VIDHANI Three Shots : TRUE LOVE –DEFINE IT IF U CAN….[Part 2]

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VIDHANI Three Shots : TRUE LOVE –DEFINE IT IF U CAN….[Part 2] Hello, IKRS family, Sorry for updating this one so lateeee…I was busy with my work and was sucked with certain complications …..that’s why updates came so lateee…..Thank u guys for reading and commenting…. Links for previous part is here ….

Part 1

pls read both parts and kindly drop ur views….
Viplav’s view continues……

She stared me in confusion……I was looking @ her beautiful eyes only……”It will melt soon…..Have it…..” She nodded her head and starts eating kulfi…..While eating I find that she was enjoying that kulfi like a small kid only…..She finished it within fraction of seconds and stared me……” Do u want more ? “ She nodded her head with a sign of yes and raised two fingers 2 wards me. I understood that she wants 2 have two kulfis…I again bought two kulfis….To make my surprise she handover one 2 me and starts walking 2 wards the kulfi waala with the other one….She handover that 2 the kulfiwaala guy and said him…..” U are standing here so long…..Have this kulfi, u will feel better….” I find a kind of innocence in her eyes …..He said “ People will buy kulfis from me and will enjoy their taste…..I will sell these kulfis throughout day…..If my kulfis get damaged I will feel scared, I always keep them safely as I don’t want any regrets from people…..But today for the first time some one has realized my effort and has asked me 2 have my own kulfi….I will never forget this day….[he started crying] “Bhaiya…..pls have it…other wise it will melt, isn’t it ? “ With this statement she stared my eyes…..I simply smiled and said….”Lets go…..”

Our journey continued and she was still keeping silence only…..I thought 2 break the silence first….” Hi I am Viplav…And …..may I know what’s ur sweet name ?” “I am dhaani”…..she said it in a low voice only….I felt by asking her name I made her uncomfortable….But still I felt I have 2 talk with her more as I want she should reach safely….
Viplav : So dhaani…..where is ur home ?
Dhaani : I am staying in my maamaji’s home….
Viplav : Ok….I will drop u there……

Dhaani : No…I don’t want 2 go there….[she started crying] Viplav : Why ?
There was no answer for my question as she was leaning backwards the seat and was weeping in tears only…..Her eyes were closed and her tears were falling continuously and I felt probably I have did a wrong thing 2 her…..I was really in a dilemma for stopping her from crying…… I was not able 2 tell any thing because I got worried if I will ask something 2 her whether it will make her 2 cry more ? I searched for the tissues in my pant’s pockets , but it was not there….Without thinking much I moved near her and raised my hand and wipe out her tears….Suddenly she opened her eyes as she was able 2 feel my touch in her eyes even though her eyes were shut……She stared @ my eyes with surprise and I was finding hard 2 convey any thing 2 her……

Viplav : Wooh….wooh…..I forgot 2 bring tissues with me… that’s why I…..I…..
Dhaani : It’s alright……[she stared with wet eyes and smiled] Viplav : Ok….fine…..If u don’t have any objection…then U can come 2 my home….
Dhaani : [surprised] But…..aap…..aap…
Viplav : I am alone in my home……
Dhaani : I didn’t get u……

Viplav : I am an orphan…..
Dhaani : What !!! [shocked] Viplav : I don’t know why my parents left me…May be they don’t want 2 see my face….that’s why I was brought up in an orphanage….
Dhaani : I am sorry……..Life is quite strange ….
Viplav : Why ?

Dhaani : Life give me a lovely maa and separated my paapa when I was a kid…..For me maa was my whole world……I never felt the loss of my paapa as my maa stood as everything for me…..But seems my happiness was not tolerated by my life….That’s why it grabbed my maa from me……I lost her and that day I lost my happiness also…..
Viplav : U miss ur maa ?

Dhaani : Yeah…but she comes @ night as star in the sky.…..I will say hi 2 her…..she will smile and will bless me…….
I simply stared her eyes and give a hard smile….Dhaani was unable 2 accept this bitter truth from heart and I was able 2 find it in her eyes..……We remained silent for some time by staring each other’s eyes only…..Seems words were incapable of expressing our heart’s feelings……I continued with my driving and when the car reached my home I find that she was staring me with confused eyes only…..I felt some thing really has threatened her eyes and perhaps she don’t want 2 convey it 2 any one…..

Viplav : Don’t worry…..This is my home….U are safe here….
She stared me with teary eyes and I felt that her inner soul is much wounded and by bringing her 2 my home I did the right thing……I opened my house’s door and she placed her feet on my home….Her eyes went on the pics of wall…..
Viplav : That’s nothing…..I use 2 compose some songs and …..
Dhaani : Are u a singer ?

