Waiting For You…… OS

Waiting For You…. DevAkshi OS

“Ma!!!! Please come fast na….” A boy shouted sitting in bed, staring at the door…. “Tujhe pata hai na….mujhe tere se kahani sune bina..neend nhi Ati….” He pouted with anger as soon as his mother entered….. The boy lie down….and his mother caressing his hair sitting on the chair..near the bed….

“Ik tujhe neend nhi Ati… Par u r grown up now… Aur mama ko bhi tou boht se kaam hota hain na..” She kissed the boys head…while the boy made faces at her explanation….

“Now, tell the story… I have to go school tomorrow…. Okay, Mrs. Sonakshi Dixit” the boy mocked….while Sona could only laugh at the boy’s antics…. “Gee gee, Mr. Dev Dixit….main story sunati hon… But listen to it quietly…and don’t interrupt…ok…promise…”

“Promise, but I want to listen a different story today…. Not the same one…” The boy whined

“No, I only know one story….so I’ll tell that one only” Sona straighten herself and wiped the tears that just escaped from her eyes…. “So, once upon a time….. There was a prince and there was a princess….. The prince and princess….dads were rivals in business….. U know that rivals…that could do anything to let down the other company… Their rivalry was heir from their ancestors…. But prince and princess fell in love with eo unfortunately…. In deep love….and their parents tried to separate them…but they fought….and ran off to another place….where they build an atmosphere of love…where they were only for eo….leaving that atmosphere of hatred….” And she sobbed….

“Ma…. I’ll always listen this….but today, I want a detail story…. The whole story….from start till the end…..” The boy was ordering more than pleading… “And tell me the…princess and prince real names….and whole story…. I’m not a kid anymore…” Hearing this Sona smiled in tears

“Acha…how old have u grown…if u r not a kid..?”

“I’m 10 years old…and it’s a big…u know” he bragged… And Sona laughed again…. “And also just..now u said…I’m grown up…. So please…. Mama please…” He said with pleading eyes

“Ohk….listen then… The prince name was Dev ….and princess name was sonakshi…”

“Wow…just like mine as urs….” He asked innocently

“U promised…u aren’t gonna interrupt…” She scolded

“Sorry…. ” He mumbled

“Dev was born to Ishwari and arjun Dixit…. He was the heir….the only heir of arjun’s enterprises….. While sonakshi was born to Asha And bejoy Bose family….she had a brother also… Ranveer…. They both were the heirs of Bose enterprises….. Both these companies were the leading companies in the country….and both were rivals of eo…. The rivals….I told above…. Letting down eo…. Defaming eo…using dirty Tatics…. Just to be no. 1
The greed to be no. 1 by both the business rivals ended up…destroying a lot of lives…. Sona, after completing her studies….just returned from US when she clashed with a man at airport…..engaged up in a fight…..”

“And the man might be Dev…. The hero…..Right…” Dev said and Sona gave a death glare…..and he understood to keep quiet

“Dev 1 (for ur easiness) just returned from UK….after completing his business course….to handle his dad business…… They both unmindfully clashed with eo… Creating a big scene at airport….. Many people gathered to see the show…. Media reporters were already there Bcoz they knew… Both rivals children are coming…so everthing was broadcasted…..

“HELLO!!!! Andhi Ho…. Dekh ke nhi chal sakti…” Dev almost shouted grabbing the attention of most of the people…

“U hello…mister…. App andhe Ho…. Tameez nhi hai Kya baat karne ki…. Aap dekh kar chal lete na…..” Sona replied back in almost equal pitch…

“U” he pointed finger

“U” yahan bhi aag barabar lagi hai…. She also pointed finger at him…. “Paise ka itna guroor hai na….toh apne aap tak rakho…. Baqi tum se darte nhi hain….. Naak oper kar ke chalne se….tum asmaan tak nhi poohanch ja gay….” She said with full anger

“Nhi darte…toh darna chahiye….. Aur tumhain Kya pata main kon hon….??” He said with a smirk

“Pata hai na…. Iss waqt tum…aik nahayat hi ghatiya…aur choti sooch ke maalik lag rahe Ho…. Money-minded…. Dosron ko… Haqeer samjhne wale…” She replied swiftly

“Aur pata hai tum iss waqt……. Bili lag rahi Ho….jou ghusse main hoti… Wild cat…. Chala sorry karo…aur Mera rasta saaf karo…. KAALI BILI” he smirked widely…..that touched his ears

“U know what…..I can’t stoop so low….till ur level to reward u with a nickname….nor I’m gonna say sorry…” And she left him moving ahead…..leaving their fight in between… Dev was in great anger…. He left the lobby and went to the parking area…where driver was waiting…..and both Sona and Dev moved to their respective homes….

