Unwritten Love Of Destiny – Chapter 3

Hello lovely readers ??? I’m back with the next part today!! I apologize ??? to all of you for not updating yesterday. Actually when I got home after my lectures yesterday, I had a really really bad headache!! So my mother ordered me to take rest and NOT TO STRAIN MY EYES ON MY PHONE!! She thought if get a fever so she didn’t want me to do anything. Honestly guys ??? she can be so scary sometimes!!!

So now I feel better and happy that I don’t have fever. But still feel a bit weird. Hope I don’t get fever ???.

I was so happy to read all your comments and so many have liked the previous chapter ???. Got new silent readers too. Rishu, Rivanya happy to see you guys comments ??? as well as others ???

And here’s the next chapter!!!

Previously on “Unwritten Love Of Destiny”,

Sanchi got conscious next day after the sedative effect wore off. Jaya was already in her room. Others came to see her too. Veer came in and hugged her tight. “God Sanchi! I was so afraid that something had happened to you” he said softly.

She wriggled out of his embrace. “Why are you hugging me?” She asked.

“I know Sanchi I ignored you for the past 3 months but I’m sorry!” He started to apologize.

Today we start from there.


“What are you apologizing for? Who are you?” she was confused. Her question grabbed the attention of the doctor who was standing near the door. It’s Kabir.

“I think all of you should wait outside for awhile” he said calmly.

“Kyu doctor? Is there something wrong with my daughter?” Jaya asked worriedly.

“Something wrong with me? Why what happened to me?” Sanchi asked cutely ???.

“Dekhiye, I can’t tell anything without checking her first. So please app log bahar wait keejiye.” Kabir said trying not to worry others.

All had confused expressions but turned to leave. Veer didn’t budge. Pragya elbowed him and signaled him to come out with them but he just shook his head.

“I’ll wait here with Dr. Kabir and see what’s wrong!” he said.

Kabir got annoyed but didn’t do anything to stop him. Isha grabbed him and dragged him out harshly.

“Nahi maa don’t go!! Pragya Isha please don’t leave me!!” Sanchi yelled suddenly.

“You don’t have anything to be afraid of, Sanchi. They’ll wait outside.” Kabir said kindly using doctor to patient professional wala voice.

“Do you know where you are Sanchi?” He asked calmly.

“It looks like a hospital room” she said looking around.

“Yeah and you aren’t well. They need to leave so I can check you” -Kabir

She nodded.

He took her reports and start observing her.

“Do you know who I am?” -Kabir

“Yeah! You’re my doctor!!” She replied cheerfully making Kabir let out a small smile.

“My name?” he asked hopefully.

“No doctor. Sorry!” -Sanchi

Kabir was disappointed to hear that, he had expected her to say that but continued to question her.

“What is the last day you remember?” -Kabir

“Yesterday” -Sanchi

“What happened yesterday?” -Kabir

“I got enrolled in to college!!” She replied excitedly.

“What?” he was dumbfounded by her answer.

“Yeah yesterday was my first day at college!! Pragya and Isha were also joined!! I’m do happy that they’re with me!! All three of us gonna be doctors like you in 4 years” she said.

“That’s great, you wait here and I’ll come back” he went out and came to the group.

“I’m afraid due to the hit on her head, now she has a partial memory loss” all gasped as he continue to explain. “It’s may not be permanent, but can’t tell how long it’ll take her to regain her memories. She has all her childhood memories and remember the day she got enrolled in college along with Pragya & Isha, as her last memory. She doesn’t remember that now she’s a doctor who’s doing the internship. She doesn’t remember anyone from SDCH and anything happened here”

“She doesn’t remember me?” Veer said in a low tone. Even though Kabir heard him, but chose to ignore it.

“Pragya, Isha, you two can slowly make her remind everything but step by step. Don’t go on storytelling! It’ll be bad for her health. Don’t try to force her to remember anything. Let her get all on her own” he said the last part specially to Veer.

Days have passed. Sanchi got to know that she is an intern in prestigious SDCH. Pragya & Isha had told about Veer, that he’s a friend and that Kabir is their senior. She started to believe them, but don’t remember any of it. She’s allowed to take classes and surprisingly she has all her medical knowledge.

So as the days pass they treat people, they do surgeries, etc. Veer was recreating some of their past memories in order to make her regain her memories but no use.

It was another failed attempt of his. Today he recreated the memory happened when she was sick. They were playing with water and paper boats.

“Does this remind you anything Sanchi?” He was hopeful.

Her hand stilled on water and the smile she had when she was playing with the boats, disappeared. She knew that instant this incident had happened previously coz every time he ask her the question when he’s trying to remind her something.

“No Veer I’m sorry!” She stood and left the store room.

He followed her out and grabbed her hand. “Please Sanchi try na? Our memories, moments?”

