UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-15

The loud sounds of music echoed the whole garden and they danced on the beat of latest new Hindi songs..
“Dadi”- Rudra pulled the old lady,”you should dance on a romantic song with me”.
“Chal besharam khotiyya”- Kalyaniji slapped her grand son,”just pull Billu and his Billi to the dance floor”.
“This is Sangeeth for them”- Jhanvi support ,”and we are too old to dance”.
“Old…”- Tej protested,”we can set fire on the dance floor”.
“Look Pinky”- Shakti show,”Sangeeth is here but your heera beta is struck to his laptop and Bluetooth and Annika is sitting watching others enjoying on their function”.
“Billu”- Rudy smirked,”if your romance with Khanna and Mishra is over then come here and join with us on the dance floor”.
“Chulbul..”- Om discovered while dancing,”your hands are too soft”.
“I will make her do exercise daily and chulbul will be another pehelwan soon Om”- Rudra offered.
” Thaanku”- Gouri Sharma smiled ,” but I am using Vivel soap for making skin soft”.
“Bhaiyya “- Saahil shouted,”I am dancing for the first time in my life and you are not joining with me”.
“Annika in which song should we dance here”- Shivaay whispered,”I am new to this dancing business”.
“Your smile and this roar of happiness is the best music for my ears”- Annika replied,”the most sweet after your magical words”.
“I don’t know much about dance except for the Obro moment crazy steps”- Shivaay is not perfect in all subject,” Will you teach me”.
Annika hold his hands and then placed her hands on his neck,” I will teach you a romantic dance”.
“I am a very obedient student Annika”- Shivaay came more close ,” I will learn it only from you”.
“Are we allowed to do this during dance Annika”- Shivaay placed a kiss on her hand then his sensual lips travels up to her face to place numerous kisses on her moon glowing face with happiness…,”I saw this in movies the kissing scene in a dance”.
“You s*xy Singh Oberoi”- Annika ran away,”stay away,all are watching us”.
“I will do it always only with you”- Shivaay teased,”all will be happy watching us romancing “.
“We will clap our hands in happiness”- Rudra heard them talking in very low voice and commented,”till our hands matches red red tomato”.
“Shut up duffer”- Shivaay slapped on the back of his head,”I will disturb you one day to the core of irritation”.
“You are welcome bhaiyya”- Rudra left them alone again.
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“This cones are to be used for Mehendi”- Pinky handed over the branded cones of Mehendi to the lady,”make one complex and beautiful design on Annika’s hand”.
“Haan.. hide the name of groom”- Dadi provided information,”the groom have to find his name on brides palm during Suhaag raat”.
“What shall I put on the design mam”-the parlour lady asked,”the groom’s name”.
“Billu..no SSO or Kanji ankhen wala bhagad billa”- Rudra suggested,”I can think of some more name for bhaiyya from bhabhi”.
” Get out from here”- Jhanvi make a serious angry face,”boys are not allowed for Mehendi”.
” my work is done “- Rudra left with a logic sign.
“Bhaiyya!!”- He hugged shivaay,”now we can see the live telecast of Mehendi function from this laptop”.
“Chulbul sit here”-Om held the soft hands of his best buddy,”This is the only way to see the function”.
Gouri looked at the screen with wide eyes. The red red design on women’s palm and then at her white palm.. Her husband came more close to her and put his hands around her shoulder…
“The naughtiest boys of this whole Mumbai”- Dadi came to check how good boy her grand son are!!,”come to join us as family togetherness and happiness is more important then a stupid rituals and you are all smart here “.
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“The design is turning more red”- Shivaay picked Annika’s hand only to smell the magnetic scent of henna,”I wish I can kiss them now”.
Annika saw him with her round wide eyes. He wish to kiss it now means…
“You are right I am gonna kiss it when we are alone after function”.
“Bhaiyya not fair haan…”- Rudra came in between the romantic couple ,”before Shaadi .. you are planning leading me behind”.
“Shall he talk and romance with you Rudra”- Shakti interfered,”they are just talking”.
“All married man are stupid”- Duffer accused,”all are Paraya Dhan”.
“The more red “- Dadi described the rituals,”the more love in the couple”.
“Hein!!”-Tej is the father of a duffer,” red is the colour of love then”.
“Red.. blood red.. Blood”- Omkara remembered of a girl.. his wife covered in red blood during the attack from villagers in Bareilly.
“Gouri”- He whispered ,”red is not a colour of love only.. your pain and tears…”.
Om closed his face in both his hands… He decided to search for Gouri then and there.. She is his wife and a bahu of Oberoi family. Truth can be hided but he is a walking namuna of truth…and hiding truth is just like supporting lie..
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“This is beautiful Annika”- Shivaay kissed her hands,”the design”.
“Are you sad Annika”-,He asked,”I did not put any Mehendi on your name”.
“Ha ha…. Shivaay”- Annika laughed loud,”will you put Sindoor after marriage on your head in my name.. Business tycoon Shivaay Singh Oberoi is unpredictable and dump in the matter of marriage rituals”.
“the design is too complex Annika”- He again held her hand and looked through it.
“Stay away from the mehendi Billuji”- Annika sat near pool,”you have to find your name on our first night”.
“I am not a fool to loss time on searching my name on your hands”- Shivaay teased,”I know that my name is written on your heart like your name on my heart”….

