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UNFORGETTABLE LOVE :SHIVIKA (Part 24)

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MOON LIGHT HOTEL
Kriyan was eagerly waiting for Mahira and karan after few minytes they arrive , kriyan lock the door and look at duo
Kr: tell me what happened to u
Mahira suddenly hug kriyan and start crying he reciprocate the hug and console her
In same position
Kr: what happened mahi , why r u crying ,plz tell me ,karan tum toh kuch bolo , hua kya h tum dono ko ,i saw u guys crying in OM tell me plz is anything wrong
Annika in same position
A:(crying) we found her , wo mil gayi
Kriyan broke the hug and look at her confusingly
K: yes we did it kriyan, after so much of tym we found her(tear in his eye)
Kr: who, who got ,plz don’t create anymore suspense tell me clearly
A: ( crying) CHUTKII

She again hug him , kriyan freeze in his position and look at karan for assurance
K: yes we found her, hamari CHUTKII Kriyan , our CHUTKII
And he also join in hug , now trio eyes filled with tear of happiness, they remain in same position for few minutes
Kr: where is she, how she looks like ,kitni badi ho gayi h wo , i want a meet her, and why don’t u guys tell us before
K: relax ,how much question u asked ,mujhe to laga tha ki ye mahi hi itna bolti h but u r way ahead of her
Annika hit on his hand lightly
K: oouch(dramatic)
K: okk ,ur first answer is she is here in mumbai
A: i’ll give u answer of second question , she is absloutely fine
Kr: guys don’t increase suspense , tell me directly (excitedly)
Kโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ: u know her
Kr: me , but how , i don’t understand๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
A:๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š bcz u met her
Kr: when , guys stop it , tell me na , now i can’t wait to meet my CHUTKI
A: u remember today u went to OM
KR: WHAT A SILLY QUETION IS THIS
A: relax first listen to me and then speak anything
A: u met her in OM , she stays there,
K: she is none other than GAURI
Kriyan now look toward them annika and she nodded in positive
Kriyan eye filled with tear of happiness , he remember today incident ,how he met her ,she made kheer for him,
Kriyan lost in thought but karan brought him again in original world
K: what happened , where u lost , r u not happy with this news

