UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-9)

hi lovelies…aaj patha hai kyun lovelies ncz I m so,so happy…
I really don’t know how to express my gratitude towards u all…yaar I m so so happy… thank I so much guys…. I can’t believe mere ff padke koi silent reader ne cmmnt kiya… I m on cloud infinity ka cube…hehehe..accha sorry for much bak bak aaj sunna padega…so..kyun ke mera ff ek few shots hai isliye mai use drag nahi karna chahthi…lekin mai ap ko bore karne dusra few shots zarur leke aaungi… okay??? yaar mana math karna warna meri izzat ki dhajya ud jaayein gi… ha han patha hai aaj bohot bak bak kar rahin hun lekin yehi meri khushiyon ko bathane ka ek tareeka hai…
ab thank you section..
dreamer…arundhatI, payal…, ranabulbul (meri chulbul), piya(your cmmnt made me so happy that I screenshot it and chupa ke rakh diya warna mom ko patha chal jayega na…hehehe..), sana, srija, sidhanshi, adya, anyaali( I m really really so happy that u cmmnted aur screenshot bhi kada), chiku, sidvee, franchise, purnima, monica, sidmin, ramya..
rulane ke liye sab se sorry..aaj ke liye bhi sorry…

twinkle kuch sochne ke halat me nahi thi isiliye usne kunj ko sab ke liye blame kiya…

link for part 8-here

recap- attackers to attack on college… kunj secret was out… uv to get shoot… twinkle to get angry on and asking him to leave…

now let’s begin…
kunj leaves from there… he hides behind a pillar and secretly watches twinkle… he thinks
kunj: tune keh tho diya twinkle lekin mai tujhe akele kaise chod saktha hun wo bhi iss halat me.. mai farz nahi bhool saktha…
screen shifts to twinkle..
docter comes out. twinkle rushes to him..
twinkle: ab kaisa hai uv.. wo teek tho haina…
dr.: he is out of danger… unhe goli right arm par lagi thi…dar ne ki baath nahi hai.. unko hosh agaya hai…aap unse mil sakthi hain…

twinkle rushes to him..after meeting twtwinkle goes to take medicine… while going she notices kunj n asks..
twinkle: tum gai nahi ab tak.. plz yahan se chale jaav mai nahi chahthi ke fir tumhari wajah se uv ko kuch ho… plz kunj tumhe thoda sa bi care hai mere liye tho plz chale jaav….
kunj: (thinks) kaise bataun twinkle tujhe mai sirf thoda sa care nahi kartha lekin poora pyaar kartha hun..(now speaks) lekin twinkle…
twinkle: kitni baar kahun tumhe…mera naam math lena..aur hamesha kehthe rehthe hona ki ur wish my command… so yeh meri wish hai aur tumhari command so plz fulfill it….(she says all this crying now folds her hands) pls pls yahan se chale jaav plz…(n breakdowns)
kunj: (catches her folded hands n himself having tears in his eyes) tujhe yeh karne ki zarurath nahi hai twinkle…mai chala jaaunga..teri khushi ke liye tujse door jaana pade wo bhi teek hai…( he holds her shoulder n hugs her…) bas ek last hug dede saari zindagi ke liye kaafi hai..(departs her from him) ho sake tho maaf kardena.. uv ka aur khud ka khayal rakhna.. (takes some steps back) at last… yeh sab teri wish ke liye as UR WISH, MY COMMAND…
twinkle leaves from there crying. kunj slowly gets inside uv’s room… uv smiles seeing him..
uv- are tu tho itna bada hero nikla… kya yaar apne bestie se tune yeh baath chupai..
kunj: srry bro.. lekin tu ab kaisa hai…(goes and hugs him lightly)
uv:(smiles) an teek hun.. tu kaisa hai…saare chehre par bruises hai…ointment lagaani chahiye tah…
kunj: nai mai teek hun…okay mai chaltha hun.. asha kartha hun ke tuj jaisa dost sabko mile..bohot miss karunga tujhe..
uv:(confused) ek min, ek min.. tu kya ke raha hai… tu yahan se jaa raha hai…
kunj:(smiles with teary eyes) twinkle ko mera yahan rehna accha nahi lagega..mai chaltha hun apna aur twinkle ka khayal rakhna…
he starts to leave but freezes at the moment when uv asks…
uv: tu twinkle se pyaar kartha haina…
screen freezes with kunj’s shocked face..

To be continued…
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how was it?? what do u think will be kunj’s answer?? will he leave twinkle forever..jhanne ke liye dekh oops pad the rahiye UR Wish, My command…hehehe..
drop ur cmmnts..whether +ve or -ve…any confusion do ask me.. suggestions are always welcome.. ignore mistakes..
byeee…
love u all…#smile

TAMANNA

19 comments

  1. Srija

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    tamanna dear another amazing update👌👌👌😘😘😘😍😍😍😍👏👏👏👏👏
    last part was amazing when uv told him that tu twinkle se pyaar kartha haina
    hope kunj says the truth

  2. SidVee

    Amazing epi.. why always kunj have to suffer😢😢.. hope he tells the truth to uv.. waiting for the next 💕

  3. piya

    Superbbbbb dear and now I won’t be silent any more I will comment on your every you are amazing wr.ITER dear

  4. Ranabulbul

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    Aaaaaa….meri aishu ne post kr diya …
    Yr plz na tw ko jaldi realise krwa yr…
    Kunj bhi sach bol de ..
    Bechara kunj uhuhunnnn..
    Han han to rhi hun…

  5. Sayeeda

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    Amazing episode yrr …. awesome one…. loved it to the core….
    Tamanna u r sooo good writer….the way u express emotions r soo outstanding….. Brilliant yrr…..

    Love you😍😍😍😍

  6. Adya

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    Wooooww tamanna….it was awesome…. really it was so nice….u r indeed a very gud writer…..keep writing

  7. chandra

    very much excited for the next epi . intezaar nehi hota . post soon . aur haa new cmnt dekhkar astonished hone ki zaruraat nehi . sab epi pada hai maine

  8. Ramya

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    Tamanna Awesome twinkle ki halaat karab hai lekhin uv ka sawal haye awesome aur I’m so happy ki uv ne sawal kiya bt i hope kunj yess bolega ab wait nhi hoga plssss jaldi post kar plsss

  9. TwinjSidMin

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    Hey tamanna I’m a silent reader of your ff but after reading your previous episode and this episode I couldn’t resist myself from commenting…yaar you write so well the way you depict emotions is amazing…I felt very bad for Kunj…please jaldi se TwiNj ku mila do…damn excited for Kunj’s reply…please post next soon…aur haan sorry for being a silent reader till now…from now on I’ll try to comment…

  10. antra

    Yaar it was really really awesome.
    I love this kunj verrrryyyy much and I hate twinkle
    My name is also in waiting list
    Pleas update next part spoon
    I am very eager to know more………..thank you

  11. SidMin

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    Loved it awesoem UV is so cute I found Twinj part to be so emotional 🙂 I felt like crying for Kunj bechara and The words your wish my command are so emotional 🙂
    Post soon can’t wait for Yunj talks 🙂
    Sorry for the late comment 🙂 I hope you won’t mind 🙂

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