Unwritten Love Of Destiny – Chapter 5

Chapter 5

Hi guys ??? I’m back with the next part of this fs. I think I’m boring you guys with this story. On the last chapter, I had a HUGE drop of comments. I only post this part because of the likes I got. I know you guys are busy so I understand. But if you don’t want me to continuethis, please tell me I’ll discontinue ???.

Ok so let’s go to the story now.

Previously on “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”

“What if those feelings aren’t strong enough??” Isha questioned.

“What do you mean??” Pragya was puzzled.

“True she had love wala feelings for him, but what if those aren’t strong enough to be deep in her heart even after the memory loss?” Isha explained.

“No yaar I’m sure- Sanchi, kya hua yaar?” Pragya asked from Sanchi who was holding her head as if she was in pain.


Sanchi and Veer had resumed to the game during their talk and the radio near the stall started to play ‘Tere sang yaara’

Tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

(Sanchi’s head started to hurt)

O karam khudaya hai
Tujhe mujhse milaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.

(She’s getting flashes)

O tere sang yaara…
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara

(Flashes of her lost memories)

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main tera ho jaaun
Jo tu karde ishara

Kahin kisi bhi gali mein jaaun main
Teri khushboo se takraaun main
Har raat jo aata hai mujhe
Woh khwaab tu…

(A girl was falling from a clif. Someone was holding her hand and pulled her up. The girl hugged the person who saved her tightly)

Tera mera milna dastoor hai
Tere hone se mujhme noor hai
Main hoon soona sa ek aasmaan
Mehtaab tu…

(A couple was dancing to the same song. The boy was looking at her lovingly but the girl seems lost)

O karam Khudaya hai
Tujhe maine jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai

(A guy was holding a girl’s hands.

“Bohoth koshish ki tumhe door rahne ke liye. But couldn’t do that” boy said to the girl.

Then he held a ring towards her, she took it and wore it.)

O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

O tere sang yara
Khushrang bahara
Tere bin ab toh
Na jeena ganwara.

Maine chhode hain baaki saare raste
Bas aaya hoon tere paas re
Meri aankhon mein tera naam hai
Pehchaan le…

(A boy holding one hand of a girl. Looking in to her eyes he said,

“Apne liye……ab tumhe kaise kho sakti hu main, Sanchi?”)

Sab kuch mere liye tere baad hai
Sau baaton ki ik baat hai
Main na jaunga kabhi tujhe chhod ke
Ye jaan le

O karam Khudaya hai
Tera pyar jo paaya hai
Tujhpe marke hi toh
Mujhe jeena aaya hai.

(Unlike all the other times she had flashbacks, this time it was clear to her, who she was seeing. The girl is her and the boy is……)

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Tu raat deewani
Main zard sitaara.

O tere sang yaara
Khushrang bahara
Main behta musafir
Tu thehra kinara.

“Kabir sir!!!” She said out loud making others jump.

“Kabir sir? Nahi yaar woh hitler yaha nah hai!! Tu chinta math kar!!” Said Pragya.

“Nahi Pragya!! It’s him, it’s Kabir sir!! I saw him!! I remember!! I need to talk to him!!” She said excited and ran to the hospital.

Pragya, Isha & Veer couldn’t understand what just happened.

“Guys…… am I the only one getting a feeling that Sanchi’s getting too close to Dr. Kabir?” Veer asked while looking at the way Sanchi had disappeared.

Both girl’s looked at him.

“Abae ooo pagal nalayak!!! What are you saying? This is why you shouldn’t eat too much theeka. See what kind of weird things you’re saying? She might’ve remember something she wanted to ask him. That’s it!!!” Pragya said hitting his head.

Veer thought for a while. “Yeah maybe you’re right. ??? Miss Golgappa always put her work first name. Maybe she had something important to ask from hitler.” Then he smiled placing both of his arms around both Pragya’s and Isha’s shoulders. “You guys just wait and watch. When Sanchi’s memories come back, I’m gonna propose her!! ??? this time I won’t let her go that easily.” ??? his expressions softened as he talk. “Any way I have to go back now. Ab mere bhi break khatam hua. See you two betaals later, bye ???.

