UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-19

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“Gopal bring another bowl of milk”- Dadi ordered,”Manish clean the floor soon”.
“I am here to take my chiraiyya back to Bareilly’- Kaali strangled Om,”My Gouri”.
“You can’t take some one else wife like this”- Jhanvi come to the rescue of her son,”you may end up in jail for this act of yours”.
“This ajeeb cave man with coat shot married my Gouri there and”- Kaali took a deep breath in between the long sentence,”with out taking permission from anynone. That is also wrong, I will send him to jail”.
“Exactly Kaali that was a mistake not a crime when the bride didn’t objected the marriage”- Shakti put some sense,”you are taking law at your own hand”.
Hurrayah…….

“Shivaay bhaiyya”- Saahil got curious,”Is this Kaali a brother to Gouri that Om bhaiyya have to take permission from him for marriage?”
“Shut up you little devil”- Kaali show his red eyes to the little child.
“Kaali Thakur,one word against my brothers”- Shivaay felt enormous anger,”I am not going to leave you in peace even behind the bars”.
“Bahubaali married Rudramadevi”- Rudra looked at the green anger filled eyes and back to the black eyes of Annika bhabhi. Both their eyes looked more dangerous then the Red eyes of Kaali Thakur at least to his eager eyes.
Rudra rubbed his curious face to remove his own anger. Soumya kept her round hand on his shoulder.
“I am not afraid Sumo”- Rudra fought his fear.
“I am afraid here”- Soumya replied,”his eyes are too dangerous”.
“Khanna take him away other wise”- Tej roared and went near Gouri,”my daughter will come to file complain later to the police station”.
” Ok sir”- Khanna obeyed soon.

“The ring Pinky”- Dadi asked for the platinum ring,”put it in this bowl”.
Priyanka and Saahil along with Soumya tears roses and kept inside the milk bowl.
Gouri put some Vermilion power in the mixture and then rubbed her hands to keep her bouncing hairs behind her ears. The vermilion powder leave its mark on her hair partition.
“Your first time”- Omkara commented,”putting sindoor on my name”.
“During marriage did you applied Sandalwood mark there Om”-Pinky asked being curious,”you both are married with out any sindoor and phere kya?”
“No Choti maa”- Gouri joined a relation soon,”he put his blood in my partition and took rounds around the fire “.
“You both were injured then mere bachche”- Dadi felt the pain now only,”and you are very brave”.
“Did you lift Gouri bhabhi in your arm for phere O”- Rudra and his logically active brain get it soon,”I knew it from the very beginning that Om is inspired from Old Bollywood movies”.
“shut up duffer”-,Jhanvi used the word for the first time,”making fun of others all the time”.
“Where is your love angel”-,Annika teased,”she promised to attain my marriage didn’t she ?”
“Bhabhi”- Rudra smiled,”Soumya is only my love angel”.
“What the wuck!!”- Saahil used the words,”Saahil out- Rudra in”.
“Bhaiyya I am in your team”-Soumya went towards Shivaay for the ring haunting ceremony,”Duffer always chants the mantra of Annika bhabhi”.

“Haan toh”-Omkara took the side of Annika ,”Rudra I am from your side in this”.
“Gouri bhabhi join with us”- Soumya invited,”we have t support bade bhaiyya”.
“Oh baat ee he ki”- Gouri went near her jatadhari hippi,”I am always from his side”.
Dadi take a chair and sit in between her Billu and Billi slightly behind the couple at focus.
“Dadi you are smart”-Shivaay commented then.
“I am the elderly experienced Ishqbaaz of Oberoi family”- Dadi felt very proud.
“Bhabhi find it soon”- OmRu encouraged as both Shivaay and Annika put their hands in the milk.
“Shivaay bhaiyya !!Shivaay bhaiyya”- Soumya cheered along with Pinky and Jhanvi.
Shivaay just sat there motionless as her long talented slim finger touched his rough palm sending shivers down his spine. She remained naive to her fire work inside cold milk.
” Shivaay lost the simple game from a girl”- Jhanvi said,”his wife”.
“Make her wear the ring Billu”-Dadi instructed,”she find it”.
“Gouri..Where did you kept Gouri”- Om threw the puzzle,”did the worker kept it at the right place”.
“Hame nahi pata”- Gouri teased,”you ask Chulbul”.

