UNEXPECTED TURN IN LIFE ( TWINJ ) PART 1

Hey guys !!! Again back …………really when I was reading all those comments ….I was just dancing like a maniac …πŸ˜€πŸ˜……I’m so glad that u guys liked my plot………….i don’t have words to thank u all…..itni tarif…..mujhe toh diabetes ho jaani hai ……guys i will try my best that I entertain u all ……n yaa ….I was like hell confused that how to start my next epi ……….now let’s start as finally something in my mind is going on ……

SCENE 1
ROAD
( it’s a kind of road mainly having stalls of vegetables n fruits n small vehicles going on BTW the road n small shops at the corners of the road…….every where is just hustle bustle!!!!!!)
Twinkle ( on phone while walking on the road ) : yaa maa I’m near her house only …………I’m will reach there within a 5 more minutes …..n then again I will also call u okay …………
So: ( on phone from house ) : twinkle ….dhyan si jaayio or haan meri taraf se bhi usse janmdin ki dher sari shubhkaamnaye dediyo …………πŸ˜™
T : yaa maa …now I’m cutting the phone as I’m walking on the road ..πŸ˜™ byee
Suddenly DDDHHHHHAAAAAMMMM!!!!!!
Twinkle got hit by a car but but but she is totally fine but got a little cut on her foot n that was not so hard but as usual r punjabi patakaa…..she will not leave that person ……
Twinkle composes herself n took her polythene bag which she was carrying n stand in front of the car ……..she is looking with anger at the glass of the car n was able to see the man sitting wearing aviator…..
T : hey u …..(pointing fingers to towards him ) andhaa hai ? 😑😠 gaadi dekh k ni chalaa sakta……tere ko licence kisne diya …………aur andar kya baithaa hai ………..bahar aa ……..varna maine police ko bulava dena hai …………( she was continuously speaking )
The man comes out of the car n stand in front of twinkle with the most non interested look ……he was wearing white shirt n black jeans n black aviator …………
T: ohohohoho……( now gaining the attention of all the ppl ) : dekho toh sahi ….pehle galti krta hai phir aankhen bhi dikhata hai ………..( now towards the man ) u don’t know , what u have done mister u wasted my time …..u hit me ….n see thus cut .( making crying face )…..n I’m least interested in u so it will be better if u say me sorry right now otherwise mujhe time ni lagega Teri izat utarne mein ……
B: get out of my way…………I don’t have time for ur cheap things …….
T: haaawww …first u do wrong things n then blame me ….. I won’t leave u ….see u have only 2 options say sorry n take me to my destination as u already wasted my time or come with me to police station …..

B : ohh really police station …..ya why not ….I can accompany u there ………..aur kya bologi wahaan jaakr ki tum phone pe baat kr kr beech sadak pr marne k liye chal rahi thi aur yahaan main bina koi daaru piye hosho awaaz mein gaadi chalaa raha tha …………..u know what …I have seen many like u …who just want to trap rich ppl …….n this cut iss nothing ro toh aise ri ho ki pataani tumhaari jaan leli ho ……….
( now twinge was very surprised n shocked with his behaviour n was just looking at him with surprised eyes which r expecting something )
B : okay fine where u wanna go ……….
Twinkle with happy face ……without giving any answer made her way straight to his car n sit in front seat beside driver one’s
Boy looks at her move while making what the hell wala look n shake his head
B (in mind ) : yeh konsi nayi moosibat palle pad gayi
The boy sits in the car ….
B : now will u Plzz tell me where u wanna go ……coz I’m having shortage of time …..
T : ummmmm u just go straight then take first left n second right ……then I will be at my place……
T ( in mind ) : God has given him such a handsome body n good looking face but he is so rude ..chocolate boy but bitter in taste ) now twinkle was not able to control silence …..so what! She broke it πŸ˜†