“Sahi kaha nalayak ne!! This time he shouldn’t let her go.” Pragya said smiling.

After Veer went, Isha turned to her friend. “You know what Pragya, I think Veer is right. Sanchi is getting close to Dr. Kabir more than she had before she lost her memories ???”

“Abae yaar!! Tum na ek dum negative churail ho. Nahi maharaani, I don’t think so. Her feelings won’t change that easily.” Pragya replied stubbornly.

“I don’t know about that but I know one thing for sure. We need to tell Sanchi the whole truth as soon as possible. If she found out what happened between Veer, Kabir sir and her, on her own, I don’t know how she’ll take it. Or worst!! What if she misunderstood something??” As Isha said both girl’s looked worried.

On the other hand Sanchi was looking for Kabir but it wasn’t easy for her to find him. She checked his cabin twice for now ambit he wasn’t there. She went there to check for one last time. As if to say ‘the third time is always a charm’ he was in there this time. He was busy reading a book.

She knocked. “Come in”. She went in.

“Yes Dr. Sanchi, what do you want?” He asked without taking his eyes away from the book.

“I-l wanted to-” she started to stammer not knowing how to start the conversation.

“Hurry up Dr. Sanchi, don’t waste my time!! ???” he said impatiently.

“Actually sir, I wanted to talk to you about something.” She said in one breath.

“What is it? About which patient?” He asked still in the same time.

“It isn’t about a patient sir. No, it’s not anything work related. It’s a personal thing” she said softly.

“Then get out!!” He said angrily.

“What!!!” Sanchi panicked at his sudden outburst.

“I said get out!! I don’t have time to solve your nonsense. Just get out!!!” He yelled at her to leave and concentrated on his book again.

She just looked at him shocked. She didn’t expected him to be this harsh. She was so happy that her memories about him came back and she rushed to tell him first. Instead of letting her talk he just scolded her.

She always tolerated his harsh behaviour towards her. She noticed he’s more difficult on her than other but she didn’t mind it. But today….it made her cry. Little pearl like tears fell from her eyes freely. She turned away from him, not letting him see her tears.

**Your words say one thing and your eyes say another. Your words tell me to go away but your eyes tell me to stay with you. What exactly you want me to do??** she went out thinking.

Just as she went out Kabir closed the book he was reading. He saw the tears she tried to hide. It made him sad too.

**Sorry Sanchi, please forgive!! I don’t want to hurt you. I never wanted to hurt you but you shouldn’t get close to me. I dont know you i feel like youre trying to get close to me. I cant let that happen. Maybe I have misunderstood again like the last time. Either way that should NOT happen at ANY COST!!!** As he thought to himself, he leaned back on his chair closing his eyes. Two tear drops escapedvhis closed eyelids and rolled down his face.

Sanchi had cried a lot when she came out of his cabin. Then she stopped herself by telling he didn’t really mean to be that harsh on purpose.


“Maybe he was in a bad mood when I went ???. That’s why he yelled at me like that. But………could it be something else? Maybe he’s trying to stay away from me? But why? Is there anything to ask Sanchi? He think of you as a nuisance!! First you were fine. Then you fell from stairs, hit your head on a vase and lose your memory. Now youre pestering him!! Who wouldn’t be anoyed with you?” She was explaining herself.

Then she got lost in some other thoughts. ** Why do I feel this way around him? I know I love him. Does he feel the same way? I wanted to talk about this with Pragya and Isha but what’ll they think?**

She didn’t even realize that others have come until they talk to her.

“Abae ooo maharaani…!!! Why did you ran off earlier saying that khadoos’s name???” Pragya questioned curiously.

“Yeah Sanchi, is everything all right?” Isha joined too.

“No nothing’s wrong. Everything’s fine” she replied but she wasn’t paying any attention to them. She was lost in her own world. A small smile crept to her face unconsciously.

Pragya started to shake her roughly. Sanchi came out of her dreamworld.

“We’re talking to you and you aren’t even listening to us. Where are you lost huh?” Asked an irritated Pragya.

