UNEXPECTED TURN IN LIFE ( TWINJ FF ) πŸ’• (INTRO)

Hey friends ……daamini here….actually I was bored of studying so thought to write an ff I mean it’s just only an intro to my ff ..actually it’s gonna be my first piece of writing n I’m hell nervous that whether it’s gonna be good or not …..so Plzz bear it ..☺n Plzz support me if u think that I will be able to entertain u all
So here we go ..
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So THE PLOT
There is a girl which if full of life , bubbly , still lives in dreams n childish but know when to behave like a mature person in important phases of life when it’s required ……she lives with her small brother who is 12 years old n aunt n lost her parents when she was 13 years old ……..she is poor but earn enough to feed her brother n herself n also manages the little requirements to fulfil…she have big dreams ………(ya ya ya she is twinkle only ) but the main part is that…she was rich once a time but now its all changed but …..no no if I will tell everything right now so what will u read further ….now the present is that she is getting married to the most famous business man manohar sarna’s son kunj …………kunj is a a kind hearted person but most of the time he behaves rudely coz of his dark past n really dont want to involve in a relationship of marriage n don’t believe in love like thing…………….
Manohar Sarna is a successful business man but still only believes in profit n want to take revenge from ………πŸ˜† (I will tell u this later from whom he want to take revenge) ….no one matters in his life except money n revenge ..he doesn’t even shows love to her wife Usha n son kunj….he thinks that kunj is useless who just want to build his own empire but can’t coz kunj is nothing without him …this is all his thinking ….

Usha Sarna ,wife of manohar is a helpless mother who is not able to give happiness to his son n curse herself to be such a helpless mother ………. loves her son kunj a lot

Sonal….aunt of twinkle n (u guys can imagine shruti ulfat as sonal ) she loves her a lot……she also lost her child in past n treat twinkle n his brother just as her own children …….

Kunj also loves her mother a lot n want to take her n himself away from such cruel world as per to him his father is the most cruellest person in the world n can do anything for his mother …………

Twinkle as usual also loves her brother n aunt n believes in love …True love n have many expectations from her life regarding love ………(guys u can understand what girl should Want her life to be ….obviously a loving husband who can do anything for her n loves her more than anything …….galat sense mein mat lena ki end mein apne pati ko uski family k against krde u guys r enough to understand my point )
Others character will be add on only if u guys will support me otherwise I won’t be able to continue
Toh now EK JHALAK

SCENE 1
A big mansion is shown n now a big lavish room
A lady is standing in a room crying vigorously…….she is trying to say something to the other person who is standing in front of her ….
Lady (in a choked voice …she is crying ): Plzzz don’t do this ………he is ur son ..how can u be so cruel to ur son ….u know everything about him n his past ….so why don’t u let him live his life on his own ….
Suddenly CHATTAAKKHH!!!!

THE man slap the women n says
Man (angrily with blood red eyes ): how dare u speak like this in front of me ….aaj tumhaare mein itni himmat aa gayi ki tum mujhse meri aankhon mein aankhen daal kr yeh Sab bologi…….how dare u…..now u will tell me what to do n not !!!😠😠
The women’s lips were bleeding ….she was not able to response anything …….she was becoming weak …
Man : u r asking me to let ur son live happily……( now the man acts n shows his fake concern to the lady n goes to her ……..he softly hold her shoulder n says )
Man ( with fake concern which is visible n making him look like a maniac ): im sorry usha im really sorry (now holding her face softly ) u want ur son to be happy …..say na u want ur son to be happy or not

The lady didn’t respond as she was hell scared ..oh sorry now no more lady it’s Usha……
Now the man was back to his anger again n tight his fist against her mouth which was soft before
Man 😠: u want ur so happy…ha ha ha ha …..u r an insane ..ur son was always useless……he never did anything for me that could make me happy ever …..bnow it’s time for him to make me happy…….
The man left the room in anger n sudden a voice came like a wood is hitting against wall ..ya ya the man slam the door ….at first listening the sound Usha got scared bit again she started crying
Usha to herself : when, when manohar u became so cruel, when became such a bad husband , a bad father …………( now she was completely broke down n crying )
Usha to herself :im ……sorry ….beta ……again I fail to give u happiness ..again I fail to be a good mother ……I’m sorry kunj …im sorry
( so guys the man was non other than manohar n parents of kunj)