“I am asking my Bulbul”-Om looked at the entrance of Oberoi mansion,”Gouri is here”.
Others didn’t get a head or tail of their the puzzled conversation mainly Rudra.
“Shivaay ..Annika bhabhi”- Om dragged them to the entrance,”my gift for your wedding”.
“Bade bhaiyya”- Gouri gave a pair of scissor,”open it”.
Annika stood confused to hold his Hand or not for opening the wedding gift.
“Aah!!”- Shivaay acted like being hurt ,”this is so…”.
“Lagi aap ko”- Annika hold his hand to check the wound,”where is your attention”.
“On you”-Dadi became a duffer.
“This is splendid”-Annika commented before any one can compliment ,”Gouri means Parvathi maatha”.
“This is very thought ful “- Shivaay praised,”only one artist can do it “.
Parvathi maatha smiled blessing her children after getting a place beside her Shankarjj on the entrance of Oberoi Mansion.
“A simple statue and so deep meaning”- Jhanvi whispered,” we all never thought about it”.
The golden pair of statue remained at the back ground as they clicked a family photo in front of the smiling and blessing God.
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“Shivaay Singh Oberoi lost a simple ring game from his wife”-Annika teased her husband in their first night.
“Oh really”-Shivaay came to sit beside her on their king sized bed,”I won Annika”.
“You won!!”- She was surprised,”I won and every one saw it”.
“Yehi the difference is”- Shivaay laid on his back, one hand under his head,”you only won the game but I won many more things important and valuable then the simple ring there”.
“No the final is I won and you lost the game”- Annika remained stick to her winning over his victory..
He won ..her heart,her smile her happiness and lost himself in her love to win her for him…
“Sleep Annika”- He pulled her near him,”they will tease if we are late in the morning”.
“Will you kiss me once again on my lips before sleeping Shivaay”- Annika was adamant to make him insane in her love “just for once”.
“This is your prize”- He came dangerously close to her anticipating waiting lips,”for winning there and heart of Shivaay Singh Oberoi”.
He continued till both of them feel breathless after the blissful moment.
“Now sleep meri Jhansi ki Raani”- He took her in his arm,”I am not very good always and you are testing me already”.
“Tadibaaz”- Annika felt anger at him,”How can he sleep after stealing her neend and chein?”
“Annika close your eyes”- He covered her with his blanket,”Good night”.
“Have a dangerous chudailful horror dream Billu”- Annika wished in her style “fall down from bed”.
“Hey I forget to change the bed”- He hold her more tightly,”You are that chudail in my dream”.
“What!!”- She followed some steps of Jakie Chan to tackle him.
“And my angel to..”- Shivaay managed to save himself smartly,”my dream girl”.
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“Soumya”-Om knocked her at her door,”Can Gouri stay here for a night with you”.
“Your wife in my room”-Sumo get in a trance.
“My room is not fit for a girl”- Om reasoned,”I will arrange it for her tomorrow”.
“Ok bhaiyya”- Sumo replied,”Only for today”.
“Love angel is one naughty angel too”- Gouri came inside the room.
“Good night girls”- Om leave them and went to sleep with the dramatic Rudra after a long time.

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57 Comments
    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Anaya dear

  1. Asthababy wrote her episode wiuth her unique style soo cute post next part bahubsli maaried rudrammadevi 😂😂😂😂😂 kahan se diolgue laati ho.??? 😂😂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I am crazy about them so only Arpita darling… Thank you dear.

