THE UNREVEALED LOVE OF TWO FRNDS (ISHVEER) Episode : 58

Hi guys… tnk u sooo much for ur support ….. and I don’t tell about the cast for ritvik, vansh and rushab too…
For ritvik – Ritvik dhanjani (I like him… I always imagine him for ritvik character…)
Vansh – aditya redij (I just saw him in Mumbai tigers team… I liked him too)
Rushab – gurmeet choudary ( i like him very much…he has the role afterwards)

The episode starts with Ranveer dialling ritvik number continuously… but it is still in not reachable area…
Ranveer : parul… I’ll go and see.. sry… I couldn’t take u with me…
Parul : it’s ok bhai.. it’s important to u to reach there with ritvik… please be soon….
Ranveer patted her head : bye…
Parul : bye… all the best bhai… tell my wishes to him too…
Ranveer : hmm…
He leaves from there… he takes his bike and go to ritvik home… he searched him everywhere on the way going in the bike…he keep on calling him… he then come to the forest area…. his mobile lost network… he stops the bike..
Ranveer : No network.. this means ritvik is here only…
He then proceeds to search him… on his way.. he is shocked to see ritvik running along the way catching his breath… he stops near him…
Ranveer : ritvik… why are u running… first drink this water(taking water from his bag)…
Ritvik still catching his breath : I’ll…. drink it later.. it’s getting late… we have to go there …. go fast..
Ranveer : hmm… sit. ..
He rides the bike fast… since it’s early morning … there is no traffic… he rides the bike how fast he could…

On the way…
Ritvik relaxed : actually… my car broke down… so that area has no network also… nobody was there… I dont have any way.. I just started to run…
Ranveer : yeah… I just worried u didnt came there… so only I left parul in home and came…
Ritvik : ohh… thank god u came there…. otherwise our seniors would definitely hit me badly… go fast….
IN RANVEER COLLEGE #
Everybody is giving entry on one side…. others doing warm ups… a girl wearing neon green colour tshirt and black tracts with a pony tail is shown(like she wear in bcl)… it’s our ishaani… she also doing the warm up along with shikar who wears same colour tshirt and black shorts….
Shikar : why r u looking so much tensed…
Ishaani : ritvik bro is the main player…both hasn t come here yet… that’s why…
Shikar : yeah… did u call him…
Ishaani : ranveer is not taking his mobile…hope they should come soon….
Shikar : don’t worry…hope they’ll come….
Vansh call him…
Vansh : hope u do well… u and me are the main players… so… try to win…
Shikar : sure…. I’ll try my best….
Vansh : where is ranveer and ritvik..
Shikar : they havnt come yet….
Vansh : race is going to be start soon…
Shikar : yeah… still…
Vansh : ok do warm up… and don’t drink too much water… u have to run 8kms… (it’s usually short for college students).. and maintain ur speed till checkpoint…. there they enter ur entry no… that only takes into account… then u increase urspeed…. after coming to college just increase how much u could and win (race starts and ends in same place… )
Shikar : hmm….
Vansh leaves from there…

