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Urge to want him!!

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Hello everyone! Howz u all? Dears missed u all so badly..and here ‘so badly’ mattering a lot..cz I could able to feel it. Ok, did anyone remember me even? Hey all lovelies I’m Sanswa aka ‘Effie’ my real name, So here with some 3 or 4 shots with my swasan, try to comment cz its been forever I hv written something, and as usual ur love will always encourage me more!! Significant fact is u all r damn innocent dat I just can’t keep myself away from u more time! LOVE YOU ALL..and I really mean it Darlings!! Not for my work but at least ans to my qn abt ur health..want to greet everyone separately cz rly its been passed such a long period na to our meeting! Sending lots of kisses and hugs to my every sweethearts with all of my love towards u!!

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Swara’s pov started.,

My first day at university,

The first time I met Sanskar..!!

Yep Sanskar my first love…my first wish…my first dream…!!!

His beautiful charming smile had a captivating, enchanting and blissful effect on me.

His eyes were mesmerizing and hypnotizing every bone in my body, with their gorgeous, graceful, browny color.

His face, such a handsome structure, was cascading my heart like the night falls on earth with no warning.

I saw him in the refectory, talking to his friends…his voice like a sweet melody ringing gently into my ears.

As if my legs controlled themselves, they led me to his table and I stood there, my feet glued to the floor opposite him, entranced by his beautiful presence in my life.

The conscious in the back of my mind kept telling me to move away, because I probably looked like a crazy weirdo, but my heart didn’t listen.

He looked up at me for the first time of his life, noticing me as he had never done before.

Mind you, if I would have met him before I would have dived right into a kiss.

“Can I help you…??” His voice, so strong yet gentle, I recorded it in my mind so it became unforgettable.

He frowned then waved his hand in front of me as if to grab my attention.

He didn’t need to do that, he was the only one I could see. “Hello…??”

“Hi,” I smiled from my heart while dragging biggest ear to ear curve on my fumbled face.

“Hi,” he said, leaning a bit back as his stunning eyes travelled up and down my body.

I became slightly flustered but held my ground.

“May I…??” I asked gesturing to the chair a random guy was sitting on in front of me.

He gave me a confused look, nevertheless he nodded.

I grinned then pushed off random guy, hearing a thud and groan, then sat on the still warm chair.

I folded my arms on the cool table and leaned forward to get an up close look of the amazing guy in front of me.

His messy darkly black hair covered his forehead, resting just above his eyebrows.

I really wanted to run my fingers through his shiny strands, but he was leaning a bit faraway with a look that expressed discomfort.

“Hey…!! What do you think you’re doing…??!!” Random guy shouted…to whom my reply was ignorance.

“I’m Swara,” I said, gazing into his deep, browny eyes, trying not to get too lost in them.

“Sanskar,” he nodded and cleared his throat.

I got to know that Sanskar Maheshari was a year above me in the university we both attended.

He studied Engineering and I studied English.

He had every girl swooning over him, naturally, as he was a handsome himself.

He was every girls Romeo, and I wanted to be his Juliet, with a happily ever after.

He was Rainfall, and I wanted to be colorful rainbow.

He was the Knight in shining amour, and I wanted to be his princess.

He knew I had feelings for him, and day after day, they became deeper.

He treated me like he treated every other girl, but I still didn’t give up on winning his heart.

At the beginning he used me like every other girl, he proposed me and I accepted with infinite bunch of happiness.

But I was just a toy for him which he played with until he got bored and moved on to find a new one already reserved for his use.

But I knew deep down, he would return to me.

I didn’t stop following him. No.

All the other girls had dignity, self-respect.

I was so lost in love with him, that those words became extinct in my dictionary.

Some chicks used the ‘cold-shoulder’ on him, which attracted him to them even more.

But I kept trying to prove myself to him like a love-sick puppy.

I got asked out a couple of times, even around him.

He wasn’t bothered.

And when I turned the poor guys down, he seemed to get more dejected than they did.

“TO HIS LIFE, I was that dirty mark on his top he couldn’t get rid of, no matter how hard he tried…!!!”

“TO ME, he was the world that I lived in, the drug that kept me alive, the addiction that was unhealthier for me than sugar for a diabetic, the light in my darkness, the only one I could see, the only oxygen I could breathe…!!!”

