ViDhani – HER ROSEY BLUSH TOOK AWAY MY SINKING HEART (Two Shots)

Hello friends, well i am piyali an old writer on this site but totally knew to ishq ka rang safed forum, could never watch the show owing to its timing though I loved the concept, today i am gonna write an Ts on ViDhani for my meghu dii (meghnashettigar) …..she is one of my oldest friends on this site and my lovely meghu dii, well di this is for you.

Ok , so really bad at speaking much so will start with my os, just wishing to give an introduction of dhani:

Meghu Di / Eisha singh as dhani: she is a sweet collage girl of twenty years who wishes to become a teacher, she loves to teach others and so is taking tuitions at home, she teaches all subjects but basically English and in that too writing, she is mad about writing and loves to write stories , poems, plays etc. She evens loves to draw specially sketches. She has an image of her dream boy in her mind whose image she has taken into one of her drawings , though she hasn’t seen him ever yet she loves him unconditionally and feels that some day , she’ll be able to meet him for sure…
Yup , so this is our dhani , the role is played by my meghu dii too as she loves mishal a lot…..sorry i mean like, so this is my gift to her.

Coming to the story, here we go:
Dhani was staring at the bundle of sheets of papers kept in front of her eyes, yet again he did that.
“ i hate you rahul…” she spoke up angrily.
“ then i hate you too sweetheart..” rahul who was sitting next to her responded with a smile on his face.
“ please , let me draw it , you know na i love drawing….” dhani said making a puppy face.
“ please , its my work and i won’t allow anyone else to do it , i love it na….” rahul said making the same cute face as that of dhani.
“ dii , dii , please do my drawing na….” priyal said coming from outside running up to her.
Dhani’s face glittered up and she had a smile worth millions , “ see rahul , how much she cares about me and you…” dhani said staring at rahul with her angry but still cute face.
“ di , whats my fault, i love to draw na…” rahul said with the same looks.
(yup guys rahul is a child(7-8 years) , don’t think anything else haan, specially you meghu di)
Dhani rotated her face with a “ you can never improve “ look and turned to take priyal’s notebook.
“ what is this priyal…????” dhani asked staring at priyal’s test notebook where priyal got a big zero.
“ dii, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee draw 7-8 stars , 1 ice cream and 1 smily” priyal said with a innocent look.
Dhani stared at her shocked at her words while rahul laughed.
“ today na priyal , i’ll not leave , you are way too naughty, first you don’t study for test and then …..” dhani said picking up the notebook and running behind priyal holding it.
Priyal laughed out and hid behind rahul “ rahul , save me….dii is going to beat me..” priyal said smiling.
Rahul shielded her from dhani and said “ dii ,take my drawing file , draw whatever but please don’t draw your sketches , specially of your mishal…”
Dhani laughed at his cuteness and said “ aww , so much care haan..”
Rahul almost blushed while priyal came out.
Dhani gave his file back and said “i’ll just come..”

She ran inside and went up to a sketch that was pasted on her cupboard door.
She caressed it and smiled, her smile increased as she saw her love in front of her eyes , “ i wish that whenever we meet, you love me the way , i do to you….and rahul does to priyal”
She thought this and smiled, her dream boy mishal , she never met him but named him mishal which meant governing , afteralll he was the one who governed her heart……
She bit her lower lip and thought something , her cheeks suddenly kissed pink like a spring rose, the blooming colour so cute against her freckled skin.
She ran outside with the smile and blush being carried out with her.
She was the only teacher living in the whole colony of houses and so most children came to her to take tuitions and also for their problems, her parents mostly remained out of station due to their jobs and wished her to come too but she never came with them as she loved the colony , moreover the loved the children whom she taught.
She came outside and saw children gathering in her class, rahul and priyal were the first one’s to come and when she went inside other children joined them.
They were busy with their books as she walked up to the window of her house which was on second floor.
She kept her arm on the window pane and stared outside , the beautiful weather outside filled her already smiling face with much more smiles.
She smiled as a drop of water fell directly over her head, she stared up and saw a huge cloud gather in the sky dropping water drop by drop.
As she stared at the sky admiring the beautiful clouds , she felt a pull at her dupaata.
Turning to her side , she saw another of her students , Priyam holding her dupatta pulling it to grab her attention.
“ dii , where do you get lost haan..??” he asked with his innocent anger.
“ i am here trying to ask you something from 2 hours…” he said completing the line.
Dhani stared at him and grasped his right ear , “ two hours….???” she asked angrily.
“ ok , sorry , 2 minutes…” priyam said as he realized that exaggerating in front of dhani was not at all possible.
“ now tell me, what happened…??” dhani asked leaving his ear and folding her arms around her chest.
“ di , i need to submit a story tomorrow….” he said as he stopped in the middle and lost himself in some thinking.
Dhani was about to respond when he said , “ no , no di , a poem….” dhani heard him yet again and was about to reply when, “ no , no dii a story only…..wait a minute….” he said keeping his little finger on his cheeks thinking deep.