They were warm welcomed by their family……. First of all… They came back after so many years….and secondly….Bcoz the fight was telecast…. Both the families were happy ke both have fought well….and none surrendered….

“Don’t tell me papa….. U r still with the same issue with arjun enterprises….” Sona yelled

“It’s ages….ur ancestors died….and u r still holding grudges…” Dev said to his father

Both Dev and Sona….left the house in anger and both ended up being in same cafe…..and started their fight again…. But Dev stopped and asked for friendship….

“Please…can we stop fighting…I’m in mood…. Moreover, when there are always our families fighting…. Someone should be there peace loving…. Stop this fight here…. And can we be friends….??? Best friends ” he said

“Yeah…. Even I’m fed up from these conflicts between the two…. From childhood…we have seen this much of hatred…between both the families….” She replied…. “Friends…ahhhh no… Best friends….” Both shook their hands….. And smiled widely”

“So, they were true friends…or just playing games with eo…” Dev asked…..

“This is the last time….u r speaking in between…next if I heard anything from u…. I’ll stop the story in the middle….. Ok” Sona scolded

“Ok…..sorry….” Dev mumbled innocently

“So, like this…their friendship blossomed….. They were true friends…. No one was playing any game with eo….. They both tried a lot to bring their families closer…. But both families….finished up fighting more and more….. Instead of their business grudges should…..personal grudges also found places in the hearts of their families…..
In trying to unite both families…. Both fell in love with eo….. And they confessed to eo….and were really….and they hid this truth from their families….. But one day…. Sona’s mother saw her Dev….and told this to Sona’s father…. And they both scolded Sona for this….. And gave her punishment of felling love with a wrong guy….. By snatching her phone…..and cutting all her ties with her friends….. Now, Sona was a prisoner in her own house…..

While Sona was going through all this…. Dev family decided to send back to UK…so that he may forget Sona…. He resisted but was helpless…. He tried to contact to Sona…..but her phone wasn’t with her….

He reached to there mansion and secretly…..entered Sona’s room….. And they both ran from their….to a new place….. They place where only…. They were…. An atmosphere full of love…care…peace….. Leaving that place of hatred….enmity…. They both got married…..and started living in Europe…. A place where millions and millions of people live…..so their families couldn’t find them….. They removed all the marks…. That could have led their families to them…. And both got married…..”

“So, a happy ending right….. Like always…..” Dev pouted…..and realized that her mom hasn’t finished….

“No, not a happy ending….. When Sona was three months pregnant….with Dev’s child…. Dev, unfortunately have to back to India…. Bcoz he was working under a company…. So his company was sending their delegates….to India…for a meeting….. Moreover….Dev’s father also died……. So he couldn’t stop himself….. After all, he was his only son….. When Sona got to knew about this…. She tried to stop him….but Dev pacified her…..

“Sona….. It’s just a business meeting….. I’ll be back…soon…. I promise and… I also need a promise from ur side…..”

“What…??.”

“That u will take care of the baby…..and urself… Properly….”

“Ok…. I promise…. But Dev…”

“No Sona…. U know…. Baba also died…. I can’t be away from my mom at this moment…. Please…”

And soon Dev flew off to India….”

And saying this story…. Sona remained quiet for a long time….and Dev was just staring at her…..

“Then…what happened mom….? Didn’t Dev returned?”

“When Dev was returning to Europe…. His plane was hijacked….. Many employees from office were also there…. And till today…. Sona and their baby are waiting for….Dev’s return….” She wiped her tears….and bemusedly left the room…. Saying good night to Dev….Bcoz she wasn’t able to answer any more questions from Dev….

