MY UNWANTED RELATION WITH MY HUSBAND FRIEND INTRO

guys ur freind or brother IRFAN PATHAN ia back with new ff writer of swaragini love me and love in slums of india…………
NOTE PAIRS ARE SWASAN AND RAGLAK AND WILL HAVE NICE ROMANCE

HERE CHARACTERSKETCH OF CHARACTER
SWARA MAHESHWARI- HAVE VERY BITTER PAST, WIFE OF LAKSH MAHESHWARI, VERY POLITE HUMBLE AND STRICT NATURE IN BUSINESS, BECOMES EMOTIONAL VERY SOON, CRAVE FOR HUSBAND LOVE, DOES NOT HAVE PARENTS

LAKSH MAHESHWARI- HUSBAND OF SWARA MAHESHWARI NEVER LOVES HIS WIFE, HE IS VERY GOOD WITH OTHERS BUT HE IS ARROGATE ALSO BUT NOT WITH HIS WIFE AND NUMBER 1 BUSINESS MEN OF MUMBAI, HIS MARRIAGE WITH
SWARA IS JUST BUSINESS DEAL

SANSKAR KAPOOR- VERY TALENTED, CUNNING AND SHARP MINDED MEN AND FUN LOVING WHO IS ESTABLISHING HIS BUSINESS AND HE IS JUST TRYING HIS LUCK TO ESTABLISH HIS BUSINESS
AND USES MANY TRICKS TO GET BUSINESS DEAL BECAUSE HE WANTS TO BECOME FAMOUS, HE IS VERY HOT HUNK AND BEAUTIFULL WOMEN DIES FOR HIM, HE KNOWS EVERY BUSINESSMEN AND BUSINESS WOMEN
WEAK POINT, HE CLAVERLY USES THERE WEAK POINT TO GET DEAL OF CRORES

RAGINI GADODIA- WELL KNOWN AND FAMOUS MODEL WHO USUALY DANCES IN BIG BUSINESS PARTY, AND EMBASSADER OF LAKSH MAHESHWARI BUSINESS COMPANY

ONE MORE TIME I AM SAYING PAIRS ARE SWASAN AND RAGLAK
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GUYS THESE ARE MAIN 4 CAST OF THIS Story and i am giving just one intro part please read it and real love story will start from prologue
swara and laksh married for 3 years just for business deal they never consumate because laksh always says he has hormonal problem, and never loved her
swara is mentally depressed due to her bitter past, and her husband torture, she never sleeps in her night and her every night is sleepless, she is rich but no love in her life

sanky comes to swara office
SANKY- so hi mrs maheshwari most rich women of mumbai
swara- just smile for assurance
sanky- sees her top to bottom comes near her and says so can u give me mrs khurana deal of 10 crore
swara- in bossy tone are u beggar who is asking to take deal
sanky- no i am not beggar (he smiles cleverly sees directly in her eyes) i will do biggest work of u
swara- what work by moving he gaze on him
sanky- s*x….
swara- what angrily
sanky- smiles naughtily and seating comfertably ya mrs maheshwari u are craving for husband love and mentally depressed also which i will give to u
swara- hell angry stands and calls bodyguard and says get out from here
sanky leaves but says u will surely call me, but if u need a best freind i will become ur freind also so think mrs maheshwari while going
after his going swara cries bitterly and thinks this happens to those women whose husband no love her

GUYS DONT TAKE TENTION PAIRS WILL BE SWASAN AND RAGLAK AND THIS STORY WILL BE MORE BASED ON s*x LIFE OF RICH PEOPLE
DONT TAKE TENTION SANKY WILL NOT TAKE REVENGE FROM HER AND HE IS FULLY POSITIVE IN THIS STORY AND HE WILL BE BEST FREIND OF SWARA WHO WILL HELP HER TO OVERCOME THIS PROBLEM OF HER LIFE
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GUYS about raglak love story that will be also there

