only for ur happiness…. twinj (os)

hi…its me tamanna…tamanna.twinjfan here…im here to share my first piece of writing..i m hell nervous……my imagination on current track..this is after yesterdays epi with just difference..here after knowing truth about tw n uvs fake marriage n his[kunj] babys miscarriage…he again does plastic surgery n comes in his original face that is our sids face…then it is same till yesterdays track but with our sids face not with naman shaw [i hope u have understood] in simple after knowing tws truth kunj changes his face[sidhant gupta] n uv has again turned to negetive…nothing change in track except kunj face [naman to again sid]…hope u like it..

let’s begin….
In pub after tw said to kunj that uv is winning n he[kunj] is losing…he decides to leave her for her happiness.he thought that after his return everyone’s life have been mixed up n if he will leave them than it may become normal again..so he decides to leave for london..
kunj is in his room….he thinks about his time spent with tw n hw she said uv is winning..he thinks “its all bcz of me…i shld nt have left tw..i m responsible for all this.. i think i should leave her she was happy with uv..i will leave her fr her happiness…i love u tw n will always love u only..”he is crying while thinking this..
screen shifts to tw’s room…
here tw is also crying..she is also thinking about thier memories n hw kunj was silently weeping in his car…tw thinks”i love u kunj…u shld have trusted me… why u did this to me…why u left me 5years back…it is difficult to forget hw u left me, hw u didnt trusted me…”n cries harder…
judai from badlapur plays in BG..

SCENE 2 AT AIRPORT..
sarna nd taneja family except tw are present there…all have come to bid bye kunj.. kunj is wearing black shades so no one can see his red eyes due to continues flow of tears..its time for his departure…he hugs all family members..he first meets anand,next monoher,usha,bebe…then he comes infront of leela..he folds his in apologiozing manner…he says
kunj-” sorry ma…yeh sab… meri waj..he se hi ho.raha hai…meri waa..pas aanese tw.. ki zindagi ulaj gai hai,…mera yahan..se jaana hi teek hoga..mai ek.. kharab beta aur.. pathi hun..i dont deserve.. her love…”
he said all this controlling his tears and now keeping stone in his heart..
ku-aap uski.. shaadi uv se.. karaado..use u..v kush… rakhega..
leela saw tears flowing through his eyes n he is trying to stop his tears…she holds his folded hand n says…
leela-yehsa nahi kehthe puttar..isehi saccha pyaar kehthe hain puttar…apne pyaar ke khushi ke liye apni khushi khurbaan karna..mai b kahan khogayi thi…mai kaise bhulgayi jo tumne mere tw kiya tha…aur aaj bhi kar raha hai puttar..aise bohot kam log hothe hain…aur aisa mat kehna puttar tu pyaar deserve nahi kartha..tw kitni kush kismat hai ke usne tujhse pyaar kiya..
screen shifts to tw..
here she gets to know about uv n pallavi..she leaves for airport in car…she thinks”hw can i do this..hw can i nt trust my kunj…i should have trusted him..plz kunj dont go..dont leave me again..”she driving towards airport as fast as possible..
sanam teri kasam song plays in bg…
AT AIRPORT
kunj nw comes to uv..he says in choked voice
kunj-uv mai… tw ko tere hawale kar.. raha hun…use hame..sha khu..sh rakna…she de..serve happiness”
uv-[in a taunting way] i know hw to care fr my tw..tujhe yeh kehne ki zaroorat nai…obviosly usne mujhe isiliye chuna hai..nt like u..5 years pahele use chod ke chale gaye ab aakar mujhe sikha the ho..”

