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Unexpectedly Fallen (SwaSan OS) Ending by Marsuu

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Hello guys!! Back with the ending part.

Unexpectedly Fallen (SwaSan OS)
Ending:
Glimpse of Beginning:
Sanskar met swara on road.
Swara pregnant and then lost her child.
Sanskar stern behavior towards Swara.
Swara and sujata’s bonding.

Next Evening:
Sanskar left early in the morning to his office bcoz of urgent work. He return back and got surprised to see sujata sitting sadly otherwise everyday she used to be with swara.
” what happened mom??” he asked going close to her.
” I’m so sad” sujata replied.
” why??” Sanskar asked getting confused.
” bcoz swara left” sujata’s eyes got filled with tears.
Sanskar forget to breathe for few seconds.
” why are you shocked?? You only ask her to leave” his mind mocked.
He reminiscences the harsh words he said to her yesterday night. He took deep breathe and left to his room.

” you know when I come near to you, my heartbeat increases. You have the power to make Sanskar maheshwari senseless” Sanskar whispered as he leaned to kiss the girl standing in front of him with pink cheeks.
” Sanskar plzz” she turn shyly before he could kiss her.
Sanskar back hug her and whisper huskily in her ear
” I love you swara”
And the next moment sanskar got up all sweating. He looked around and realized it was his dream.
” what you said no no its just dream” he tried to convince himself.
” where will be swara now she said she don’t have anyone” his heart was getting restless. He got up and went to guest house.

After opening the door, sanskar enter inside the room and saw the bed is empty otherwise every night when he used to come to see her she used to cuddle with the pillow. Her glowing face in the dim light was enough to flatter sanskar’s heart. But today she is not here. He can feel her presence, smell her fragrance.
” missing her” sujata said standing at the door.
Sanskar looked back and was not knowing what to say.
” why would I?” He avoided eye contact.
” then what are you doing here??” Sujata questioned.
” wo I just came and if I come here it doesn’t mean I miss or love her” sanskar blurted in frustration.
As much he is trying to suppress these unknown feelings that much only they are evolving.
” I didn’t said you love her” sujata smirked as he said truth
Sanskar was speechless. He closed his eyes not willingly to face the situation.
” why are you ignoring your feelings?” Sujata asked.
” mom she is not for me swara love someone else” sanskar sit on the bed.
” whom??” She asked
“The father of that child”Sanskar closed his eyes.
” did she said??” Sujata questioned.
” no I never talked to her nicely I always behave rudely with her so that I can kill these feelings” sujata can see the guilt in his eyes.
” you are just assuming, talk to her may be she also feel something for you” sujata give him hopes.
” she must be hating me for my behavior” sanskar chuckles sadly.
” i don’t know go and bring my dil back” sujata said strictly making sanskar smile.
” do you know where she went??” Sanskar asked as now he was determined to bring her back.
” she said she is going to her house and I was in so much grief that didn’t asked further” sujata sadly said.
” don’t worry I will find her” sanskar smile and left to his room.

After 3 months,
Swara left maheshwari house 3 months back and sanskar still failed to find her. He has applied his all sources but didn’t get to know about her where abouts.He most of the time remain silent and miss her a lot. It was just few days she live with them but it don’t take time to built connections.
Sanskar is silently having breakfast.
” any news of Swara??” Sujata asked
” no I’m scared she will be fine na?” Sanskar was hell worried for her don’t know where she disappeared.
” yes be positive” sujata assures.
” mom today I’m going to pune to school” sanskar said getting up.
” okay” sujata smiles and he left.