Shikar thinks : what a great stupid i was… after my patch up with ranveer.. I got everything… even vansh turned good to me… Ranveer u r my best friend ever…. I’m sorry…
Ishaani still in tension… she call him again… he don’t take the mobile… she got mad…
Ishaani : this stupid now not attending mobile also… what should I do.. hope theys mould be fine….
Suddenly ritika comes towards her… with a navy blue t-shirt and black tracks…. (colour code is same for students of one college)
Ishaani acts to be normal : hey ritika…
But ritika looks tensed : where is ritvik and ranveer…
Ishaani : yeah I called them.. but they r not attending it….
Ritika : for u also.. damn… our seniors r scolding us because of their absence….
Ishaani : ohh… Ranveer told ritvik is the main participant…
Ritika : yeah… Ranveer too… I dont know what to do…
Suddenly an announcement : everyone come near near the track.. the race is going to start wuthin 5 mins…
Ritika excuses herself and leaves from there…
Ishaani thinks : oh god… sure they r not going to make out this time
She also go to the track.. shikar and vansh are standing in front…. Ishaani in quite back… ritika also in the same row… before it starts they give thumbs up to each other… the whistle is about to blow… Ishaani becomes so worried also… suddenly she heard some quarrels… she turns to see ranveer and ritvik request the man who is doing the entry thing.. the man denies stubbornly… Ranveer college mates also request him.. so he accept atlast and make their entry also… she noticed all and turns to get ready with a huge smile…. Ranveer and ritvik stand in the back behind 5000 people without an option… the whistle blow atlast… evryone starts to run… shikar and vansh runs in a standard way.. many runs like fast and stop at one point…. ritvika and ranveer also runs in the standard way… as do ritika and ishaani… but as a girls… they have some jealously over one another… though they maintain in the same distance… one try to get over the other… if ritika is quite forward… Ishaani rise her speed… so does ritika when ishu overtakes her….. but vansh and shikar maintained the steadiness… they overtakes the other… maintains the first position… some other college students also accompany them…. including ranveer colleagues… Ranveer and ritvik starts to overtakes the other in a steady manner… after 4kms…. both runs behind Ishaani and ritika… they overtakes them also… while doing that… Ranveer and ritvik smiles at ritika… and ranveer winks at ishaani… she loses speed… Ranveer notices that… while running
Ranveer : ishu… this time also u gonna lose… I’m going to win.. atleast try to get top 10 in girls atleast… but I bet u can’t…
Ishaani thinks : what… he thinks I can’t… wait and see ranveer… she increases her speed and runs quite front of ritika… she maintain that and begins to move forwards…
Ritvik and ranveer runs overtaking many students… vansh and ritvik atlast come near the check point…. the volunteers note their entry number…. 2 more students from other college also reach there… after few seconds ranveer and ritvik also come there…. followed by soem girls and ishaani….
Ritvik : ranveer..
Ranveer : hmm…

They both nods their head.. and starts to run faster…. more and more faster they could…. atlast they come near vansh and shikar… they 4 only enter the college first…. all 4 tried how much they could…. they all almost in the same distance…. they can see the finishing line… seeing that all increase their speed…. but ritvik and shikar are quite forward to ranveer and vansh…. while going near the line… ritvik just overtakes shikar and crosses it 1st follwed by ritvik… and ranveer crossed it after them…. they all fall down… Ranveer college students starts to shout in joy… so does shikar college students… they all then get up…. Ranveer hugs ritvik… and wish him… shikar also does the same… then ranveer wish shikar also… they all hug… and shouts in joy…. after them 3 boys reached the line… Ranveer sits there and watched it…. he shocked to see ishaani coming near the gate they 4 cheers for ishu…. ritika also followed her with some other girls…. suddenly shikar face changed but he don’t show it….. all cheers for both… ishu keep on reminding ranveer words… she got mad and increases her speed and crosses the line 1st among girls… then 2 girls crossed it followed by ritika…. Ishaani just fall down… Ranveer for worried and rushed there…. she catches her breath fast…
Ranveer : hey ishaani… u alright na….
Shikar get her water…. she drink it like she is thirsty for 5 days… Ranveer patted her ….. so does ritvik for ritika… ritika excuses herself and left from there… Ishaani after get relaxed
Ishaani : see ranveer (still catching her breath)… I did… don’t challenge ishaani…. I won’t give up anything….
Ranveer smiles and hugs her…. every colleges shouts in joy… they all lift winners and runners showing their victory in the beginning… ritika also joins them… the winning college played drums and all dances in joy… they all take selfie… it looks like a function…
Ritvik : today only college looks like college… (dancing) … anyway I miss chilly today… for me she is at home…
Ranveer : yeah me too…
Parul : who said… I couldn’t stay at home while everyone njoy like this…
Ritvik and ranveer : oh.. u came..
Parul : now only.. uncle dropped me…
Ritvik : ohhh. …
Parul : then it seems u win…
Ritvik : i think so…
Parul : congrats…
Ritvik feels something different…
Ritvik : thanks..
They continue their dance…
Ishaani : ranveer… I know why u told like that…
Ranveer smiles
Ishaani : but u know… though many romantic song are there.. dancing for this drum beat never come…
They both dances joyfully…. so does everyone…