Sona’s POV……

“Dev….!!! When will u return….???” She screamed in her bathroom infront of the mirror….. “When…? Look ur Sona is 10 years old…. Where r u…?? Tumhain pata hai…tum duniya ke Sab she bure papa Ho… Tum Ne na… Bete ko aaj tak dekha hai… Na uss ki awaaz suni hai…. Tumhe to uss ki hasi… Uss ka pehli baar chalna…. Mama papa Bolne…. Kuch bhi nhi dekha…. Uss ko school nhi tum chor kar aate…. Aur na tum uss ke sath khelte Ho…. Parent teachers meeting….bhi attend nhi karte…..

Dev!!! tumhara beta….. Humara beta…. Humare pyar ki nishaani…. Roz apne papa ke baare main poochta hai…. Kya bataon…. Uss ka papa kahan hai…. Dev!!! Please wapis aajao….. Kya mere pyar aur Dua main itni taqat nhi hai…..jou tum abhi tak nhi aye??Dekho…. Iss mang main sindoor dekho” she pointed at herself in the mirror….

“11 saal say laga rahi…. Kyun ke mujhe umeed hai…apni mohabbat par….apni duaon par…ke tum wapis zaroor looto ge…. Tum ne Jane….se pehle wada kiya tha…. Tum nhi Phir sakhte apne waday se….. Dev!!! Please Ajao wapis…… Please” and she sat down on the floor crying…..

“Hijackers….!!!! Why don’t they think….. The people they r doing harm…may be only family earner… Or the only Son of his parents…. Unhain….iss baat ka ahsaas kyun nhi hota…. Ke unn ki iss aik harkat se….. Kitni zindagiyan tabah hoti hain….. Kitne phool murjha jate hain….. Kyun nhi woh sochte….. Kya unn ki… Ma behain nhi hain…. Kya unn ke bache nhi hain…..” She cried more loudly……

“Dev….!! Please aajao…..”

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Hi! Everyone…. I’m back…. My exams went really well…. Thank u for the wishes….and support till now….. Do Tell me…. How was the OS?? Last part likhte Howe….I was crying myself….. Ik it was a short one… But this was all I could write….after finishing with exams…. Sorry for any grammatical mistake….or error.

REGARDS,
Måłëêhã

20 comments

  1. AnShIta

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maleeha di!
    Firstly, glad to know that your exams went well!
    Secondly, this was one majestic piece of writing, I must say! Too nice! Truly, you’re back with a BANG!! The end, however, made me feel miserable, which proves that your work was really very strong indeed!
    I’m looking forward to the next one!
    Love ya!😘😘😘😘😘

  2. Manya

    |Registered Member

    Awesomeeee tha Di❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
    Happy to hear ki Apke Exams ache hue
    But plzzzz can u change the ending like plzzzz ek Choti si pyaari si humble si request hai 🙏🏻🙏🏻
    Plzzzzz Kardo
    And ha Meri wall Dekhi and plzz jo link Maine post kiya tha world of Jagga wala zarur dekhna plzzz😘😘😘
    I hope ki Apka result bhi rocking aaye
    Keep posting ❤️❤️
    Love love😍😍😍

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Hi! Ayu…… Thank u for ur lovely comment….. Aur ending ko Kya hai…. Har dafa happy ending toh nhi hoti na…..but ok I’ll write part 2 with happy ending….
      Thanks for the wishes..
      ❤❤❤

  3. Maria

    |Registered Member

    It was really very awesome and yes very sad! I really felt bad for Sona! And seriously these hijackers don’t think about the families. But seriously I loved this very m. I have a question for you, is dev alive?

    With Love💕

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Hi! Maria….. Thank u so much for loving it…… Yeah, these people has no hearts….. Well he didn’t returned so he’s dead…..but now he’s alive bcoz I’m gonna write the second part of OS…..😜
      Love,
      ❤❤❤

  4. Priya

    Hey yaar this is not fair.. please change the end. I can’t imagine sona in pain.. they are meant to be together.. please please change the end

  5. SHAHEER

    |Registered Member

    Maleeha di u left me speechless after this OS…I was literally crying after reading this…. It is really very very heart touching…

  6. Niki645

    |Registered Member

    Maleeha di, you always write amazingly well, and this OS brought tears to my eyes.
    It was such a heart-touching story, and the writer of such an awesome OS could only have been you.
    The end was really sad😘😘

    • Maleeha

      |Author

      Awwww…..that’s so sweet of u niki….Thank u for such a lovely comment 😘 and sorry for making u cry….actually I myself was in senti mood so wrote it….. And don’t be sad….. I’ll be writing second part soon…

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