once upon a time…. When villain meets his angel…. Chapter-11

Hey guys heena again here sorry for the late post guys bt i wasnt in mood so really sorry guys….i hope u hv read the promo

Our journey is left only for 13 or 14 chapters guys…and guys do read my bestie sunehri’s ff in qubool hai page – sanam aur ahil..eh kahani hai do lafazon ki…( our raglak are too in the ff named as ayaz n nazia n swasan as shazia n sarfaraz) hope u guys read it

so guys inf of my talks, here we go wid our Chapter-11,

recap- raglak’s dance..

at dance room_
raglak ends their dance wid a pose and swasan are totally shocked wid them and lill embrassed too as they acted lyk them…bt both of them clap n raglak realizes swasan presence bt composes themselves.

Laksh’s Pov_
oh god yeh kya kiya maine shit ptana nai sanskar aur swara pta nai kya soch rahe honge yar hey bhagwan kaha fsa diya mujhe laksh yeh kya kiya beta eerhh… Yeh kya bol raha hu main laksh nai lucky… (oh god what the hell i did what would sanskar and swara would be thinking abt me.. Oh god were u got me stuck laksh what u did dis… Ahhh what m i speaking its nt laksh its lucky… )

Dis girl is driving me crazy yar
(guys dis all he was thinking in mind bt nw he said dis loudly)

ragu ye tune kya kiya(what u did dis ragu!) laksh maine kya kiya she asked me (laksh what i did) omg ragu can read what i m thinking in my mind (he goes near rags says) ragu tumhe kaisa pta chla k me kya soch rahu (ragu how did u came know what was i thinking) lucky mere bhai tumhari ragu ko hi nai magar mujhe aur shona ko bhi sunai diya hai(lucky my bro nt only ur ragu bt even i n shona listened what u spoke)sanky said wid shocked expressions.. omg it means i didn’t thought bt i spoke everythng oh gosh what will happn now i thought i hope dis time toh i m thinking only… ragu what u did dis to me yar i thought laksh kya kiya humne ragu asked me curiously while as swasan were shocked n i was lyk 440 volt ka shock laggya oh my ragu is angel woh to i know bt ye kya tha

(again he spoke loudly) ye to sach me hai laksh kya hai hum sach me btaye na ragu again spoke while both swasan smirked oh shit lucky tu to gya ye samjh gye before i could do or say sanky started are my bholi bestie woh laksh meant that y…. ouchhhh he screamed thank god swaru saved me she winked at me and i spoke are swaru take sanky home n rago cum hum bahar jake bat karte hai i said to her magar laksh sanskar ko laga hai i should go to him na n he was telling sumthng na haan kya bolna tha sanskar n tum thik hona she asked sanky arre laddo sanku is ok me hu na laddo u dnt wry n me lejati hu laddo isse sanku ko dard ho raha hoga na hain na sanku..(oh laddo i m here wid sanky u dnt worry he is ok n i m talking him wid me sanky it is paining ri8?) sanky nodded in yes Thank god swaru hitted him varna aj toh i was gone laksh ap hume btane wale the na she asked curiously umn… Rago woh… Woh.. Kya hua laksh aisa kya k ap chupa rahe hai humse kya itne bure hai hum she asked wid a sad face oh no yeh kya kiya lucky tune tu kyu ata hai kisike itne pass kyu har kiski lyf bigad raha hai she is such a pious soul how can u hurt her how can u lucky a tear skipped my eyes
15 minutes ago
Heena Dalal
No lucky u cant hurt her u have to stay away i cant let the history repeat dis time its better i slowly go away from her n her life…
Laksh pov ends_

he is getting nonstop tears to hide he turns his back and is trying to stop them as he doesnt
wants his ragu to get worried…bt ragini gets curious wid his dis behaviour

Ragini’s Pov_
we danced so well just like swasan they both got embrassed bt it was a new feeling when i was dancing wid laksh it was first time i danced wid sumbody so openly n enjoyed it whenever i saw in his eyes i always noticed lots of innocence bt a unknown fear an unknown pain… Whenever i saw into his eyes i just wished bss yeh lamha yahi ruk… jaye bss yeh waqt yuhi tham jaye… Wait bt what happend next was lyk shocking he said rago yeh tune kya kiya (rago what did u do) and when i asked after a pause again he spoke ragu sach main hai (ragu is really that) i was so confused kya hai hum aur kya kiya humne aur jaise hi sanskar hume btane wala tha tab pta nahi kaise usse choot lag gai aur ab laksh pta nai kyu nai bta rahe aur hume samjh nai a raha akhir aisa kya kiya jo humne jo unho ne humse muh mod liya bss aur nai saha jata humse i went to his side n laksh apki khasmoshi hume marr dalegi plz btaye akhir kya kiyu humne i couldnt control more n i cried infront him plz boliye laksh yuh mat mariye hu… Before i could speak futher his two strong arms took me into its embrance (ofcourse it laksh)i cried more as was saying the same betwèen my hicups…
Ragini pov ends_

Credit to: Heena


  1. heena

    Sorry guys for the mistake in chapter number its chapter 11 n also sorry for heena dalal n hours ago n dnt knw how it got half post i will again post chapter 11

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..

Your comment will now be reviewed first before it's published. Read more here..