Scene 2
A room is shown ..simple small room …..a girl near age of 23 age is talking to a person ….she is wearing simple white top on which pink red flowers r printed n a black jeans …….
Girl : maa u know that I’m too small for a marriage then why r u …….(saying all while making a pout )
Lady : twinkle don’t be a stubborn …….u know that ur father made a promise to him that he will make u marry to his friend’s son ….
Twinkle ( cutting her words ) : so u mean that I should live my life with a person whom I don’t know…..who is tasteless…….( biting her lips as it means something else )

The lady widen her eyes
Twinkle: I mean who is so sadu …..Plzzzzz Plzzzzz
Lady : Plzz twinkle don’t say like this …u know that u r my responsibly……ur parents left u N ur brother with me leaving u all my responsibility…..so now it’s my turn ..I want to fulfil them…..
Twinkle ( having tears in her eyes) : ya u r right im ur responsibility ….im liberty on u …….u r right i should marry …altleast than u will be happy that now u r free from me
Lady (too having teary eyes ) : twinki bachha mera Matlab yeh nahi tha …..main tujhe apni jaan se bhi zyada pyaar krti hun ……..tu meri baat……..
Twinkle ( cutting her down ) : maa aap meri baat ni samajh rahe ……….aryan ….u could have thought about aryan …he is just 12 ….I have so many dreams ….a dream to give u all luxury all happiness of the world to u N aryan …..still so many things r pending …Plzzz ……
The screen freezes on twinki Usha sad faces

Guys plz plz comment
I don’t know what I wrote
It’s just came in my mind randomly …………..plz guys do comment I need ur support …..if u will comment then only I will be able to continue n sorry if I bored u but still there are many things which I want to tell u in the further story ……….critiscm is welcome but Plzzz comment……n give ur suggestion or any thing which u want to see …guys I will only continue if u will support me …..I’m only inspired by u all ..inspired by all the writers like jisha di , sayu di , Monica di , sameera di , mannat , romaisha , ayu , sunehri, akansha , anya, anchali, joonu di, yashu n so many ..I know I missed many names…but sorry if I missed someone’s name coz I randomly wrote some names ……….Plzz guys Plzz drop ur comments in the box n Plzz tell me was that good or not or j just bored u plzzzzzzzzzz
By the way if I will continue so only after my exams coz it’s difficult for me otherwise firstly it depends on u all …love u guys 😘😘😘
By the way twinj meeting is waiting ……..πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Love u all πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

46 comments

  1. Sameera

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    Omg dammu so happy to see u
    😊😊😊😊😊😊
    First of all the story is rocking yaar
    N yeah u should continue it so nice to read ur epi πŸ˜‚πŸ˜˜waiting for next ….
    I think Manohar wants to take revenge from twinkle ??
    So many questions r there
    Do cont soon

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Hey sameera di……..I’m so happy that u liked it πŸ˜„πŸ˜„
      I will surely try to post next part soon within a 2-3 days or maybe after my exam or try to write when never I will get time …….but thank u so much n yaa u r on right track but still to know the exact ..u have to stay tune with it ………love u 😘😘😘n plz post ur ishq for ever twinj soon 😘

  2. Zuha Fatima

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    Sweeto this is soooooo amazing πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘Œ Just loved it! Good going dear! So happy to find u writing πŸ™‚ Keep it up! And the plot seems interesting πŸ™‚ Go for it and best of luck! Reach heights πŸ™‚

    Keep smiling πŸ™‚ Always πŸ™‚
    Love u Daamuuuuu😘😘

    -Zuha

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Hey zuha dear …..I’m so happy that u liked it …n thanks for encouraging me …..u r my motivation ……love too 😘😘😘😘😘

  3. Sanjanaagrawal

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    Awesome …. and u missed my name … just kidding don’t take it seriously … 😝😝😝 and plz continue nad I will not able to comment till october … but would always read ..

