UR wish, MY commandโ€ฆ.twinj (part-3)

Hi, tamanna here…thankyou so much fr cmmnting..u know my cmmnts dropped from 21 to 15…plz do say m I boring u all..if u feel its not nice u can say me as I said whether it be positive or negative…so plz do comment..

Lets begin…

Epi starts tw seeing album n smiling…she says
Tw-kunj tum yahan nahi hokar bi mujhe smile kara rahe ho…I m missing u…plz come back…

She comes out of her thoughts when Someone rings the door bell…she opens the door n gets shock..both- TUM!!! It now shows that its none other than kunj standing shocked(pretending) on the door..

Tw- tum yahan kya kar rahe ho….tum mere picha kar rahe the na…mai acchi tarah jhanthi hun tum jaise ladko ko..beautiful ladki deki nahi ki chaalu…(keeps blabbering)..
Kunj tries to speak but tw doesn’t let him do so..he keeps on listening to her talks thinking that she will end now but tw is also tw she keeps on blabbering…its enough for kunj…he closes her mouth by his hand…tw stops n looks at him giving death glares…she looks on n then bites his hand…
Ku-aaaahh.. kya bhooki sherni…aaimaa…(makes crying wala face)…
Tw-tumhena aisa hi karna chahiye…tum Jaiso ke wajah se hi hamara samaj ganda ho raha…ummmm..umm..(stops as kunj puts the gumtape on her mouth)
Ku-(laugh) ab tu mujhe bite bi nahi kar sakthi…hehehe…
Tw-ummm…ummm..(passes death glare to him)

Ku-achha okay..ok..ab mai kehtha hun tu sun..Wo actually mai chinki ka cousin hun…usne kaha ki tujhe pg chahiye..aur mujhe chahiye tha ghar…so here I m..aur mera naam ku…(stops as he sees something…)

He leaves her hands (forgot to mention kunj was holding tws hand so she was nt able to take the gumtape off her lips)…he goes near the album n pics it up…by now tw was released so she directly picks up the flower vase kept on the side table n was about to hit him when…

Ku-twinkle…meri tw…
Tw-hw…tumhe mera naam kaise patha…tum tho koi bade gunde lagthe ho..n hw dare u call me yours..tumhe sharam nahi athi…(she keeps on blabbering…)
Ku-(frustrated) bus kar meri maa…kitna bolthi hai..patha hai mera naam kya hai..kunj…kunj sarna..kuch yaad bi hai..

Tw-(tw gets a big shock..her eyes is filled)kya..tum kunj ho…tum kunj nahi ho sakthe mera kunj kisi ladki ka aisa picha nahi karta tha..tum kitne badal gaye ho..ur so chang…
Ku-(interepts her)bas kar yaar siyappa queen..kitne baathe karthi hai..(nw dramatically…) meri tw bhi aisi nahi thi…woh itni baathien jo nahi karthi thi n also wo bohot cute bhi thi aur maine kaha na ki mai yahan pg bankar aya hun..mujhe chinki ne yahan ka patha diya…aur tu athe hi mujpar badak pa…(he stops as tw hugs him..he is taken back..he is surprised but then respondes)
Tw-(crying *khushi ke aansoo u know*)kunj..tum kahan..the..I missed u so much..tum kahan chale gaye the..*sobs*

Ku- tw tu ro kyun rahi hai..tujhe mera aana pasand nahi hai kya…accha teek hai mai Chala jatha hun..(he leaves her n turns to leave)
Tw-hawww..tum kya keh rahe the..chala jaun ga mai..(mimics him)tum na bohot bure ho..abi aaye ho aur jaane ki baath kar rahe ho..abhi toh mere Papa bhi mujhe chod ke chale gaye (starts to cry)..
Ku-(tries to console her) accha srry baba.. srry mai mazaak kar raha tha..mai kahin nahin jaaunga..ab khush..ab smile karegi…
Tw-(her crying face turns to angry one)
Ku-ab kya hogaya..(innocently)

Tw-(starts beating him on his chest)tumna sach me bohot bure ho..aur tumne mujhe kya kAha ki Paile cute thi..kya ab nahin hun??
Ku-(smiles at her innocence)haan teek hi kaha Maine…pehle sirf cute thi ab beautiful bi hogayi ho….
tw-(blushes) Tumna bohot badmaash ho gaye (hits his chest playfully)
Ku-ye lo ji..ab taareef karo tho bhi maar…acchai ka tho zamana hi nahi raha..(pouts)
Tw-(smiles) chalo andar akhir tum mere pg jo ho..

Tw n kunj side hugs each other n then moves inside…

To be continued…
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Hw was it boring…I guess boring…or jaise aap sabki guess yes kunj is only her pg…

Drop ur cmmnts…whether positive or negative..any confusion do ask me…suggestions are always welcome…

Byee…

Love u all

TAMANNA,

39 comments

  1. Ayu

    |Registered Member

    tamanna u made me smile n have tears at the same time….how do u manage to do sa?? Fab epi dear. Cont soon๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  2. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Tamanna my Tammu( hope u don’t Mind me calling u with this name ) ….yrrr I also missed u so much ….today I saw ur mail nd found ur msg ….
    Awwwwww ……my Tammu was missing me ….me too was missing u ๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡….
    I thought to revert u back but then I thought to reply u through my comment so that I can make u slight happy ….

    Ur ff is dammmmm lovely…. good ….I’m really lovi’n ur ff yrr …
    awesome ……
    loved it to the core ……

    love you…. nd missed u๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜„๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜˜

    • sayoo.. why would I mind u calling me tammu..infact I m really happy..tume patha nahi hw much im happy today by seeing ur cmmnt..I guess I m the happiest in this whole earth…I m crying…no one made me feel so special till now…I don’t have any brother or sister bt today I guess I got a sister whom I hv always carving fr…mai khushi ke maare paagal ho gai thi…jab maine tumhara cmmnt dekha I was really really happy…jis jis ko mujhe thanks kehna tha unhe mai awesome amazing kehkar lik rahi thi aur jinko awesome kehna tha unko mai thankyou keh rahi thi..n by ur this u didnt made me slight happy bt u my life…ab tum soch rahi hogi ki yeh kya kehrahi hai sab day kehthe hain aur yeh life kehrahi hai..bt its true…I will never be able to forget u in my whole life…
      sayoo im really missing u so much…

      love u..

  3. SidVee

    Awesome epi.. twinj scenes were so cutee๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜.. it wasn’t at all boring.. I loved it.. do cont soon ๐Ÿ’•

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