  2. Amayaa

    Awwwww
    This is de best ever ritual. …………….loved it …………..
    Baahubali married Rudramadevi ……………..ha ha ha ……………..but di still confused ……………..who is Rudramadevi? ???????

    My undeniable desire 😍😍😍Luv u 😍😍😍even more than Aastha di

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ammu.. Rudramadevi is a powerful queen of Deccan plateau, more dangerous then Jhansi ki Raani .
      You can search in Google for more details and it is also the name of a movie by Guna shekhar with Allu Arjun and Anushka Shetty in it … I just know that she was the daughter of Ganpathidev a king in Andhra pradesh..

  3. Wow di again a Super duper Funny Lovly epi…… Ajeeb cave man with coat shot married KT’s chiraiya, BAHUBALI married RUDRAMADEVI… hahahaha…… Gatadhari hippi put SANDALWOOD mark on his chiraiya hairline…. As always u nailed it di…. Luv u…….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Ha ha ha… keep laughing like this Banita…Main toh crazy hoon hi pehle se for Shivika.
      Love you too…

  4. Superbbbbbbbbbb one di!! All the lovey-dovey moments of shivika were amazing..
    Loved it to the core…
    Nd look wat I found n the internet…
    https://www.instagram.com/p/BTW9Pcslj0a/?hl=en
    I just hope it works…

    1. Yesss, it works..have a good night di..

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Oh bete ki… Bhavana telepathy and love works.. I too find the same in insta and made it my dp… aww…..

      2. 😛 😛
        I just love them… <3

      3. nd dii go to tellytadka.net they r having a poll… for shivika humko jeetana hai..I have been continuosly voting for them..

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana it’s called cheating in the name of forth night. bhaiyya ne cheating kiya hai suhag raat par hi.

  5. Nithu

    loved it…….soooooooo much…….whr r u frm……..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nithu… Astha Reddy from India ..

      1. Nithu

        so ur from…..telugu state……….right….

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Sorry yaar if I sounded rude..Yes I am from Visakhapatnam.
      Love you dear.

      1. Nithu

        its okay sweet hrt…im frm hyderabad…

  6. Samm

    love your dp. shivaay giving it up so easily and explaining his ishqbaazi to anika was so sweet! 🙂 love your dp too 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you yaar Samm

  7. It is awesome dii…. I think you are very curious about bahubali…
    Ha ha ha jokes a part.. Update is nice.. Laughing therapy is going on….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      No wonder Nikku..I am very eager for Bahubaali… pata lagana jo hai ki Aakhir Katappa ne Bahubaali ko khun maara??
      Life is short so we must keep laughing. I am not going to stop laughing therapy.

  8. Navz

    Mana telugu cinemaa perlu vinipisthe aa kick e verrappa.!!😋😋😀😀😀
    Soo funny aastha…bahubali married rudramadevi😂😂….and sahil asking whether khali is gauris brother..and asusual my duffer also..naughty rudra….
    Shivika – romance… Iam sure aastha ur bhaiyya and bhabi will reach this height of romance only after an year (minimum)pakka😋😉🙈🙈🙈…..
    Aww omri..💞💞❤❤❤❤❤ btw in previous comment i asked whether MU between omri was cleared…u said no…then how come om was acting soo cool with gauri..??????? Did i miss any part??!! Hope u will clear my silly doubt😁😁…super cool and fantastic work dear.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Navya…Actually I wanted to describe the misunderstanding cleared scene from last two days but you see its Shivika marriage .They need attention naa.
      Oh Bahubaali married Rudramadevi..Saw some cute off screen picture of Prabhas and Anushka in instagram…so applied that here…

  9. Awesome…
    Too cute….
    KT ka popat ho gaya…. 😉
    “Bahubaali married Rudramadevi”~ Rudy baby is hilarious
    Shivika r adorable….
    waiting fr d nxt… 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you and they teased KT by asking if Gouri is his sister ha ha..

