Unexpected love story (RagSan) by Aliya (last shot)

Let’s begin…

Ragini reaches the place but there was none….. Her condition was vulnerable….

Yuvraj comes behind:Ragini..i told you still
Ragini :i dont want to loose him… I dont want to let anything happen to him…

She gets the call….

Nikhil:so Ragini.. Did you get sanskar?
Ragini :nikhil please leave him… He is innocent in all this please
Kavya:dhoondthe raho ragini.. Jab tak tumhe sanskar nahi mil jaata.. Humne tumse pehle hi kaha tha kisi ko pata chalna nahi chahiye.. Phir bhi tumne humse chaalaki dikane ki koshish ki an uski saza bhi bhugtho..
She disconnects the call…

Ragini :nikhil please nik..
She cries

Yuv:don’t worry ragini… We will find him

Ragini :where? Where to go? Where to search….

She falls on her knees…

Parish and dida who came there felt bad..

Dida:Ragini..we should not worry for him… Because ab tak tho sanskar ne sabka jeena haram kar chuka hoga
Adarsh:woh tho hai

Dida makes her stand

Ragini :if they harm sanskar…
Dida:harm… Kisko? And i am sure they will go mad and regret for kidnapping him

Here sanskar gets the conscious and was looking around… But not the 5 faces who are standing infront of him

Sahil:looking around sanskar? Remember me? Oh how you would you dont don’t know about yourself only

Sanskar looks at him raising his eyebrows????but still gave the most innocent look

Mansi:but poor boy is counting his last

His gaze shifts to her???

Tanya:it will be fun killing you sanskar

Sahil:tell me sanskar how would you like to die? Should i shoot you? Should i stab you? Should i burn you alive like…

Sanskar???:shit… Shit.. Shit… Bullshit

Sahil angrily :you are finding all this as bullshit!!!

Sanskar:then what should i tell bhaiyya

Sahil?:bhaiyya!!

Sanskar:should i shoot you?should I burn you ?should i stab you.. No no no.. Jab khatarnak dialogue bol rahe ho tho saamne wale ki pungi bajna chahiye… I didn’t felt something like that ???

Kavya shocked:you are finding this as acting

Sanskar:aur nai tho kya….

Kavitha smiles.. But soon coveres it with serious look

Sanskar:did you watch garv movie?

All were shocked not understanding him?

Sanskar:usme ek rapchik scene hai… (He gets irritated being tied) nikalona yeh sab… I will tell you how the movie runs…

A goon comes to him and frees him leaving all 5 shocked

Sahil goes to him

Goon:ae.. Ede apun ke dhange mein tu mat guss

Sahil gets scared

Goon:chote… Now explain how we should behave

Sanskar smiles:first hero ki entry hoti hai..

He takes the goggles from a goon..

Wears in salman’s style

He walks with most stylish and dashing way

hud hudd dabang dabang dabangg dabangg
hud hudd dabang dabang dabangg dabangg

He dances and along with him goons too dances

Mansi:yahan pe ho kya raha hai guys

Tanya:jahan tak main jaanti thi.. Sanskar ek reserved aur matured types ka tha.. Yaadasht jaane ke baad itnaa kaise badal sakta hai

Sahil:jo bhi ho.. Today he will breath his last

Nikhil:but kaise.. All the goons are with him

Sanskar shouts:change the song

Main badhiya tu bhi badhiya
Shaadi kar le saanwariya
Phootengi phir phuljhadiyan
Badhiya badhiyaaan…

Pa pa ra pa

Here Ragini have reached the place and was shocked by the scenario
It doesn’t look like serious situation ?

Main badhiya tu bhi badhiya
Par main azaad hoon chidiya
Rakh tu apni phuljhadiyan
Badhiya badhiyaa…

Sanskar was lipsing the song and dances around sahil tanya nikhil mansi and kavitha

Behind Ragini yuvraj reaches the spot with the police team but he was not less shocked

Chatt mangni, kar patt mangni
Mujhe patni banale jhatt patt apni

Sanskar pulls tanya and dances.. Then mansi and then kavitha… Kavitha had a small smile.. She had an unknown happiness and fear they might kill sanskar

Sun pagli main hoon chhora jungli
Arey kaahe ko banana chaahe meri chattni

An officer:sir.. We came to right place right?

Yuvraj :mein bhi wohi soch raha hoon

Oho. oho.

