VIDHANI FF : UNBOUNDED BOND OF LOVE [Part 11, By Renima]

VIDHANI FF : UNBOUNDED BOND OF LOVE [Part 11, By Renima]

Hello, Ikrs friends….Hope all are doing well…. And now am updating this one….Ok updates will be short because of my annoying office work….Pls bear it ….as I don’t have a choice…And guys have u heard the new competition conducting by some members of tu, where u can submit ur os on any serial… if possible then my friends u pls submit ur comment there and ask for writing an os on ikrs….

Champion Writer Os Competition/

By chance if u missed previous episode of my ff, here are links for it…..

VIDHANI FF : UNBOUNDED BOND OF LOVE [Part 10, By Renima]


Pls read all and express ur views on it…..
Fb scene -4 { @ Haridwaar, continuation}
Viplav comes 2 the room…..He finds suvarna is sitting opposite 2 dhualri’s maa’s bed….She has fallen asleep and was lying on rajjo’s shoulder only… Viplav smiles and his eyes turn towards dhaani….Dhaani was waving her hand through dhulari’s forehead only….Viplav moves near dhaani and stares her….
Viplav : Dhaani!!!
Dhaani : Sh!!! Viplav…..maa is sleeping…..

Viplav : [in low voice] Oops!!! Sorry…..here are the medicines…
Dhaani : Give it to me…[viplav handovers the medicines]
Viplav : Rajjo…..I think u and suvarna have 2 take some rest…..
Rajjo : Viplav …..It’s ok….I will sit here…..suvarna looks so pale…..And dhaani also looks tired….I think both of them need rest…..
Viplav : Oh My chudail…..I can take care of maaji…..U go and take rest…..
Rajjo : But viplav……
Viplav : Rajjo……I said am here….ok….[viplav smiles]
Rajjo : Ok…done, dhaani and sit here….
Dhaani : No….i will sit beside maa only……
Rajjo : Dhaani…..viplav is here only……u just come…
Dhaani : No rajjo…..u and suvarna take rest…..I will sit here only…
Rajjo stares viplav and nods her head with a sign of “no”….Viplav smiles…
Viplav : Ok….rajjo….u guys stay there….dhaani will sit here only…..
Rajjo smiles and slowly close her eyes…..Viplav sits beside dhaani…..Dhaani stares him in confusion….
Dhaani : Why are u sitting here ?

Viplav : Why are u sitting here ?
Dhaani : I asked u , and u have 2 tell me the answer….
Viplav : What dhaani, am sitting here 2 take care of maaji only…..
Dhaani : Viplav u did so many things for us….And trust me I will sit here ……
Viplav : Ok….so I will also sit here….
Dhaani : But why ?

Viplav : Oh Madam, u have become my friend and should I ….
Dhaani : [interrupts] One minute, are u telling about filament only ?
Viplav : No ….I was telling that my friend’s maa is like my maa only……So I have full rights 2 sit here…..And abt filament….obviously when viplav is with you dhaani, u have 2 give a filament smile….

Dhaani : And if I will not smile, then what will u do ?
Viplav : See am a lawyer and I can file a complaint against you in court for not obeying my order….U got it….
Dhaani : Haa, I got it….it is the unwritten law, but the expected law of ur heart, won’t u ?
Viplav : U are able 2 see it, then why are u not doing it ?[vidhani stare each other’s eyes]
Dhaani : Woh….woh…..I don’t know…..[dhaani turns her eyes from viplav]
Viplav : Dhaani….I don’t know why but whenever u are with me I feel like am really getting something new which is beyond of my mind….Few days before only we met and see we became friends so soon……Why ?
Dhaani : I think it’s because of the destiny….

Viplav : I didn’t get u…
Dhaani : Maa use 2 say that destiny has planned so many things in our life….May be we have 2 be bounded in friendship, that’s what destiny has written for us…..
Viplav : Do u think so ?
Dhaani : Yeah…..
Viplav : Ok…..One thing I must say dhaani, I always want 2 see u as happy because ur smiling face really makes me 2 smile also…..[dhaani stares viplav’s eyes and gets emotional]
Dhaani : Viplav…u are so good….I really ….[dhaani was unable 2 tell anything as she was smiling with wet eyes]
Viplav ; Dhaani…..u are just inpredictable

Dhaani ; Me…..why ?
Viplav : How can u smile and cry @ a time ?Are u a girl or some thing else ?
Dhaani : Like every girl am also a normal girl only….And whatever u see in my eyes are actually not tears, they express my inner happiness only…..
Viplav : May be….but I don’t like it….[viplav wipe out her tears and places her fingers and presses her cheeks] U are so sweet, dhaani…..I want u 2 smile only…….
Dhaani feels some thing unique which was quite new 2 her life…..She just touched her cheeks and stares viplav….viplav stares her eyes and signs her 2 give a smile…..Slwoly dhaani smiles and viplav also smiles…