Sanchi blushed at her words ??? and mumbled “nothing” but her blush didn’t go unnoticed by her besties.

“Arre arre Sanchi, are you blushing? ???” Isha asked teasing her.

“No guys!!! Nothing like that!!! I’m just- I- it’s just a bit hot here, that’s why.” Sanchi tried to cover up but they didn’t let her go that easily.

“No no Sanchi, hum itni aasani se tumhe nahi chodunga!! Batao…… batao…… kya hua?” Both pestered her.

“Achcha theek hai ??? !!! Bataungi!!!” She finally surrendered. “Lekin tum dono promise kar do na that you won’t laugh or tease me about it!!! Ok?” She made them promise.

“Okay okay we promise. Pakka!”

“Guys….. (she paused to take a breath and said in one go) I’m in loveeeeeee……!!!!!!”

Both Pragya’s and Isha’s jaws dropped ???. Pragya was the first to come out of the shock. Then she started to thank all Gods.

“Thank you thank you bhagwan ji! ??? thank you so much!! At last she understood!!! Uss nalayak will be so happy to hear this!!!”

“Really? You think he’ll be happy?” Sanchi asked smiling ???.

“Of course yaar! Why won’t he? He’ll be the happiest man on this earth when you tell him this! Kyun ki woh bhi tumse-” Isha cut off Pragya’s rant by asking,

“Waise Sanchi, tell us who stole your heart?”

Pragya intervenes. “Yaar Isha, is there anything to even ask? She loves Ve-”

“Shut up Pragya, let her talk!!” Isha said seriously and Pragya stopped. Both were anticipating her answer.


So guys that’s it. This is Sanchi’s love realization part. Who do you think she loves? Oh you know already ??? it’s just Pragya and Isha who doesn’t know ???. Hope you to us like today’s part. If you do then press the like button ??? and if you dont perss the dislike button. ???. Your comments are always welcome. Until we meet again ???

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  1. Ruch!! I m soooo sry 4 not commenting on ur last part…..i was busy…choti behann smj k maaf krdo….coming 2 epi…it was super n duper n thanku sooo much for writing fs on kanchi…..(show m toh alg hi ramleela chal rhi h???)….bye,gn,sd and tc

    1. RuCh23

      It’s ok Dhruvi ??? thank you so much!!! Glad you liked it???

  2. Khamoshi

    Ruwani dear… amazing article dear. Yeah kash sach main sanchibki memory loss ho jaye serial main.. kabir se to mil payegi..loved it dear..post another part soon

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Mitu ??? yeah even I wish for Sanchi’s memory to get lost!!! Show is making all of us go totally crazy these days ???

  3. Niyaaa

    ??hi ruwani… u know what maie abhi site check ki just bcoz u said u update ur ff regularly.. ur pinky promise… uhmm.. well u maintained..okay btw Epi is totally fadooo… meri dictionary ekdum khalli bakwas ho gyi h wahi purane ghise pitte words h.. agar words se comparison kiya to beijjati hogi.. bas itna kahna chahti hun..tere ff se mere dil ko aaye sukooooon… Lovvv u sweety???? ppst nxt asap .. bye gud ni8 tc sweet dreams ??

    1. RuCh23

      Aww Niyaaa thank you so much dear ??? I’m so happy to read this comment ??? glad you liked it!!! Love you too ???

  4. Dhruti

    Ruwani why every time you say that your ff is boring??
    dear i love your ff when i see you write something i immediately open and read it that much i love your ff so i hope you don’t say this again that your ff is boring…………….ok…………………
    sorry i think i spoke to much today right!!!! ignore grammatical mistake…………….
    back to ff it was superb finally sanchi realize about her feeling…………………i hope she’ll tell her feeling to kabir and hope he’ll listen her……………….
    post next one soon………………..love you……………..tc……………..see you soon……………………

    1. RuCh23

      Sorrybl Dhruti ??? the thing is…… sometimes I get a feeling like you guys won’t like it and it’ll bore you ??? that’s why I say that!!! Ok I won’t say that from Now on ??? and no dear you didn’t say too much. You can say anything you want, to me. That’s how friends are right? ??? I’m really happy to know you like my writings ??? I’ll post next one soon too love you ???