Sanskar was coming after meeting the principal of the school when someone striked with him.
” careful miss” he mumble.
Girl said sorry and started collecting her books from ground.
Sanskar was dumbstruck to see her. He was madly finding her in Mumbai and she is here in pune.
” swara” the only word came from his mouth.
Swara looked up listening to her name.
” sir” she stand up.
Sanskar was lost in her. She is same beautiful wearing light pink suit with long open hairs.
” Excuse me Sir” she again called as he didn’t responded.
” amm swara what are you doing here??” He finally asked.
” I’m doing job as teacher” she said
” ohh this is my school so came here” he told though she didn’t asked.
Sanskar has many charity schools in pune and Mumbai.
” okk” she said.
” may we talk??” He asked
He want to clear few things with her.
” sure” she tried to smile.
They came in the park.
” come with me swara” he directly said. He is not the man who will request bcoz he prefer to order.
Swara stare him how easily he is ordering her as if she is his slave.
” and why??” She crossed her arms.
She is not scared from him and living alone for 3 months has really help her to build self confidence.
Sanskar was not knowing with which right he should take her.
” mom is missing you” finally he got the best excuse infact which is true also.
” how is she??” Swara too misses sujata’s care and her company.
” she remain sad without you” he don’t want to leave any chance to take her with him.
” then what about my job?” She asked. Even she is craving to meet sujata.
” I’m there why you want to work” he said in flow.
” I don’t want to be burden on someone and I do have self respect” she said sarcastically.
Sanskar understood what she really means. He was regretting for the words he said but now nothing could be done expect apologizing.
” I’m sorry for being rude” he said and sorry word look foreign to himself as he never said to anyone.
” no need why would you talk politely with me I’m no one to you” she said looking away.
Sanskar was hurt. Do she think him no one. The fear to lose her engulfed his heart.
” You can work in my office” he tried to change the topic.
” hmm thanks but I will pay the rent also” swara said
“Alright then let’s go” he got up.
” but I have class now” she said
” don’t worry I will talk to principal and where do you live?” He asked.
” in teachers quarter” she said
” okay bring your things.” He again ordered.
Swara signed as this man won’t change.

Sujata opened the door as the bell rings.
” swara” she shouted and tightly hugged her.
” how are you mom?” Swara smile at her.
Swara call sujata , mom as she wants her to say.
” now I’m super happy after seeing you” sujata was so excited.
They all came inside and sit in the hall. Sujata and swara got busy with each other while Sanskar was staring swara with the corner of his eye.
” where were you in these months?” Sujata asked.
” I was with my friend in pune then she helped me to get job in sir’s school and there we met” swara explained.
“Okay today I will make all your favourite dishes” sujata said and ran to kitchen.
Swara laugh at her. Sanskar clear his throat to gain swara’s attention.
She looked down ignoring sanskar which hurt his ego.
” why are you ignoring me??” He asked
” when I did?” she said not understanding that what he really means.
Sanskar cursed himself for not controlling himself.
She picked her bag and went to guest room later to kitchen to help sujata.
Sanskar know it won’t be easy to know what she has in her heart.
Then he thought about the baby. Did she love someone else?? This mere thought was enough to prick his heart.
” now she is mine I don’t care whoever was in her life earlier” he convinced his heart.

Next day, Sanskar came in the hall ready for the office and saw swara and sujata near dining table.
” Swara you want to come to office” Sanskar asked sitting on the chair.
” she will come after few days” sujata said before Swara could say.
Swara nodded in agreement as she can’t refuse to sujata.
Swara serve breakfast to sujata then move towards Sanskar. He felt happy that she will serve him but bad luck.
She keep the bowl in front of him and waited for him to take it.
Sanskar signed sadly and himself served and started eating.