VIDHANI {@ A time} : Filament!!! {they stare each other’s eyes and smiles again…..Viplav and dhaani share a hifi and share an eyelock}
BGM……”Baatein kuch ankahi si kuch ansuni si hone lagi
Kaabu dil pe rahaa naa, hasi hamari khone lagi…oh…oh….oh…
Shaayad yahi hein pyaar, shayad yahi hein pyaar..”[movie-life in a metro…plays]
Scene shifts 2 Ayodhya Nivaas
Kanak : Why are u staring @ me, just go…
Servant : Ji…maalkin…..Woh….paisa…..

Kanak : Do what I said , u will get ur money when u will reach home……
Servant : Maalkin, should I believe u ?
Kanak : U have no choice @ all……If u are not going 2 do this, then I will find any other guy for it…..But necessity of money is ur prblm, only……Think if u will not produce money in time, then what will be ur daughter’s future ? Her marriage will be cancelled….bride groom will leave ur daughter in the mandap itself……U will not be able 2 do anything…….
Servant : Nahi malkin…..Pls…..Whatever be the consequence, am ready 2 bear it…..But is it sure that I will get my money…..

Kanak throws a bundle of currency notes on his face….
Kanak : This is your advance…..U will get the rest of money after work……Do u get it ?
Servant : Ji maalkin……[servant leaves]
Kanak : Dhulari, u just wait…..and see , how am going 2 destroy your aashram…..Am back 2 take a revenge on u….U don’t know me what I can do ? The game begins now…..[kanak gives a crooked smile] I want 2 share this gud news with baauji…..Wait…[email protected] first I have 2 make assure that they are doing it well…..After all when dhulari will come back with those poor widows, I have 2 welcome her with the shocking surprise only…..

Mean while shaalu who was standing beside kanak’s room, over hears this conversation….
Shaalu : Oh My God, Maa is planning 2 make a trouble for women of aashram….Viplav bhaiya told me that he is in haridwaar …..But his mobile has gone…..I have 2 tell him abt this @ any cost…..All I knows is the Hospital’s reception number only as bhaiya called me from that phone…..I think I can try on that……[shalu makes a phone call on hospital’s reception, but the number was engaged….shalu cuts the phone and feels bad]

Scene shifts 2 haridwaar….Next day, morning Dhulari slowly wakes up and finds that vidhani was sitting beside her….Both of them have fallen asleep and was lying on each other’s shoulder only.. Dhaani’s hand was on viplav’s hold……… The moment brings a pleasant smile on dhulari’s face…..

Dhulari’s view….
“ What am seeing now ? Is it true or just my dream, only ? My buchiya’s hand is on viplav’s hold…..I never imagined like these….. Some one who is able 2 hold my buchiya’s hand, some one who is able 2 fullfil her desires and some one who is able 2 stand with her in every turn of life, some one who can make my daughter 2 feel that life is colorful and there is a world beyond of white color, I think only viplav can do it for my beti…..Knowingly or unknowingly dhaani’s hand is in his hold which makes me 2 feel that my daughter will be secure in his arms…..For a maa, what else can be the biggest expectation rather than her daughter’s happiness ? Viplav I don’t know what brought u here, but seeing urself with dhaani in front of my eyes, I have started dreaming about it….I wish this dream come true…..” [dhualri smiles with wet eyes]

In the midst, viplav slowly opens his eyes and seeing it, suddenly dhulari shut her eyes and pretends that she was sleeping only….Viplav stares dhulari for a while….

Viplav : I think because of medicine’s dosage, maaji is still not able 2 get up from bed….[mean while he finds that dhaani’s head was on his shoulder only. Viplav slowly places his hand on her cheek….He finds dhaani’s hair was falling on her cheek only……Viplav gently passes his fingers on the hair and removes it from her cheek…. Dhulari watches it with half opened eyes and smiles] Dhaani….dhaani…

Dhaani : Haa….viplav…[dhaani slowly opened her eyes and stares viplav….]
Viplav : U slept well in my shoulder ?
Dhaani : What!! [dhaani realizes that she was still lying on his shoulder only….Dhaani slowly gets up and stares viplav….] wooh!! Wooh!!

