UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-8)

Hi guys…

I m sorry to make u all cry.. lekin I wanted to show kunj’s pain.. aur mera ff end hone ko araha hai isliye plz do cmmnt… no of my cmmnts have decreased… mujhe patha hai mera ff utna khas nahi hai lekin bacchi ka dil rakhne ke liye kardena…aur ek baat Maine aap sab ko sayeeda ko birthday ko leke bohot confuse kar diya na..I know.. mai kis muh se aap sab se maafi maangu lekin ho sake tho mujhe maaf kardena… sayu tum bhi..
Chul bul yaar plz plz continue ur ff plz plz..

Ab thankyou section…

Supriya18d, rashiverma2199, dreamer…arundhati, payal…, monica, chiku, purnima.agarwal30, sana(sanu), sidvee, sidhanshi, ranabulbul(my chulbul *kal ke liye srry maaf karde*), ramya, sidmin, aur silent readers(if any)

Silent readers(if any) plz do cmmnt yaar..
its much needed..mera few shots end ko araha hai.. aur kunj ko rulane ke liye again sorry.. mai bhi use rotha hua nahi dek sakthi lekin ff ki demand hai yaar.. aaj ke liye bhi srry…

link for previous part-

UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-7)

Recap- uv to propose twinkle and kunj sang a song to lighten up her mood.

Now lets begin…

Everyone are hooting for uv and tw when suddenly they here a gun shoot. Everyone runs here and there listening the sound. Kunj gets shocked when he too hears the sound. He takes out his gun from his leg which was hidden under his lower pant and socks (hope u understood) and runs in search for the source of the gun. Thats when he hears another gun shot.

All were scared n were hiding in the college’s corridor. Twinkle was also scared. Uv was beside her.

Tw: UV, kunj kahan hai…wo kahin nahi dikh raha.. I m really scared… use kuch ho gaya tho… nai nai papa ke baad wahi mera family hai..

Uv: tu positive soch twinkle… wo yahin kahin hoga tu tension math lay..wo bhi hamari tarah kahin chupa hoga…

Suddenly again the gun shot is heard. Now again everyone looks at the source. Twinkle gets a sudden shock. Its none other than kunj. Kunj shoots the attackers who were standing on the terrace pointing the gun towards him. Suddenly there is a serious gun fight between them. Kunj fights all alone with them. He shoots almost every attacker. Everyone comes out from where they were hiding. Kunj searches for twinkle in the crowd.

He notices twinkle standing alone looking all sad. Suddenly he gets shock. He notices a man lying on the ground half unconscious pointing the gun towards twinkle. He shouts “TWINKLE….”

Gun shot is heard. Twinkle freezes at the moment.

. (are Hindi serials me aisa hi hotha haina ab tak screen freeze hi hai *srry for disturbing…continue reading)

It shows uv lying on the pool of blood. Twinkle runs towards him and takes his head in her lap. Twinkle cries n pats his cheeks asking him to wake up. Kunj calls the ambulance and rushes towards them. Ambulance arrives. Uv is rushed in it. Twinkle sits beside him crying n asking him to open his eyes. All this while kunj feels guilty because he is not able protect an innocent. The ambulance arrives at hospital and is taken to operation theater. Twinkle stands outside crying. Kunj is also present there. He finally speaks up.

Kunj: twinkle… I m sor..

Tw:(angrily glaring him) mat lo tum mera naam tumhare muh se.(holds him by his shirt’s collar) mil gaya tumhe sukun. Kyun nahi bataya mujhe ke tum soldier ho. What u thought that I will not allow u to live in my house.. haan??

Kunj: (bowing his head)mujhe laga tu hurt hogi… Aur papa ne bhi mujhe mana..

Twinkle: (interrepting him) agar tum pehle batathe to mujhe itna dukh nahi hotha jitna aaj ho raha hai..

By saying this she falls on her knees. Kunj too knelt down matching her height. He keeps his hand on her shoulder but twinkle jerks him and says..

Twinkle: don’t touch me… tumhari wajah se hi uv is halat me hai.. kunj just leave from here…

Kunj: par twinkle… ek baar meri baat..

Twinkle: I said leave… tum mujhe apna chehra math dikhana.

She turns her face other side. Kunj looks at her teary eyed. He slowly gets up from there. Tears flow from his eyes. He turns and walks from there crying silently. Twinkle looks at him going and cries..she so wants to stop him but her anger over powers her…

Screen freezes with twinkle and kunjs crying face…

To be continued….


How was it.?? Agar accha nahi tha tho sorry.. cmmnts karna nhi bulna..

Drop ur cmmnts…whether +ve or -ve..any confusion do ask me…suggestions are always welcome…if any mistakes pls ignore…


Love u all…


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  1. dreamer..arundhati

    Tammu …omg..im crying…its to gud…ctd soon

  2. Nice

  3. Ranabulbul

    Yr aishu..
    Aj bhi rulla diya …
    But koi nhi tu hai to koi GAM nhi hai…
    And u better be sorry coz I am only ur chulbul…
    And eli was so emotional post soon krde

  4. I am a silent reader and I read all parts of your ff dear but today you just compel me to comment your ff is solo amazing and unique keep going dear

  5. Awesome tamanna

  6. Srija

    it’s very emotional
    loved it yaar
    it made me crying??????

  7. Awesome epi… Soo sad aj bhi dukhi kar diya mujhe… But it’s ok i know gam ke bad khushiya hi ati hey… Post next part soon… Egarly waiting for it…

  8. Adya

    Haaannn haaannn rula Diya n tamanna……..very bad……….u made me cry soooooo much…….. Chalo koi ni…….the episode was really very nice nd I really loved the fight……he he he….I’m like that only………..u nailed it…….. awaitin

  9. Adya

    Haaannn haaannn rula Diya n tamanna……..very bad……….u made me cry soooooo much…….. Chalo koi ni…….the episode was really very nice nd I really loved the fight……he he he….I’m like that only………..u nailed it…….. waiting for the next part EAGERLY…….

  10. Hey tamanna see i listen ur request i was a silent reader of ur ff but now i comment on ur ff also and epi was awesome luvd it…… Post nxt asap plzzzz now my 1 request

  11. Chiku

    Awesome ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️????
    Nex tjaldi post kar sweetie
    Plzzz for me

  12. Awesome epi.. n so emotional.. was in tears??.. can’t imagine kunj crying ever.. but anyways, loved how kunj saved everyone from those attackers n how uv saved twinkle.. n ur ending this ??.. plz continue it plzz.. do cont soon ?

  13. Next part jaldi upload kariyo ?
    Itssss toooooooo goood. Just loved it

  14. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing emotional fabulous epi

  15. Kritika14

    It was so nice! I loved it. Post the next part soon! Loves xx

  16. SidMin

    Loved it 🙂 Twinkle is blaming Kunj why ? Feeling really sad for Kunj 🙂 Post soon 🙂

  17. Ramya

    Loved it N ha plsss dnt end
    Yr uv ho Kya gaya suddenly n plssss don’t separate twinj Loved it

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