He tried to get rid of me.

I knew it, but neither my mind nor heart accepted it.

I saw him walking towards me…he clearly hadn’t noticed me standing only a few feet away.

His arm hung around a tall, really pretty, cover girl-like brunette, whispering in her ear seductively.

I could tell she loved whatever he was saying, whatever he was doing to her heart.

I missed that touch, that warmth, that charm he once planted on me a few weeks after our relation started.

I had given myself to him that night, the best night of my life when we were in relationship.

The only night I spent with a guy.

He was so sweet, so caring, and so gentle.

I missed him so badly.

And seeing him like that with a girl, day in day out, was nothing new to me, but scraped my heart apart like a lions claw attacking at its prey mercilessly.

But I took a deep breath, put on the smile which I only saved for him, and walked towards his sight to which he frowned at.

“Hi Sanskar,” I waved, my heart like an open book for him to read.

He sighed, frustration marking his angelic features.

“Hmm Swara,” he nodded.

I looked at the girl next to him…she smiled gently at me, confused by my sudden appearance.

“Aren’t you going to introduce us…??” She spoke to him in the sweetest, most gentle voice that any guy would fall for.

“Kavita, this is Swara,” Sanskar said, giving her his s*xiest smile, predictable.

He then turned to me with a hard face. “Swara, that’s Kavita.”

We said ‘hi’ to each other while greeting one another with not interested and cursing look, and then another girl that is Kavita’s friend Kavya came there, distracting Kavita and me from each other.

I took this as my chance.

“How are you doing Sanskar…?? Haven’t seen you for a while,” I spoke sweetly, touching his hand to grab his attention.

He flinched and pulled his hand away from me like I was some sort of fire, burning him with my flames.

“We saw each other yesterday,” he told me, not answering my question.

His whole body was turned towards Kavita and her friend Kavya, checking them both out.

I didn’t like that so I jumped into his view.

He narrowed his eyes at me then turned his face away from me, nodding at a few of his friends who walked past.

“Yes, and twenty-four hours is a while,” I grinned.

He sighed and looked at me straight in the eye.

“What do you want Swara…??” He asked me in an annoyed tone.

I loved how my name sounded in his voice…I wanted him to repeat it over and over.

“I WANT ONLY YOU SANSKAR…!!!” I whispered.

He groaned, running his hand through his beautiful silky hair.

“Swara, we’ve been through this. That night was only a one night standing…you have to stop following me around. If I really wanted you, you would be the girl in my arms, not Kavita. If you really loved me, you would back off…give me some space to breath. Can you do that for me…?? Just for now,” he spoke quickly, as if he was in a hurry.

Then he sighed, and placed his hands on my shoulders gently, looking at me straight with those magical browny eyes. “I don’t want to hurt you Swara.”

I knew he was genuine, he only ever showed this side like every once in a blue moon.

This was the Sanskar who I really fell for.

The one who was hurting within, the one who needed to let his feelings out, who kept his pain to himself.

I just nodded, my eyes lost in his, searching for the approval I wanted from the beginning.

He sighed again, but this time in relief, and moved away from me to go to his probably one-week girlfriend Kavita.

I watched him go.

He asked me so sweetly, how could I say no…?? I’d let him be with Kavita, until he moved on from her.

I was wrong though, about Kavita.

She lasted longer than I thought.

She lasted for a total of ten months and twenty seven days, give or take.

They seemed to get pretty serious too, Sanskar was falling for her.

But I kept my word.

I kept my distance, and gave him the peace he wanted, just watched him from afar.

Still, I didn’t give up.

He would turn to me, someday.

I only hoped.

And then it happened, the breakup, Kavita had to move back to London because she was just an exchange student.

Kavita was really nice though, and genuine.

I was glad it was her and not some plastic girl Sanskar liked.

I knew she made him happy, I could tell.

The way he smiled around her, I had never seen him smile like that before.

She began to change him, for the better.

But don’t get me wrong, I was heartbroken.

I knew I couldn’t go near him, I couldn’t see a girl in his arms that wasn’t me.

And when I saw him falling for her, it was the most crushing despair and loneliest feeling I had ever felt in my life.

I had felt trapped…my light was taken from me.

I suffered in the darkness.

My oxygen was gone, making every breath painful, sharpness attacking me to my core.