After few days,
Nothing has changed, swara totally ignored Sanskar. He always tried to talk to her and her answers were very short and stern.
Night:
Sanskar enter in swara’s room and saw her sitting on the bed using mobile.
Swara give him look ” don’t you have manners entering without permission”. Sanskar smile as if he read her mind. He moved back to door. Swara thought he will ask permission but no he closed the door which widen swara’s eyes but she acted normal.
” I need to talk” Sanskar said standing near swara.
” I don’t think there is anything to talk between us” Swara said silently praying that he should leave.
” swara don’t show attitude yrr” he said getting fed up of her negligence.
” this attitude I had learned from you only Sir” she replied.
” okay why are you ignoring me it’s hurting” he confessed.
” I was also hurt when you asked me to leave” her voice got heavy as tears welled up in her eyes.
” I’m sorry”he mumble.
” you know how much unwanted I felt” tears are now flowing down her cheeks.
” I was just confused” he was not knowing what to say.
He tried to wipe her tears but she jerked his hand and turn other side.
” you seriously don’t have heart” swara said
Sanskar smile with wet eyes and stepped closer to her.
” right bcoz I had given my heart to my love” he whispered against her ear.
She look at him with confusion in her eyes.
” swara I was scared to express my feelings that’s why I wanted you to go away from me but even I felt pain when I used to behave rudely. I was not knowing how to react. I don’t wanted to accept that….” He tried to justify his behavior.
” that??” She waited for him to complete.
” that I love you” he said looking straight in her eyes. She was beyond shock.
” I know you don’t love me and I will not force …..” He was saying when she cut him
” what you know about me?? I was pregnant what if I’m characterle…”
Next moment swara’s back hit with the wall
” dare you to use that word again” his voice was hell dangerous which scared swara.
” your eyes are so pure innocent and crystal clear I can read everything” he said moving back.
” don’t you want to know whose child it was??” Swara asked
” it was your past and I want to make my future with you so it doesn’t matter” he said sternly.
” but I want to tell” she sit beside him on bed.
” of course you can” he said though he has little fear that she will tell about her past love which will definitely hurt him but he won’t show.
” it was my bhai and bhabi’s child” she started and sanskar looked at her in dilemma but didn’t interpreted.
” my bhabi was having problem in conceiving so I became surrogate mother of their child with medical treatment” she said taking deep breathe.
Sanskar was shocked as he didn’t expected this.
” where are they??” He asked.
” I was one month pregnant with their child when they died in accident. I was totally broken, they were my everything. My bhai was never ready for my surrogacy as he cares for me alot but I want to give him happiness. After their death I thought to live for baby and nourish him as my own child” she was unable to complete as she was crying.
Sanskar give her water and side hugged her.
” when you met me I was 3 months pregnant. Some relatives asked me to give my whole property to them as no one was with me. I refused to give bcoz I have to take care of the baby. They ill treated me and beat me and finally surrendering ,I signed property papers. But still I failed to save the child. That night I was having no place and was injured and came in front of your car” swara completed with great difficulty gulping her tears.
Tears form in Sanskar’s eyes also knowing how much his love suffered and at the top his behavior was making him feel more and more guilty.
” thanks for listening” swara wiped her tears moving away from his arms.
” you can take your time swara I can’t even think how much you have suffered. I used to come at night to see you and never knew behind this pretty innocent face there is so much pain”. He said while swara smile sadly.
” good night” swara said thinking that he will leave.
” first you sleep then I will go” he said
Swara stare him blankly
” plz” he requested for the very first time so she nodded and lie on the bed. Soon when Sanskar felt that she slept, he got up. Kissing her forehead and switching off the light he left from there.

Next day:
Swara talked nicely with sanskar but didn’t reacted on his confession.
They trio are sitting in the hall. Sanskar is busy on laptop and swara is reading newspaper.
“Mom listen this breaking news” swara said giving a look to sanskar but he was totally indulged in his lappy not to forget he is workaholic.
” tell tell” sujata is excited.
” one man got heart attack bcoz he was tooo arrogant” she press her lips.
” what???? Sanskar stop being arrogant” sujata got worried for him.
Swara was suppressing her laugh.
” okay” sanskar give fake smile to sujata who ran to kitchen as she remember about the milk she kept for boiling.
Sanskar smirk and went near swara while she gulp her saliva.
” show me that news” Sanskar lean on her and she fell on sofa completely.
” wo its not there” she whispered looking down.
” then making fun of me??” He move more closer.
” mom” swara said looking back. Sanskar instantly moved back.
Swara giggles and ran to kitchen and sanskar realizes she made him fool.
He smile and again got busy in his work.

Sanskar’s POV:
I enter in my room all devastated and tired due to the over work in office only to see my beautiful wife setting bed. She look really breath taking in that royal blue simple saree. It’s been 6 months since we are married. She married me as mom wants and swara accepted on our first night that she also love me and it feel heavenly when your love reciprocate your feelings. But still we didn’t took our marriage ahead. To be honest it is really torcher to be near her but not to touch her. Just kidding nothing like that she is with me and that’s enough for me. Ohh she noticed me..
Sanskar’s POV ends.

