“MY VILLAIN!!!” TwiNj Few-shots (shot 4)

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dedication: to all commenters , specially my raj that is affa and vaasu di that is twinjsidmin.

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In case if any one missed the previous part,

“MY VILLAIN!!!” TwiNj Few-shots (shot 3)

Disclaimer: this article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and if I do so I sincerely apologize. No proof reading.

Lets begin

She woke up to find herself in the room. She recognized it to be her villain’s room. Hw can she forgot the room which changed her life. Her life which once had been a beautiful dream had now turned to be a worst nightmare. She moved out of the bed, she was wearing his shirt which was hardly covering her milky mid thighs and was about to leave the room when she bumped into someone. That someone is her villain who had tightly held her waist to prevent her from falling.

#FEW HOURS BEFORE

He brought her home and lied her on his bed. He called the doctor and asked him to come as soon as possible. As the doctor arrived, he was directly sent to examine twinkle. After sometime doctor came outside and said, “Mr. Sarna there is nothing to worry, she is perfectly fine… It’s just because of stress and I guess she have passes through so many emotions. Please take care of her and she needs rest”. By saying this the doctor left. He asked the maid to change her dress. The maid asked the dress. As he was leaving alone in the whole mansion so he didn’t had any female dress. He gave her his shirt and the maid changed her dress. He slowly went towards her. She was still unconscious. He carefully took her right palm in his left hand. He looked at her. His eyes were filled with tears, yup he was teary eyed seeing her lying on the bed lifeless. His heart ached. He kissed her hand. And brought his lips near her forehead and planted a kiss there. He caressed her face and sat beside her. After some time the sleep took over him.

#PRESENT

He was lost in her those black orbs and so was she. Gaining his senses he cupped her face and started to ask, “how are you feeling now twinkle? Are u okay, you must take re- (rest)” she jerked him. He looked in her eyes which showed pain, hatred, anger, hurt, sadness. She yelled “why did you this kunj? What have I done to you, you asked me my body and I given to you. Then why did you do this”. He caught her shoulder and asked, “what did I do… I didn’t know what happened. Why are u accusing me”. “Oh really, Mr. Sarna… Ur too innocent… I m impressed” replied twinkle sarcastically. He said her not to joke and say what happened. She narrated the whole incident which took place yesterday and atlast said “now don’t say who did this, I very well know you” . He was shocked. He was really unaware of the incident that took place yesterday. He never ever thought of the happenings like this. He asked her to trust him but instead she yelled, ” and why did you changed my dress… how much will you fall… You don’t know how to respect a woman.. I guess ur parents didn’t teach you anything… Ah.. I know son of a rich brat is always damag- (damaged) ” she was about to complete but he caught her shoulder and pinned her to the wall. She looked into his eyes which were blood shot red and tears were about to make its way out. She noticed anger and some unknown pain in his eyes. He said painfully yet angrily “just stop it twinkle plz just stop it… I didn’t changed ur dress. I asked maid to do so… Nd You must be lucky that U had parents who have loved u, support u, but everyone is not so lucky. He have to search for food, work for his living and u don’t know how it is too live without parents. I got to know that my dad had left my mother for another woman. She was pregnant at that time. I was in her womb. She gave birth to me and left the world. I was then taken to an orphanage where we children were forced to work.” He removed his shirt and showed her the marks on his body. He continued “they used to torture us. After few years when I was 20 I escaped from there and established my business” when he ended his tears where flowing so as her. He left her and went to his room. She stood there shocked with tears flowing from her eyes. She was numb. She didn’t know that he had gone through so much. She went to his room and sneaked into the room through door. He was crying his heart out. She felt guilty. She went to him and kept her palm on his shoulder. He turned towards her. His eyes were red due to continuous crying. He hugged her tight, the force that was applied made her jerk and she landed up on his lap. He hugged her from her waist and she too hugged him back and caressed his hair. He was crying his heart out.
(A/N: remember twinkle is in his shirt And her legs were exposed. And kunj’s chest was bare and was only in his pants)

Screen freezes with twinkle on kunj’s lap and was hugging him.

To be continued…
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With love,
Urs Tamanna

22 comments

  1. Sameera

    Sameera

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    Wow tamanna amazing yaar ….
    Loved it to the core …
    πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–
    Bechara kunj well do cont soon ..
    Love u 😘😘😘

  2. Presha

    Presha

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    Hey tamanna awesome yaar
    Loved it
    ❀❀❀❀❀❀❀
    U nailed every emotion very well yaar
    Post soon

  3. Aanya_pandey

    Aanya_pandey

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    Tamanna dear!!! This ws an amazing n a much awaited update..
    Kunj😭😭 feeling bad for him.. as well as twinkle.. thinking that who did that checp trick wid twinkle..???