Viplav : Not exactly…..But I am a music composer….
Dhaani : I love music……She starts humming…….”Teri yaadein….mulakatein…..woh raatein aur baatein….teri….teri…. ”
I understood that she has forgotten the lyrics…..I continued it for her..
Viplav : “Teri saasein , wooh baahein…abbh mujhko yaad aaye….” This is my composition….
Dhaani : That means u are the famous music composer Viplav Tripathi who owns the music studio ‘Rhythm’……
Viplav : Yeah….

She placed her hand on her mouth with excitement…..I find some drops of tears in her eyes which was conveying her untold feelings of heart…..
Dhaani : Aapko pata hai….I am ur biggest fan….. I mean I use 2 hear ur songs through FM…..But I never seen ur face…..
Viplav : I always tries 2 hide myself from cameras and medias…….
Dhaani : Why ??

Viplav : They never fails 2 make any scandals…And I am just the composer only, actually credit goes 2 the singer who sings it with beautiful voice….Ultimately people remembers the voice of the singer only, they doesn’t took the pain to remember who has penned lyrics for it and who has organized those lyrics 2 make a song…….Isn’t it ?
Dhaani : May be…but when I heard ur composition, apart from the voice of the singer I really wonder how could it have been composed……The magical rhythm of music comes from the composer and singer will get it’s credit…..

I find a kind of uniqueness in her statement and I was unable 2 discover who is she….few hrs before she was weeping in tears and I witnessed a sort of fear in her eyes….But when I started telling abt music , I find her eyes were brightening like stars….I felt music is able 2 heal her pains……With this thought I just smiled @ her and picked my guitar…. I started playing it……She started nodding her head with that beat and I suddenly stopped it….
Dhaani : Pls….continue it….
Viplav : If u don’t mind will u pls sing that song…..
Dhaani : Me….

Viplav : The lyrics is kept on the table…..U can take that…..
She took the lyrics and stared my eyes in confusion…..I nodded my head with a +ve sign which made her 2 smile……I started playing guitar and she started singing my composition with that rhythm….”Teri yaadein, mulakaatein, wo raatein aur baatein
Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Tere bina mera jiya, sataayein kyun piya
Yaadon ne teri mujhpe, ye jaadu kiya re

Teri saansein, wo baahein, ab mujhko yaad aaye
Wo adaaon ki ghatayen, mere dil ko chhu jaayen….”
Pyari hai duniya saari, maine hai tujhpe waari
Dil mein, mere dil ne tujhse, yaari ki baazi hari” [love stories- serial]

PRECAP : RHYTHM OF LOVE BEGINS OR IT ENDS ??

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7 Comments
  1. woow kitna cute love story…reni…
    oh no our viplav is an orphan..and also dhaani…kk…so it is going to be interesting and different story…
    How sweet she is..when she gave a kulfi to that seller…obviously dhaani ko dhekhe kissikobhi patha chalega ki vo kitna achi hai…hey na…
    And dhaani ko music sunna aur gaana acha lagtha hai!!!Aur viplav bhi famous composor hai…it is really a coincidence…NICE…
    come soon without late…
    byee…
    keep writing…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thank u so much lalitha ……And dhaani’s heart is so pure which made me 2 write like that only…Am feeling glad that u liked it……dear……I will try 2 update…can’t guarantee abt posting soon, but haa..i will try…..bye….

  2. Sujie

    Reni…… you are awesome…..amazing.
    you know Dhaani and Viplav are always amazing… and this is something outstanding… 🙂 🙂
    Dhaani is soooooo cute….kulfi waale bhaiyaa ka kulfi dedi…and that whole scene with Viplav….hayeeeee….amazing it was……..
    and that entire part when Dhaani comes to know Viplav is music composer…..
    the entire part….with the Teri Yaadein ….its awesome 🙂

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks a lottt…sujieeee yaar…….and yeah dhaani is so gud from heart which made me 2 write like that only……..And am glad that u enjoyed vidhaani here….which means a lott dear….thanks a lott

      1. Sujie

        love you for this yaar…keep going 🙂

  3. Maha_Aijaz

    Reni this was too cute rey?? starting from that kulfi scene hayee dhaani has always been a gem for others and you again proved that in this part where she offered him a kulfi ❤
    Also loved viplav as music composer and you know what you made us realize that a part from singers the credit also goes to music composer and the one who penned out those lyrics ?? so it was just a fab one!
    Looking forward to know the hidden mysteries inside the story till then buhbye ?
    Loads of love ?

    1. Renimarenju

      Haai mahaa…..Thanks a lot for commenting and am feeling glad that u like vidhani …and kulfi scene ….yeah it just happened like that only….. And yeah..even some times i felt like one of my all time fav singer is shreya ghoshal…i just love her voice and i have a collection of her songs also…but some times i use 2 listen it more deeply because of its lyrics or feel and the way it has been come out as the song ….even we remember arjit singh, shreya ghoshal, shaan, sonu nigam singers and their songs more rather than lyricists and music composers….that’s why i wrote like that….thanks a lot for commenting…love u 2

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