“ priyam , think yaar, such a bad memory..” dhani said sitting next to him angrily as she now wanted to write something badly.
“ dii , i remembered , i needed to write a story but in the form of a poem….” he said with a winsome smile.
Dhani smiled and said , “ ok , so done, i am gonna help you……we’ll write some adventures story..”
Priyam nodded as dhani stared outside from the window , she kept her hand yet again on the window pane and stared at the now raining sky with her charming smile.
IN THE SKY I STARED AT RAIN..
FILLED WITH LOVE AND WISHING TO PLAY A GAME…
I RAISED MY ARM AND PASSED IT OUTSIDE THE WINDOW…(She held her arm outside the window)
RAIN DROPS FALLING ON MY HAND , YEH ITS BINGO!!!
I GOT IT , I GOT IT, I WILL PLAY….
(she paused )
“ WHAT DII…????” (All the children asked now gathering around her)
(she stared at them and rubbed her finger on one of them’s nose)
I WILL PLAY , RINGA RINGA ROSES
(She smiled and held their hands making a circle inside the house)
(“ ooooooOOOOOOOO” voice filled the room)
I HELD MY HANDS IN THE AIR ,
AND MYSTERY SURRONEDED ME FROM EVERYWHERE..
(She released their hands)
I WAS IN THE AIR SITTING ON A CHAIR …..
“ WHAT IS HAPPENING , WHAT IS HAPPENEING ???” I ASKED MYSELF CONFUSED
I WAS ABOVE THE CLOUDS….
(wwwwwwwooooooooWWWWWWWW)
(Dhani changed her expressions with each line )
I STARED HERE AND THERE AND WAS SCARED…
BUT SUDDENLY I BLINKED MY EYES , I WAS IN A PARADISE…
GREENERY FILLED THE PLACE , AND EVERYTHING SHINED LIKE A GLASE
I WAS STILL CONFUSED AND WANTED TO COME BACK IN MY ROOM…
“ YOU ARE MY PRINCESS “ I HEARD FROM BACKSIDE…
TURNING THERE I FOUND SOMEONE STARING AT ME WITHOUT BLIKING HIS EYES…
“ I GOT YOU HERE BECAUSE I LOVE YOU…” HE SAID COMING TOWARDS ME..
I STARED AT HIM AND AT THE UNICORM HE WAS SITTING ON…
WOW WHAT A MAGNIFICANT CREATURE IT WAS…
(OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHH)
HE CAME IN FRONT AND TO LIGHT
AND I SMILED BECAUSE IT WAS LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT…
(Dhani was smiling imagining herself and mishal)
HE HELD MY HAND AND TWIRLED ME TOWARDS HIS UNICORN AND THEN AT HIS BACK…
“ WILL YOU COME WITH ME TO ADVENTURES..??” HE ASKED ….
I SMILED AND SAT EXCITED TO SEE NEW- NEW CREATURES…
I BLINKED MY EYE AGAIN AND I WAS HANGING IN THE AIR…
(Ohh No , YOU’LL FALL DII)
NO , NO , NO , I WON’T FALL BECAUSE…
BECAUSE I AM WITH MY HEART AND SOUL….
I BLINKED MY EYES YET AGAIN AND SAW MYSELF SITTING NEAR A WATER FALL…
CHIRPING BIRDS FILLING THE ATMOSPHERE WITH THEIR BEAUTIFUL SONGS…
MY PRINCE WAS WITH HIS PRINCESS ….
AS IN ME………..
(Dhani paused, her eyes glittered with the thought of meeting her mishal , her governor)
“THEN WHAT DII , THEN WHAT DII” ALL ASKED TOGETHER…
(Dhani smiled and moved towards the door )
THEN…………..
(She opened the door and went outside to enjoy the rain , all children followed her)
(she raised her palm and took a lot many drops of rainfall in her hand)
(she sprinkled it on them and then…)
AND THEN I WOKE UP FROM MY DREAM.

