UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-21

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“Bhaiyya”- Rudra shouted real loud like his Chotimaa Pinky,”Gopal said to watch a special programme today on TV”.
“I will never watch any show with you”- Shivaay denied.
“Bhagad Billa!!”- Annika caressed the silky head of her chotey devar,”Rudra I will watch it with you .leave that tadibaaz and sit here”.
“Pehelwan bhaiyya “- Gouri ran to kitchen then to return suddenly,”we will watch it eating popcorn”.

“Breaking news of the year”-Tej,”I know it already that Shivaay is being awarded as Businessman of the year”.
“Jocking news of the year”-The reporter in the news channel declared,”Two long departed lovers from Bareilly get married in the jail today morning”.
“What is so funny in it”- Shakti didn’t find the news that important.
“Gopal is this your so called important television program”-Pinky scold the poor fellow,”Who make a fool of you by asking to watch this stupid things”.
“Kaali Thakur from Bareilly and his long lost girl friend Shwetlana from Mumbai tied the knot with each other”- The voice from inside television said.

“What the wuck!!”- Shivaay laughed loud as both Tej and Omkara fell down from their respective couches,”Ha ha ha..its really a jocking news”.
“My wife make a fool of me”- Gopal cried dramatically.
“Shivaay “- Dadi asked her grand son,”all brothers are getting married and Prinku is still left unmarried “.
“Dadi”- The shy and silent type reserved girl opened her mouth after a second,”I am ready to follow the footstep of my brothers in Ishqbaazi with Dev”.

“Oh ho…pehelwan Prinku is a chhupa rustam”- Rudra and Soumya commented,”The boy is Dev Chhabra right!!”
“We are friends from business circle with his family”- Tej nodded ,”We will talk with them about this alliance”.
“Soumya we have to wait for a long time for our marriage it seems”- Rudra express went on without paying attention to the red wrong signal of presence of elders.
“Shut up Rudra!!, Annika”-Shivaay felt shy at his words,”we are getting late”.
“For what Bhaiyya”- Rudra ran before getting a slap on his head ,”so eager for honeymoon”.
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The blue sky was under them as four of them flew high in love towards Gangtok.
“Why did you choose this place “- Annika asked out of curiosity,”why not to a foreign country “.
“My crazy wife has an undeniable desire to be nestled in a higher peak of a cold mountain. What can be more important then the Himalaya range for fulfilling that desire?”
“Why did we come here to a place for honeymoon inside India?”-Gouri asked Om the same question.
“Very bad..we should have gone to West Indies”-Om teased,”so hot the climate is that people don’t need to wear any clothes at all “.

“I brought all your hooded shirts for wearing while in Sikkim and its dangerous cold”- He remembered,”I am missing my best buddy Chulbul very badly”.
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“I thought it is a cool place but temperature in this room is so high”-Shivaay opened his waist coat and then attacked his shirt button.
Annika closed her both eyes real tight like shutting the doors to check some one from entering to that secret place.

“You are a cheppada!!”- She show him the washroom ,”go and change inside of there”.
“Why should I?? “- Shivaay came very close,”Shall I help you in changing just in case if you are feeling hot like me”.
“I will throw a big piece of Ice at your face”- Annika threatened ,”I can do my work alone”.
“Till meeting you ..I too thought that I can do all work alone as I am Shivaay Singh Oberoi”- the kanji eyed man hold her waist in his rough but tender caring hands,”One thing is there that I can’t do alone”.
“Oh!! Managing your business with out taking help from Khannaji”- She find after thinking a lot,”or cooking without taking help from OmRu”.
“Er…No “- Shivaay find the most pleasurable way to shut her mouth up,”this is the work I am unable to do with out your help”.