T: ummmmm ….what’s ur name …..I mean u r helping me so I should know at least something about u …I mean at least ur name …. busy the way my name is twinkle , twinkle bhalla ( what ! Name pasand ni aayaa …kya karu iske peeche bhi reason hai 😌)
B ( knowing that if he will stay quite so the person sitting beside him won’t live in peace ) KUNJ !
Twinkle with a surprised look ( in mind ) : what that means he is kunj …….I have heard about him ……he is also sadu …..these much similarities ….no no no …..maybe he is not Sarna……something else like Kaur , Luthra, or something else )
T: umm kunj , kunj Sarna!? πŸ˜¨πŸ€•πŸ€•
k : we have reached …….now u can leave ……
T : but ……..anyways thnx ….
Twinkle comes out of the car n stand near his window side
T : thnx …….. if u don’t mind u can come inside …….it will be fun for u in fact u will………
Ya Kunj left from there without even paying any heed to her
T : so rude …………..hope baba ji……this one is not that kunj ….( she joins her hands in a pleading manner then move around n becomes shock )
T : baby !!!!!!!!!!!!! ( now making face β€œ ab toh pakde gaye ) 😘😘😘 ( love u baby ) HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!
Okay so baby is wearing a beautiful light baby pink frock ( sorry poora baby hi banaa k rakh diya hai maine πŸ˜› )
B: late !!!!!!!! …….u r late …..I can’t believe this …..
T : sorry !!!! Baby ……actually …..chal saari baat andar hi Chalke batati hun
Twinki n baby went inside the house n now inside baby’s room
Twinkle narrate whole story to baby ……
B : so the conclusion is that now u r nervous n scared that may that kunj dont turn out to be that one which u want !!!???
Twinkle first shaking her head n agreement then in disagreement ..
T : no I’m not coz right now I’m very happy 😁😁😊
T : now close ur eyes

Twinkle takes out a cake……..happy birthday baby is written ……..
Baby gets happy n twinkle n baby enjoy their time to the fullest ………first twinkle place some cake on baby face then baby obviously twinki ……..now at the end ….it was all messy n both were angry n looking at eo but suddenly both burst into laughter ….
B : really I’m gonna miss these days …….twinki promise me that we will do these things again even after ur marriage
T : aaawww baby …..it’s an obvio thing …….me too gonna miss this ………
They both hug eo

SCENE 2
Manohar on phone : ji sonal ji ……are main toh kehta hun ki bachhon ko aaj hi milva dete hain or ooper se Hamare guru ji ne aaj ka din apne bachhon ko milvane k liye bohot shubh bataya hai …..
S : ji manohar ji ….whatever u say …but don’t u think so it’s too early I mean r children r too small for marriage …..aksar issi umar mein toh in Rishton k dhaage kamzor hote hain ……agar toot gaye toh jodna bohot mushkil hote hain
Manohar with a frustrated face but acts to talk coolly : are sonal ji aap chinta kyun kr ri hain …….sabkuchh theek hoga bas aap aaj twinkle ko 7 pm tayaar kr kr rakhna…main aur mera parivar aapke ghar aa raha hai ……..Chale theek hai ab main phone rakhta hun ……
S : ji
Now screen split into 2 column
One side manohar is smiling evily on the other side sonal is with tense face
M : let’s begin the game ….( he smiles evily )
S : hope twinkle aaj baat maan jaaye ………he vahe guru mujhe toh bohot ghabraath ho ri hai ……..
SCENE 3
Usha is crying ……..she is not able to move……..she is tired of crying n want to sleep there only…..suddenly someone took her into her embrace …….Usha was very weak she rested her head on the persons chest n again start crying….she was still sitting on floor
U : im sorry kunj …….again I failed ……….I wasn’t able to give u happiness
Ya kunj is thee only person
Kunj while rubbing her back N resting his head on her : shhhh …maa..so many times I have told u that don’t beg in front oh that cheapster…….he don’t worth us , worth u ……why u wanna live in such place ……. why don’t u come with me ………we will go far away from this …..n then only u me ……….
U : kunj Plzzz……I can’t do anything …plz don’t force me …..I don’t care that he loves me or not but I know that one day our love will change him
Kunj cutting her : nahi maa vo kabhi ni badal sakte ………..aur aap kyun unke saamne sar jhukati hain haan !? …….kya aap khush rehna deserve ni krti …kya main khush rehna deserve ni krta………poori zindagi nikal di Aapne uss pyaar k liye jo aap deserve ni krti maine apni zindagi nikal di uss pyaar k liye jo vo mujhe dena deserve hi ni krte…….
U : KUNJ !!!!!! tere Papa chaahte hain ki Teri shaadi ho jaaye…
Kunj becomes shock
K : what !!?? ………he gave a faint laugh …😏 huh ! …..iske peeche bhi inka koi maksat hoga …..meri life ko tehes nehes kr k inhe chain nahi ayaaa jo ab dobara
U : kunj aisa kr tu yahaan se bhaag ja ….main tujhe aisa behrem zindagi ni jeene de sakti,…….tu yahaan se Jaaa……..thoda naraaz honge pr baad mein maaf kr denge
K : bhaag jaaunga main agar aap mere saath chalengi……..main aapko uss jaahil k paas aise ni cchhhhhoodhhh kr jaaunga
U : kunj aisa nahi ho sakta……Jitna aasaan tujhe lag raha hain usse kahin zyada mushkil hain ….aur anya k baare main ton sochna uska kya ……vo mere or unke binaa toh reh bhi ni sakti ………