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Hey sanju !!!!!! Yaar I know I missed ur name …..really sorry in fact missed so many names ….but happy that u liked …..I’m seriously on cloud 9 ……thank u so much sissy ……n yaa actually it’s also difficult for me to continue soon…but I will surely try …….my exams are already approached n will go on till 24th September……but never mind if u won’t be able…I’m happy that u liked it n read it …….love u 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Thnx Paavu so much !!!!!!!!!! I’m so happy that u guys r liking it n I will surely try my best to post next one soon
      Keep smiling my dear πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’•
      Love u

  4. Sunehri

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    Daamini di I’m speechless πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ what an episode ?!?! β€οΈπŸ˜‚β€οΈπŸ˜‚ Plz do continue

    Keep going

    Sunehri Mehta ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Hey sunehri!!! Yaar thank u so much for liking it …….I’m so happy dear ……love u πŸ’•πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜š
      I didn’t expected that it will turn out to be speechless πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ But thnx so much …….keep smiling

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Thnx so much riaA…..I’m very happy …..really u made me blushed badly……I will try my best to come up ur expectation sweetie …thank u so much ………I will try my best to post next part soon πŸ’•πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜š Love u
      N keep smiling 😊😘

  5. Monica

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    OMG! you write so well. Didn’t know you have such a hidden talent. I just loved the plot so much. Seems interesting. Write soon x Love you πŸ’•

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Aaawwww Monica di !!! Now u r really making me blush πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜€
      I’m so so so happy that u Loved it …….I wasn’t expecting that I will be getting comments from such great writers n lovely readers …….😍
      I will try my best di to come up ur expectations..πŸ˜πŸ˜„
      Love u dI n yaa now I will definitely post it soon …..πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜š

      • Monica

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        great writer and me? kidding me right? I just write for pleasure and honestly my writing skills sucks. But your creativity skills are god damn good and your style of writing is unique, I really like it a lot πŸ’•

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Yes dear Great writer n u ….u write for pleasure n this is ur talent ……it gives us pleasure …n Plzz itni taarif na kare warna maine toh apna dimaagi santulan kho baithna hai …love u di…n I also told u in ur ff that don’t manipulate ur self otherwise it won’t be good…..now I want to become like u so it will be better if u don’t make me feel dejected by ur words toward ur self……love u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™ N keep rocking with ur ffs
      Muuaaahhh 😘😘😘

  6. Lovely

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    First of all Daamini learn to love your work..baar baar itne acchi piece of writing KO boring mat kaho..

    And you are a very amazing writer..
    Keep going..

    And yes Yehi hai Ishq(episode 36) is Up since morning.. Do read and comment..

    Love you😘😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Sorry lovely …actually I was a bit nervous that whether it will be good or not…now surely won’t say that n thanks a lot for liking it ……really ur comment brought a wide smile on my face…thnx a lot…….n yaa surely read that in fact I do but sometimes study makes it difficult…love u πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’• n thnx again …n yaa I will try to become an amazing writer when I will be at ur level πŸ˜„πŸ˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜šβ˜ΊπŸ˜Šlove u 😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Thnx tara so much …I’m really happy that u liked it n will surely post next one soon …love u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜n thnx for encouraging πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

  7. Ayu

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    Daamu! U just nailed a piece of writing with such an amazing plot n ur telling me that u dont know what u’ve just writtenπŸ˜‰
    I loved it sooo muchh. Post the next soooon

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Aawww ayu !!! Yaar ur comment is just making me crazy ………so much of praising ……but it’s true that it randomly came into my mind as first I was thinking to write an os but when my plot got expand I thought to turn it to in a episodes manner ……..I will try my best in fact surely post next one soon ..hope I come up to ur expectations …….n thnx a lot for liking it …….love so n yaa love when someone call me daamu……love u πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™keep smiling dear πŸ’•πŸ˜™

