“MY VILLAIN!!!” TwiNj Few-shots (shot 3)

Hi guys,
Hw are you? I hope all are fine. All the ff writers I m sorry for not commenting. I have still many pages to read. Actually net pack got emptied and my mom refused to recharge again but after so much request here I m.

But yaar I m really sad only 15 comments. U don’t know yaar hw I felt. I wrote last episode with difficulty bcuz I.m not used to such stuff but still I wrote. I also taught not continuing it but I did just for my dear readers. If u want me to continue then plz do comment plz. The future of this FS depends upon the comments.

In case if any one missed the previous shot,

Disclaimer: this story is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment. It’s just for entertainment purpose. If I do hurt anyone then I sincerely apologize. No proof reading. Ignore mistakes.

ek smile de zara, muskurah #good day biscuit title track

Lets begin,

Finally her husband arrived. He was cured. Cured from the money she got by sharing her body to him, the villain, which was still unknown to any of the family members including her husband. All were happy and to celebrate this they organised a party for Yuvraj. She was beautifully dressed in a peach coloured simple saree with the silver embroidery on the side which draped over her right shoulder. It was simple yet elegant making her look breathtaking beautiful. Being lost, her never touched husband started walking towards her. This reminded her of her villain. He came near her and was about to kiss her but she jerked him. All the memories of the dreadful night flashed in her mind. The tears started its way towards her cheeks. She ran to the bathroom, closed the door and cried her heart out. Her husband was startled by her act. He went downstairs wondering about the change in her. After some time of crying and composing she too went downstairs. Everyone were enjoying the party until they heard a voice. It stated them to look towards the large screen which was located at one corner of the hall. Being curious about what was in store for them, marched towards it. All were shocked to see the photographs of her and her villain in an intimate way. One was when he pulled her towards him and she landed on his bare chest. Other was taken when they were sleeping together. She was covered with blanket and his bare chest was visible. By seeing those, one can think that both had an intimate night. Her tears again started kissing her cheeks. Her husband looked at her in disbelief and said “what is this twinkle? I know u. Can’t do this. I know this may be modified. Plz don’t believe in all this guys. I know my twinkle can’t do this. Plz tell everyone that this is a lie. ” she couldn’t say anything and was numb. He caught her shoulders and shakes her. She was in her senses. He again asked her the same but the reply “no this pic aren’t modified. It’s true but…” she couldn’t say more as her husband slapped her. After so much drama she was thrown out of her house. Even her own mother disowned her. She walked at the footpath of the road all shattered. Her heart cried. She sits lifeless beneath a tree. That’s when a car arrives and stops a few centimeters in front of her.

There comes her villain who was responsible for her condition now. He came out of his car only to find her in the miserable condition with eye swollen and cheeks red due to crying. He felt his heart crying seeing her like that. He went to her and caught hold of her shoulder and whispered “Twinkle…”. She looked at him and anger, hurt & pain was clearly visible in her eyes. She jerked him and asked him not to touch her. He left her quickly being hurt. She was continuously shouting on him while crying. After some time her vision got blurred and she fainted. He patted her cheeks and asked her to wake up. He Carried her to his car and drove to his house.

To be continued…

Hw was it? I hope u like the track. Plz do comment.

Drop ur comments whether positive or negative. Suggestions are always welcomed. Any confusion? Do ask me. If any mistakes pls do ignore.

With love,
Urs Tamanna


  1. Asna


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    Wow amazing but y that villian did that is he love twinkle… n how can yuvi did that she has done this for only him n now he did this…

    • Twinjfan.tamanna

      hey Asna,
      thanks yaar for commenting and ur confusions will soon be solved. There is many shocking twists on the way but at the end its Twinj.

      with love,
      Urs Tamanna

  2. Purvi128


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    Hey Tamanna …. Meri shona ….. Dis was beyond my thinking … How can u write so well …. I was thinking ke itni din se comment kyun nhi ker rahi tu mere ff pe ….

    Now I knw the reason … Don’t be sad shonaa … Don’t worry .. I will wait for you … Will wait for your comments .. But plss tu sad mt ho … Tu sad hoti hai na to automatically me bhi hojati hun .. So plss sad mt hona again …. I love u soooooo much .. Itnaaaaaaaa saaaaaraaaaa … 😊😊😊

    Bht bol liya … Enough .. Pak gayi hogi tu bhi meri bak bak sun ke ….
    Well coming to the epi ….