It was killing me…I couldn’t even cry myself to sleep because even my tears grew tired of my pathetic life.

But I still didn’t give up on him…I didn’t want to give up on him.

I knew I had fallen too far and too deep to let go.

I knew I loved him more than Kavita did…I loved him the most in the world.

He just didn’t see it or can say not bothered to even notice.

My friends and parents became worried for me…they thought I should have moved universities.

But being away from him was the worst thing I could ever do, I might as well die.

My life was no life without Sanskar.

My Mommy worried the most, she told me that this was an unhealthy obsession, and I needed to move on.

My Poppy even suggested therapy, I didn’t need some shrimp, but I knew he was just as distraught as my mommy.

My friends tried to keep me busy with different activities they planned, but I still found a way, a reminder, that brought me back to Sanskar every time.

Even a few of Sanskar’s friends began to pity me, but I didn’t care.

As long as Sanskar was in front of my sight, I knew that somehow, I would be okay.

So I didn’t give up on him.

And then Kavita left, out of his life.

And it affected him, not in a good way either.

He went out clubbing every night, and then he would either go home with a random girl or have a serious hangover and vomit when he wasn’t with one.

How did I know this? Because every night I used to wait outside for him, just to make sure he got home okay.

I was the one who walked him home, I was the one who put him to bed, cleaned his sick, aided his hangover, and listened to his drunken form until he was too wasted to even utter a letter.

“Why do you do this…??” He asked me one night, when he was more sober than usual.

He had been drinking, and apparently flirted with a taken girl, and got punched here and there by the girl’s boyfriend.

I was cleaning up his cut lip as he sat on his work top next to the sink in his flat.

Even though he looked a mess, to me he was the most handsome, attractive, gorgeous person on earth.

“Do what…??” I sniffed, he was hurt, and it upset me even more to see him in pain…physical and emotional too.

“This,” he pointed out. “Be there for me, every night, when you know my feelings for you aren’t the same.”

I dabbed his lip gently, but it clearly wasn’t gentle enough as he winced.

I apologized, and cupped his cheek in my left hand, parallel to his forming bruised lip.

I blew softly at his lip…mission was to sooth his pain.

“If Kavita was here, she would be tending my wounds. But even she left me, just like them. She said that neither of us was serious, this was just a small insignificant fling. She just said goodbye, she didn’t listen to me…she didn’t want me. So why do you keep coming back, after how much I hurt you…?? When you know that to me you’re just like every other girl, then why don’t you just give up…?? Why do you come back, when they everyone left me all alone…?? Why…??!!”

I then looked up to see his eyes looking deep in to mine, like he was searching for something in them.

His browny eyes were red all around…I could see the water that was threatening to slide down his soft cheeks.

His was vulnerable, he was confused, he was broken, and I couldn’t see him like this.

He wasn’t alone, he had me.

I became overwhelmed, for the first time he paid attention to me, and I presented myself like an open book to him like I had done numerous of times before.

“BECAUSE I LOVE YOU SANSKAR…!!!” I whispered.

A lonely tear escaped my eye, and ran down my cheek.

I wanted him to see it, to feel it, the intense emotions I felt for him, I wanted him to know everything.

But I knew he already knew of my feelings.

He couldn’t be blamed if he didn’t feel the same way.

He moved his fingers and wiped the salty water off my cheek.

He kept his hand there, gently rubbing my cheek with his thumb.

I became flustered and hot with want, I didn’t know what he felt, but my heart was thudding faster than a bullet train and I felt him move slowly closer to me, his hot breath tickling my lips.

I wanted him, I needed him, and I couldn’t wait anymore, so I pushed my lips against his harshly.

I put all of my feelings into that one kiss, but still felt it wasn’t enough.

I heard him groan and he pulled away, slightly out of breath.

He touched his lips with his fingers.

I gasped, I was so focused on myself that I didn’t notice I had hurt his already injured lips.

“I’m sorry,” I reached my hand out to gently caress his lips, but he pulled away again.

He pushed me back gently, and jumped off the work top, making his way towards the washroom.

“You should go home,” he said, without turning around to look at me.

“But you’re…..,” before I could say anymore he cut me off.

“Leave please…!!” He spoke in stern, sharp voice he had never used before.

No matter how many times I followed him, stalked him, bugged him, embarrassed him, he always had the patience and never became angry.

