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UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-14

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“What changes do you want in this room Annika”- Shivaay Singh Oberoi asked,”This will be your room after three days”.
Annika looked at her Billuji. Then back at the room. The white curtains,the blue back ground glowing with the reflection of pool water,the pool side,orange couch…every thing looked so perfect.
“No change is needed here”- Annika whispered,”Its perfect just the way it is”.
“Just like you”- Shivaay said.
“No like my Shivaay”- she claimed him as her for the first time.
“I want to change only one thing Annika”- He hide his amusement,”the bed is too large. I am ordering a small one today”.
“You besharam “- Annika accused,”Shameless Singh Oberoi”.
“Bhaiyya!!”- Rudra entered,”I want help from bhabhi for decoration of main hall. I am taking her with me now”.
“After three days I will lock her with me in this room and no one can take her away”- Shivaay consoled himself,”We will be a married couple then”.
“Rudra..”- Dadi shouted,”Come soon”.
“I am asking help from Annika bhabhi for her own marriage”-Rudy smiled,”She is the best wedding planner after all”.
Shivaay smiled sarcastically and pulled both the ears of agent Ruddy,”I am calling love Angel for our marriage”.
Dadi arrived then to witness the delicious kawab with a skeleton in between them.
“Chal khotiyya”- Dadi take her Ru away from the couple,”I am tolerating this for now. after marriage you will not come here”.
“If this continues even after marriage”- Pinky put her hand on her head,” Oh my maatha is not far it seems”.
“Pinky”- Shakti asked,”How did Rudy did your Oh my maatha?”
“This khottiya is always interfering in between Shivaay and Annika”- Dadi informed,”the dream Pinky had for her kanji eyed grand son is far away when he is there”.
“I am also eager for that Dadi”- Rudra protested,”I want to become a Chotey uncle soon”.
“What are you doing soon Rudra?”- Tej entered,”I also want to know your interest”.
“Nothing ….I want to become nothing”- Rudra ran away,”I am better at what I am already”.
“Ha ha…”-All laughed out as Rudra became afraid of his Amresh Puri father.
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“Chulbul bring that roses and orchid here”- Omkara ordered.
“This is so beautiful”- Gouri took the flower near her jatadhari hippi,”Omkaraji here is the flowers”.
“Now go to art gallery and see if they complete the statue I asked them to paint with colour”.
“Which Idol “- Chulbul inquired,”I mean I need to know about it to supervise the progress”.
“Parvathi devi”- Omkara gave information,”I want to surprise all on the wedding day”.
“I am going to art gallery now”- Gouri went away soon.
The smile,happiness,
shouting,pulling legs,teasing,arrangement all is new to her..
“This is what people felt during marriage..environment of a happy marriage house”- Gouri muttered,”I never saw it.. this feeling is priceless”.
“Hey Shankarji”- She fold her hand in a namaskaram pose “Bless bade bhaiyya and Annika didi with all the happiness in this world”.
“My jatadhari will be happy if his family is happy”-she resumed ,”I will be happy at his happiness”.
“Chulbul”-Omkara sounds worried from the other side of the mobile,”you reached safely or not”.
“Haan haan Omkaraji…I reached here and the statue is almost completed”.
“Did you see the statue”- He asked further,”now tell me the name of the idol there”.
“Gouri”- She answered,”the statue is more then perfect and beautiful”.
“Gouri…”- The name remind Om of a girl almost covered with blood.. still a brave and smart girl…
“Gouri”- he whispered,”wife of …”
“Wife of Shankarji…”- She hided her tears behind her stupid smile and white glowing teeth.
“Take care Chulbul and come home soon”-Om show his care to his best buddy…
“Wife is the only best friend for life”….
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“Hello…”- Rudra entered the studio,”I want to meet Love angel”.
“She is not here…”- the girl at reception informed,”leave any message for her”.
“I came to give this to her”- Rudra showed the wedding card in his hand,”I am here to invite her for my brother’s marriage”.
“She will not come on the mentioned date”- the girl informed,”Its her brother’s marriage on the same day”.
He took the address from the same girl and left soon to meet his love Angel…he badly need to…invite her to his brother’s marriage… her brother can marry on some other day….
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“Is there any more thing you want to do in our marriage Annika”-Shivaay sat on the same couch where she was sitting,”any desire for your marriage”.
“Marriage was the last thing on my mind till the time I met you”-Annika stiffened in her place..his nearness.. damn his nearness…and damn her reaction to his presence…
“She was busy in doing the barbadi of others..”- Saahil is a naughty kid.. and more filmy when needed,”shaadi.. barbadi”…
“You are a sweet and cute darling”- Soumya pulled the chubby soft cheek of Saahil.
This time a full packet of cadburry shots burst on his face….
“You are also an angel”-Saahil complimented.
“Angel…”- Rudra shouted after sitting on another couch after returning from his important work of searching love angel…
“My Love Angel is coming for your wedding Annika bhabhi”- Rudra shared his feelings,”its her brother’s marriage on the same day but I will search and make her come here for your wedding ceremony”.
“You gave her the invitation”- Shivaay chuckled at the craziness of his brother,”Is she coming sure?”
“She was not in the studio today but I got her address from the reception”- Rudra gave him the paper with almost all the care of this world….
“What the wuck!!!”- Shivaay trued to tore the paper,” this address is fake one”.
“You are a very successful business man bhaiyya”- Rudy cried,”but there is no logic behind this as I gave my full details there they verified me from Google and gave the address”.
Shivaay gave him the paper back,”go and check your own address Rudra.. both you and love angel are from a same resident and same house … which is not possible”.
“They played very bad joke with you Ru..”- Dadi felt sad for her small grandson…
“Chalak lomdi…”- Rudra closed his one eye at the failure of his effort.. of finding love angel…
“Duffer”- Soumya leaved her breath,”cry baby…”.
“We will find her soon Rudra”-,Omkara consoled,”she will be here for Shivaay’s wedding for sure”.
“She will come sure Rudra”- Soumya laughed,”She will come for sure… for bade bhaiyya’s wedding”.
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“Two more days to go”- Shivaay had became perfect in mathematics while counting days for his marriage,”and four more rituals to go..for the final ritual”.
He dragged Annika to pool side.
“Not four Shivaay”- Annika counted,”Sangeeth, Mehendi and Haldi .. three rituals before the main ritual of marriage”.
” Three before marriage but four before the main and important ritual.. “- Shivaay reminded her,”its Sangeeth,Mehemdi,Haldi and Shaadi … all this is in a line before Suhaag raat”…
“You are blushing Annika”- He teased,” you are one smart wedding planner but doesn’t know about all rituals clearly…
“I know every thing clearly”- Annika fought back.
“Well I will see after Marriage…”- Shivaay stood up ,”how more clearly do you know about the post wedding rituals”….