Sanskar acts like girl

Ragini laughs seeing him and she was worried for all the way

Main badhiya tu bhi badhiya
Shaadi kar le saanwariya
Phootengi phir phuljhadiyan
Badhiya badhiyaaan…

Sanskar sees Ragini and yuvraj

He moves to them

Main badhiya tu bhi badhiya
Par main azaad hoon chidiya
Rakh tu apni phuljhadiyan
Badhiya badhiyaa…

Sanskar dancing around yuvraj:yahoo… Yeh hai climax

All goons were shocked

While sahil glares the goons

Police arrest all the goons and all the 5 heads

Sahil remembers swara
Sahil himself:when i didn’t allow my love to live peacefully.. How can i live you alive sanskar….

He pulls out the gun and shoots at Sanskar’s direction

It happened in the fraction of second that none realised it…

Sanskar looks at himself safe…
While he looks front where kavitha took the bullet

While officers drags all of them

Ragini runs to her

Sanskar was shocked and wasnt understanding why she took the bullet for him

Ragini holds kavitha

Kavitha smiles through tears :i am… S.. So..rry Ra.. Ragini

Ragini:kavitha.. Lets go to hospital..

While sanskar was getting the flashes of girl gets shot in temple

Kavitha holds her hand:no no… It’s.. It’s.. M.. My punishment for my…. Deeds

She breaths heavily

Ragini:kavitha..

Yuvraj was about to pick her

Kavitha:no.. Ragi.. Ragini take care of sanskar… And give him the all love he deserves…

She breathes her last

Ragini closes her eyes

While sanskar falls unconscious

Yuvraj:sanskar…

All goes blurred

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Pari confused:i didn’t understand
Yuvraj/adarsh:even i too

Sanskar looks at dida who was having mischievous smiles

Dida sings:Madhuban Mein Jo Kanhaiya Kisi Gopi Se Mile
Kabhi Muskaaye, Kabhi Chhede, Kabhi Baat Kare
Radha Kaise Na Jale, Radha Kaise Na Jale
Aag Tan Mann Mein Lage
Radha Kaise Na Jale, Radha Kaise Na Jale
She winks at them

Trio:ohhhhhhhhh

Sanskar:very bad idea.. Radha nahi jalegi.. I mean Ragini

Voice:she would definitely

Dida shocked:marwaran!

It was dadi along with shemish and dadaji

Yuvraj looks at dadi shocked

Sharmishta:definitely

Sanskar:dadi aap?

Dadi:arey daamad ji itna kya soch rahe ho…jao tayyari karo

Sanskar smiles:i was thinking only.. How did Ragini got flawless beauty… You are so beautiful

Dida looks at him shocked

Sanskar audible to dida:dida you are madhubala and most beautiful… We can consider dadi as meena kumari hai na

Dadi/dida:badmash
They twist his ears

All gadodia’s meet Ragini
Ragini was really happy finding dadi is happy and turned supportive

Ragini brings the sweet for everyone

When she moves to sanskar.. He ignores her and moves from there

Ragini feels bad from past few days he was behaving like this with her

Ragini follows him to make up everything like before

While behind hifies

Yuvraj moves dadi:dadi ji did you identify me?

Dadi looks at him confused

Here sanskar sees nithasha

And flirts with her

Ragini was not feeling good.. Actually really burning with something called jealousy.. Till now she haven’t used to express but she was feeling bad whenever sanskar used to flirt with girls.. Today she couldn’t tolerate

She moves to him:sanskar ji…

But he ignores her..
He holds nithasha’s hand and drags her along with him

Sanskar:lets eat gola

Ragini:haww.. He is avoiding me.. Aur haath kyu pakda

Yuvraj pats her kya hua

Ragini angrily nods in nothing

Ragini follows them leaving behind smiling yuvraj

Yuvraj:finally meri laado mil gayi..
He looks at dadi…

She smiles at him

Nithasha:shaadi ka kya khayal hai?

Ragini listening her:haww… Marriage.. Iski tho me

She stamps her foot

Sanskar smiles seeing Ragini:i was thinking about it only..i would love to marry in beach

Ragini:beach????

Sanskar:my bride would wear a white lavishing gown

Ragini angrily imitates him:white lavishing gown!

Ragini angrily storms from there

Sanskar sees her

Yuvraj:sanskar tune kuch zyada hi bol diya!

Sanskar leaves nithasha:thankyou nithasha

Nithasha:pleasure is always mine

Sanskar;mein dua karoonga mere jaisa pati.. No no mere jaisa tha ho nahi sakta but yup a good husband.. But little less then me

All who saw him:yeh nahi sudrega!

Ragini was sitting in the room.. She was crying silently

Sanskar moves to her and sits next to her

Ragini:why did you (sniffs) came?