Annika tried to open her mouth after their kiss but words from her throat went for a strike.
“Wow!!”- Shivaay felt like the Vasco Da Gama of 21st century,”the best way to shut your mouth”.
He sat on the bed close to the headrest and pulled Annika real on top of his lap. She became a statue of Ice melting in the fire of his love and passion.
“What are you doing !!”- She tried to go away,”Some michichi is happening with in me”.
“The same mich michi is happening with in me too”- He opened her hairs and spread them on her shoulder to smell them,”I am spreading this Raita as a treatment to that michmichi”.
“This Raita”- Annika get a kiss on the base of her neck,” that I want to hug you real tight and kiss you everywhere I can reach..and free you from all your clothes and then….”.
“Sure..this is the thing I too want to do with you”- Shivaay encouraged his wife.
“Is this normal Billuji!!”-Annika tried to justify all their weird thought of naughty feelings,”Like all married couple wants to do with their spouse”.

“I think so”- Shivaay is also knew to this romance field like she is.
“All married couple..”- Annika widened her black dark eyes filled with some magic and desire,”Dadiji-Dadaji, Shakti uncle and Pinky aunty ,Tej Uncle and Jhanvi aunty, Om and Gou…”.
“Er…I think so,for love and for offsprings”- Shivaay put some logic borrowing from Rudra,”I don’t know if any online shopping site like Amazon or Flipkart does home delivery of Children”.
Some weird but sweet sound came from their balcony . A nightingale sang the sweetest song for the union of the lovers…. As both of them drown more in each others arm in the pool of passion.

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As promised before I am ending the journey of my Ishqbaazi with Undeniable desire..The love I gain from here is precious for me…
Love you my crazy Ishquise…

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55 Comments
  1. VHM

    Ohh no…this FF ended ? i am so sad…

    you ended up uniting the villains too…ha ha ha…and what a lovely romantic way to end this shot…

    But still i can’t believe this FF ended…i will miss this FF so much…

    As all other fans of your FF , my question is also the same ”when will you come back with an other khidkitodh FF ?”

    Thank you for such an awesome FF Astha…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Haarika…. I am not coming back as I am not ready to leave from here for a single day also.
      If you missed by chance I have already started another story named as “ALIEN FEELINGS”… Thank you for being with me and for fulfilling an undeniable desire I have for a long time of writing a story.
      Love you with a lots of kisses and hugs …

  2. Amayaa

    FF end karne ka koi naya game start ho gaya hai kya ……..
    Aur mere undeniable desire ko mujhse pucche bina kaise khatam kar diya aapne ………aap na undeniable desire ki author ho aur mai owner …….I m very Very angry. ……….very bad ha ………poor AMAYA….
    Shielder it’s not fair ha ………Aise shielder KAALI WEDD SWETHLANA
    de bestest joke of my ff ( undeniable desire ) ………..ab apna naya vala ff bhi jaldi jaldi post karna ………aur ha uski owner bhi mai hi rahungi………ookkkkkkksssssssssssssss !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Nd luvvvvvv u shielder ???

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ammu
      Tu ek kaam kar meri Dil ki owner bann ja….
      I know you are having an undeniable desire to bash me for ending it but I told and notify you all for the end of Undeniable desire with the end of April.
      One more thing mera naam mat bigado yaar ..No no mera position during fight..Its Shield not Shielder..Ok.
      Love you and sweet dream of Katilana(Kaali and Shwerlana if you don’t know credit to Arpita) marriage in jail. ha ha ha…

      1. Amayaa

        Wo to mai already hu – aapke dil ki owner ( as a sister )
        Mera naam mat bigariye na – full on Anika bhabhi style ha
        Okkkkklsssssss
        Jab tak Aapka new name nahi aa jata mai aapko Aastha di hi bulaungi
        Luvvvvvvvvvvv uuuuuu 2222222 ???
        Oohhhhh to ye super idea arpu ka tha
        Waah Ek dum apni didi pe gai hai ( uski Anika didi ) ekdum khirkitor idea deti hai
        Gud night
        ???
        ………………………..

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Ammu.. the marriage of villains Idea was completely mine but credit for the word “KATILANA” goes to Arpita Darling..