” sanskar you came” swara said looking at him.
“Hmm” sanskar came closer and back hugged her.
” you look tired?” Swara brushed her hands in his already messy hairs and lossen his tie turning towards him.
” I’m okay” Sanskar nuzzles his nose in her cheeks later leaving wet kisses there.
” I need you” Sanskar look intensely in her eyes with his tried once.
” I’m always yours” swara said kissing his cheeks.
Sanskar smile and lean on her as the result they fall on the bed with sanskar on the top.
Sanskar pull her more close to him and started kissing her neck caressing her waist under the saree.
Swara’s hand crawl in his hairs pulling him closer.
” sanskar dinner” swara said as she remembered he didn’t took dinner.
” you had?” Sanskar asked not leaving her skin.
” hmm” she was so lost in his touch to speak anything.
” I don’t want to have” sanskar stare in her eyes and then placing his lips on her and kissing softly. His one hand caress her bare back opening the string of her saree.
” Sanskarrr” she mourn as he bite her lower lips.
Later, after their passionate love making Sanskar took swara in his embrace covering them with the single comforter. Sanskar’s one hand is wrapped around swara while with the other hand’s fingers swara is playing.
” swara” Sanskar said
“Hmm” she look at him who was already staring her.
” you want to meet your relatives in the court” he asked.
” no plz just leave them” swara was scared as she remembered those worst days.
” I had taken your brother’s company back and I will merge it with mine.Even I had filed case against them of blackmailing” Sanskar said casually.
” when you did all this?” Swara was shocked.
” from last few months I was doing and then trapped them” sanskar said
” I don’t want to see their faces and you have my brother’s company that’s enough”Swara hugged him tightly not willing to face her past again.
” don’t worry I will handle” with that he placed a soft kiss at her forehead.

Next morning:
” What the hell!!! I want him in my office otherwise he can resign” Sanskar yelled on the phone. They are still lying in each other’s embrace.
Swara opened her eyes and look up to see her angry husband.
” it will be better” he said sternly on phone and cut it .
” you start shouting in the early morning” swara nuzzles herself more in his chest.
” huh!!! My employees irritate me what can I do” Sanskar justify himself.
” control your temper” swara said
” that only I can’t do whenever I try to act politely it comes out to be angry one” sanskar reasoned.
” yeah!! How can I forget after all you are Arrogant Maheshwari” Swara teases him.
Sanskar smirk and instantly turn taking her beneath him.
” Sanskar what are you doing?” Swara said as he started kissing her cheeks.
” let me show what this arrogant maheshwari can do” he smirk and before Swara could say anything he seal her lips with his and they kissed each other passionately.

After 2 years, swasan are blessed with baby boy whose name they kept after swara’s brother ” Sanjay Maheshwari”.

The End

I hope it was Worth reading bcoz to cover so many things in one shot become little difficult.

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76 Comments
  1. Awesome 😊😊😊and pls post ur other stories soon..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and my stories are coming soon tc😊😊😘😘😘

  2. Shreny

    Awesome…. good ending.

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  3. Awesome and excellent dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  4. NDSG

    Awesome superbbbbbπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
    I’m dancing now yepii wohooπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ. First wala illusion of Swara Hehehehe awesome. I love u SWARA😚😚😚😚😘😘😘😘😘😚. But dream onlyπŸ˜°πŸ˜’πŸ˜”. Then went to her room. But she was not there 😒😒😒😒😒😒😒. Kitna hurt hua my SankuπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜˜πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’πŸ˜’ don’t cry Sanku.
    But he was only responsible for that. Kitna bura laga hoga jb usne Shona se Jane ko bola hoga huh😏 stone hearted Maheshwari😀. Itni cute girl ko koi Jane ko bolta h bhala😏😏😏 pagluπŸ˜›.
    When she left then cries, but I love Shona’s attitude πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜ŒπŸ˜Œ good girl. Not only Sanku Shona can also show anger πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›.
    Then last part of their πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ was beautifully written even I loved the thing in which Sanskaar shouts on his employes and his Shona was in his arms aww😍😍😍😍😍😊 how beautiful scene.

    She suffered a lot and fixed everything that’s called true love😘😍😘😍😘😍😘

    Waiting for ur updates….

    1. Mars

      Yeah he got hurt but he was the one who behaved rudelyπŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘
      Shona’s attitude is no less she knows the way to handle arrogant Sanskar😎😎😎😎😎😎
      Hayeeee last mai romanceπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ baat mat kar I’m blushingπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Of course their love was true that’s why they are togetherπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•
      Thank you so much depuuu dear tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  5. awesome…. os ……mene last part main guess Kia tha …. hihi but didn’t comment on that…. as I was Lil bit out of time…..
    Solly….

    waiting for your other stories…..