THINK GUYS
WHAT IS BITTER PAST OF SWARA
HOW SWASAN WILL LOVE EACH OTHER
HOW RAGLAK LOVE STORY START WHEN LUCKY SAYS HER THAT HE HAS HORMONAL PROBLEM
IS REALY LUCKY HAVE HORMONAL PROBLEM

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THIS story is real life incidense which i see in many rich people parties and it is very different concept and unique please read it
guys every character will be justified at there place
THIS STORY WILL HAVE TOO MUCH ROMANCE BECAUSE ROMANCE IS HIGHLY NEEDED IN THIS STORY

PLEASE DO COMMENT IF U REALY LIKED INTRO

69 comments

  1. Sriya

    |Registered Member

    awesome one dear i read your swaragini love in slums of india and other with full of lust few episodes only

  2. Rasha

    |Registered Member

    Dnt mine just simply asking r u swara fan bro.. I had no idea about this concept coz u 1stly mentioned about high class com romance.. About love I really respect that & marriage also.. I really hate this kind of unrelationship but reality is this Wat now our society..

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya I am swara big fan I never watch swaragini but I just watch swara sqskar scene on YouTube and this story based on rich class and quiet common in India just read to know other world and it is interesting and happy that u gave suggestion

  3. Meher

    |Registered Member

    Okay I found title interesting so I came across this… N bingo!! It’s interesting..

    I never read a story something like this..

    Thumbs up for the story go ahead!!

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful and amazing comment meher and I will surely try my level best to keep this story interesting and please don’t think swara characterless I was very afraid people may hate my story

    • Meher

      |Registered Member

      Dude every writer has its own creativity..

      So no worries.. if swara was characterless then also I will read this ..

      Go ahead!

  4. Pathan

    |Author

    Guys this story u may feel it is crape but guys this story is different u will get to know later and don’t feel it is just like lust type
    It is really different story and if u all will not like this I will end in 5 episode also because when I was writing intro I know many will not like it and some will bash me but guys I thought to give something different and it is reality of many rich people guys and it is less common in India but very common in foreign
    And don’t think swara is characterless girl
    Because what you are seeing in intro is just 5 percent truth reality is not known by you

    • Paru

      I also feel she is a characterless girl..but wen she react at him throw him out of the cabin…I thought it will be a different.. Most of the thing is ur fiction swaragini love in slumms in India…it was a beautiful fiction…and its intro wen I read didn’t get the whole idea…. But after reading the first few epi…I just loved it I mean there is reality in it..genuine story…I don’t know why some people have pblm with Swara…so bro don’t worry continue… I have full faith on u…

  5. Jwala

    |Registered Member

    brave effort. . and I have a request please make swara very strong. . don’t make her crying all time. and very different concept. . I liked it so much.. continue soon

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment jwala and ur comment is really helpful I am happy that you are commenting here also and this story will be more interesting than slums

  6. Paru

    After reading title.. I was in delima read or not…its bz of ur fiction only..I go through it…but intresting…plz update swaragini love in slum

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and paru yes I like swara and it is interesting story thanks for giving time to story
      And it is reality of Indian rich people

  7. Pavani

    |Registered Member

    Hey bro again u came with one more diff concept he he he seems intresting nd haa it happens In india too but u know naa our Indians are experts in doing those things secretly nd I too have seen many of these cases nd altough I don’t like swara I will agree swara was not totally wrong as love is main in a realation nd with that s*x plays a key role for making a relation strong (don’t take me wrong it is the fact ) nd haa I appreciate ur dare to take this concept as it should be handled sensitivily nd not but least hope raglak will get equal imp nd I think u like swasan more that’s y in ur ff’s their charecters have some special role(just my point)actually I loked the rools u have given to swasan in ur both ffs plzz give equal imp to both I know u will not dissapoint ur lovely dii

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Di u emotionaly blackmail me just kidding but di u are reading this ff so I will surely give equal to the to both the pairs some time it may go 55 percent to 45 percent but I will try my level best to give equal importance and till now I didn’t thought plot of story properly so I did not think about ragini in this plot but I will surely modify full story to get good role of ragini because I am just thinking to end this ff at 10 episode because I thought it is really helorius idea and many people will not like it and I was hell worried and afraid when I was writing intro I thought 18 times to write this idea and 11 times my hand stoped that people will think it is crap story