  3. Alekhika20

    Asum ending

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Alekhika

  4. Nikita_jai29

    It is awesome dii… Aha Aha.. I am crying… Why you end it… I wish you come with another ff….
    Come soon… Other wise I will become angry birds….. With lots of love and care dii….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I am in with another FF still in May.
      Don’t cry Nikku.. thousands of bone crashing consolation hugs .. I am afraid of your angry bird mode . Love you.

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        I thought to make shortcut but you already is being called in that name. Love you too..Bunny!!!

  5. Noo….. di itni jaldi khatam ho gaya…. Miss ur ff soo much… btw u really did a gud job by married 2 longggg departed lovers from bareli…… hahaha…… Sso become Vasco Da Gama…. Plz Come back soon with ur new bang khidkitode ff……

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bunny(I will call you like this from now onwards)!!..Itni jaldi!!its a full month of April and some OS in between .
      Its called real Ishqbaazi..Kaali bhi bann gaya Ishqbaaz.
      I will be back soon after another OS for Khannaji as you all have ordered for his Ishqbaazi too…
      With lots of Love from your Astha Di..

      1. Of couse di u can call me bunny becz it’s my nick name for all my dear one…& none of my dear frnd called me banita all call me as bunny…. It’s my pleasuer if u also call me that…. & u r d first one with whom i talk in tu… As always luv u…

      2. Of couse di u can call me bunny becz it’s my nick name 4 all my dear one… & none of my dear frnds call me as banita all call me bunny…. It’s my pleasure if u also call me bunny becz u r d first one with whom i talk in tu … As always luv u dii….

  6. Wow!! astha di…awesome ending!!! Loved it!!
    Although I’m really sad as it ended too early but I’m really excited for ‘alien feelings’..
    Cant wait to read it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana…..
      Be ready for getting more of “Alien feelings” in your heart then . I will post soon.
      It did not ended early but was planned before a week. I was not ready to make a book out of undeniable desire . It could have been a boring torture for all of us here…
      Love you.. Bhavana dear.

  7. Akriti

    astha dear din ba din shivika me itna progress kara Rahi ho lagata hai ki ansh aur shivika abhi dur nhi hai…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      It seems so Akriti.. ha ha ha.. Ansh and Shivika lolz…

  8. Surbhi Sharma

    Hain . Di u ended . This is not fair di . But but koi gal nhi ji (punjabi types me) .
    But but Aapka the alien feelings hai na , toh kya tension ji .
    Waise ye part toh ?????? kuch aisa tha . Ab mai bolu bhi toh kya , aap Har bar mujhe speech less jo chor dete ho .
    Ab , tussi jaldi se na , the aliens post kardo ji .
    Haste raho khush raho aur padhte raho astha pehen ji ka ff .
    Love u di . ??

    1. Surbhi Sharma

      Di sorry for tutti futti ? punjabi. ..

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Surbhi.. Aap ki comment padh kar mujhe laga aap meri stories ka promo kar rahi ho ji..lolz…
      I never knew about Punjabi but it seems alike to Hindi..just wow language .
      Love you too….

  9. Thedreamsoul

    This is so beautiful that the way you have expressed it all , the news part was so hilarious and rest the honeymoon was killer too Astha di , this is one of favourite ff and you are going to end it . Please come back soon with a bang and will miss this ff ??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Sana… Keep reading and loving “Alien feelings ” like you did for this story…

  10. Navz

    ????????????????????????????????ohh my naughty shivay!!!!!!till what extent did he goo…omg!!!??????
    This ff ended..????why this early..!!
    Really waiting for ur next ff..part 1 is awesome like this cute one.
    Beautiful ff aastha..felt very good while travelling wid this ff….now i have an undeniable desire to read ur next part soon.thank u for this beautiful and lovely ff.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya… Thank you for being with me even before I started undeniable desire and for encouraging me this much. Love you…..