“I’m sorry Veer I don’t remember anything!!” -Sanchi

“Koshish tho karo na!!!” He shook her by shoulders.

She held her head. “Stop it Veer. My head is hurting!”

Just then Kabir was passing by, he saw what’s happening. He came to them asking “what’s going on here?”

Veer let go of her as Kabir came near.

Before he get a reply, Sanchi fainted, falling right in to his arms.

………In Sanchi’s hospital room………

Kabir treated her and she was resting. Slowly she was coming to her senses. She heard him scolding someone in a low but harsh voice.

“I told you not to force her to remember anything!! What were you thinking Veer?? This isn’t good for her health”

She slowly opened her eyes and said “please sir, don’t scold him. He was just trying to help me!”

“You keep quiet!! Don’t try to save him!!” He scolded her too. “Forcing you to remember anything could cause more damage than you already have! Agar tumhe kuch ho gaya tho? Main-” he stopped what he was saying abruptly as he realized what he was saying and turned to go.

“Where’re you going?” -Sanchi

“I can’t stay here all day I have work. He’ll stay with you and will look after you” Kabir said harshly and pointed Veer.

But she stopped him by holding his hand. With that contact of there hands, she had a flashback.


A guy was holding a girls hands.

“Bohoth koshish ki tumhe door rahne ke liye. But couldn’t do that” boy said to the girl.

Then he held a ring towards her, she took it and wore it.

End of flashback……….

The images were unclear so she didn’t know who it was. All the while she was holding Kabir’s hand so tight.

“Dr. Sanchi, what do you think you’re doing? Let go of my hand, I have work to do!!” He said angrily trying to release his hand from her grip. He looked at her when he didn’t get any reply only to see a weird expression on her face.

She mumbled “please don’t go… Don’t leave me” and fainted again. He sat on a stool near her bed. She’s still not letting go of his hand.

Veer looked on sadly. Kabir doesn’t have to look at Veer to know that he was hurt by her sudden gesture.

Miss Fernandez came in asking Kabir to come for some work. He just dismissed her by saying that he’ll do all the work later.

Miss Fernandez got surprised to hear Kabir postponing his work. Then she noticed Kabir’s hand, which Sanchi was still holding and a small smile appeared on her face. She just went without giving further comments.

Veer too slowly stepped out of the room with a sad face.

**Im sorry Veer, I’m not trying to take her away from you. But I can’t leave her right now. I’ll do everything I can to make her remember everything and then-then she’ll come back to you** he thought sadly. His mind screamed at him to leave her hand and go but but his heart stopped him from doing it.

Riya saw all this from the door and got angry. **No Sanchi! I won’t let you take my Kabir away from me! He’s only mine** she thought angrily.

After sometime Sanchi came to her senses. It was night now and it was dark inside the room. She saw someone sleeping on his hands holding her hand. His face was covered with his messed up hair. She carefully moved his bangs from his face not waking him.

“Kabir sir? Yaha? (Noticing her hand) I might have not let his hand go ??? How uncomfortable he must be feeling!! (Letting go of his hand) Even so he look so cute when he’s asleep ???” she was talking to herself.

“I don’t know why he’s always so khadoos ???. I heard he was called hitler before, and then he changed. But again he turned in to a cold emotionless person ??? what could be the reason for that?” (Yeah, only if you know you are the reason ???)

Kabir started to wake slowly. She pretended to be asleep. Kabir woke and looked around.

“She look better and now I have my hand back! She might’ve let go when she was asleep. I should go back now” he said to himself but she heard him.

“How I wish things happened differently! How I wish you didn’t gave me this pain!”

**pain? What pain? What did I do? Maybe he’s sad that I don’t remember him? ??? everyone’s sad because of that!!** she was thinking about what he said but came out of her thoughts when she felt something warm on her forehead.

She opened her eyes to see him kissing her forehead. He had her eyes closed. It was a longing & loving kiss that spoke millions of words that can not be turned in to words.

Unknown to her tears fell from her eyes to her pillow. She too closed her eyes. After few seconds, he left without turning back.

“What kind of a relationship we had? Is it just a student-mentor wala one or something more?” She sat on her bed thinking whole night. “What’s this feeling? Why do I feel so much pain? What’s the reason?”


So that’s all for today. As I always say if you like this hit the like button, if you don’t hit the dislike button. And if you have time to spare, give a comment ???. Negetive comments are welcome too. So until we meet again ???

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  1. Soo amazing

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Anna’s ??? glad you liked it ???

  2. Ashnita456

    OMG OMG OMG I’m speeehless if i say something it will be toooooooo small for this. This is beyond everything. I’m not able to find any words to say. A great great grand salute to u. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv u loads.

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Ashu ??? glad you liked it dear!!! Lots of hugs and kisses to you too sweetie ???