kunj didnt say anything n just left..
sanam teri kasam continues..
here kunj is moving towards enterance with tears flowing through his eyeswhich not visible through his shade n tw is in car driving..tw is allso crying..screen parts in thier faces..
tw arrives at airport..she sees her family members n ask them about kunj..she rushes inside airport..uv is shocked to see tw there.. kunj is checking in..tw searches kunj [note:song is also playing..so u can imagine hw]..
finally tw finds kunj n rushes to him…while coming near to him she takes baby steps n relaxation smile on her face..she pats his sholder…he is shocked to see tw…he immediatly hugs her..she hugs him back..after few minutes kunj parts away..
kunj-tw u shld go now..its time to board my flight..
tw is shocked…she starts to beat him on his chest like baby n says
tw-what do u mean kunj sarna…tum samajh the kya ho apne apko..tum kahoge toh mai chali jaungi..[nowstarts to cry]mr. sarna ,mai tumhare bina nahi jee sakthi..I LOVE U KUNJ SARNA…tum paanch saal pehle mujhe chod ke jaa chuke the..ab badi mushkil se mile ho ab mai tumhe jaane nahin doongi..u get it…tum nahi jaaoge…
kunj immediatly hugs her n she also hugs him back…he says “i love u too..”they part away..tw removes his shades n looks at his eyes which is red n tears dried up..she becomes teary eyed…
tw-itna pyaar karthe ho mujhse…[she asks]
kunj- kudse zyada…
n both joins their forehead..

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Hw was it…i know boring..first tme haina isliye…i m really really nervous..
so pls do cmmnt ..plz..plz..whether +tve or -tve..
eggs,tomatoes,shoes sab allowed hai..lekin shoes’ sirf branded wale..oky..arey use honge na yaar…n love u..
TAMANNA,

53 comments

  1. Sonali05

    |Registered Member

    Don’t dare to say it boring….
    Aww it was too cute…
    Fantastic episode
    Hope this will happen in tei…
    As sidmin is made for each other …
    If these happen then again tei gain its charm…
    I won’t able to believe that it was ur first os…
    As u r fabulous writer..
    Loved it to d core…
    & do write more…
    Waiting for next…

    • thankyou thankyou so much…love u yaar. .I will try to write more…actually I thought if I get comments I will post that too…bt it gt deleted…koi nai agli baar post karungi…

  2. Rochika

    omg!!!!!!!!!!!! awwww soooo cuteeee story it was….tamanna u rocked it….and yeah no eggs tomatoes and shoes for u..hahahahhahha…only AMAZING! AWESOME!!!!! DHAMAKEDAAR!!!!! DAMN GUDDDD!!!!!!! DAMN SUPERB!!!! EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!! OUTSTANDING FOR U……MUAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!! HAPPY?…and yeah aise hi likhte rehna….well done!!!!!!
    JHAKASSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!…..

  3. dreamer....arundhati

    Tamanna this piece was a blessing on this depressing tei track.. Lovely.. Hope cvs shows sumthing like this.. Do write more.. Luved it

  4. SIDMIN-Daamini

    |Registered Member

    Hey tamanna
    Loved it
    Hope reality mein bhi aisa ho jaaye I mean tei Mein bhi aisa ho jaaye
    Unhe yeh padna chaahiye tab hi Unhe akal aayegi
    Amazing
    Keep writing such amazing ffs dude

  5. Sayeeda

    |Registered Member

    Hey Tamanna dear…. What to compliment u… U seriously made me speechless…. Though it was ur first OS but ur writings skills shows maturity in it…. U wrote it amazingly well….

    I just hope whatever u wrote happens in real… Hope Sid comes back to TEI nd finally our Twinj will be together… It will be a relief to see Sidmin as our Twinj… I really miss them like hell….. πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘………

    Amazing… Awesome OS…
    Loved it to the core…..
    Love u nd thanks for mentioning my name in ur status πŸ’πŸ˜†πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜πŸ˜

    • I cant believe…such big writers are commenting on my boring os..it was just a dream to get cmmnts from u all but it came true today…I also miss sidmin alot…aur status me mai tumhara naam kaise nahi daalthi…ur the one who registered me…love u too…

  6. shikha

    very nice story
    may it come true hope so
    its a very emotional one
    and doesn’t seems to be like your first one
    and its not at all boring its interesting

