UR wish, MY command….twinj (part-1)


hi,tamanna here….thank you so much for cmmnting…as many of u want happy ending..it will be happy ending…actually mujhe bi happy ending hi chahya tha…i wanted to tell u all igot thid idea from main hoon na film n doremon stand by me..crazy na…thank u so much for cmmnts.. love u…i have replaid to all of cmmnts…n soo-i m really sorry yaar i m a twinj [sidmin]fan…plz do keep reading my ff…n someone asked me about my age i want to introduce myself…
i leave in udupi, karnataka,India…i m 14 years old…i m in 9th std..have no brothers or sisters but have many frnds including u all..really a big crazy fan of sid, twinj [sidmin]..n also a fan of armaan malik…doremon..n hw can i forgot my tu ff writerts..i m obsessed fan of tu ff writers as i m inspired by u ll…fav songs-many depending upon the mood…but ‘bol dona zara’ all time fav..loves singing…interested in fashion designing n making frnds…

lets begin with my first episode…
a guy gets down from train with smoke of train all around him …a bag around his one arm…aww he is so cute… [if u have seen main hoo na film than u can imagine of shah rukh khans entry in train…as i loved the entry] he comes out of railway station…asu have guessed he is our kunj sarna…
A girl is shown crying at one corner room…her eyes are shown it is full of water…it is so cute….then her cheeks from which tears are continuosly flowing with pink blush on it…her nose is red like tomato…now her lips which is rosy pink from which she is murmuring something…
girl-papa…why u left me…i dont have mom…nw u also…why papa why…why only me…plz come back papa …i cant live without u…[n she starts to cry harder]…no twinkle no….ur strong..u cant cry..ur good girl..(quickly wipes her tears)[yes u guessed it right she is our twinkle]..
by saying this she puts the photo of rt in her bag n runs outside…
screen shifts to railway’s station..
here kunj is searching for network for his mobile…..

ku-yaar mai ye kahan phas gaya…yahan par tho network bi nahi hai….aur is ladki ka photo bhi dwld nahi ho raha…ab mai ise kahan doonduga..
he is seeing mobile n doesnt look up…here tw is running n she doesnt notice kunj…then what..BANG!!!…both bangs with each other…
without looking at each other..
tw-i m sorry…

ku-(still looking at mob)what sorry haan..dekh kar nahi chal sakthi ky…..(suddenly looks at her face n gets lost….(he thinks)..yaar yeh kitni cute hai..but why is she crying??)
he moves his hand towards her face…she looks on..he wipes her tears..her hair is flowing..both are looking so cute n says
ku- yaar itni si baat ke liye koi rotha hai kya.. I m sorry.. now plz smile…
tw-(smiles) mai us baat ke liye nahi ro rahi thi..anyways leave it..bye..I have to go..
ku-(smiles)hasthi reh acchi lagthi hai..aur yeh kya Teri(pulling her nose) naak tamatar ho gai hai..
tw-(fake annoyed face)tumna…
before she could complete kunj runs away…
tw-(smiling to herself) jalla (mad)n walks away…
kunj-(having a broad smile on his face)-jalli (mad) par cute hai..,n walks away…
so how was it??I didn’t thought I will post so soon…ur cmmnts made me do so!!! so plz keep commenting n supporting me….love u,
plz drop ur cmmnts…Whether +ve or -ve…
love u all…

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  1. Priya_

    Cute episode..
    But was a short one..
    Waiting for more episodes that too long ones
    Plz post soon

  2. Purnima.agrawal30

    awesome amazing fabulous cute emotional epi

  3. Sameera

    Awww so cute epi
    Amazing tamanna
    Loved it yaar

  4. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Oye tamanna
    Short tha but mast tha
    Now post next one soon
    Love u ?????

  5. Chiku

    Its awesome ???????????????????????????????????????????
    But can u plz change the dp of ur ff. I think sidhant is only playing kunjs role in ur ff

  6. Sayeeda

    Awww… It was sooooooooo cute episode… Awesome..amazing…
    Loved it to the core…
    Love u ??

  7. Thanmy

    Tamannaaaaa kya episode thi yaar awesome especially twin scenes
    Even I like armaan malik
    Same choice yaar
    And pls do cont soon

  8. Awesome epi… Loved it dear…

  9. dreamer....arundhati

    Tannu so sorry bahut busy thi so couldn’t comment… Wunnerful epi

  10. Wow superb.. loved it.. loved twinj’s convo??.. do cont soon ?

  11. Kritika14

    such a cute episode ? I loved it. Continue soon x Love ya ?

  12. Romaisha

    Shocked yaarrrr it was tooo cuteeee ??????????????
    Haa i also love that movie!!

    ?Hmmm kiska hai yuh tumko inta zar a main hoon nah?

    ??? ???
    Love you .. Post soon 🙂

  13. Angita

    Awwwwww that was shoooo cute loved it dear??❤❤??

  14. Sanjanaagrawal

    Awesome …..

  15. Shatakshi

    Awww tamanna
    It was shooo cute
    I really loves it
    Love u dear❤❤

  16. Aamu

    sorrylate but it was just amazing

  17. SidMin

    Loved the episode cute one and Twinkle is strong

  18. No issues. I appreciate that ur a hardcore fan of twinj n i am a hardcore fan of twiraj. Well i was never a twinj hater but couldnt find d spark in their luv story. Do cont n entertain ur readers. Bye tc

  19. Aksa(SidMin's and the ff writers die hard fan...)

    Hayeee..same pinch I’m turning 14 dis year nd I’m also in 9th..wow…and coming back to the epi..it was wonderful..luved twinj’s first meeting…overall..*claps*

  20. Shreya098

    Such a cute epi…
    . Enjoyed it

  21. Hii tamnna.. Cutie pie hru.. It was awesome…

  22. Baby

    hey tamana vry cute episode luvd it
    post nxt asap

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