Sanskar:to ask permission to get married

Ragin:why? My permission
She doesn’t looks at him

Sanskar:how can i marry without my bride..?

Ragini:nithasha se poocho mein kya kahoon

Sanskar:something is burning

Ragini:go.. Why are you here?

Sanskar:u are jealous right!

Ragini:no why will i be!

Sanskar:then…

Ragini:i don’t want to talk to you

Sanskar:if i didnt talk to my wife

Ragini:jao i gave you full freedom.. Jaake shaadi karo honeymoon jao mujhe kya..

Sanskar:ok then… Aapke huqum salaakhon par…

He stands and picks ragini in his arms

Ragini:sanskar ji… What…

Sanskar:shhh.. Now i will question and you have to answer

Ragini looks at him

Sanskar:Ragini do you love me?

Ragini looks at him bends her head

Sanskar:would you start a new beginning with me? Would you give the permission to become your shadow?

Ragini:sa…

Sanskar:yes or no?

Ragini closes her eyes she was feeling like laksh was saying her to say yes! However first love is always the first!

She opens her eyes and sanskar was looking at her lovingly

Ragini nods

Sanskar happily :sach

Ragini nods

He immediately hugs her

While all smile seeing them standing at the door

All:congratulations!
Sanskar makes Ragini stand

Yuvraj:laado

Ragini was shocked he never addressed her as laado

Yuvraj:meri behen

Dadi:didn’t you identify your Raj bhaiyya ragini?

Ragini was shocked

He wides his hand for a hug.. Ragini hugs him

(yuvraj is janki’s brother’s son.. They were separated after janki’s death)

Sanskar sees uthra standing with smile

He caresses her hair… And hugs her

Soon Ragsan got married with Sanskar’s every wish making true beach wedding with Ragini wearing white gown!

After few days

Sanskar’s pov

Jaise i said everything would be fine.. Dida got her marwaran…
My Ragini got her brother.. Yuvraj got his tanvi..
And Ragini wears all the sign of married woman!
But still….
Pov ends

Dida:hope sanskar doesn’t get back his memory
Dadi:yes.. After an year everything is fine.. I don’t anything wrong to happen
Dida:maheshwari’s ke baare mein sanskar ko kuch bhi pata na chale

Sanskar who heard this looks blankly at them

Ragini sees him..
He goes..

Ragini follows him:sanskar… I want…

Sanskar looks at her

Ragini:i can’t able to hide the truth more.. Sanskar ji..

Sanskar:which truth

Ragini:about your past.. I wanted to say it long back but i couldn’t fearing about your health

Sanskar:i don’t want to know anything about my past…did you get that!

Ragini:but sanskar ji its imp..

Sanskar interrupts :nothing is important then you to me

Ragini:u are trusting me blindly

He immediately pulls her to the bone crushing hug:i love you that’s why i trust you.. And no more tears or questions..did you get that..

Sanskar sees her sad

Sanskar:waise what will i do knowing past… Alway you bhadd bhadd kabhi pyaar bari batein karo

Ragini:i do bhadd bhadd! Or you

Sanskar:you wifey

Ragini:i love you soo much sanskar

She hugs him.. He hugs her back:i love you more!

Ragini smiles

Night

Ragini was sleeping hugging sanskar

Sanskar slowly frees himself

He moves to the wardrobe

He pulls the drawer and sees Maheshwari family photo.. He sees swara and then laksh then all his family

He closes back the drawer with smile

Sanskar:my family

He looks Ragini

Sanskar :my family.. Meri dupattewali dosth!

He goes to Ragini and sleeps covering her in his embrace with a smile

The end….

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  1. Super update dear but I can’t understand Hindi can you plz write in English

  2. Superb. Epilogue pls.

  3. Please give epilogue. It is cute update and funny too.

  4. Superb dear. Epilogue needed.

  5. Nice

  6. MKRS

    Want epilogue.

  7. Awesome soo cute sanky.

  8. Superbbb please want epilogue.

  9. Good one

  10. Very funny sissy. Felt pity on goons. Ragsan scenes are marvellous sissy. Waiting for epilogue.

  11. Awesome. Is Sanskar remember his past??

  12. Unbelievable update hilarious????????

  13. Amazing… epilogue???

  14. Awesome.

  15. Ossssssssooooooommmmmmmm.

  16. Last shot noooo????? lovely loved it. Plss provide epilogue.

  17. Awesome yaar. Very Very funny???

  18. Amazingggggggg. I want epilogue.

  19. Awesome ?

  20. Awesome di..

  21. Amazing….superb ragsan, loved it when you showed laksh

  22. Superb dear, epilogue

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