She completed as she sprinkled the water on all of them turning to face them when someone stepped on her dupatta and she was about to fall when………………….
When two arms saved her……………she had closed her eyes out of the fear of falling and when she found herself to be safe , she opened them.
She stared at the face in front of her eyes, not blinking them for next 10 minutes….
The face she longed to see throughout her life was standing in front of her eyes today, she stared at it like her eyes were plastered on it , she couldn’t stop her cheeks from turning red , the water droplets falling on her face highlighted her red cheeks further.
The boy made her to stand , she suddenly blinked out of her thoughts as she saw his facial expressions changing , now his expressions were not of a stranger , rather they were of a known person , person whom she knew from years .
She overpowered her instincts to keep staring at him and turned her gaze to the children who were now enjoying the rain .
“ Go inside…” she told them as they all made a line a second and ran inside.
But someone was there standing behind her staring at the boy with utmost shock , yeh it was rahul.
“ Yeh too misha…………….(he is misha….)” he was about to speak while he couldn’t complete due to a hand on his mouth.
Dhani kept a hand on his mouth and passed a strange mile to the boy .
“ beta , my name is not misha , my name is viplav and why are you keeping hand on his mouth…??” viplav said staring at dhani who was out of words.
“ this boy , he speaks anything , seriously misha…i mean viplav ji , anything so needed to stop him…..” she said still with her strange looks.
“ is he your son….???”
“ do you feel him to be….???” dhani asked angry at his question.
She loosened her grip around rahul’s mouth and he was again about to say, “misha……….”
“ rahul , go inside….” she commanded as he anger boiled at viplav’s question.
“ ok beta , you go , and i was just joking….” viplav said making up for his funny mistake.
Dhani stared at him and nodded , she murmured to herself “ it is better if it is a joke only….”
“ what…????”
“ nothing , you are new here………….???”
“ yes , just came to live in the nearby colony…….”
“ should i help you………..????” dhani asked still angry but owing to his being new , it was her duty.
She thought he would refuse but…..
“ ok , you can take this bag , i’ll take that one……..my parents are coming……” viplav said handling her the heavier bag and taking the lighter one.
Dhani stared at him , her facial colours changed while he started moving taking those bags….

36 comments

  1. Meghs

    |Registered Member

    Omg omg someone pls pinch me…. kiddo i thought u just writing os but this much me n eisha wow 😍 n mishal as my dream boy 😍😍 he indeed my dream boy… u know i want to be teacher and tuition to kids all ok

    • Meghs

      |Registered Member

      My dream of becombecoming teacher atleast fulfilled here by u… but sketch seriously i not artist. … this is such a wonderful gift… worlds best gift ….
      I am blushing now imaging all scenes my stomach has goosebumps too…. incredibly yaar… now u agree or not ur awesome writer have good writing skill not me ..

      Seriously i love this alot😍😍 but lst joke of vip was not ok😕

      Love u yaar . Thank u so much for this wonderful gift

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks alot lot dii…..my purpose for writing this is fulfilled……..i just wished to make you smile and you found it to be world’s best gift………??? thats soooooooo sweet dii……..i am soooooooooooo happy that you liked this gift of mine..you know dii i have got comments like i am smiling reading this , i am crying reading this but first time ever i got a comment that i am blushing reading this…………i am sooooooooooooooo happy………………and you didn ‘t like viplav jiju’s’s last joke na then to i’ll make him crack more such jokes………………..just kidding di…it was just for fun…………..and dii you are an amazing writer and i don’t need any conflict at this………ok……….if i knew that firstly you were afraid of boys…i would have added that too but that in next story….thanks a lot again dii……..i love you…..be happy………………..

      • Meghs

        |Registered Member

        My sweet kiddo😊😊 don’t add that type scene i scared of boys.. i now changed yaar…

        Love u too dear .. be happy smile like this

    • Piyali

      |Author

      ok di..well i was talking about the story like you afraid of boys and then you change , like you real life story but leave it…will write something like you fight bravely with boys………pakka promise………

  2. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Piyali…….welcome to the world of ffs…….
    Your gift to Meghs…… Lovely…….😀😀😍😍😍

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey dear………..actually i am in this world of ffs from more than a year now but yup i accept your welcome to ikrs forum…………………….beautiful dii of vidhani……………….you liked it………..am really happy…..thanks a lot dear………….love you………be happy…………..

