UNDENIABLE DESIRE – Part-12

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“Rudra “-Shivaay sipped his cup of Americano,”where is Om??”
“I have not seen him for three days… not even Obro moments..”- Rudra was in a complaining mood.
“Come close to me”- He then brought hands near his own mouth to act as whispering,”its a great secret.
Rudy is crazy and Shivaay had an effect of his company.
“He is always stuck to that new boy Chulbul…both are always romancing”- Rudra saw them talking about a spark they both felt by touching each other by chance,”they are always roaming together”.
“Unbelievable…”- Shivaay felt his voice chocked “I never knew my own Brother is like this…never in these long togetherness I felt that”.
“He even brought that Chulbul to his room three days back and blamed me for leaving mice in servant quarter..gave his favourite green couch to that topi wala”.
“You are sharing the room with them”- Shivaay got worried,” Three in a single room!!”
“I am afraid of sleeping alone”- Rudra again ranted,”but the next day I shifted in to guest room being afraid of the static they both share”.
“First Sumo snatched my own room…then O brought Chulbul… I can not even shift in to your room now as Bhabhi has agreed to marriage. I am not a kawab mein skeleton”.
“I will built a new and elegant room for you”- Shivaay promised,”on the top floor”.
“I will meet Om now to ask about the progress of Shwetlana case”- Shivaay put his cup back and left towards Om’s room.
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The tray fell from a shocked Annika as she saw a beautiful girl standing in front of mirror to hide her long hair inside of her cap.
“A chirraiya… disguised as a chirota”- The girl get shocked after meeting Annika bhabhi inside Om’s room.
“Breakfast for Om..”- She just couldn’t voiced out her feeling,”I don’t know you are also sharing his room”.
“You are a girl!!!”- Annika spoke after gaining herself back from her shocked state.
“A married girl..situational marriage …and left behind by my husband”- Gouri cried her heart out.
“… Your language..”- Annika hugged and patted chulbul’s head,”Om is very nice and helping in nature”.
“Annika too…”-Shivaay is prone to get shock that day,”His girl friend hugging the same Boy whom his own brother is in love with!!!”.
“Nahi……….”-Shivaay Singh Oberoi ran and hugged Rudra.
“That Chulbul should be out of Oberoi Mansion with in one hour”- Both the brothers concluded after discussing,” very dangerous boy he is”.
Om entered and looked at his brother as they shared a look …
“Shivaay come to my room “- Om invited. Shivaay looked at Rudra then shouted again.
“Chulbul… where is he?”- Rudra asked looking at the tensed face of his O.
” Chulbul went to room few minutes back “- Om informed,”he had important work”.
“I am coming Dadi…”- Rudra ran away from there to save him self from getting attracted to the boy Chulbul.
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“Gouri…”- Annika whispered ,”Very nice name dear”.
” My jatadhari hippi pati had no mistake ..he just saved me from Kali Thakur by marrying “- The wife defended her accidental husband.
“Jatadhari… hippi!!!”- Annika remembered only one man in this earth…no in Kailash….Himalaya…Shankarji..
“The Lord who have a snake ornament around his neck…ash in his half bare body and the other half covered by a tiger skin…
“Gouri… and Shankar…”- Annika hold her head in both her hands,”I am not ready to meet any mythological character. It was Gouri who prayed…sat on bhook hartal naming it as tapasya…just to marry her Shankarji”.
“Really… My name is Gouri and his name is also related to lord Shankarji”- Gouri tried her best.
Again we failed to gather any proof against her”-Om’s voice filled the air near the room.
“We will …Om one day”-Shivaay patted his brother to transfer some energy…
“Annika … you are here”-Shivaay act like he saw Annika first time in Om’s room,”wait for me in my room”.
“Chulbul… “- Shivaay looked at the boy…then rubbed his kanji ankhen ..she looks more like a girl then a boy..the structure.
“I will come”- Chulbul left with Annika.
“She killed the detective in the last minute”- Omkara told,”We again faced our defeat”.
“Let her do mistakes… this will lead her to destruction”- Shivaay looked confident now.
“The matter is I got this file from her room…among our office file”- Omkara handed over a blue file to waiting fingers of Shivaay.
“Annika..”..the name read…a file related to his Annika..and a full family old black and white photo.
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“Annika..I love you a lot”- He fanned her ear with his hot breath hugging her from behind”-Shivaay reached his room with the file.
“I will not let anyone hurt you”- He promised.
“By this time…I know that clearly”-Annika replied ,”Thank you for kidnapping me from the first place”.
“Wel come…”- he maintained some formality.
“You are a kidnapper Shivaay”- She teased for his unexpected move in their first meeting.
“You are a thief”- Shivaay attracted his girl’s attention,”you stole my neend..chain and my heart too”
“The disaster is I couldn’t file any complain for this”.
“Shivaay Singh Oberoi can’t do this”- Annika finally find a work he is unable to do.