  3. Dhruti

    ruwani ruwani ruwani who you are dear?my my my how can you write so superbly and soothing ff……….
    while i read your ff what i felt i can’t explain in words this was superb ff……………..i just love it core of my heart………………….i read this ff twice in my excitement…………………….i don’t wanna say anything just say PERFECT(in madhuri mam’s style)……………………
    love you…………………….update next one soon………………….tc…………….see you soon……………….

    1. RuCh23

      Seriously yaar? You type my name thrice and again asking who am I? ??? well I’m Ruwani ???. Now this is new. Today I gotta know my way of writing has a soothing effect. Up until today, I thought my writings were annoying. So today I’m soo happy ???.and you read this twice? For real? Now what more could be a big achievement than this for a writer to get her readers read her writings repeatedly? Thank you so much for this lovely comment!!! I’ll try to update soon. Love you too tc ???

      1. Dhruti

        dear i’m just praise you so that’s why i was asking you that who are you? a normal person can’t that much superb story u maybe a writer………this is the meaning of whoooo are youuu?

      2. Dhruti

        how can i forget you ruwani?

    2. RuCh23

      Nope ??? I’m not a writer, I’m a law student!!! My friends & family always told im not normal and my reply to them was “I’m an alien” ??? so I’ll tell that to you too!!! Who am I? I’m an alien ???

  4. Aafiya

    Wow… Awesome.. Interesting. .

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you dear ??? glad you liked it ???

  5. Aafiya

    Take care.. ☺

    1. RuCh23

      Of course I will and you too take care ???

  6. no words dear
    every time you surprise me with your writing and presentation skills
    loved it alottt

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you so much for this wonderful complement Swetha ??? glad you liked it dear ???

  7. Niyaaa

    O my cutie pie how u wrote so smoothly nd effortlessly… plzzz give me some trck… seriously m teri zabra fan ho gyi… no new words for u…last kancji is just?????? like i m in kanchian heaven????… superb ab aayega maza yippeee oye balle balle.. but whr is precap??? intzar krne k liye kuch to dena chahiye naa???… post nxt asap.. don’t be soooo late.. bye Lovvv u ????? thanks or an amaz ff… ???.. bye tc

    1. Niyaaa

      *last kanchi scene

    2. RuCh23

      Aww easy for you to say effortlessl ??? only I know how hard it was for me to get all that together ??? but you liked it, so I’m very happy ???. I know I don’t give a precap. The reason is I haven’t planned the next part. So I don’t know what’ll I writ . I k ow you guys always wait eagerly to know what’ll happen next, but the thing is even I have no idea what’ll happen next ???. I’m crazy I know so don’t mind me ??? just go to “The Kaanchian Heaven” read the last few lines on this part and keep thinking what kind of a crazy thing I’ll write next ???!!! Love you too sweetie tc bye ???

  8. Prakruti

    Wow ruch… Amazing… I’m Completely speechless… It was beyond beyond beyond everything… Well i think i should introduce myself … I’m prakruti .. A silent reader.. And one ov ur big fan.. I am a little disappointed that many of the TU writers are disappearing.. My fav writers including Trisha Annie and my Jesicca … I loved their ff.. Maybe bcz of getting hopeless for Kanchi or maybe load of work.. But still some fabulous writers like you are still entertaining us with your lovely articles.. It’s amazing.. Love you sweetie.. Keep writing..

    1. RuCh23

      Hey Prakruti, I’m soo happy to see the comment of a silent reader ??? thank you for using you precious time to leave a comment for me, it really means a lot ???. As far as I know Trisha, Annie & Jessica, all three are busy with studies. I miss them too. Hope they’ll come back to us when they got time. Love you too dear ???

  9. So so beautiful and amazing and awesome and superb episode yaar…………kabir and sanchi’s scene is so so sweet……….love u dear ruchu……..

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Anu, glad you liked it ??? love you too ???

  10. Riyarocks

    Ruwani, I hope u r fine now………plz dear take care of urself & don’t take a lot of stress dear………now coming to the episode, I really feel as if ur writings give a soothing effect to my mind………amazing, out of the world……u alwz manage to leave me speechless…….hamesha………..luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……….bye………tc……..

    1. RuCh23

      Aww it’s the second time someone said my crazy writings have a soothing effect m??? thank you so much Riya ??? love you too, a looott ???

  11. Di its too amazing.I dnt even know how many times I read the kanchi scenes. U r a fab writer with full of unique ideas. Just waiting for the nxt epi.plz post it soon.

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Rivanya ??? glad you liked it dear ???

  12. Shivaniiii

    Super ruwani dear. Amazing, mindblowing ????????????????????????????????????

    1. RuCh23

      Thank you Shivaniiii ??? glad you liked it ???

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