46 Comments
  1. Superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb….
    I am dying to know rudra’s reaction…
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt..update asap!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Bhavana… Live a happy life first..firse die words apne jubaan pe mat lana…and thank you…rudra will accpet soumya easily here as I am planning to end this story soon…

  2. Amayaa

    Nailed it again

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Amayaa… sister

  3. It is awesome dii….. Cadbury shots are nice…. Rudra antics is funny and cute….. Waiting for the next update… And good night…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Nikku… Good morning dear…
      and thank you …

  4. Amayaa

    Samajh ni aa raha h kya bolu
    Koi words bache hi ni h
    Sab pahle vale parts me bol chuki
    Aur phir se wahi lines acche ni lagte na
    Islie upur wala comments 3 words ka tha
    Par aap to Janti h bina bole aapki amayaa rahi ni sakti
    Ye upar wale comment AMAYAA pe bilkul bhi suit ni karte
    Dekho na di kuch bolne ke liye no h to bas buk buk ki ja rahi hu

    Well phir se speechless chord diya na
    Now even counting seconds nd waiting for ur next part
    Ab ishqbaaz ka to wait karne se koi profit ni h

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      “BASS KAR PAGLI”—– my magical words…in place of I love you… ha ha…
      Ab mujhe acchha laga … Amayaa wali feelings aaya dil mein…

  5. Ruksy

    Loved it totally great

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rusky…

  6. Samm

    ohhh….blush blush blush! 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Samm… your face is worth watching for this much blush and Shivaay is just teasing her….
      Thank you yaar…

  7. Mind-blowing! Shivaay is so eager for ahem ahem😶😶

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Hirah… No Shivaay loves to pull her leg… no gandi baat lolz….
      Don’t make a pool of hope for the suhaag raat scene… I am not going to write it that intensely…just will leave it for some words…

  8. Aryaraju

    Good one 😍

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you AryaRaju..