  11. Vivikhta

    OMG! Asthu di????????????
    I have an undeniable desire to bash u for ending one of my favourite ffs on tu..but also an undeniable desire to give u infinite hugs for giving us such a beautiful pieces of literature..I went through a roller coaster ride Yaar. …There was laugh out loud comedy..sizzling romance, mystery and lovely family moments…I always have an undeniable desire to read more and more…although am feeling sad..phir bhi, am somewhat relieved that u will b starting alien feelings soo…although nd I so have a feeling that alien feelings is gonna b one hell of a comedy show….
    Anyways , about undeniable desire…its just soo good that u leave me zipped always..okay, okay…its can see your shocked stares because I say u leave me zipped and then I do this much bakbak?
    But us ka answer to Amayaa dear se poochna. .because she is the guru who taught me The Art of Bakbaking!??
    And looks like today’s part was meant for blush club members haan? ,
    At least here u fulfilled IB fan dom ‘ s wish of shivika going maathe se neeche , hath se aage. .because u actually they r so magical that they don’t need to do it..just simple hand holding makes us go all???????????
    And Kati lana. ..OMG ???????
    U proved that u r a true romanticbaaz. ..warna villains ko happy ending, wo bhi romantic wali, kaun deta hai re?
    And yes Kati lana. ..The name is exceptional..kudos to Arpu for that..Waise hamari katilana honeymoon ke liye kaha jaa rahi hai?
    Tihad ki JAIL?
    And am so glad that shivika and omri went to northeast for honeymoon. .never been there myself…but know it’s a beautiful place…especially sikkim and meghalaya. ..
    A perfect romantic ending to a perfectly romantic ff…
    Undeniable desire ko meri aakhri salaami????
    Come back soon with your ghartod os and ffs…
    Loads of love to u!
    All india Radio..part 2 (FM 92.7)

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Vivikhta…
      1. People generally thought that places for honeymoon are Ooty or Simla and certain other places in all over India except for the North-East part..I thought to change that concept here.
      2.Katilana honey moon I forget that totally ha ha…
      3. Your this buk buk gives a smile to my face..thnx. to both of you @Vivi and Ammu ..my AIR and Big FM…
      4. Villain ko happy ending koun deta hai yaar!! Aur koun dega Astha Paagal hey na…for making all Ishqbaaz..even Villains too..
      5. Finally after one month of journey with undeniable desire..
      the couple are.. Shivika ,Gourikara, Rumya,Shinky,Dev-Prinku, Tejvi and Of course Katilana..I was thinking of Making Dadi-Saahil as a pair too but Saahil didn’t agree to be paired with Dadi Kalyaniji..Agar tumhari Nazroon mein koi achcha ladka(Budhdha) hai toh mujhe bata dena…Dadi ki bhi shaadi karwa denge….ha ha ha..
      Have a Marvelous May…..

  12. Nithu

    enta fast ga end chesav……loved it by the way…..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nithu..every thing have an end…its not an end ..its the Beginning of life, their journey of Ishqbaazi together… beside each other .
      Thank you ..love you.

  13. Super awesome ending… Looking forward to Alien Feelings

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Fffan..

  14. AnuluvsIB

    Wow aasthu gaaru! It was ??? you have ended it on an awesome note!
    Buy it ended.. that’s the sad part?
    Write one more na..
    And KTlana??

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu…wow!! Mahi Bhaiyya on your dp.. hey congrats for your registration… and I already submitted a short story of Shivika as Sabbu’s marriage special gift..
      Thank you for being in this long journey of undeniable desire…Love you and Mahi bhaiyya equally ha ha…

      1. AnuluvsIB

        Thanks for being in the journey! U r getting too formal gal!! Anyways glad that u write an awesome ff!
        Waiting for more!

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Hey Anu…Its not formality yaar..Its display of the hidden emotions of an emotionally challenged girl named as Astha….