Kr: What kind of question is this ,??? Why will i not be happy ??? Afterall she is CHUTKII
Kr: u know guys when i met her first tym i felt connected to her but that tym i didn’t know the reason, when she whince in pain, it feels like someone pierce in my heart ,her tear i was not able to tolerate them , but when she smile i feel like top of the world, and when she ask me to stop i didn’t know why i felt so week in front of her ,i couldn’t denied to her , that tym i didn’t know the reason why i felt so but now i know why i was feeling like this bcz she is MY CHUTKII
Kr: but i m angry on u guys why didn’t u told us before
A: bcz we got to know about her only when u were doing dinner in OM
She explain him how they found out about GAURI
kr: okkk but jb me waha aaya tb he was calling her chutki why???
Kโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ: bcz i felt the same connection with her and asked her can i called her chutki so she agreed and she called me bhai jaise bachpan me bolti thi
Kr: but were u guys doing in OM
A: Bcz hamari manzil kaa raasta wahi se hokar jaata h
Kr: now i to tell this good news to everyone
K: call them , but remember OF and chutkii should not know about us
Kr: but why???
A: bcz it will be dangerous for our plan , so tell them they should behave with us like a stranger in front of OF
Kr: okk
Kriyan call and tell them everything
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Jaipur
Ad: She is in OM, how she reached there ,agar usey kuch ho gaya to, me jitna unn logo se use door rakhna chahta hu pta nhi kyun wo
Arohi: relax adhiraj(she placed her hand on her shoulder) i can understand ur tension , i know u want to go to meet her but u can’t so relax i will handle everything , do you trust me ???
Ad: more than myself
Ar: so now relax , next day is full of happiness
Adhiraj pass a smile to her
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NEXT DAY
S: where were u last nyt
A: me
S: yes u??? Don’t u say that u were in ur room bcz u r not now tell me
A: wo…wo..(stamerring) mein…mein…one of my frnd came to mumbai so i went to her, but how do u know that i was not at home
S:that’s not the point how do i know??? But atleast u can inform anyone of us not any u can inform me ?? Me le jata?? Itni raat ko akele jaane ki kya zaroorat thi
A: one minute what do u mean ??i can’t go alone ??? I can’t handle my self(๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ) for ur kind information i can do anything
S: i didn’t mean it
A: i clearly understand what u meant ?? Now don’t try to cover up๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
S: but listen to me
A: no i don’t want to listen ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ 
And she left
S: yaar ye gussa ho gyi ๐Ÿ˜ฆ๐Ÿ˜ฆ๐Ÿ˜ฆnow i have to convence her
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Pinki was with her frnds in hall and they were chit chatting , pinki saw GAURI ‘S MOTHER, so she decide to insult her and look her frnds who understood her plan and smirk
Frnd1: arey pinki who is she (pointing toward gauri mother) (loudly so she can hear them)
GM: me
Frnd2: yes u
She came to them
GM: ji me wo
Frnd3:let it be , serve cold drink to us
GM she look at pinki who gave her royal ignorance
GM serve them one by one
Frnd1:what the hell is this pinki , u called us here to insult ys
P: what happeneds
Frnd1: this cold drink is not child, and i want child
P: no problems she will bring child one to us
GM: don’t worry i’ll get another one to u
She turn and start going
Frnd1 : what kind if servants u have in ur house , look at her
GM hearing all this and tear start flowing from her eyes
P: no no no she is not servants
F2: servant nhi to kya maalkin h
And they laugh loudly
P: she is MIL of om
F1: what om , u must be joking pinki,
P: no i m not
F2: how can she be , i mean issey to kapde pahenne ka tareeka bhi nhi h, ek no. ki gawar lagti h, me to issey apne ghar ki naukrani bhi na rakhu
F3: yaa exactly ,how tacky she is , pata nhi kaha fas gaya OM
P: now what can we do
P: arey samdhan ji aap abhi tak gaye nhi , go fast and bring cold drinks for my frnds
And again they laugh
She nodded and start moving but stop by GAURI

She takes plate from her hand and wipe her tear
And go to pinki frnds with plate in her hand and put plate on pinki frnd house she look at her confusingly and other too
Frnd1: what is this
G: dimaag k saath aankhen bhi khaaraab h kya aapki
P: Gauri how dare u talk to my frnd like this
G: i m giving answer them in their language so plz quite
G: so what r u saying ,she is illeterate ,don’t know anything about clothes and aap inn jaiso ko apne ghr ka naukar bhi nahi banayegi ryt
And chooti maa ji these r ur frnds ryt so u should serve them with ur hand
And aap logo ko itni bhook pyaas lagi h to don’t u guys have hand and aunt ji u want child ryt to apne ghr se lekar aatey and yaa she is illeterate ryt, she is not like u but she is far better than u she know how to respect other not like u guys who don’t know about it and if u don’t want i will throw all of u out of house so plz shaanti se chaley jaa eye otherwise i know otherways to show u gate so just get out of my house(angrily)