Viplav : What dhaani ? [viplav stares dhaani and gives a cute smile]
Dhaani bows her head as viplav was staring her only……She slowly raised her head and stares viplav’s eyes……As usual viplav’s filament smile has done the magic on dhaani….She was unable 2 take her eyes from viplav….Slowly dhaani also stared viplav and give the wonderful filament smile…..BGM ….. “Tere Saath Saath Aisha Koi Noor Aaya Hai
Chand Teri Roshni Ka Halka Sa Ek Saaya Hai
Teri Nazaron Ne Dil Ka Kiya Jo Hasar
Asar Yeh Hua…….Abb Inmein Hi Doob Ke Ho Jaaun Paar

Yehi Hai Dua……..Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai
Hoo Aankhon Mein Teri
Ajab Si Ajab Si Adayein Hai….Dil Ko Banade Jo Patang Saa Se
Yeh Teri Woh Haawaien Hai”[film-om shanti om plays]

PRECAP : U STOOD AS THE SWORD FOR ME TO BREAK ALL THE OBSTACLES ……

9 comments

  1. Lalitha

    wow wow wow….reni superb episode…
    And first of all dulari scene is wonderful..now i have known that her character is positive because she is expecting vidhani together na…
    And this filament wala smile is a thing that makes the moment special…i love that concept…
    That devil kanak…what she is going to do???whatever evil plans made by kanak will increases love between them only….how funny that kanak character is…
    plz come asap to update next episode..
    bye…
    take care…

    • Renimarenju

      Renimarenju

      |Author

      Hey lalitha…thanks yaar…and glad that u liked dhulari maa’s view which i have 2 portray well because always she has stood with dhaani…and expecting vidhani bond, haa a mother always dreams her daughter’s hand in a man’s hand who is able 2 stand with her daughter in lifelong and it’s quite natural and i just expressed that’s only….filament smile is some thing like symbol for vidhani in my ff so without them how can vidhani be fall 4 each other yaar ? and kanak…no ways….in serial….kabhi nahi sudhari….always vilain only….. and glad that u liked my story…which means a lot…..thanks and keep reading….love u

  2. Sujie

    Sujie

    |Registered Member

    Reni…. undoubtedly…a super one…. I must say….
    Trust me…this is amazing….
    Filament smile of Dhaani…and Viplav’s attempt to keep the smile as it is….
    Dulaari maai’s love is awesome….she got the hint that Viplav Dhaani are made for each other….loved her POV on Viplav Dhaani’s hand held together…. that moment 🙂 hayeeeeeeeeeee hayeeeeeeee…. 🙂 superb dear….
    have nothing to say about Kanak…the dancing eyebrows…
    However….Shaalu is a good soul…hope that she could inform Viplav about their mom’s evil planning ….keep rocking dear….

    • Renimarenju

      Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanksssss a lotttttttttt yaara…..sujie…..and filament ke bina vidhani is not possible in my ff…. and glad u loved dhulari maa, obviously i have a special respect 2 her role which we witnessed in earlier episodes of ikrs…..and that made me 2 portray dhulari maa as a +ve role and even shaalu is also gud , i love her smile..haa later in ikrs , she had some prblms and misunderstandings with dhaani, but i can’t blame her as situations made all issues, from heart she is not bad ….kanak…..no way….always her terrrific eyes were plaanning 2 make vidhaani separation only……really can’t do anything 2 her….am glad u liked the plot and ur new ff’s story is really wonderful yaar……are u giving os for vidha in the competetion ?

      • Sujie

        Sujie

        |Registered Member

        No yaar…. I won’t be able to make it..

        Ab if happens for next time… Then would do it if I am free ….❤️❤️

      • Renimarenju

        Renimarenju

        |Author

        See am also not giving it…and on vidha…i find no one writing on it that’s why asked u only….see 2 be honest i prefer ib….which is more comfortable for me….and i don’t know whether i will get time for 2 write os…so noting is planned

  3. Maha_Aijaz

    Maha_Aijaz

    |Registered Member

    Hey Reni! Feeling very sorry for not commenting on previous two updates but as you know was busy so that’s why was inactive just now got little free from cousins and all so thought to come here!
    So the episode was jhakas 😘 loved ViDha’s sweet moments then their conversation was too good💖💖 also liked dulaari maayi’s POV, her satisfactory dialogues​ were worth reading 😍😍
    Kanak rani our dancing eyebrows she’ll never change and this makes her different 😂😂 hope Shalu will do something to save Ashram.
    Loads of love for this dear❤❤
    Take care!

    • Renimarenju

      Renimarenju

      |Author

      Thanks a lot mahaa…..am damn busy right now yaar…and am in bangalore as part of my officework and next update will be on may 11 th only….bye…love u dear and glad that u liked episode….and no need of sorry ….and all….i can undersand…

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