But this time I had gone too far, kissing him at a vulnerable stage, it was the worst thing I did.

I knew he was missing Kavita, but I still did that.

Guilt seeped through my heart and I bit my lip so my tears wouldn’t flow out.

“I’m sorry,” my voice broke.

I grabbed my jacket and bag and ran out of his flat.

I ran all the way home, not stopping once to look back.

Once I reached my flat, I lay down on my bed, curled into the quilt and let all my tears soak into my pillows.

I cried myself to sleep.

A few days had passed, but me being me, I still never gave up on Sanskar.

I still stalked him, spoke to him and tried to cheer him up all the time.

He seemed to be getting better…he seemed to be moving on from Kavita.

But I knew it wasn’t Kavita, it was something much deeper that got to him that made him become the way he was.

I never touched the topic because even I knew never to tread on a path which marked danger signs all over.

Sanskar preferred never to talk about that kiss, and I respected his decision.

He never told me to leave him alone, and until he wouldn’t tell me in clear words, I vowed to myself that night that I never will.

Swara’s pov ended.

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Precap :- Sanskar send message to Swara having text, “I NEED YOU”

95 Comments
  1. Simin

    She is really mad for him

    1. Sanswa

      Yup dear…she iz kinda insane fr sans..btw missed u dear..hwz u?

    2. Simin

      Alhamdulilah i m gd
      u remember me?
      gd to see u back

      1. Sanswa

        Huhh wat type of QN is dis..😒..u r wid me from d very 1st..I mean u never left chance 2 cmnt on my work..den hw cud I 4get such a imp prsn lyk u..luv u dear..😘

      2. Simin

        Awww thank u sooo much
        ur dp is fab
        is that ur pic

    3. Sanswa

      Yep..its mine..🙈

  2. Amazing

    1. Sanswa

      Thnk u so much dear..hwz u?

  3. Mahavir

    awesome effie
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    T……swara babe why dear….n sanskar whats all this…n effie next one soon dear…love u…tc

    1. Sanswa

      Aww luv u 2 maha..😘..thnk u very much dear 4 ur sprt..btw missed u..hwz u angel?

    2. Sanswa

      Aww luv u 2 maha..😘..thnk u very much dear 4 ur sprt…btw missed u..hwz u angel?

      1. Mahavir

        yeah effie i too missed u soooooooooooō much….but no worries now u r back na…n yeah i m really fine what about u…..???? n yeah post next asap i loved it soooooooooooooooo much….

    3. Sanswa

      Hey maha angel m soo well..thnx fr ur caring nature 2wards me..😊😊

  4. Finallly a Swasan story…it’s been a week or so that I come on TU but there r no Swasan stories😔😔😔😔 missing them badly nd the stories too…hugs nd kisses to u to Sanswa darling…u made my day😘😘😘 thank u…..btw what happened to FILBM…hope u post next part soon…❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx a ton dear…well dnt wry ivl alwyz hanging out wid my swasan nly while riting..luv u..missed u dear..hwz u?

  5. Sorry forgot to comment on this story….well what to say it’s just amazing…I loved it so much…eagerly waiting to see how sanskar would start to feel for her…ooooooouuuuuucccchhhh😖 my phone just fell on face cuz am comment while laying on my bed🙈🙈😜😂 …..byways great job..

    1. Sanswa

      Hehe hope ur nose dnt broke ur mobzi..😜..so glad dear dat u found my story somewhat interesting..thnx 1ce again

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx dear..hwz u?

  6. Soujanya

    Awesome.. .😊

    1. Sanswa

      Hi darloo..aww missed u souj..thnx 2 infinite fr being wid me alwyz..hwz u dea?

  7. Pooja26

    ohh my god !!!!!!!
    its amazing yr…….
    swara how patience u hv my goodness !!!!!!!!
    kinda shocked !!!!!!!!
    post asap……
    tc…….

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx a lot dear poo..missed u angel..hwz u?

  8. Amazing/…!! Just loved it…!! Soo nice…!! Superb…!!! And post FILBM too…!!

    1. Sanswa

      Unmeasurable thnx to u shining star..missed u dear..hwz u?

    1. Sanswa

      Thnk u so much dear..missed u..hwz u?

