Hi guys ??? how are you? Hope everyone’s fine. So I got a small idea for another fs. Many of you were sad that I ended my last fs so soon. So in this fs I don’t plan to end it quickly. Hopefully it will be 10 to 12 chapters. Not less than that.
Abhi, happy to see you again!!! Ashu, hope you’ll get well soon!!! Anuradha… miss you sweetie!!!
Abhi, Riya, Annie, Anee, Anonymousaa, Ashu, Priyanshi, Dhruti, Vrushti, Niyaaa, Aliya, Amnaa, Divya, Sanjukta you guys were with me since I started writing! Thank you so much for your support. ???
And Swetha, Kajal, Tumpamoni, Negisanyukta, Khamoshi, Niyati didn’t forget you guys too. Without you I won’t be in TU. So today this new fs is dedicated to all of my lovely readers and commenters. Hope all of you will like it!! ???
Let’s get to the story.
No Mishra-Malhothra enemity. Instead of Savitri, here, Gayatri and Jaya are best friends. No Vikrant-Priya-Sanket drama. Veer & Riya are both Gayatri’s and Anand’s children. No rules that hospital staff can’t date each other. No fake identity drama but the crazy love triangle and the incidents regarding it happened as same as the show.
Kabir loves Sanchi, Sanchi loves Veer & Veer loves her too.
But after the dandiya engagement incident + Kabir lying for Sanchi incident + lift wala scene, Veer doesn’t trust Sanchi anymore.
Sanchi told Kabir all the truth, over bhaang effect. At first he didn’t remember anything when he came to his senses. But after he found the ring ??? in his coat pocket, little by little he recalled everything. She didn’t want to hurt him by telling the truth. But she also couldn’t hurt him by keep lying to him. (Not going with the scene Sanchi telling Kabir that they could stay as friends coz I hate that scene ???. Felt like hitting Sanchi for saying something like that so casually after all that happened ???)
But he got hurt ??? very badly. After all he lost the only person he ever loved except his mother. The bitter truth shattered his heart badly. He decided that love was something useless. That it makes a person weak. He turned in to a person that everyone would fear to approach. Cold hearted, emotionless, anti-social workaholic person. To say it simply, he built up thick walls around him, so that he won’t get hurt like this, again.
The trio, Veer, Kabir & Sanchi are going on their separate ways without any love drama.
So from here we start the actual story.
On a normal boring day at SDCH, Sanchi had to go to Kabir’s office to make him sign some papers.
She knocked. He called her in. She went & gave the file. While he was reading it she was thinking about how much he had changed.
Sanchi was guilty. Guilty coz she knew that it was because of her, he turned in to a such person.
He signed the papers & told her to take it and leave but no reply came. She was in her thoughts staring at him, when he looked up.
“WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING STANDING HERE? DON’T YOU HAVE ANY WORK TO DO? DID YOU CAME TO THIS HOSPITAL TO BECOME A DOCTOR OR WASTE TIME? JUST GET THE HELL OUT OF MY OFFICE AND DO YOUR WORK!” He screamed at her angrily.
Tears welled in her eyes hearing him scold her like that. She got the file and quickly made her way out before her tears fall.
When she came out she saw the staff looking at her with pity. She just started to walk past them but heard what they were talking about.
“Poor Dr. Sanchi! He scolded her again!” -nurse 1
“Yeah, don’t know what happend to Dr. Kabir ???. He was khadoos earlier, then he turned to be somewhat kind. But now….!! I’m even scared to go near him” -nurse 2
As she went pass them her tears fell nonstop. She went to a place secluded and cried hard. Pragya & Isha, who saw her, came to her.
“Yeh sab meri wajah se hua!! Sab meri galthi!!” She was sobbing nonstop.
Veer who was passing by saw her crying. He was avoiding her but after seeing her in this condition, he couldn’t stop himself. He came to her and tried to stop her crying.
But when she saw him, she stopped crying, wiped her tears and went away without talking to him.
**I’m sorry Veer!! I had already hurt you enough. I’m guilty enough for turning Kabir sir in to a cold person!! I don’t want to hurt another like that** she thought while leaving.
Few days later Dr. Malhothra announced some good news.
“Hello everyone!! I want to tell you all something special. You all know my daughter Riya’s age is now good to get married. And today I’m gonna announce her engagement with someone you all know!! It’s none other than…… Dr. Kabir Kapoor!!” He said in his usual reality show announcing style ???.
Everyone was shell shocked to hear it. When both Kabir and Riya went near Dr. Malhothra, all snapped out of it and started to clap ???. But people were whispering among themselves.
“Dr. Kabir & Dr. Riya? I never thought he’d like her” nurse 3 to nurse 4.
“Yeah! They don’t match at all. Dr. Riya isn’t his type. I thought he’d get married to someone like Dr. Sanchi!” nurse 4 to nurse 3.
“Yaar it’s just been 3 months and he already moved on? That too with Riya?” Pragya whispered to Isha.
“No yaar I don’t think so! He never liked Riya. I think he’s trying to forget Sanchi by getting married to her” Isha whispered back.
Actually, she was close to the truth. Three days ago, Dr. Malhothra came to Kabir with Riya’s proposal and he accepted without a second thought.
Kusum didn’t liked his decision but didn’t said a word against it. She thought she too was responsible for Kabir’s condition now. She believed that if she didn’t force him to think about Sanchi, this won’t happen.
Sanchi was happy with his decision. She knew Riya loved him. She believed that now Kabir will have someone who would love him and with the time, he’d learn to love her too.
“Anyway, why should we care? Let him do whatever he wants, we should try to make Sanchi and Veer patch up. Then they’ll become a couple and everything will be fine!!” Pragya whispered again happily.
Isha didn’t say anything. She just looked on what’s happening, thinking, **I don’t think all that will happen easily. Something big will happen. I can feel it. Everything will be changed. Everyone will get changed. A storm will come to our lives and mess everything!**
Seems like destiny have some other plans, just like Isha thought. Destiny really doesn’t want them to go on their own ways without any love drama ???. A storm will come to mess everything up!!!
So that’s it. Hope all of you’d like it. Honestly I’m not a good writer like other TU writers, but I’m just trying to share my ideas whith you. That’s why I came with this. I’m not a romantic person, I’m just a boring girl. But still I came up with another dumb love story (crazy aren’t I? ???).
Please tell me whether I should continue or not, through you comments. If you don’t have time to comment, just hit the like button ??? if you don’t like it, then hit the dislike button (though I’d appriciete if you could tell me the reason for disliking it to improve my writing ???). So until we meet again, ???