi hoon. Kuch nhi sujh rha h.๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข. But sure I will come back. Or mere paas abhi ideas ki shortage h. Love you so much. ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ take care of ur heart because not only kabir we too will suffer heart break ๐Ÿ’” ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”.

  13. Priyu….u again nailed it sweetie…..well described everything……especially emotions….love this & u to bhot saara ……a big hug for my lil sis …..post next one soon.

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear. ….I’m very happy that you liked my way of presenting the story. Love you tooooo๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™. Nd a big hug to u toooo

  14. Amazing Superbbbbb fantastic mind blowing .

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear โ˜บ,

  15. It’s amazing dear please update soon

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear. โ˜บโ˜บ

  16. Jessicca

    Woowwww it was superb… So amazing… Fantastic… Outstanding

    1. Priyanshipp

      Thank u so much dear โ˜บโ˜บ

  17. Abhilasha

    Ye ki krtidda tussi ……sanu to taudde naal pyar ho gya hassi……tussi kamal kr ditta ….aur ae os to inna changa haga ki sadda dil bagh bagh ho gya ……..kanchi di ae story boht hi sunder hagi……kudio tenu dher sara pyar aur jadu ki jhappi!!

    1. Priyanshipp

      Mainu punjabi nhi aati ji, par tussi jo kehna cah rhe ho mai samajh gyi ji.โ˜บโ˜บThank u so much dear. ๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™๐Ÿ˜™

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