Pinki frnds angrily left from there
Pinki fumes in anger
P: how dare u to behave like this my frnd (shouting)
G: i didn’t do anything wrong , i just show them their way that sit , what kind of people they were(same tone) , u should stop them but u were encouraging them , they don’t know how to talk to others
Except Mahika everybody enter in hall hearing this loud sound
P: jaise bhi h they are far better than u ,
G: what do u want to say
P: don’t open my mouth
G: just say it what u want to say once for all ye matter yhi khatam ho jayega
S: pinki singj oberoi not a word more against my sister
G: no bade bhaiye not today , let her speak , i also want to know what she wants to say and today no one stop her meri kasam h aapko
P: u want to listen na so just listen
Karan came
K: whats going on guys and chutki why r u crying
G: nothing bhai , just clarifying some doubts of her so plz be quite for some tym
P: lo aa gaya ek or iska aashiq
Annika came
A: handle ur tongue before speak(angrily)
G: no di let her complete
P: u r a characterless girl , don’t know how many mans u trap before ur marriage and even after too ,don’t know how many nights u spend in others bed for money ,
Everybody anger reach peak but they are tied with her swear and annika she tries to move and give her answer but stop by karan
Tear start flowing from Gauri eyes
P: first u were with kaali thakur for his money bechara he wants to marry u but when u find omkara than u left him to earn more ,omkara, i don’t how much much this list is long people like u can do anything for money , pata nhi kiska ganda khoon beh raha h teri ragoo me, do u know name of ur parents, u r such a manhoos jaha bhi jati h barbaadi laati h ,jisne adopt kiya use bhi khaa gayi and jis din se yaha aayi h we didn’t get even a single second for peace, don’t know whose illegimate daughter u r , NAJAYAJ KH
before she complete
SOMEONE SLAP HER HARD
Pinki hold her cheek and everyone turn toward the person who SLAP pinki
A lady in her mid 50’s wearing pink saree and anger in her eyes is clearly visible
Karan and Annika look at each other and pass smile to each other
K: now u don’t need to do anything just wait and watch
A: i know
P: How dar
Before she complete
Lady again SLAP HER
P: DO U
AGAIN
SLAP
P: WH
SLAP
Pinki ko samajh nhi aaya ki what happened to her
She again raise her hand to SLAP HER but SHAKTI came in between and hold her hand
Shakti : how dare u to SLAP my wife in front of me
Lady look at him angrily
Shakti: do u have any idea who is she , whom u hitted (angrily)
Voice: DO YOU KNOW WHOSE HAND U HOLD MR. SHAKTI SINGH OBEROI
Kriyan come and stand beside lady
Gauri stumble in her place ,om and kriyan run to hold her but before om hold her Kriyan engulf her in his embrace
P: look her one more aashiq has come
In same position Kriyan angrily look at her
Kr: don’t u dare to say a word against her otherwise i will forget u r lady and even elder to me so be in ur limits(angrily shout)
All look at him confusion +shock
P: this is our family matter so stay out of it
Kr: NOOOO , this is not ur family matter , this is my FAMILY MATTER, AND I WILL NOT BEAR AGAINST MY SISTER
in same position Gauri with tearful eyes look at kriyan in confusion and other too
G: SISTER (WHISPER)
Kriyan look at her and nodded
Shivaay: WHAT DID U SAY ,IS she is ur sister
Lady: yes he is her BROTHER (SHOUTING)
Gauri looks the lady and lady also look at her lovingly
Bhavya: What r u saying??? U r lying bhabhi has no brother
Another sound came from door
Lady2: And WHY WILL SHE LIE TO HER??? AND WHAT SHE GET FROM LYING TO HER OWN DAUGHTER
ALL : DAUGHTER
GAURI BREAK HUG AND LOOK AT KRIYAN HOPEFULLY
KR: Yes she is ryt , she is ur mother, who gave u birth , who was searching u from past 17 years
T: if i m not wrong u r AROHI LUTHRA (TO SECOND LADY)
AR: u r partially ryt I M AROHI BUT NOT LUTHRA,
ALL LOOK AT HER CONFUSINGLY
AR: I M Mrs. AROHI ADHIRAAJ SINGH RAJVANSHI
And she( pointing toward lady ) whose hand u stop is none other than Mrs. SAGRIKA YASH SING RAJVANSHI
Sag; AUR JIS LADKI K BAAREY ME YE AURAT BAAT KR KHI H NA ,USKI AUUKAAT JAANTI HO SHE IS DAUGHTER OF Mr. YASH SINGH RAJVANSHI, SHE IS NONE OTHER THAN GAURI YASH SINGH RAJVANSHI
OF was shocked with this revealation and they don’t understand what they say and pinki jis ladki ko wo taaney maar rhi thi uski to bolti band ho gayi
Gauri look at Sagrika and sagrika also look at her,
Than she look at Omkara who assure her to approach
Kr: SHE IS OUR CHUTKII
AR: Chutki come and hug ur mother she is craving for u from last 17 years
Gauri immedietely run to her mother and engulf her in her embrace and tear of happiness flow from their eyes
Everybody became emotional witnessing the reunion of MOTHER-DAUGHTER AFTER LONG 17 YEARS
AND THEY REMAIN IN THIS POSITION FOR FEW MINUTES
Ar: Don’t u meet ur Arohi dii ohhh sorry Bhabhi CHUTKI
SHE nodded and broke the hug and immedietely hug her
Kr: u both made everybody emotional here
Ar: shut up
Kr: waise i m also here
Sag:so who stop u
Kriyan hug sagrika
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After Sometym
Everybody settle on hall
Gauri is sitting between SAGRIKA AND AROHI and kriyan is sitting next sofa beside SAGRIKA
B:i have a question for ktiyan could i ask??
Kr: yaa sure carry on
B: how did u recognise Bhabhi ???i mean u came yesterday than how
Kriyan look at MAHIKA and pass smile
Kr: actually when i came yesterday this photo sticked on my shoe and when reach hotel i noticed it and when i look at picture i recognise her easily
(Same photo)
GM: this is my and gauri picture
Gauri look at her
GM: i m happy for u gauri , now u get ur family back
She became emotinal
G: maa u r also my family
Gm: no beta they are ur real family not me and she is ur mother
Sag: Noo not me alone we both are her mother what happen u didn’t gave her birth but u loved her more than anything and jJANAM DENE WALI SE PAALNE WAALI MAA JYADA BADI HOTI H
Ar: and aunt ji u r always her mother
Gauri hug sagrika and arohi
Sag: if u don’t mind can i ask one thing from u
G: don’t ask order meโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บMAAA
Sag: โ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บโ˜บ will u plz come with us to Jaipur
G: jaipur
Kr: ur real house is in jaipur chutk
Ar: yes chutki plz don’t say no EVERYBODY THERE WAITING FOR HER CHUTKIII JABSE SABKO PATA CHALA H NAA TABSE SABKI BHOOK PYAAS SB MAR GAYI H EVERYBODY IS WAITING FOR U PLZ COME NAA
O: why will she say NO, she will defenetely come with u
Everybody look at om and proud him
R: waise who is in ur family
B: shut up rudy, kuch bhi
Sag: no no its okk, i will tell u , u met with us na so i will told u about others
Yash
Shashank brother
Chaya