  10. Navz

    Aastha …ur dp😍😍😘😘😘💖💖💖💖

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Say na they are adorable …our Shivika ,Navya.

  11. Awesome…waiting for next

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you dear Niriha..

  12. ____________________

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Astha tum itni khidki tod beautiful likhti ho ki meri saasein rook jaati hain. Tumhare story ke bina mera din aadhura lagta hai..
      Powerful blank space choda mere liye toh kuch bhi likh dungi wahan…lolz.

  13. Tanz

    Wow Astha Di ….this part was filled with so many cute scenes….I loved them.And Om’s gift was awesome .
    Waiting for the next part eagerly…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      From this part Om’s gift won my heart too…right to equality…
      Thank you Tanz.

    2. Super awesome

      1. Aastha_Reddy

        Thank you dear.

  14. VHM

    Once again you did it a hilarious shot straight into the bulls eye…….i wonder if someone can beat in humorous writing with lots of inner meaning hid withing the humor……..will have to patiently wait to get your laughing therapy back soon

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I will try to keep it up dear Haarika. Thank you dear .
      love you a lot.

  15. Awesome episode…filled with fum romance humour etc…..loved it..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Zaveesha .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Three magical alphabets!!!

  16. Your stole my words and my heart and it was fab dr no words shortage of words……Superb post next soon waiting for ur new ff though…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Arthi…I got it. love you

  17. Deepika12

    Awesomee episodee diiii😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘. I read all ur ff’s and OS. All of them are mindblowing.

    “During marriage did u put sandalwood remark over there om”, it was superbb😂😂😂. And shivay lost the game😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 and shivay is a very rich man i guess. He said that the bed was quite big for them and he needs a small 1 only. He was not able to change even a bed in all these days😜😂😂😂😂😂😂

    Bahubali married rudramadevi😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂. “What the wuck” frm sahil when he got to know that saumya is love angel😂😂😂😂 bichala sahill, sare sapne chaknachoor ho gaye😂😂😂😂. And rudra saying to kali thaku “is gauri ur sis thato should ask u to marry her”😂😂😂😂😂

    U write mindblowing dialogues di. U ur ff is more than great. Post the next Epi as soon as possible.

    Love u di😘😘,
    Deepika

    1. Deepika12

      Sryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy for the long boring comment di. Sryyyyy I have a habit of writing big comments😊

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Deepika..
      I love my girls who used to make dimag ki dahi of me with their long comments..Pinky promise.

      1. Deepika12

        Awwwwwwwwww!! Shoo shweet of u Diiiii😘😘😘😘

  18. Aastha!! I loved it!! I just loved it sooo much!
    Everything abt the chapter.. whole
    Of OF standing behind Gauri against KT..
    Bahubali weds rudhradevi! Lol 😂😂
    And the entire rasam.. wow!
    OF takings sides..convo between Om and Gauri.
    And the finishing Kiss!! (Blush blush)
    Thanks for the awesome update asthu gaaru

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Anu …thank you dear.
      Finally I did it..left you in dilemma to choose a single word or sentence like you do always..Yay!!!

  19. Actually , i left dat blank space to u only dr coz i would like to knw what u gonna writen in dat space coz i dn’t have any nw words to compliment u . Nd i’m searching for d nw words to compliment u dr.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Liba..and I pasted the words of Annika bhabhi there..

  20. Wat to say u aastha dr…… doesn’t hv words to describe ur ff……….bahubali married rudradevi haha…….so gauri got support frm whole OF…….sahil too learnt wat d wuck frm his jiju……
    I don’t hv words so searched in annika’s dictionary…….. khidkitod update Aastha

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      OMG!! look who commented for me.. my SBSA school best friend… love you yaar..

  21. Jerry_36

    Super se bhi upar vala update di. Jzz awesome❤

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. yaar Jerry.

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