    No words ….
    Because .. it was actually masterpiece … Loved it … Love ur writing style …. This Kunj na …. Literally A VILLAIN. ….
    He ruined her life …. How could he do that … Phir bhii … I m waiting for his change …. How will they both fall in love …. Post next soon …
    Sorry for itna long comment …Agr acha nhii laga

    • Twinjfan.tamanna

      hey jaan,
      teri itni sweet comment. Itne sweet comments degi na tho diabetics hoga. so sorry yaar for not commenting I’ll try as soon as possible to finish all the pages.

      ab sad nahi hongi balki teri is baath ne mera din kar diya (made my day) aur tere bak bak se mai kabi pak nahi sakthi kyunki I love it.

      thanks for the comment yaar. and don’t worry There is many shocking twists on the way but at the end its Twinj. and I love comments yaar… I love you so much.

      with love,
      Urs Tamanna

      • Purvi128


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        Hawww .. tujhe diabetes hogaye to mujhe bhi hojaye ga na ….

        Thank God tujhe Meri bak bak buri nhii lagti … I thought sb meri chapad chapad se pak jaaty hongay … Or Haan … Never ever say a Sorry Again …. Do u get that Ms.Tamanna … Friendship mein no sorry …. Okkkkkk????
        Waiting for next ….

  3. Sameera


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    Hey tamanna just amazing episode yaar hayeeee bechari twinki wow kunj feeling for her amesome 😘😘😘😘
    Do cont soon ..

  4. SidMin23


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    Awsome but how can uv did this to twinkle she did for him but I felt Iike that her villain start to love her well exited for read further

  5. Chiku


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    Hey babes
    Woaaah!! Its lovely. I loved it to the core 😘😘😻its just amazing. I am spell bound
    Dont dare to stop it. I wont talk to uπŸ€•πŸ€•
    Post next soon
    Love uπŸ’œπŸ’œ

  6. SidMin


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    Awesome I really love the track it’s interesting I am waiting for the next episode can’t wait for it
    Love you β€β€β€πŸ’•

  7. Priya23

    Wooaaahh tammu..hw’s the name batana jarur prevs epi mai naii bataya tune.. Ab teri tariff mai chalte hai..he he
    Tu itni acchi likhegi toh mai toh fan hoke tere upar ghumti rahungi yarr.. Hehe..
    U know mai teri ff ka be sabri se wait karti hu.. And tu hai nakhre dikhati hay ki tere itne acche ff write karna stop kardegi
    dont u dare nakhre queen.. Or wese v ab yeh mere fav ff banchuka hai so tu to yeh bilkul stop naii karsakti or sochna v maat warna anzam janti hai tu.. And plz sady sady maat hona bcoz of less cmnt..or tu writing stop naii karegi to cmnt increase hoga sacchi mucchi janu.. pinky promise ..hehe.. OK bhtt karli bakbak rukungi naii to tu bore ho jayegi ..hehe..
    Now the epi is too good.. Love it..
    But uv ne bhtttt bura kiya yarr hw can he slap twinki..but now m excited 4 the villain and his angel love story..
    Ab plzzz jaldhi se post karna..can’t waiting u no na..he he..
    Now keep smiling.. Love u soo much..!!
    My sweettyyy paiii.. Muaah..!!

    • Twinjfan.tamanna

      hey priya,
      the name is so cute yaar… srry wo busy thi.. tere yeh long comments ufff.. shukriya shukriya meri taarifien karne ke liye Nd ab stop nahi karungi… hehe… nakhre queen I love it… u made my day yaar matlab yeh boring ff tera fav… nd I don’t get bored with long comments bcuz I love them…

      with love,
      Urs Tamanna

  8. SidMinTwiNj


    |Registered Member

    Hey aishu
    Amazing epi… Felt very bad for Twinkle… Bechari… I’m glad that Kunj has some soft corner for her… Excited to know how will Twinkle and her villain love story will start… Try to post next asap…

    Love you😘

  9. Cp

    I got goosebumps while reading this.

    . you portrayed it so wellπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œpost the next part soonn

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