      • Pavani

        |Registered Member

        Ha ha ha tnk u for thinking to give rag an equal role nd it is not crap it is truth nd I can understand how important every thing in our lifes so don’t worry if any one bashes also as I think everyone cannot think as metuered as u nd keep going wt ur own toughts iam anxious to see how u will handle this sensitive matter nd ofcourse for my rag tooo

  8. Sweetie

    |Registered Member

    Again an awesome plot..I think marriage is a relation consisting of many threads..Physical intimacy between partners is one of them..When people are not s*xually satisfied in a relationship,they search for other sources..I used to like Swara’s character a lot in the serial [as I don’t watch serial now and I don’t know what crap is going on]..Here too I loved Swara’s character..She is feisty and tough..I love girls in that way..Waiting for the prologue and first chapter..Little busy these days so if I missed any of the episodes of the other FF,I will surely make up to that..Stay blessed and keep smiling brother.. 🙂

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment Di and u are fully correct s*x is very important factor in husband wife relationship which makes relation strong and swara will realy have good character on this story
      Thanks for ur beautiful comment di and keep smiling always

  9. Anniya

    |Registered Member

    Amazing idea. Really it’s totally diff concept I am swara fan. Plz make her character strong.more than fiction I luv to read reliaty base stories. Continue soon..

  10. Tamanna

    |Registered Member

    Hey I am first time reading your ff… Intro is awesome and seems really interesting…. And it’s really diffrent concept…..Waiting for next one….
    And I haven’t read your other ff…..but I will surely read it after my exams…..

  11. Tooba

    Wow yaar totally new and true concept… you know today only I was thinking the same topic only and here you I guess you read my mind…. please come soon with many romantic episodes

  12. SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb intro
    New and Interesting plot
    Continue it
    Waiting for the first one………..

  13. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    ohhh hooo bro ab kya bolu aapke baare me , jab bhi likhte ho toh kch nya , knw awesome concept hta he , jesse kitne hi le lo . swaragini – love me , swaragini – love in slums and lusts and now this…….. ab toh sare words bht purane ho gye he , bt koi baat nhi aapke liye pacca naye dhudugi abhi k liye………….

    Mind- blowing , awesome , Fab , JHAKAAS !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! U truly rock and will always……
    Waiting fr this one bro…………!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love u yrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for amazing comment yashu and keep liking my story and big sorry for not able to reply
      How is your health

  14. Menaz

    New story line awesome amazing magnificent plot. Continue it & update prologue asap. & plzz mentioned any symbol before to start any most romantic scenes or more intimate scenes Cz I could not read it. As u mentioned in above lines that this story has most romance so only I ask . but always ur story is very creative & awesome so waiting for it.

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Ya I will surely tell you and how ur studies are going on and keep commenting and liking story and study well and how is your health

  15. Chanu

    Hey,,, 🙂 i cm 2 tu by mistake. I hv my exams soo cdnt visit here. 🙁 Bt before exit…i saw ur intro in recent cmnt & u ask is that cmnt 4m me.. I ws like 😮 i ddnt even read it.. ?.? Sooo i cm here to check dat & cdnt stop reading ur intro.. Sooo that cmnt is nt from me.. Im chanu nt chandu.:P bt im hpy dat u remember me cz i cmnt nly in few epis. 😀
    And dis intro.. 😮 its rly complicated… U always show abt real wrld out their & its beyond my imaginations. I know ppl r like dis bt i ignore it.;) & dis ff is bit adult one i think.. Im already 18+ bt my mind is nt. 😛 😉 Soo i think ill be a big grl after my exams. Lols. if i ddnt die in exam hall due 2 heart attack. ill surely read ur ff.. & cmnt. Till then bye.. Keep writing..
    Be happy always.. 😀 😀 😀
    (sry if i hurt u)

    • Pathan

      |Author

      Thanks for ur beautiful comment and keep commenting and I will not add adult content in this story and just read one thome

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