  4. Purvi128

    Purvi128

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    Hi shona …
    Kya bolun yrrr …. I am speechless …. don’t have words …


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    . Just one word Outstanding … their pain .. u showed perfectly … i was having tears in my eyes … post next soon .. and yaa i have replied to ur email .. do check it out ….
    Loads of love ..shona

  5. Priya23

    Omgg tammu …..
    Finally tumne post kardia …..
    i was waiting 4 it dude …..
    Oh god ….. I Love this epi soooo much
    yarr ….. This is just out standing and bit emotional romantic atmosphere to …..
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    U knw what day by day I have fallen in love with this ff very much ….. Just love it so much …..
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    Aww my poor kunj he is going so much through pain but m not wry kunj ka twinkle hena use apni pyar ke rangome rangne wali…he he… but I want kunj to avoid twinkle ….. This is gonna so much romantic. Oh god my gutter mind na…. leave it….he he….
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    And hum jante hai ki ek cmnt kimat isliye toh apki face pai smile dekhne ke liye hum cmnt karte hai Nakhre Queen …..he he …..
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    Well plzz plzz but soon ….. Now m eagerly waiting 4 ur next update …..
    Love you nakhre queen….he he..by..!!!

  6. Ramya

    Ramya

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    Awesome amazing episode tamanna
    Don’t say ir fs is bad it’s just amazing
    N feeling bad fr kunj
    Loads of love keep smiling

  7. SidMin23

    SidMin23

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    Poor kunj he has gone throw so much of pain and no one their too look for him and glade that he share with twinkle now at least she will try to understood him and I love each and every part of this scene and wish soon twinj united

  8. Chiku

    Chiku

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    Awwww!!!! That was lovely. Amazing
    Feeling bad for twinj. They both are suffering alot. ☹️☹️
    Post next soon

  9. Cp

    TwinjπŸ’œπŸ’œ I was waiting for it and it was amazing …words are less ykto appreciate youu,😘😍😍

  10. Shalini15

    Shalini15

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    Hawwww Tamanna this is not fair.. really very bad.. you don’t love me na?:( you didn’t told me that you’ve written a new fs even I asked you in private message then also you didn’t told me… gussa ho?.. well sorry for not commenting on previous parts actually bcz of busy schedule main new ff read nahi kar pa rahi hun.. wo toh abhi thoda sa free thi toh socha ise hi padh leti hun but I found it your n just now I read it in one go… sorry maaf kar do apni is jhalli behna ko..

    Well it was awesome amazing superb n mindblowing episode… n nice concept… you write it very well… feeling bad for kunj… loved when they hugged eo… too good epi n all parts… loved it to the core…. pls post next asap…

    Love you my bachaβ™₯β™₯keep smiling always

    Yours Neha di

  11. SidMinTwiNj

    SidMinTwiNj

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    Hey aishu
    Firstly sorry for commenting late was caught up with family functions… Secondly thank you so much for posting it especially for affu and me… Its just amazing… Love it… Feeling sad for Kunj bechara… Plz post next shot asap…

    Love you😘

  12. Kruti

    Kruti

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    Hey Tamanna
    Probably u dont know me coz I have never commented Infact i guess I have never read any of your arcticles….Actually Affa di tld me to read this

    Nd its just amazing…..I read all d parts they were awesome…..d story nd d way u have written is just too good
    Continue asap

  13. Affaa

    Affaa

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    Simran πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸŽ»πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’ Tujhe dekha toh janaa Sanam lallllalalala…… My love… Ur Raj is here… Ya Allah my simran… I’m speechless yaar… Seriously the way u write… Ur os outstanding… I don’t know how to appreciate u for this great work.. And romance ufff very hot πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ…. I’m just loving it… My love πŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’žkeep writing… My jaan Allah may bless u.. With lots of love Raj

  14. Baby

    Baby

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    ohhhhhh god tamanna☺
    soooooo cute n emotional till now
    srsly osm dear fabulous loved itβ™₯
    not at all bad dare u say like dat…….
    n uff…..this crush tu usse short mein hi khatam krde tammy bt plss khataam krde
    chahe tu three lines mein voh os khtam krde kisne kha voh boring ha my sweetheart
    its osm sis trust me☺
    i wont force u dear bt i luvd itβ™₯β™₯
    love u lods☺β™₯☺β™₯☺

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