  9. Zelena81196

    amazing…. and so beautiful…… you have to update soon….. cant wait….

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx a ton dear fr ur markable sprt..n vl made update soon..missed u dear..hwz u?

  10. awesome .

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx a loads dear…hwz u?..missed u also

  11. It was indeed a beautiful part.
    Too much of love …Yet too much of pain.
    I guess…Love is pain.
    But whatever it is……….
    This part was touching nd when r u posting the nxt part of filbm?
    Waiting for both the updates……Post soon!!

    1. Sanswa

      Aarohi u r toh my jaan yr..rly d most fav prsn of mine..I got flat on u after ur dat msg which u sent me wen my xms were going on n u played prtn shake role at dat tym..thank u so much aarohi darloo fr everything..luv u very much..😘😘..n rly believe me..missed u so much..Hd urge to talk to u..bt den remembered dat u r nt registered.. Plzz aarohi make me add in ur frnd list..wanna b ur frnd..plzz say yes m asking wid *puppy eyez*…n do me a favor plzz n registered itself..wanna talk to u everyday..or else tell me ivl registered fr u..den immediately u jst changed ur password..ur acc vl be all secure..😊😀
      Btw try to ans me bck..wa8ing eagerly wid cmpny of chocos..luv u dear..hwz my angel iz?

  12. Tamil

    Superb update soon

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx a bunch dear..yep vl update soon..missed u dear..hwz u?

      1. Tamil

        Good dear hw r u?

    2. Sanswa

      M Supr dupr fine Tamil angel..thnx 1ce again fr luv which u gave me alwyz

  13. Fantastic. .
    Amazing..
    Ohhh u r cm bk….
    Continue ur other story

    1. Sanswa

      Rakuu darlinggg so glad dat u found its nyc…thnx a bunch dear from💓..missed u dear..luv u..hwz u?

  14. Sana27

    Hi…dude…missed u lot…thanks for ur update…awesome shot….Loved it…:-)

    1. Sanswa

      Helo Sana dii..hwz u my beautiful dii???..awwee diii missed u bunch…thnk u so much dii fr ur support..love u..😊

  15. Ifza

    Hi Effie!!!!!! Its amazing dear …… was waiting for u and ur story ” fell in love by mistake ” but saw this anyways its superbb update soon ha and also update fell in love by mistake waiting for it eagerlyyyyyyyy

    1. Sanswa

      Heyya helo angelic frnd..thnk u so much fr ur strng sprt 2 my each riting..missed u dear..hwz u?

      1. Ifza

        Im goooooòoooooood , i too misssssed you dear

  16. Simi

    Swara is really about Sanskar…
    Awesome dear 😊

    1. Simi

      *Really mad about

      1. Sanswa

        Hey dear missed u…thnk u so much…yep swara iz rly crazy for him

  17. Kaynatk01

    its so awesome effie yr i know u didnt missed mee u forgot me go am not talking to u…..u came so late ‘pout’ katti

    1. Sanswa

      Arey na dear..I missed u all..n u r d center of attraction of me….rly I don’t 4get anyone..nt at all..give me a hug yr n plzz talk..n want 2 ask is it u naughty girl on ur dp..if so den I luved it so much..😘..hey kaynat yr u r d main supporter of my all writing stuff..hw can u do this…throw dis pout away..n talk..or else m gonna eat all chocos alone..😋..vont give u single piece at least..😜

      1. Kaynatk01

        haww am going to kill u if u eat all chocos alone and yeah am that girl in mah dp but u look cute in urs is it u???? and wanna explore more about u text me on instaa _kaynat_khan kk love u lots

    2. Sanswa

      Yippeee..*jumping on bed*..means I wz r8..dpz naughty princess wz u nly…rly I just loved ur pic so much..u sweet,inncnt..naughty girl..😘..😞..m nt in insta yr..bt no prblm..we cud able 2 start our girly talk by tu msg block nly..vl msged u…luv u dear..😘😘..n take dese chocos cz I want to live long..😜..🍫🍬🍭🍫🍬🍭🍫🍬🍭…dnt eat all alone..b a gud girl n share some of dem wid me also..😋..wud u lyk to b my frnd dear..say yes nly..m asking wid *puppy eyez*..n yep u r absolutely crrct..dp iz of mine nly..🙈..btw missed u dear so much..luv u..😘..hwz my princess iz?