K : maa pehle aap uthoo aur mere saath kamre mein Chalo
Kunj slightly n softly hold Usha from shoulder n took her to his room as he was knowing that if he let Usha in her n manohar’s room …that evil will again won’t let her mother live peacefully n will start his torture again
He bring her inside the room dresses her wounds n kiss her on her forehead
K : mom u r very weak right now u should sleep …..I’m going …
Usha holds his hand : where !? …Plzz kunj ..don’t do anything which further let any problem Plzz
K : mom u don’t worry ……I have some work …I will be back in sometime …u just rest
He leaves the room
Outside the room
K : I won’t let u live a peaceful life manohar Sarna……..n won’t let this marriage happen too ……it’s my promise
N he left from there

Precap : twinj meeting …….ARYAN entry………maybe fun …..argument btw ( don’t know let see kisike bhi beech mein ho sakti hai )

Now guys ….I know maine pataa ni kaise likha hai ….varna main toh pagal ho ri thi ki kaise likhun…..n Plzz tell how was it …..if u want any improvement in me in any thing Plzz do tell me ……….criticism welcome …..even if u think boring so Plzz tell me …..n yaa actually I’m having exams so maybe I won’t be able to post next part soon .n maybe coz of that only this part 1 may bored u but from next time i will try my best to entertain u guys……..but whenever I will get any idea …I will surely then post ……but don’t know when…………guys Plzz support ……I need u all …..otherwise I will stop writing …..I don’t wanna bore u all ……Plzz tell …..n baby again a big wala HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!!! 😘😘😘😘😘😘
I know so many of u expecting such things from Me but sorry if I wasn’t able to but I will try my best …….n yaa I was too happy guys that u really liked my plot …thank u
BYEE
N PLZZ TELL HOW WAS IT πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“πŸ˜“

36 comments

  1. Chiku

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    😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
    Woowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    Dmaini itna acha likhti ho tum. I loved it ❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️
    It’s amazing
    Mazza aya padkhke
    I cant wait to read more
    Plz jaldi se uplaod kar
    Kitna kamaal ka thain episode
    Yeeeeee
    Lov u girl.
    Next episode jaldi se nahi toh naaraaz ho jaungiπŸ˜‚

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Haaww!!!!! Chiku …..itne pyaare pyaare comment se ab blackmail karegi………..thank u so much dear for ur lovely commentπŸ˜™ …I’m so happy that u liked it…….n about the next epi so I really don’t know when I will be able to but try my best to post it by Sunday as I’m having exams dear ….so whenever I will get time I will surely post itπŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ˜™πŸ˜™πŸ˜šπŸ˜š Love u 2 3 4 5 6 …infinity ……😘

  2. Ayu

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    Daamu! Yaar ur awesome…isme koi do rai nahin hai….n jo tune likha vo bhi fab tha…mujhe bahut pasand aaya!! That twinj wala scene on the road was hilariousπŸ˜†
    I thoroughly enjoyed it!!!