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hi dear……………..thanks a lot dear….happy you are liking it……started working on it…………..will post it once its complete………thanks a lot again dear……..love you………..be happy…………

  3. Renuverma

    |Registered Member

    Its lovely piyali. N it becomes more special when u dedicate yr works to someone special.
    Awesome. Liked the nice concept. Liked dhani ch8lling out in rain with children. Lovely. The best part is the poem m have u written on yr own. Iam sorry obviously it wud be yr creation only but i found it too good.👌👍👍👍👍

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey renuverma………..thanks a lot dear…………yup this one is really very very special for me because of my meghu dii………..happy you are liking this concept of mine.you liked the poem……actually yeh its my own creation but yet i don’t know i couldn’t actually write what i actually wished to………being serious i thought nobody would like it but happy you did……………..and your question was actually an honor to me………..thanks a lot again………..love you………be happy…………

      • Renuverma

        |Registered Member

        Hi piyali thks for acknowledging. U have really written a nice poem. Just get it published. 😊

        Also one more thing if u dont mind r u bengali. I assume piyali banerjee 😊😋 font curse me. I sm just guessing. Its renu..

    • Piyali

      |Author

      bengali………no no dear , piyali is my pen name…..basically i derived it from pyaar ki yeh ek kahani’s main lead piya on whom i wrote my second ff so…………….i am from punjab side……….get it published…….???????????? dear thats really an honor……..thanks a lot again……….

      • Renuverma

        |Registered Member

        Punjabi changa ji te dasso riyaish. Amritsar : bhatinda; ferozpur; jalandhar:malerkotla; batala; moga;patiala:abohar; fazilka;ludhiana. …
        😊😋😊😋😋

    • Piyali

      |Author

      chandigarh……….i am from chandigarh….acha ine changi punjabi…………app bhi punjab se ho kya……….i don’t know much punjabi , even if i do , i am not able to speak so please adjust with my hindi cum punjabi…….

    • Piyali

      |Author

      oh , so we are neighbors i guess…infact chandigarh is a part of haryana too ………oh then thats good……..i am sure your punjabi would be much better than my tuti phuti punjabi……..and yes i am a 9th class student………..what about you………..???

    • Piyali

      |Author

      oh , you are really very very elder to me so i’ll call you dii from now onwards……renu dii……..will it work….??? secondly a co-incidence , i also want to become an engineer…….

      • Renuverma

        |Registered Member

        Great dear i am a textile engineer. N my son is doing in electronic n telecommunications.
        My hubby is Btech n Mtech in computers from IIT😊GOD BLESS YOU DEAR.

  4. Maria

    |Registered Member

    Wow Piyali di such a nice gift for megha di!👍 loved this one❤ I was imagining myself😜 post the next part soon!

    • Piyali

      |Author

      Marie dii , actually you are elder than me….just checked you profile so got to know……………so i should call you dii na………….you are also my di just like my meghu dii………….i am sooooooooooooo happy that you liked it and the best part is that you imagined yourself………….i could make you imagine yourself…..thats a great honor to me………………..i am working on next only…….will post soon……thanks again dii………..from now in next part too imagine yourself only…………love you……….be happy……….

  5. Shruthy

    |Registered Member

    Piyali it was really fantastic. Such a brilliant writing and what a beautiful imagination. We might thank Meghs for making you write one story for IKRS fans. So THANK YOU MEGHS!
    Talking about the first part, it looks lovely. I am quite excited to know what will happen next. Finally Dhaani met her dream boy, and that as her new neighbour. What a destiny! And Rahul was so cute, calling him Mishal though she shuts his little mouth.
    Anyways, we all are waiting for the next part! <3 Hopefully it will come soon.
    Have a great evening.

    • Piyali

      |Author

      hey shruthi ……….first of all a bada wala thank you for such a beautiful comment and yup dear no need to thank me……writing is my passion and i love to do it……and that too for my meghu dii…..i enjoyed it a lot……….so i should thank you for supporting me in my passion , why are you thanking me…………..and i am really very very happy that you are liking this ts……will try to update soon……………i have started working on it………………….well destiny always helps lovers………………….i also want to thank meghu dii….afterall she made me to meet all of you….you all are really very sweet…..thanks a lot again dear……love you…………be happy………..

      • Shruthy

        |Registered Member

        Aww there is no need to thank me for that dera, it’s my pleasure. And my thanks are some of a reader to his storywriter. That’s all. You deserve them, I expressed them. 😀 Aww that’s so cute. I can understand you like her a lot. God bless you <3
        And haan thanks for your amazing pen. You have such a wonderful style that blowed me away. Oh that's cool. Happy to hear that. Will be waiting for sure but take all your time 🙂 Woh toh hai! Especially, when fans write that destiny, then it's even better :p
        Aww we are also glad to meet you Piyali 🙂 Thanks *blushes* Lots of love to you too

    • Piyali

      |Author

      thanks a lot for understanding but promise i will try to update soon and will put in my full efforts to make it good……..thats my promise……………….really that is actually a big compliment…………i am really happy that you are liking my story,………….

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