Again some announcement came…
*it’s time for prize distribution…. 1st we go with girls..*
He announces the name from 10th place… whenever any name is announced… that college shouts in joy… he then call ritika for 4th place …. she go to the stage… they congratulate her… Ranveer and ritvik shouts along with their collegues… then they call ishaani for the 1st place… everyone shouts… including ranveer and ritvik… his colleagues ask them to not shout for other college.. they don’t mind them and continues cheering ishaani… they congratulate her…
Then they announced boys names… they call vansh(4th) …. then they call Ranveer… suddenly his colleagues lift him and get him to the stage… everyone cheers and shouts for him… including ishu college mates… then they call shikar.. they followed ranveer college method and lift him to the stage… then they call ritvik for 1st place… they did the same for ritvik also… they all shouts in joy…
Volunteer to ranveer and ritvik : today u came late but got 1st prize… this time I allowed u.. but next time we won’t…. so be careful.. and congrats…
They both nods…
They come towards their gang and all joins hand and shouts….
It ends with their happy faces…

Precap : games event continues…

Hey guys… hope u like this epi… I already told shikar nd ritvik are good athlete while ranveer good at other sports… so don’t mistake me as I make other lead win… and tell me whether I have to show all sports in detail or shorten it… I prefer 2nd but its ur wish… pls comment about this… and support me like always….

23 comments

  1. Nandana

    |Registered Member

    very nice episode and as u wish u can write and i prefer to shorten it because then we can go to another track soon know i just said only it is ur wish to write short or not . update the next episode soon

  2. tanishqa

    Isss maar dala seriously I enjoyed it and I loved how u explain each and every scene I need to have training from and dear keep writing looks this and study well

  3. Narendran

    |Registered Member

    superb!! julina..pls write short..sorry if i hurted u..but it is tought to me to scroll down and read..that is why..i did not comment this much days..today i found time..so telling it

    • Julina

      |Author

      Tnks naren bro❤ u not at all hurt me… yeah I know u r so busy with ur studies… but I update in twice or thrice in a week… that’s why quite long… but tnks for ur suggestion:)

  4. Shivanya

    HEY AGAIN U ROCKED.I LOVE TODAY EPISODE VERY MUCH. I LOVE IT WHEN U ADD CRISPS TO IT BY INCLUDING RANVEER NAUGHTINESS AND PARVIK CHAT IN BETWEEN THESE SERIOUS SITUATION. WE TOO CHEER ONLY FOR OUR COLLEGES. DANCE, LIFTING THE WINNERS EVERYTHING HAPPEN IN MY CULTURALS TOO. BUT ATLAST MY RITVIK WON. YAAAYYYY. U R RIGHT. IM DEVELOPING CRUSH FOR RITVIK. LOL. I DONT KNOW RITVIK DHANJANI. BUT AFTER SEEING HIS FACE IM SURE HE WILL SUIT MY RITVIK. JUST ENJOYED TODAY EPISODE. KEEP ROCKING. SHORTEN IT SO THAT I COULD ENJOY OTHER TRACK WITH UR FF. POST NEXT SOON.

    • Julina

      |Author

      Tnks shivanya dr❤ yeah v hav to cheer for our college but me and my frnds cheers for all those who r doing well… I’m happy that u liked ritvik…. tnks for ur suggestion also… I’m going to shorten it only but I’ll describe few interesting events… I’ll try to update soon… ur comment means a lot to me…tnks

  5. Tiara

    Woooooowwwww?? I love today episode❤️❤️❤️ Especially when Ranveer winks at Ishu and motivate her❤️❤️ My Ishu wins and care to her❤️❤️ Loved it. Pls post next soon

  6. Neelam

    Its nice Julina just write whatever u want I shall read it and definitely with full excitement waiting for the next?

  7. Nandana

    |Registered Member

    hi friends actually i had registehi friends actually i had registered my acount and i had changed my name into only nandana and actually i am the old nandana (a big fan of SHAKTI ARORA) I CHANGED IT BECAUSE IT IS TOO LONG AND IT CANT BE REGISTERED AND NOW I AM IN A NEW USER NAME NANDANA PLZ RECOGNISE ME

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