    1. Mars

      Ohhhoo guessed ha πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ
      Aree no need of Solly its okay😊😊
      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊
      Other stories coming soon πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡

  6. Bush1122

    Di…….. awesome epi di…!!! Loved this shot alot….!!!!!πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€
    Im waiting for your stories……
    PlZzzz post them soon nah…!!!!!
    And yeah really you gave me a good news about bumper updates of ur ff’s……😁😁
    Waiting impatiently….☺☺

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear and my other stories are coming super soon wait for themπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Take care😘😘😊😊

  7. Rekha

    Amazing Story dr……….😍😍
    Yeah Eagerly Waiting For Ur UpdatesπŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

    1. Mars

      Awww thank you so much dear my other stories are coming soon tc😘😘😊😊😊😊

  8. Independent

    Awesome dear

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dii tc😘😘😊😊

  9. awesome update your stories missing them dont do late update soon

    1. Mars

      Awww sorry for the delay but now will try to post regularly 😊😊😊thank you so much dear tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  10. Tamil

    Amazing dear……loved it…….I am waiting for ur stories……..

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear my other stories are coming soon tc😊😊😘😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  11. SaNaYa

    This story was so beautiful 😍 awsm concept

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  12. Sweet superb fantastic!!!!
    I love u yrrrrr!!!! Stories pe stopries ! Stories pe stopries !Stories pe stopries !

    Haha haha

    1. Mars

      Omggg I’m laughing reading your commentπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      Thank you so much dear love you tc😘😘😊😊😊😊

  13. Hey dear.
    Its amazing.

    1. Mars

      Hey thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  14. good work

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  15. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  16. Awesome dear Sanskar love towards Swara loved it

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘😘

  17. Wah.. What n attitude yar… 😎😎😎😎😎
    Starting was little hurting πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”πŸ’”….bt then when they met… Sanskar’s feeling was superb… Like he was so happy to see her after a long long time….
    Then then comes her attitude πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
    Loved that…
    N then her story 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I never thought that it can be this one too… Nice one dear…. ❀❀❀after u r smart na πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

    N coming to ur other stories then I m always waiting for that… N don’t worry… We will comment 😊😊😊😊😘😘😘😘😘

    1. Mars

      Seriously both are gifted with lots and lots of attitudeπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜ŽπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Smart me hayeeeeπŸ™ŠπŸ™ŠπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
      My other stories are coming soonπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😘😊😊

  18. Amazing os dear….

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  19. Awesome di. Please post your other stories too

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear will post my other stories soon tc😊😊😘😘

  20. Awesome

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  21. AnuAnn

    Loved it marssu😘😘😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😊😊😘😘

  22. Awesome..
    Loved it ❀❀
    Beautifully written 😍😍
    Waiting for your stories πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™
    Tc😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and my stories are coming soon tc😘😘😊😊

  23. Tweety_SwaSan

    Hey Mars..it’s amazing dear… Sanskaar guilt πŸ˜” and his love.. 😍 Swara’s attitude towards Sanskaar.. πŸ‘ serves him right.. but still can’t see any of them in pain.. πŸ˜” Swara Sujatha bonding is too good.. So I was correct about surrogacy.. 😊 Poor Shona suffered so much and lost last symbol of her bhai.. 😭 But am happy at last she got love from Sanskaar.. 😍❀ SwaSan are so cute.. I just loved it.. Thank you dear.. Tc.. πŸ˜˜β€πŸ€—

    1. Mars

      Yupp you guessed right about surrogacyπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
      Indeed swara suffered a lotπŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜” but sanskar’s love healed her all woundsπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜
      Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc😘😘😘😊😊😊

  24. Tweety_SwaSan

    Yaar is it even required to ask.. Of course we want all of your SwaSan stories updates… Even some new stories as well.. You know I am greedy when it’s about SwaSan… And you are one of best and most efficient writer of SwaSan.. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ And one of my favourite too..😘😘 I love all your SwaSan stories.. 😍😍 So I expect (want) more and more SwaSan stories from you.. πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜† Hope you don’t mind.. πŸ˜” And thank you so much.. From your stories I can really feel SwaSan in my heart.. Love you.. πŸ€—πŸ˜β€πŸ˜˜ God Bless You..

