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Home»Fan Fiction»UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-5)
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UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-5)

twinjfan.tamannaBy twinjfan.tamannaOctober 2, 201615 Comments3 Mins Read
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Hi…m back jaldi naa…lekin mai bohot sad hun…hamare holidays postponed hogaye hain..Maine socha ab no school only holidays…acche se maza karungi, soungi aur sirf aur sirf tu par rahungi…lekin lagtha hai mere khushi ko nazar lag gai…mere cmmnts full on drop hogayen hai…kya mera ff boring hotha jaa raha hai…plz do tellsrry fr bakbak…n thanks fr cmmnting…

Link for summary n previous epi-
Part 4

Now lets begin…

Kunj and twinkle are still fighting n room is covered with feathers …twinj are panting n are covered with feathers sticking in thier hair, clothes.. both are still fighting running up n down from bed…standing on chair…twinke is standing beside the bed…kunj comes..both bang eachother nd both falls on bed with twinkle above kunj…both gets engrossed in long but cute eyelock…(raabta instumental from agent vinod plays *wo jo boy version raabta song shuru hone pehle daalne wala music*)

Kunj slowly tucks her hair behind her ear….n removes the feathers from her hair…both comes to thier senses…both are embarrassed.. there is an awkward moment n pin drop silence…kunj breaks the silence…

Ku- (hugs her n says) tujhe embarrass hone ki zarurath nahi hai…ham tho best frnds haina aur pehle tho tune mujhe kiss bi kiya ha…(stops n bites his lips)

Tw-(leaves him n kisses his cheeks) tho kya ab nahi kar sakthi…(again hugs him to hide her blush)..

Ku-(smiles still hugging her) ohoo..tu jab chahe kar sakthi hai…kyunki ‘ur wish, my command’…

Next scene…

Twinkle is preparing something n kunj is sitting on the kitchen slab… He is teasing, tickling her. And sometimes cute eyelocks had been occured. Both enjoying each others company. Remembering thier childhood.

They bring thier dinner n were about to start when someone rings the bell. Twinkle open’s the door. There standed a good looking man with height as same as kunj. He begins…

M- Hi… I m yuvraj…mai aaj hi yahan aaj hi shift huwan hun…wo wale ghar me…(pointing toward a house which is just beside twinj’s house.

Twinkle- hi… mai twinkle..

Kunj too comes there..

Ku- siyappa queen…kon aaya h…(stops as he sees UV standing at the door)*to tw* yeh kon hai?

UV-(giggles)Tum siyappe karthi ho…

Tw- (angrily glares kunj)yeh hamara naya neighbour…

Ku-(gives sorry wala look)

UV-Hi myself yuvraj…yuvraj Luthra…u can call me yuvi..(shakes hand with kunj)..

Ku-(smiles)kunj…kunj sarna..

Uv to tw- so u r twinkle kunj sarna.. tum dono ki jodi bohot hi cute hai…

Twinj-(looks at each other) no..ur misunderstanding…

Ku- actually m her PG..

Tw- n also my childhood bestie..

UV- okay mai chaltha hun..kal milenge…byeee..

Twinj-(smiles) byee..

Twinkle closes the door…

Tw- bohot friendly haina..

Ku-(smiles)haan..

Tw looks at kunj n then starts hitting his chest by her hands..

Ku-are are..kya hua..

Tw- khud sadu hoke muje siyappa queen kehthe ho…tumhe tho mai..

Kunj starts running n twinkle is behind him..

The screen fades with cute laughters of our twinj…

To be continued…
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How was the epi…did u liked…n UV ki entry hogai…

Drop ur cmmnts…whether +ve or -ve..any confusion do ask me…suggestions are always welcome…if any mistakes pls ignore…

Byee…

Love u all…

TAMANNA,

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    15 Comments

    1. Sana(sanu) on October 2, 2016 8:31 pm

      I hope so uv is not in a villain avtar….
      Overall i loved it…..

    2. SidMin on October 2, 2016 10:00 pm

      Wow Loved it UV ke entry 🙂 I hope he is not the villain but Kunj getting jealous of Twiraj bonding would do 🙂 Post soon 🙂

    3. Chiku on October 2, 2016 10:06 pm

      Lovely ❤️?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
      Cute episode
      Next jaldi upload karna

    4. Sayeeda on October 2, 2016 10:47 pm

      Tamanna yrrrr I’m so sorry yrr for not commenting on ur previous episodes yrr……I’m very busy… but when ever I will get time I will surely comment… promise…

      Coming to the episode…. it’s amazing yrr… awesome one…..
      Yuvi’s entry is really good…. let’s see whether he turn out to be a good guy or bad one…..

      Loved it to the core….

      Love you???

    5. rashiverma2199 on October 3, 2016 12:04 am

      Tamana awesome episode….. Loved it ….

    6. Payal .... on October 3, 2016 12:40 am

      Amazing

    7. Purnima.agrawal30 on October 3, 2016 1:53 am

      awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi

    8. ranabulbul on October 3, 2016 5:58 am

      Haye meri aishu….it was lovely so cute and full of romance
      Loved it.
      Plz post soon…
      And plz han tera ff boring nhi hai

    9. Ramya on October 3, 2016 6:14 am

      Hey tamanna
      Awesome episode loved twinj scenes
      Plss asap

    10. tara on October 3, 2016 7:17 am

      tamanna.. this was so good.. cant express..
      awesome wala…

    11. Romaisha on October 3, 2016 8:43 am

      Hey yaar! Super cute epi!
      Seems like yuvi is now new?
      Hmm.. Please post next epi soon
      Love you ?

    12. Monica on October 3, 2016 3:34 pm

      Really cute! Post the next one soon. Loves xx

    13. sanjanaagrawal on October 3, 2016 5:03 pm

      Awesome … yaar … and so u are having ur holidays …. I am jealous of u I have to go to school even after next day of exam … pity on me …. and plz continue bcoz this is a unique idea …. sry for not commneting in previous ones bcoz of exmas …. now I will surely comment ….

      Take care
      Keep smiling ??

    14. SidVee on October 3, 2016 6:24 pm

      Amazing epi.. loved their cute moments n fightings.. uv’s entry was superb.. ur ff isn’t boring.. do cont soon ?

    15. dreamer...arundhati on October 4, 2016 11:55 am

      Tammmu I m sorry for not commenting
      Maaf karde…plz…
      Superb epi

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