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thanks ayu 😘😘😘 ……I’m happy u enjoyed it 😊😊😊😊😊…….N thnx for encouraging…Sachi mein dil khush ho gaya tera comment padh k …😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thank u paavu…I’m so happy that u liked it ……n yaa I will try my best to post it by Sunday…love u 😘😘n keep supporting like this dear……😘😘😘

  3. Baby

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    oh god thnku so mch dear u no as said
    its my best bday ever i dont beleve dis today all r
    i m jst sooooooooo hapy thnku so mch thnku yr luv u
    n d episode osm luvd it punjabi patakka oh god wow dere first meet he bhagwan now wt ll hpn eager 2 c
    thnku soooooooo mch agn luv u

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Hehe he hehe πŸ˜…πŸ˜………thnx dear……..I’m happy that u r liking it ……n about r twinj ..so let see what is waiting for them ……😘😘😘😘😍

  4. SidVee

    Dear you are mind blowing.. you’ve written it very well.. I love ur story plot.. twinkle kunj part was so funnyπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ and kunj usha talk was so emotional😒.. that part reminded me of tei when even there usha told kunj to run away n kunj told he won’t unless she accompanies him.. U r damn awesome.. n post whenever u r free πŸ™‚ best of luck for your exams πŸ™‚

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thank u sidvee so much …really I don’t have words to thank u ……n thnx for Ur wishes …..n yaa even I got the idea from there only …..Really misses sid n deepika’s bond as mother son …….but thnx again 😘😘😍…

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thnx tara so much ….I’m so so happy that u liked it n thnx for Ur wishes dear 😍😍😍😍😍…really u made my day 😘😘😘😘

  5. RiaA MendeZz

    I’m late I know but wht to do,? I was busy at work. The chapter was ok…the reason Im saying just “ok” is because most parts I didn’t understand as I don’t speak Hindi.

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Oh sorry riaA …now onwards I will try to write everything in english or to give its English translation but I’m very happy that still u read it n said ok ….n thnx for commenting n supporting n sorry again for the inconvenience….πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜™πŸ˜™

  6. Anchali

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    hi daamini.sorry for not commenting on ur previous one.
    ur concept is just fabulous and I love it so so so so so so so much.Plzzz do continue.waiting for next epi.and Plzzz do say any real life actor as an example for Aryan.love u

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thank u so much anchali 😍😍😘😘…… ……..n no need for sorry …..I’m just happy that u liked it…n try my best to post it by Sunday……n yaa sure …in my upcoming part I will surely give the really actors to the child characters …n thnx once again sweetie 😘😘😘😘

  7. Monica

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    Firstly, i loved the whole thing so much. It was fab, no doubt. You indeed are a great writer. Continue writing okay? But i have one suggestion for you … actually sometimes reading hindi dialogue isn’t convenient so therefore i would really want you to write an english subtitle along with every hindi dialogue you write. Hope you don’t take it in the wrong way. Love you πŸ’•

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thnx Monica di !!! 😘😘😍 ……n yaa now onwards I will write English subtitles too…….n thnx for telling n reminding me as one reader is also having same problem while reading as she don’t know hindi maybe ……….n thnx for Ur lovely comment 😘😘😘😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

  8. Aamu

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    hmmmmmm……..late hu?…
    obvio but u know d reason na!!…..
    i told u but den also i thought to cmnt…
    dis was a fab epi….
    curious for next…
    i think discussion will b btwn twinj..to c eo….
    n my god!!…….kunj!?!!ll.?.
    Wat he will do to stop d marriagw!!…i know he will surely do smthng as he had promised…..
    ab monu kaa kya bolu…he is doing wrong..but for me he is sooooo goodd..hehe…m mean na!!……..
    k by…
    love u!!

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Thnx aamu darling 😍😍 ………..thnx for ur lovely comment …….n yaa let see what kunj has planned for ………but thnx again…n my next part is already posted sweetie …….love u 😘😘😘😘😍

  9. Romaisha

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    Damiii di!!! Too good yaar .. But u no nah im not that good at Hindi but its ok I’ll try to translate πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚
    Love u !!! ❀❀

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Oh sorry dear …..I know in fact there r more who were not satisfied with hindi …….but i have posted my part 2 n that has all in english n also translated………..n thnx so much for ur lovely comment sweetie … really I’m too happy ……..love u toooooooooooooo 😍😍😘😘😘😘😘

    • SIDMIN-Daamini

      |Author

      Shatakshi dear …..thank u so much …….I’m so happy …really ur comment brought a broad smile on my face ………..n yaa dear my next is already posted ……..thank again …keep smiling and supporting like this dear….love u 😍😍😘😘😘

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