  15. Oh my maata .!!!! asthababy mere ko pata nahi tha ki tum apni bhaiya ko itni romantic banasakti ho.Awwwwwww sooo sweet.
    And your journey was soooo beautiful.
    Hope you will bsck with a bang BY a ff or OS.
    100 kisses and 200 hugs from me.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Arpita darling.
      Kisses and hugs powerful and bone crushing hai..ha ha..
      Ishqbaaz hue Romanticbaaz…
      Love you…

  16. Superb epi….nd awesome journey….loved it to the core….waiting impatiently for ur next work…..will miss ur ff a lot……

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Love you Lilly..Thnx. a lot . You don’t have to wait for my other story ..It is already submitted.

  17. Rasika

    nice ending,loved the epi
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    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Rasika..

  18. Niriha

    Awesome???….the news part was so funny loved it

  19. Awesome dear…sorry for late comment…I thought I have commented…keep writing nd entertaining us…all the very best…

  20. hello astha di
    nice ff sad that undeniable desire s(eries of 21) got ended
    but no worries as u will continue with alien feelings ff???

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Maggi.. that is so funny!! sad bhi tum ho and khudko console bhi kar rahi ho..thnx.

  21. Tanz

    While reading it,I was having a feeling as if it was the end but when I came all the way down, it really was?
    But the ending was just beautiful…
    The best part-Kaali and Swetlana marrying in the jail.Even you gave them a happy ending too.
    I enjoyed each and every part of undeniable desire.If laughter is the best medicine then you are definitely the best doctor (even if you aren’t one).
    Now I am eagerly waiting for Alien feelings. I’m telling you beforehand that maybe I’ll be commenting late as my school is starting but I’ll definitely comment.?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tanz…Your Love for me is important not the time.
      All the very best for your future…and love you too….

      1. Tanz

        Thank you so much Astha Di for this comment ??

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Stay happy dear…

  22. Dhar

    Awesome episode ??, aww u ended it , undeniable desire was one of the ff for which i waited eagerly, waiting for your alien feelings

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you for being in this long journey dear Dhar.

  23. Ahsana98

    Sorry…………………………………………………….Astha Di for the late comment and sorry……………………
    for not commenting your previous parts (18,19,20) too. Actually I miss 18,19,20 parts of your ff. That’s why I saw you posted your 21th part of your ff. l couldn’t read and I only save that part. I don’t know that it was your last part. yesterday I saw one of the post in TU it shows that it was your last part. so yesterday I go to the saved pages and find your previous parts and I read all parts. yesterday my net offer was ended that’s why I can’t comment your ff.
    It’s was an awesome lovely super duper ending dear. But I sad that one of my favorite shivika ff was ended.
    I’m happy that finally Rudra find his love angel and proposed her in front of his family. And what a beautiful love confession. and shivika was united and Kali ‘s unexpected entry bring the truth of chulbul. And om get his bulbul gaury. And Three oberio bro’s get their ishqbaazi in same day. The entire family is full of ishqbazzi mode. I like shivika ‘s wedding gift given by gaury. And the newly married anika kick shivay from bed that was funny part of your ff. Ha Ha your ff make me laugh. I miss that seen in real IB. but while reading this ff I was imagine that part, it was very funny .And best joking news kaali takkur marry his long lost girl friend swethlana in jail. Ha Ha the entire oberio family was laughing seeing the news in TV. and I also laughing while reading this part. You are an amazing writer dear. The most beautiful part of your ff is when omkara put sindoor in gaury ‘s mang first time in front of the god idol and shivay put sindoor in anika ‘s mang and elder oberios doing the same. It was the most beautiful part of your ff. And I like the Himalayan honeymoon of both couple shivika and rikara. you are an amazing writer dear. your ff is full of musty, romance, emotions, villanism. so the entire 21 parts are awesome lovely and fantastic. I really miss your ff. so coming back with an super duper ff. I’m waiting for that .And last sorry for this late comment …………….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ahsana… Dhai kilo ka comment!!

  24. Jerry_36

    Such a a cute ending. Aastha di totally fallen for it. I am eagerly waiting for your next ff ‘Alien Feelings’ Post it soon. Gonna miss this one?

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