      • Ayu

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        Daamu! Tumhare bhi dimaag mein random chizein aati hain na? Maine bhi os likhne ka socha tha…one shot se 6 shots ban gayaπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
        Agar ff likhne ka kabhi sochoon to novel ban jaayega…happy to know that i am not the only such specimen jo kuch karne baithi ho aur kuch aur kar baithe. N as for ur tareef i believe in meritocracy n love ya tooo

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Ha ha ha πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ even I’m also now satisfied that there is someone like me but now I’m more confused as I promised to write soon but now hell confused what to write further anyways will try my best to post next one asap …….but loved the tragedy we both experienced πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

  8. SIDMIN-Daamini

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    Aawww ayu !!! Yaar ur comment is just making me crazy ………so much of praising ……but it’s true that it randomly came into my mind as first I was thinking to write an os but when my plot got expand I thought to turn it to in a episodes manner ……..I will try my best in fact surely post next one soon ..hope I come up to ur expectations …….n thnx a lot for liking it …….love so n yaa love when someone call me daamu……love u πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™keep smiling dear πŸ’•πŸ˜™

  9. Jisha

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    An awesome start…plot is very interesting… specifically the revenge part n how Twinkle became poor n Kunj’s sad nature…loved it…I probably will be able to read the rest of your story after 20th..you wrote this part very well…you are a good writer…

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Omg jisha di !!!! I’m not able to believe my eyes ….I’m so happy that u liked it ………now I’m out of the world …….😱😱
      U said I’m a good writer n I will try best to prove ur words ….n yaa I’m inspired by u all
      Love u di N thnx again for encouraging me …….never mind if u won’t be able to read or comment currently but I’m happy that u Loved it ……..have a safe journey till kerala n enjoy the celebration too to the fullest
      Love u N take care 😘😘😘😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Thnx sidvee…..I’m happy that u liked it n same here looking forward to try how to write next part as I’m hell confused ……πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ seriously I’m taking tension more than my exams …..but really happy u liked it n try my best to post next one soon ……..thnx πŸ˜™πŸ’•

  10. Baby

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    oh my dammu u no w
    u r fabulous it sur first ff lag hi nhi rha hai
    bilkul bhi nhi yr i mean i was surprised n vry happy 2 c ur name yr
    pls post nxt asap n do cntinue asap ll b w8ing its gonna b amazing yr luvd it
    luv u dear wowowowooww cnt w8
    post asap

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY πŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ°πŸ°πŸ°!!!!! MAY ALL UR DESIRES COME TRUE N HAVE GREAT DAY !!!!!
      I’m so so happy that u liked it ……….my happiness have no bound………love u dear ……n enjoy ur day to the fullest……..n itni tarif 😱😱😱😱😱 …………hope the next one come up to ur expectations though I’m gonna give my best ………n I will try my best to post it soon or maybe today only………thank u so much πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜u really made my day sweetie…….love u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜πŸ˜

  11. Shatakshi

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    Daamini
    The plot was Awesome😍😍😍😍

    And that curel Manohar😀😀😀
    I m gonna rip him up….
    And will be eagerly waiting for the next episodes
    😘😘😘😘
    To see how this tasteless sadu becomes a tanduri kabab😝😝😝😝
    Love u loadsπŸ’žπŸ’žπŸ’ž

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Aaawwww shatakshi dear ……….really I was also boiling while seeing manohar’s cruelty……..n about my sadu tasteless to tanduri πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I will try my best to make him that ………n thank u thank u so much …………….I’m really happy that u liked it n I will try my best to post next soon n may to bring it to ur expectations………love u πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜™

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

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      Yaa daraya!!!!πŸ˜ͺπŸ˜ͺ
      Thnx for liking it dear …I’m very happy n yaa I’m posting next one …hope u like it ……actually having exams so kuchh samajh mein hi ni a raha ki kya likhu ..maybe my next part will be boring but I will try my best that after that I may entertain u …..n I’m really happy u liked it arundhati …….thank u so much πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜πŸ’•

  12. Romaisha

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    Ohh damnn!! I was so excited to read this when i saw ur name !! 😍😍😍
    But yah sorry for late comment nah..

    Your intro was srsly fabb! Can’t wait to cont reading! πŸ™‚
    Love you
    Post soon di 😘

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