J: chaya luthra famous fashion designer
Sag: yes
R: mom don’t interrupt in between plz carry on aunty
Adhiraj , u already met kriyan
Samaira we called her sammy
Raghav
Hearing raghav annika and her family eyes became moist except gauri
Annika left from there karan follow her
Annika family notice this
D: is everything f9
Sag: yaa yaa
G: why u stop
Kr:i will tell u further
Superstars
G: superstars
Kr: yaa superstars Arohi di and Adhiraj veer ji TWINS CHILDRENS
AAHAAN and AAHANA their names
G: bss i think something is left
Ar: yes u r ryt
Two more left
B: who r they
Ur elder brother and sister
G: what is their name
Kr: sorry we can’t reveal their name to u
B: why
Kr: bcz they don’t want it
G: okk i will not ask
Sag: om will u plz also join us
O: me kaise
Ar: why not
G: plz omkara ji
O: okk i will
Screen freeze

Precap
Mystery man reveal

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9 Comments
  1. Madhu.r

    Where is raghav?

  2. Shabnam

    superrล•rr varsha what a twist lovely pinky ko ommt awesome keep writing loved it sibling bonding soooooo cute family renuian was emotional superb keep writing

  3. That was to much emotional. Just KHITKITOR episode. Keep writing like this. Now looking forward to the next part. Post sooner.

  4. Banita

    Awesome part dr…. Like Pinky’s OMM wala part more…. Many mystery to revelled…. Post soon….

  5. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dear

  6. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous….loved it update next part soon

  7. Alekhika20

    Awesome update

  8. Sagithya

    Awesome… Pinky need more slaps… Excited for the next part… Post it soon..

    1. Versha

      Yaa i know

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