VIDHANI -Three Shots : Rise of Eternal Love – Episode -1 [By Renima]

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VIDHANI OS Three Shots : Rise of Eternal Love

Hi ikrs family…..I didn’t expected that my first work on vidhani will be accepted by ikrs family…..Thanks 2 all…….So this is my second os on the same pair……Actually am very busy with my work and also my work pressure is annoying and annoying only……Just to get a relief from stress am writing three shots 4 vidhani…..hope u will like it……if not also then feel free 2 comment……I will not come again 2 trouble with this os…..pls express ur views……
And sorry in advance……since I didn’t followed the show….so don’t know much about the pair……so its just an attempt……only……..Guys…..

Scene – 1 @ Banks of river ganges….
{Viplav is sitting @ the stairs near the river and witness the flow of river…..He finds certain people there……some were praying for their beloved ones….while some are doing rituals for the dead people and some are drowning in river to purify themselves from their sins…..His eyes suddenly went on a corner where he finds a girl who was singing a meera bhajan….. He moves to there and closes his eyes and listens her song…..When it was ended, he opens his eyes and finds that the girl has left the place…….Almost two days the same thing was repeated…..she use to sing and viplav use 2 listen her voice and when the song will be over the girl will leave……}
{Next day morning viplav decided that he will meet the girl and will talk 2 her……As usual the girl came and when her singing got ended viplav managed to stop her…..}
Viplav : Pls……I need to talk …….mm…..
Girl : Haa…..
Viplav : Mmm….You sing well…….really very well……..
Girl : {smiles} Thank u…..I have to leave……
Viplav : [interrupts] Mm….your gud name…..
Girl : Dhaani……
Viplav : Beautiful……{smiles}
Dhaani : I think after my maa…..u are the first person who told me that my name sounds nice……Thanks…..{she leaves the spot with teary eyes}
{Viplav feels sad 4 her}

Precap : Don’t know…..what to write…..

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10 Comments
  1. I was surprised excited when I saw your ff story?!!

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks…..didn’t expected ur comment here…..dear

  2. And im also look forward to the other writers ff story too :)!!

  3. Maha_Aijaz

    Hey Renima! Deykho I was busy in my exams preparation but after reading its title I wasn’t able to stop myself so here I’m.. first of all don’t even think these sort of things as I tou enjoying your work a lot and you know what I’m so happy that apart from us a new member has joined us so keep writing. Okay!
    And about the shots, it’s really very good as the way you’ve started is really interesting so looking forward for more and yes since my exams are on my head so I may not be able to comment on next one (MAYBE) but always count me as your reader. Theek hai naa
    Keep up the good work
    Take care<3

    1. Renimarenju

      Haa…….i can understand….even i can’t assure that i will be able 2 update regularly…but will try maximum ….to post as early as possible……as i didn’t like 2 drag things…..thanks a lot yaar…… for accepting me…..u know i love both mishal and eisha….and i really want 2 see them in any other show in future

  4. it is simply superb yaar…

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks lalitha

  5. Sujie

    Renima…. you are awesome…was surprised to see this…. good job ..keep rocking like this ..and do not say that you are irritating us…. you are not annoying us… okay

    1. Renimarenju

      Thanks sujie

  6. JanviSingh

    Hi Reni….
    See… I followed u here too….???
    All I wanted to say that… That m agle part k comment section m multi hu….
    See u there sissy…??????

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