ViDhani – HER ROSEY BLUSH TOOK AWAY MY SINKING HEART (Few Shots) 6

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Shot 6:

“ By the way , you are able to handle “MS.” Viplav….” Rohan asked Raisha with a cruel smile.
“ Vipu……………………Off course , I am gonna win the bet for sure, the bet was of 7 days………………2 days left……..I will handle him for two more days…….” Raisha laughed as she said this.
: You are able to handle that mumma’s boy…???”
“ Quite difficult………………..but I will do that , don’t worry……..” She said as she moved from there.
2 days passed , Dhani was continuously trying to be away from Viplav and avoid him so that she doesn’t get lost into him and his thoughts again , she had already decided that Viplav didn’t belonged to her , he didn’t. On the other hand , Raisha was playing her own bet trying to behave those Girlfriend-boyfriend way with Viplav , Viplav was lost in his own self as usual forgetting that he had a friend named Dhani who became his friend 3 days ago.

After 2 days:
In collage :
As usual Dhani came to collage in an auto , she was wearing a Baby pink coloured suit and looking lovely as usual.
“ Dekho bhagwanji , please , Don’t bring me face to face with Viplav again today yesterday I avoided a conversation but I can’t handle me when I am in front of him so please try to understand , don’t bring me in front of him, Ok…..” She prayed looking towards the sky as she was standing at the gate. She remembered yesterday’s incident :
She was walking in the corridor when Viplav suddenly sprang in front of her.
“ Dhani , hello…..” Viplav said to her with a cute smile.
Dhani kept staring at him for quite sometime when a wave of hand in front of her eyes brought her out of her trance.
“ What , Vipu said hello…..reply ….??” Ms. Raisha told Dhani looking towards her with a smile.
Dhani looked towards Raisha with some anger boiling in her eyes , “ I have to go to my class….” Dhani says looking towards Viplav .
She moves from there.
“ What , your friends……” She hears Raisha complaint to Viplav as she goes.

Present:
Dhani hears the bell and runs inside towards her class when suddenly she hears some sounds of laughing from the garden , while running her eyes automatically turns towards the garden where she sees a huge crowd of children standing making a circle.
“ What is happening there?” She thinks as she looks towards the children , she sees her friend Simran coming back from the collage building and going towards the crowd.
She stops Simran , “ What is happening there?” Dhani asks concerned.
“ Oh God , You don’t know Dhani , it seems like Majnu scene , come with me…..” Simran holds Dhani’s shoulder and drags her with herself while Dhani moves with her confused.
“ Oh –Ho ,let us also enter…….” Simran tries to cross the crowd with Dhani to get a better view of the scenario.
As they pass the crowd and reach the front row of children standing Simran stops , Dhani who wasn’t interested beats Simran a bit of her elbow and says , “ I am not interested in these Majnu dramas , I am going for class…..” She tries to walk off from there but as she tries to go , she gets pushed away by the crowd towards the centre where a girl and a boy are already present.
Dhani falls on the ground as everyone looks towards her , “ What the……” Dhani angrily grits her teeth as she tries to get up.

Her eyes suddenly fell on the girl standing there, “ Ra………..Ra………Raisha…………..” Dhani looks towards the girl shocked confused , her heart had a sudden feeling of tension rise as she looks towards the back of the boy sitting on his knees in front of Raisha.
She felt like her throat was being suffocated , “ Vi……..Vipp………………..Viplav……..” She says as she touches his shoulder , the boy turns.
His face was full with tears , his puffy eyes while he seemed to be completely broken. Dhani’s heart broke into pieces the very moment she saw him , “ Viplav………” She said holding his face.
“ Dhani…………..” Viplav huges her tightly as Dhani is shocked at his hug.
She doesn’t know what to feel , Happy , sad , confused , free…… His hug made her forget the world but his tears made her remember the world back only to punish the one who hurt him. He was special for her , very special , she loved him like a mad , she didn’t want him, she just wanted his happiness that is what made her Love special . She wanted to loose in this moment only to come back to fall for him again…………and then again.
“Love is meeting someone that makes you more you.” The touch of love was always with her but today his tears made her feel more of the feeling she was already possessing.
Her eyes fell on the one who was responsible for the tears in her love’s eyes…………..Raisha , she was standing in front with a wicket smile on her lips , Dhani looked towards her as she closed her eyes , only to let a tear escape her own eyelid.

She got free from the hug as she looked at Viplav , got up from the ground and went straight next to Raisha , giving a tight slap on her face. The slap was as loud as a clap and stung her face. It had been an open-handed smack and it had left a red welt behind. Raisha looked at Dhani as her eyes became watery.
Dhani had fire in her eyes ready to burn anyone who hurts her Viplav.

11 comments

  1. Mahaaijaz

    |Registered Member

    Good one Piyali! It was damn good 😍😍 though was feeling hurt to see viplav in that condition but it’s essential to bring true face of that cheapo raisha who is no less than kamini 😐 that slap my God, that was brilliant, a slap like a clap😂😂 she is worthy of getting a tight one!
    Good job my dear!
    And no thanks as you deserve all these praisings plus there shouldn’t be sorry too as I can understand you were busy so post whenever you feel convinenient as I’m always here to wait for the beautiful fictions on ViDha 😍😍
    Take care!

    • Piyali

      |Author

      Oh, I am really sorry for this condition of Viplav , yup , she is no less than Kamini and no I always imagine Kamini in this FF as Raisha , even you can try (Though I used to love the girl playing Kamini from her previous show) A slap like a Clap….aww……haha…..yup she is worthy of it………..thanks a lot dear but still approx 1 month and 20 days , its too much na…….I will try to post the next one soon as its gonna be the last one…….thanks a lot again for such beautiful comment………..Love you……….be happy………

  2. Lalitha

    wow piyali! What a slap that is called love… I love this ff alot.. And ha i am new in ikrs family… Thanks for giving ur precious update… 🙂

    • Piyali

      |Author

      Hello dear , yup , slap was indeed needed , thanks alot dear for supporting me even after so many days , hey welcome to the family , Happy to see ViDhani fans even after the show ended ,did you meet my Meghu dii?? This ff is specially written for my dido……..do meet her as she is a awesome person and a great writer of Heart beat (An ff on Vidha) , thanks a lot again dear…………..Love you……….be happy………….

  3. Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Good job Piyali….superb…and yes…that slap from Dhaani to Raisha….amazing….. The love wali feeling is awesome dear….keep rocking

  4. Meghs

    |Registered Member

    Waaah mere sherni wah.. what a slap i wish i get cchance to slap raisha. I would have shown her gradma😉

    You nailed it. You did it kiddo. I’m so happy to read this ff. I missed u alot kiddo few more days I’ll back till then don’t forgot ur di 😘

    Love u
    Keep smiling 😊

    • Piyali

      |Author

      Hhaahahah dido……….no problem you only slaped Dhani and you never know what you’ll do in future episode………………maybe you’ll actually show her her grandma……….Thank you my dido…..you know Ii missed you more………I’ll be waiting I read you have your exams………..all the best dii………….I am sure my dido is gonna rock the exams………..Love you……….smiling to app ka chehra hamesha hi hona chahiye……….Love you……….be happy……..

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