      1. Kaynatk01

        well effir is this the way to say we are already friend and dear to me and you have became my bestie now but you look more beautiful in your dp i am gonna msg u and will be great friends no sisters love you more my doll….if i am princess then u r my doll umaah

  18. Awesome yarr . This is a total different story ever I don’t read something like this .it is really very nice.

    1. Sanswa

      Thnk u soo much sweetie…😊..Hwz u?

  19. Arshaanya

    Finally u r back…
    Where were u ?? Missed u n ur stories..
    Okay coming to d story i loved it…
    Swara is mad really crazy for him…
    She shud avoid him yr😒😒😒… shez brng so much…
    Precap ❤
    Lots of love hugs n kisses 2 u 2 😘😘😘

    1. Sanswa

      Yep don iz back..😎😎..hehe..😂..hmm I wz under d bed..11 mulkhon ki cops were badly searching me..so I hd to hide dere fr some dayz at least..😜..aww arshuu u knw u r my bestiee..I loved ur all suggestions..u acted lyk frnd cum guider..n I jst loved ur style..😍..rly luv u yr..n bharat mata ki kasam missed u more Dan u missed me..n thnx a lot fr everything..dese chocos fr u which I kept safe undr my observations fr u speciallyspecially🍫🍬🍫🍬🍫🍬🍫🍬..n yep *giving u bearwala hug*..hwz u my dear?

      1. Arshaanya

        M gud dear… i was thinking m troublng u wid my comments 😛 evry tym demanding something 😉😉 u knw i got best critic award here from swasan lovers grp 🙈🙈🙈… i loved ur comment n thnx for dese beautiful words 😘😘😘😘

  20. Rekha

    Finally u r back……
    Awesome as always…..
    Waiting for ur other ffs……
    Continue soon…..

    1. Sanswa

      Thnk u very much sweetie..ur precious sprt matring a lot..missed u dear..hwz u?

  21. Deeksha gupta

    U know yr i was absent frm tu from few days coz i was busy wid my coaching n all n today i opened tu n saw ur ts , i was so happy ..
    But really angry wid u …u just disappeared like dat ..i am so eagerly waiting for filbm…
    Hope u will post it soon ..
    But fr nw I’m upset wid u …but loved dis shot …

    1. Sanswa

      Huhu deekshu darling no u cnt b angry wid me..I knw it..😉..OK baba *holding ur both ears*..so sry jaan dat I vanished sudnly..bt wz missing evrybdy..n u r d most fav prsn of mine..😊..b a gud girl..n throw ur angry bird mood in dustbin cz its becoming hudle in ur beauty..n accpt my frndship..let’s b a frnds..😀😀..wat say??..btw so many tq to u my dear..u alwyz sprt me in my evry work..tysm..missed U babe..luv u..n hwz u angel?

      1. Deeksha gupta

        Dis tym forgiving u 😉😉😉😉nxt tym b ready fr bearing my tantrums * u know my drama queen avtar which I’m famous for * n about being frnds i thought we already r friends ….
        Most importantly dont say thanku …u know dosti mai no sorry no thanku * didnt swasan teach u * 😜😜😜
        Missed u too meri jaan …
        N I’m nt at all fine …
        Feeling like dying 😢😢😢😢so much burdened …
        U tell how r u sweety ???

    2. Sanswa

      Aww deekshuu darlinggg m all gud dear…tysm angel dat u frgive me..yep I knw u r d queen of dramaz..😂..🙈🙈..*jumping*…means we r bestiees na dear!!…haha..swasan gave me free 2 month coaching on frndship rule..so don’t wry..😜…y u r feeling lyk burnden angel..??..iz any pressure of something?

  22. Hey dear….. First time reading your story….. It’s just awesome and out of words😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘 she’s really mad about him, never seen such a girl like her, I give her a solute👏👏👏 waiting for next part😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Sanswa

      Helo princess..heartily thnx dat u found crzyness of my mind interesting..btw hwz u?

  23. Swarna01

    After long back really its a bang. Vry nyc. N abt swara dis is called selfless. I love dis swara who don’t know the meaning of give up. Vry gd.

    1. Sanswa

      Hey u r toh bestiee of mine..thnx a lot dear..ur spprt hz been alwyz wid me..m so gr8fulnes abt dis..missed u dear..hwz u?