    1. Mars

      Awwww that’s soo sweet of you dear😍😍😍 your words really means a lotπŸ’
      So my stories are coming soon and you know there are many new ones going in my head but I’m stopping them as I have to cover ongoing storiesπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œ you can ask anytime I don’t mindπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Even I can never get tired of writing on SwaSan after all they are heavenlyπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜
      Thank you dear tc😊😊😊😘😘😘

      1. Tweety_SwaSan

        Then will be eagerly waiting for them dear.. 😊😊 Thank you so much.. πŸ˜πŸ˜˜πŸ€—

    2. Mars

      Will post soon tcπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

  25. I am waiting…

    1. Mars

      Will post my stories soon thank you dear tc😘😘😊😊

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  26. Soujanya

    Awesome…

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  27. MeeeeeeeπŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ™‹πŸ™‹
    I’m eagerly waiting for your stories

    1. Mars

      OkayπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡ will post my stories soon thank you dear tc😘😘😊😊

  28. Wow loved it 😍😍

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  29. AbrahamEzra

    I missed ur stories especially he is dangerous u know na I’m obsessed with it . He he. It was superb and sry I didn’t commented in previous one. I’m sry. Plss post ur other ffs.
    Coming to this one it was awesome. I loved it. It was too cute and sweet. Loved sanskars character. Though he is arrogant he have love deep inside him. And his confession was superb. Looking straight into her eyes. It really needs guts right. Swasuj bonding was awesome. And poor swara how much she suffered. The story is a super se upar wala one yaar

    1. Mars

      I will post my stories soon and he is dangerous your obsessed oneπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ will most probably give tomorrowπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      Thank you so much dear and yuppp sanskar directly confessed though he know she don’t love himπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’πŸ’πŸ’
      No need of sorry its okay😊😊
      Take care😘😘😘😊

  30. Samaira_khan

    heyyyy marsuuuu sooo sorry yaar wasnt able to comment!! uff reading this mera dil khushi se garden garden hogaya!! hihi but seriously u rocked it!! uff swasan huhh sooooo much attitude.. attitude wale SwaSan but no matter what they rock!!! starting was really disheartening… swara and sanskar both were right loveddd it! swara s attitude amzinggg.. sanskar uff as usual just can say ur perfect!! loveeeeeeeeeeeeeed it … thankuuuu so mucchh for this… and thankuuuuu for changing ur cover pic.. helluuuu she is looking sooo cute!! i was actually saying to change it and before tht u changed!! ok enough of my bak bak.. keep posting!!loveeee u

    1. Mars

      Seriously both swasan have so much attitude😎😎😎😎 they can only handle each otherπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚thats why they make perfect coupleπŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•πŸ’•

      Helluuuuu is super cute and in this pic I feel like pulling her soft cheeksπŸ’πŸ’πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜ yeah I thought to change the pic as it got oldπŸ˜œπŸ˜œπŸ˜‡πŸ˜‡
      No need of sorry yrr it’s okay☺☺☺
      Thank you so much dear love you tc😘😘😘😊😊😊😊😊

  31. Awesome dear……. sorry dear for not commenting on ur other stories..as I read those now…😘😘

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear and no need of sorry its okay tc😘😘😊😊

  32. Awesome dear. I went to study tour that why I didn’t comment on previous part. Sorry.
    Please update all ur stories

    1. Mars

      Its alright dear no problem😊😊
      Thank you so much dear tc😘😘😊😊

  33. Harneet

    nice …. u are always the one and only writer whose stories i read regularly but sometimes duw to buay shechdule i miss them … keep writing

    love u .

    1. Mars

      Thank you so much dear glad you liked it tc😊😊😘😘😘😘

  34. ArpitaKrish

    It was fab as usual. When you will write Naughty Billo?? I’m waiting……Please……

    1. Mars

      Thank you dear will post naughty billo soon tc😘😘😊😊

  35. Vyshu10

    superb

  36. Gayathri.visu

    Wow…..this time u make my blushing babies as arrogant babies. Hmm….not bad yaar! Afterall they r Mr & Mrs. Sanskaar Maheshwari na…so arrogant is allowed!
    Good story dear….Amazing! After reading first part…somehow I guessed that Swara is someone’s surrogate. And it becomes true…..yayyyyyy! Starting is lil sad….but after SUPER. As usual this time also I loved ur Suju(huh….she is not like sufferings suju). After Swasan’s marriage scene n Sanskaar’s anger…just perfect!

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