  7. Sameera

    |Registered Member

    Amazing tamanna awsm yaar
    Hope real tei becomes like this
    Twinj forever loved it yaar
    Do write more like this
    Lovely os

  8. SidMin

    |Registered Member

    Tamanna Loved it wish it happens in TEI for real I mean getting Sid back in the role of Kunj and then uniting them Loved it you should be the writer of TEI what say
    Loved it πŸ™‚

    • omg…omg…aaj tak mai jiske ff padke cmmnt karthi thi…aaj mujhe unke cmmnt mil rahein hai…I m blessed…I m so happy…aur mere 1st os me itna bada complement…thankyou thankyou so much…love u yaar sidmin…

  9. Cp

    Fantaaaasticc….lovely Os
    I want writers to write the same stroryyyy …..fingers crossedπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

  10. Thanmy

    |Registered Member

    Awesome fabulous mindblowing I just loved it matlab agar saach mei yeh tei me hota it would be awesome I just loved it

  11. Ayu(shreya)

    Amazing!!! Someone pls hold me….kaash aisa hota….main khushi ke maare pagal hoo jaati!! So nice!!

  12. Aamu

    |Registered Member

    hey tamanna… first of alll it was awesome,amazing….fa…
    ekdum jhkaas…
    i loved it
    u know wat i just now open tu to freshen up my mind n read urs n akankhas but cmnted only on urs as i dont hav time….i hav to study also….
    but i know ki first time kuch upload karte hai to cmnts milti hai to kitni happiness milti hai….
    dats y i commented only for u…
    but really it was a beautiful piece..n feell pain wen kunj was trying to stop her tears n his red eyes…really main want to killll dat uv….huh
    do write more…

  13. Shatakshi

    |Registered Member

    Kaash Tamanna ki yeh tamanna puri ho jayeπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Aur writers ko thodi aakal aa jaye
    Really it was Amazing
    Loved it to the core
    N I much say ur first attempt was Bang On!!!
    Keep writing
    Love u❀❀❀

  14. Jisha

    |Registered Member

    Bht acha hai… loved it… don’t be nervous…u r fabulous at writing….kaash tei aisa ho sakta..I know they won’t…but I am sure ultimately it is gonna be twinj…

    • woow…jisha ur comenting…omg…i m a big fan of ur ff…I m really blessed…thankyou so much..ab cmmnts mill kar thodi nervousness kum horahi hai…yah I too think…its gonna be twinj at end..love u..

  15. Sanjanaagrawal

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    Awesome ….. loved it faboulous ….. 😍😍😍😍

    Hope this happened in real serial also …. plz sid return back we all are missing u like hell ….. plz …….πŸ™πŸ™

    One day show will loose its charm bcoz of absence of twinkle’s real kunj ….. 😟😟

    Love u jasmin ….. love u sid …. and loved ur os ….. 😘😘

    Come back with more ….

  16. thankyou so much guys…fr commenting…my nervousness has just vanished by seeing ur comments…love u all..if I get time I ll surely post another os…as an idea is revolving In my head…

  17. Romaisha

    |Registered Member

    Awww!! Damnn i loved it yaar!! Awesome .. Why this can’t happen for real? *pouts* it was too good yaar … Love u :* πŸ™‚
    Please keep writing n it wasn’t boring at all ..

  18. Monica

    |Registered Member

    Don’t even dare to say this boring! it was just so good! hoping for the shows to take this track πŸ˜‚ You write really well dude! keep writing as i would love to read more and more os’s or ff’s written by you. Love ya πŸ’•

  19. SidVee

    It was super awesome.. was not at all boring.. I just want this to happen in tei.. I want sid back😒😒😒.. missing our original twinj..

  20. Baby

    |Registered Member

    oh god rula hi diya sch mein
    amazing pata hai mein bhi kuch kuch aisa hi soch rhi thi ff ke liye apni bt a bit was changed koi nhi
    yr u were amazing luvd it 2 d core
    roro kr halat kharab hai
    hmm hehehe yr u r amazing rtr
    twinj fan tamana
    luv u dear u rckd

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