      1. Swarna01

        I m fine. N u heartily welcome. Love u

  24. Scooby

    Awesome… but it looks she is so obessessed in her love making othrs to think she is not worth… anf sanskar should understand hr true value…

    1. Sanswa

      Thnx navi angel..yep she’z hving obsession fr her luv..btw missed u dear..hwz u?

  25. It is amazing effie dii..
    Swara loves Sanskar a lot..
    Waiting for the nxt..

    1. Sanswa

      Heyya kiddooo..😀😀..aww thnx a nmbr of bunches dear…luv u..😘

  26. Kakali

    Awesome chappy Effie.. !! Well welcome back… hope u r going good..!! continue soon.. !! will be waiting for next part… Thnk u… ;-*

    1. Sanswa

      Helo kakali..greeting u in ur style..wid giving *leg hi-fi*..thnx a bunch dear..missed u..hwz u?

      1. Manasvi

        *leg hi-fi*????😂😂

      2. Kakali

        Yeiii gimme Hifi*by leg…
        Missed u tooo…
        M also good dear,but preparing for leaving TU in some days.. !! ;-*

    2. Sanswa

      @mansvi..
      Babe dis leg hi-fi iz our kakali’z style..😎😎..do fit dis in ur mind..😃😃..n angel if u want u r free to make add urself in our leg hi-fi…😇😇

    3. Sanswa

      @kakali
      Where r u going dear..?? Plzz dnt go..me come n u go..nt fair😥

      1. Kakali

        Yup,mu swt sis Manasvi,it’s my way to say hi,hilo to ev1.. u know it’s hilarious.. as well as we can have fun..
        m pretty sure u would love it after some trials..*giggle..

        Effie,actually dear,my 12th board exams are going to start from next month.. soo i have to leave TU for 2 months probably… !!
        Hope to meet u again in March….
        stay blessed…okiii…*hug..;-*

  27. Raina

    swara is crazy and mad for him. the storyline is fabulous. please post the next one soon

    1. Sanswa

      Helo rainaa darlingg..do u remembrd me??..me d wall painter..??hehe..😂..thnk u so much dear fr ur luv towards my writing..wud u lyk to becme frnd of mine??..plzz say yes m asking wid *puppy eyez*..n do u rite anything??..if so den try to send me link of ur posted area..😊😊..wud luv to adore ur amazing writing..😊😊..btw hwz u princess??

      1. Raina

        i think you are misunderstanding me. because i really can’t understand you. but i would love to be your friend, and i do write, i will send you link by tomorrow

  28. Vyshu10

    Superb….missed u. Glad u r back…dont disappear again. I missed reading ur stories. Have exams now…so i may not comment instantly buy u keep uploading plz

    1. Sanswa

      Aww missing u lyk hell dii..nw we met after terrible long period..dnt wry dii u focused on ur study only..I know u r alwyz wid me..ops shud I call u dii..means u said u r eldr 2 me..dats y..hope u don’t mind..thnk u so much dii fr everything..luv u..hwz u?

      1. Vyshu10

        i m fine…hw r u dear? everything alright???? i hope u r really fine…yes u can me dii…its more fine if u dont call….its ur wish. Upload d ff

    2. Sanswa

      Huhh u locked me in confusion filled room..dat by wat nm shud i address u nw..??..aww angelic dear ur caring nature alwyz took cntrl of my all senses..😀..m rly all fine dear..btw thnk u so much angelic frnd fr ur luv..luv u..😘

      1. Vyshu10

        angelic???? uff maar dala

      2. Sanswa

        dear it prfctly suits u..cz angels alwyz cares others

  29. Sriya

    it is really awesome sweetheart and you look soooooooooooooooo cute in your dp love you sooooooooooooooo much

    1. Sanswa

      Hey sriya darling thnk u very much dear fr ur precious luv..awww uhv found me as cute from my pic..thnx angel..it’s been a dayz dat we talked prsnally..so hwz u dear?

  30. Outstanding….. Excellent writing

    1. Sanswa

      Ohh tani darling thnx a ton yr..missed u..luv u..hwz angel iz?

  31. Tanusreevidya

    😍👌👌👌 #nowords

    1. Sanswa

      Aww thnk u so much tanu darlinggg….luv u baby..😘

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