43 comments

  1. AHSANA

    It’s was an awesome lovely episode. I like Rudy’s dialogues and like om remember gaury when rudra speak about blood and red. I’m like the sentence
    “I know that my name is written on your heart like your name on my heart ” I’m waiting for your next episode .update soon. 😊😊😊😊

  2. VHM

    VHM

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    This is stupendously fantabulous ….i am falling in love more and more with every episode…awesome Astha….

  3. Amayaa

    Amayaa

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    10 : 30 me hi TU PAGE par ishqbaaz aata h air uske just pahle undeniable desire
    Par Kitna diffrence h dono me
    Same characters but a different plot nd now a day’s I don’t wait for ishqbaaz 2 come but I m desperately waiting for undeniable desire 2 come
    Ooooohhhhh my mata !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Ye words lati kaha se ho aap
    Ekdum khirkitor darwajator

    Eagerly waiting for de grand waiting
    Aise aaj ishqbaaz me hamari pyari Anika bhabhi ke words kamal ke the aur yaha hamare bhaiyaki

    DIL MAANGE MORE AASTHA DI

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Amayaa… may be reading this story has become your undeniable desire now…
      Thnx. my sister … from Delhi.. you are Delhi ki dhak dhak… dil ki lubb dubb…

  4. Anu

    Awwww chapter.. I am a very obedient student annika.. I will learn it only from you.. blush blush.. aasthu gaaru.. I love ur naught SSO!!
    And waiting for love angel too!!
    And Om is dancing with Chulbul??! Sach mein ma ka laadla bigad gaya!! 😄

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Anu… you asked me to write about Shivika and I am writing it only on positive note… no villain is be here..only fun and ishqbaazi…For the happy mood of the reader…my lovely friends..
      and not only SSO all Oberoi family is crazy and naughty here…like Annika named it from her first visit..”ZOO”…..

  5. Miss. Murty

    Awesome loved the episode……I am having the exam tomorrow but still can’t stop my self from reading ur wonderful work

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Thnx. Miss.Murty…i am happy it acted as a stress booster for your exam tension..
      Are you from the family of Mr. Murty..the smart Voltas air conditioner wala advertisement …???(kidding yaar)

  6. Shivika

    Awesome….Superb….Loved it….
    Shivika r amazing couple…
    Rudy~The kabab me haddi 😉
    Om’s realization ….
    The supportive & cupid dadi…
    Waiting fr d nxt….. 🙂

  7. Tanz

    You know reading this I’ve started to have an undeniable desire to read more and more of it…..Sometimes I feel jealous because I’m not that good at writing….Stupid me…
    So yeah, this part too was amazing. Shivika Chemistry-Superb. Rudra is too cute in your ff just like a kid.Chalo Om ko apni wife ki yaad aayi…Atleast now he’ll try to find her and it would be interesting..
    Waiting for the next part di
    byeee
    love you.
    🙂

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Ha ha ha… Tanz. maine toh pura raita phela diya hai Oberoi Mansion mein…happiness ka raita and I am happy that you want to acquire my style of writing … Thank you keep loving like this…..

  8. Nivedita

    Nivedita

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    Beautiful romance!💕💕 Funny Dialogues of Ru..😜😂
    Gud to have Chulbul and Sahil share these moments too..😘

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      While watching Ishqbaaz… i always have an undeniable desire within me to keep all the characters together… let it be Saahil or Gouri.. and sharing only happiness together..it is my desire to keep all of them in the wedding…
      Thank you dear Nivedita…

      • Nivedita

        Nivedita

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        Yeah, I totally get that desire.. to have the whole family together! 💗 That’s gud..looking fwd to seeing them all together at the wedding! 👌

  9. Bhavana

    Awwwww…superbbb one..
    Nd just loved the vivel soap part…
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt…update asap!

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Thnx. Bhavana…
      ha ha.. this Astha is crazy.. first Garnier shampoo and then Vivel soap lolz… side effect of watching advertisement …ha ha..

  10. nikitajai

    It is awesome astha dii…..
    After knowing the secret of soft hands of chulbul.. I will also use vivel soap… Ha ha ha…..
    You are my Rockstar dii….

  11. Navz

    Navz

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    These days more than d serial , im waiting for ur ff or os updates..shivaay is becoming soo naughtt these days and my duffer rudra leaving his cute wife he is more concentrated on romance of his bhaiyya and bhabhi…duffee for a resaon😁😁.omg!!!!!!!om wants to find gauri..that means that misunderstanding was cleared…?????????atlast again u gave khithkithod update…waiting for next..luv u Aastha😍😍

    • Aastha_Reddy

      Aastha_Reddy

      |Author

      Thank you Navya.. MU between OmRi is not cleared.. but he have a different reason here of missing Gouri.. wait for that… and keep loving…

  12. Banita

    Superb di….. now a days shivaya becomeing romantic singh obroi…. & d vivel soap part… i just luv it……

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