  5. Aafiya

    It was fabulous. Definitely she loves Dr Kabir… Please yaar post It in English though small small places only have Hindi.. It’s a request from your reader of your ff. Post soon.. Take care..

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Aafiya ??? I know I use Hindi sometimes. It’s not even my language but I’m trying to learn small stuff. That’s why I like adding little Hindi. But don’t worry from next part I’ll write within brackets what I wrote in Hindi ??? ok? Thank you for letting me know that ???

      1. Aafiya

        Thank you so much…

  6. Niyaaa

    Hey one more thing i loved it u always remind sanchi only about kabir??? mera dil garden garden ho gya flashback dekhkar… eagerly wait ting for sanchi’s answer nd ishgya’s reaction???

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Niyaaa glad you liked it dear ???

  7. Its amazing…… Plzzz dont discontinue it

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Amnaa sure I won’t ???

  8. Swethaa

    getting flashes of her flashback
    how kabir scolded/rudely talk with sanchi
    how emotional it is
    mind blowing

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Swetha ??? glad you liked all the scenes ???

  9. Ashnita456

    Amazing outstanding superb mindblowing awesome lovely khidki tod ravishing awesome fabulous marvalous and many more and beyond beyond beyond everything. Love you

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you so much Ashu ??? glad you liked it !!! Love you too ???

  10. I luved it. I m speechless u r just?

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Kajal ??? glad you liked it ???

  11. Riyarocks

    Ruwani yaar……..ab main kuch nehi kahungi………arey yaar, kuch naa kehke bhi toh nehi reh sakti, aadat se majboor jo hoon…….haha so…….for me this was a……… stupendo fantabulous fantastic mindblowing episode……..luv u a lot dear & a big big big waala teddy hug for u………have a nice day…….bye…….tc….

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you so much sweetie ??? your words just made me smile ??? like a lunatic ??? love you too ???

  12. Anee

    ruwani yaarrr….tum stop krne ka kese soch sakti ho…..loved it from core of my heart….you are always write on the real story base that’s really amazing yaarrr….Luvv u so much keep writting..even don’t think about stop it…Huh??

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Anee ???ok ok I won’t stop this!!! Glad you liked ???

  13. So so beautiful and outstanding episode yaar…. please ruchu make it kanchi ff………..I love it so so much……….love u dear…………

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you so much Anu ??? just wait for the next part ??? love you too ???

  14. Anuradha123

    Mind-blowing episode… Kaash serial bhi aisa hi majedaar hota but I know serial mei toh saat janam mei bhi yeh possible nahi ho sakta… I already left this serial abhi sirf dosto ki ff achi lagti hai… Today’s episode was fabulous as always.. Bechari sanchi uska bulb toh fuse ho gaya..

    1. RuCh23

      Ha ha yeah Anu ??? thank you so much dear ???

  15. Ruwani ……sorry for late comment sweetie but exams going on …..it’s awesome dear….loved it….you make me speechless…..do update soon ….lots of love.

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Niyu ??? glad you liked it dear and next part is submitted now!! You’ll see it soon ???

  16. Di it was superbbbbbbb. how could u say this one boring. It was simply superb and fantastic. I wish the same to happen in the show.Fingers crossed for kanchi.
    Interesting to see sanchi falling for kabir.Waiting for kaanchi union.plz post next epi asap.

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you so much Rivanya ??? glad you liked it dear and next part is submitted now. You’ll get to read it soon ???

  17. Abhilasha

    Ru don’t get disappointed…. U always have been in one of my fvt writers and always will be…..so stop saying this all…..and coming to this……wowwww……just loved it but tensed and excited that what turn will trio life take!!!! Luv uh!!

    1. RuCh23

      Wow!!! I’m soo happy ??? one of MY favourite writer is saying I’m one of HER favourite writers!!! You have no idea how much happy you made me Abhi!!! Love you too ???

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