  9. Superb….. fantastic…. loved it…u nailed it again dear…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Lilly dear…

  10. Navz

    Soooo cute ,lovely andagain u made me speechless aastha….tq for d update and 😆😆😆😆😆😆😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊i think these blushing emojis will make u realise how much i liked ,loved it….😍😍😍.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Tomato…
      No more blush.. result can be fatal.. Navya to Blushing queen …and wel-come every day to read new crazy thought of Astha …

  11. Awesome….
    Naughty SSO…. 😉
    waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Shivika… Shivaay will turn responsible after this naughty time…

  12. VHM

    as usual fabulous…what more an i say…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Harika…what can I reply you yaar..after getting such a aww …reply . I am happy here…

  13. Arre waah di kya kahein aap ki writing n thoughts ke baare mein
    Awwww u r d best n u juz broke my silence today by ur khidkitod episode

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Sana for breaking the ice of silent love for my FF…welcome to my world of crazy thoughts..

  14. Thedreamsoul

    Wow Astha , this is awesome , this side of shivaye you know and yeah I hope rudra find his love angel soon .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Rudra will find love angel soon…
      Thank you for reading dreamsoul…

  15. Actually astha I’m following ur ff frm beginning but got no time to comment on it nd today finally am free so here it goes ur ff was superb and Shivay was amazing frm the beginning and pinky oh my Mataa and what not superb dr and Rudy what will be his reaction after knowing abt Saumya my god superb dr….. Jus update soon….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Arthi for giving few words for my work…
      I felt happy that you like it from the beginning… keep reading ….

  16. What a Khidkitod part Di….I loved it….Rudra’s logic is really like …..arghh what to say….Our cute chiraya bani chirota was awesome and so was her Jatadhari Hippi…
    Now coming to Shivika-It was Awwww . Now Shivaay’s theory would explain it further…..
    I’m sorry for commenting so late Di , you know my Board exams ended yesterday and I’ve not even read your new OS till.Okay I’ll just stop my bakbak and go and read it.
    BYEE
    Love you

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      OMG.. you give me time during your exam… love you too….

  17. It’s was an awesome super duper episode👏👏👏👏.astha di it’s was one of my favorite shivika ff. I’m read all parts of your ff all are awesome . I’m a silent reader. It was the first time I commenting your ff. I’m waiting Rudy s reaction after finding about love angel. I’m waiting for your next episode .update soon.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      AHSANA…thnx. keep loving dear…

  18. Got time to read ur prev update too.. I like the last line of prev one.. where he calls anika his moon.. it reminded me of the original epic in which she goes behind and says meri chaand..!
    And today’s chapter.. wah.. so cute 😘
    Am waiting for shivika wedding.. and can’t wait more for Ru to know who is his love angel.. u have kindles my curiosity aasthu gaaru.. waiting for next post! Luv u!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you for reading Anu dear…
      You may be surprised by the rushing of the story ….

  19. Vincy

    Interesting

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Vincy…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Alekhika..

  20. Hemashri Balaji

    wowwwwwwwwwwww yaar !!!!!
    very nice !!!!!
    waiting for next episode eagerly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    dont delay it please!!!!!!

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Hemashri Balaji… I will try soon dear…

  21. Asthababy you rocked post next part ASAP
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    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Darling …I have submitted the next part already…Just waiting for it to be published soon…Thanx.and keep reading…

  22. Supeerrrrr……….!!!!!!!!! U again nailed it di……

  23. Piyuu

    superb dear…

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