“That Unknown Feeling”- Chapter 31: Crossing Limits

Chapter 30: Here

(Recap: Sayyam poisons Yuvraaj by sneaking something into his juice. He feels guilty, but convinces himself that this is the only way to fix things.)

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“Yuvraaj, listen…Sharad wanted some help with decorating the mandap. I can’t believe today is my Yuvaan’s marriage!” Suhani rummaged her cupboard, looking for one of her nose rings which would go perfectly with Krishna’s bridal dress. “Yuvraaj? Are you even listening?” she asked playfully, turning around to face him.

Her eyes widened in shock when she caught sight of him. He was leaning forward; and the book he had been holding when she had walked in was now on the floor. What scared her the most, was the thin line of blood trickling down his chin. “Yuvraaj!” she gasped, rushing towards him. Cupping his face in both her hands, she lightly shook him. “What happened to you? Yuvraaj, say something!”

She saw Sayyam entering the room from the corner of her eye. Panicked, she beckoned him to come closer, while keeping her eyes on Yuvraaj. “Sayyam, see what happened to Yuvraaj! Call the doctor-” she stopped talking when she heard the door close.

Suhani looked away from Yuvraaj and towards Sayyam, wondering why he had locked the door. “Sayyam, did you hear me? Call the doctor!”

Sayyam looked at her, and his face was strangely calm for what was going on. Suhani looked at his eyes, alarmed; they were darker than ever, and even through the façade he had put up, Suhani could see darker emotions under the surface. She had only seen him like this when…her face turned pale as she connected the pieces.

“Yuvraaj won’t need a doctor,” Sayyam tilted his head, holding up a vial. “Because I have the medicine,” his lips tugged up into an eerie smile.

“No,” Suhani whispered desperately, hoping that this all was just a dream, as she felt her head start to pound.


Sayyam was finding it very difficult to continue this drama, but he had to do this. Blame it on the genes he had received from his father, but this was the only plan he had come up with; it was rather flawed. He forced himself to smile, and held up the vial, which now contained water; but of course, Suhani didn’t know that. He had to make her believe that what he had was the only cure that could save Yuvraaj.

He saw his mother whispering something to herself, and watched as her eyes shifted out of focus and she held her head. Beads of sweat formed on his forehead as he realized he might’ve triggered one of her panic attacks again, but she shook her head, as if to regain control of her thoughts. She stood up and slowly edged towards him.

“Sayyam, beta,” she emphasized, hoping that what she was seeing wasn’t true. “You have the medicine, right? Give it to me beta…Yuvraaj needs it,” she spoke softly, as if he were a merely a kid who was throwing a tantrum.

“But I also need something. Maa. Give me what I want, and this cure is yours.” He raised his eyebrows, silently questioning her. Suddenly, Yuvraaj started to cough, gasping for breath.

“Yuvraaj!” Suhani eyes welled up with tears and she stepped closer to Sayyam. “Sayyam, please, give me that cure, this isn’t who you are. You’re my son, Sayyam, don’t do this.”

“First give me what I want,” he refused to give in, willing himself not to show any signs of weakness.

“What do you want?” she cried out helplessly as Yuvraaj collapsed to the ground.

“Ahh…finally! I’ll get right to the point,” he paused, reassuring himself that he was making the right decision.

“I want Krishna.”

Woah, the words have been said! There’s no taking them back now. There are a lot more Sayyam-Suhani scenes coming up and even more Kriyam scenes. 😉 I hope I’m taking this at the right pace. Since this chapter is short (sorry for that) the next chapter will be coming out tomorrow morningish.

Love you guys!
– Shreya <3

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  1. Aah great no other word

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Mahi??

  2. Nice and Saiyyam is doing this for his mom after his decision suhani started hating saiyyam oh god

    1. Fanficwriter

      Yeah, that’s how it happened it the serial too, but don’t worry, I’ll make everything better soon?
      My ending is gonna be way different from the serial?
      Thanks for commenting ?

  3. Superb update next part soon

  4. Please give a different view not like CVS….

    1. Fanficwriter

      My plot arc right now is very similar to the SSEL storyline, bit I’m gonna be taking this story in a very different direction soon??
      Thanks for commenting ?

  5. AnahitaAnnie

    I was sitting and reading chapter and I was like wooow.. Totally loving to see SSEL again through ur views.. And action is on full swing.. And the line “I want Krishna”.. I was jumping around becoz that sentence is so special.. Now I am totally addicted

    1. Annie when you are going to update your ss I am really missing ur ss also plz try to update

    2. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Annie, that seriously means a lot coming from you.?
      I really want to make this plot arc similar to the SSEL storyline (which will probably last two more chapters), then take my story in a completely different direction. I’m pretty excited to reveal more.
      Glad you liked it, love ya girl??

  6. Loved it dear… can’t stop thinking what is going to happen next. Update sooon

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Yura? means a lot ?

  7. Fidato

    Wow… Shreya… Getting nostalgic…After reading this chap… “Mujhe Krishna chahiye”…Still ringing his husky voice in my ear…. Ram Ram jai ho…..????

    Yes please post soon…. Waiting…

    1. Fanficwriter

      I know, I was crazy about Sayyam after that episode…actually I was crazy about him from the start?, but this episode in SSEL was a major turning point?

      It brings back a lot of memories ?
      Glad you remembered all of that Prethiga, it was what I was trying to bring back?

  8. Aarti32

    Dis episode reminds me of d show..when he asked for Krishna!!
    Good going

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thanks Aarti, that means a lot?
      The part of the episode when Sayyam said “he wants Krishna” was one of my favorites.??

  9. It’s fantastic
    Just awesome

    1. Fanficwriter

      Thank you Pallavi??

  10. Muniya

    Finally…’I want Krishna’….I was dying to read this line…
    Awesome update…Loved Sayyam.

    1. Fanficwriter

      Same! It’s one of my favorite lines.?
      Glad you liked it??

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