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39 Comments
  1. AWESOME!!!…shivika moments were really cute…loved them..
    Eagerly waiting for the nxt…
    Nd when are u posting any of ur new os’s…..willing to read them too 😉 😛

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Bhavana…. As I get a topic I will continue posting my OS.

  2. The episode was nice and leading to mysteries.This time I found that your writing style was a bit different (maybe ).Coming back, How can Swetlana find out about Annika when the great Shivaay Singh Obetoi can’t…Man!she has a high reach..
    Waiting for next part.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Well the writing style differs according to the mood of the author…it was I only not any nakli Astha.
      It is just a ff so may very from the actual story of IB…..please adjust with that…
      Thank you…

      1. No No I didn’t mean to say you were Nakli Aastha,I’m sorry if I’ve hurt you.Maybe it was just me.So sorry. 🙁

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        Tanz….I was just jocking by putting the word “Nakli Astha”..as all we makes fun for the number of nakli characters in IB always…thats it …no matter of hurt and sorry…
        Thnx. for clearing the MU this early….Love you dear….

  3. Surbhi Sharma

    Astha di , a very big wala SORRY , couldn’t comment on ur previous part . Was really busy . Sorry .
    This part was really amazing. So , finally ani agreed for the marriage. Yayy !! Awesome .post soon ha .

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Surbhi dear for giving some times to my FF…From your busy schedule….

  4. Ruksy

    Amazing update loved it

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rusky dear

  5. Amayaa

    Ooooh to aap yaha busy thi
    AASHTA DI this is not fair ha I was missing u on de main page of ishqbaaz family badly nd u r here only u r de 1st 1 to comment on Monday’s episode nd didn’t comment yet on yesterday’s episode
    Come there soon

    Hmmmm coming 2 ur ff please assume all de best ever appreciating words as my comment urself
    Please mai kuch bhi kahungi wo kam hi hoga
    Tell me 1 thing aap ff likhne ka koi tuition karti ho kya
    CVS MUST READ UR FF ND LEARN SOMETHING FROM THIS ALL
    IT IS MUCH NEEDED
    only villains r roaming in oberoi mansion now a days
    They also forget de name of their show “ishqbaaz ” nd “dil bole oberoi ” especially dil bole oberoi
    Hmmmm but here I must say
    DIL BOLE AASHTA DI
    DIL BOLE AASHTA DI Nd AASHTHABAAZ
    DON’T WANT CHOTU SA REPLY BUT A BIG 1
    I know u don’t do much buk buk like me
    BUT PLEASE DO THIS FOR UR LONG LOST SIS
    I M WAITING DI

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Aww…….
      I was so tired yesterday then I realised … baki sab ke liye…haan Astha hai..sab thik karlegi… par Astha ke liye koi nahi…not even a person asoon pochne ke liye bhi…I cried hard and then slept early…I have no one…to love me…to care for me….near me…
      I am very lonely in real life hence end up joining telly updates…meri ajab khayalon ko pankh dene keliye…
      I am really tired of taking responsibility and decision for others…So only…Astha bhi Insaan hai…koi machine nahi…
      Like Tanz said that she felt it was not me who wrote this part of undeniable desire…It was just a mirror of my real life here….sad thi to saddy hogaya ff bhi…
      But I will try to be back with my usual self…once my mood is back to track..
      please pray for me..for my long life…and the problem at my hand to be solved soon…mujhe duaon ki jaroorat hai…abhi…
      Ab lagi na tumhari behen jaisi cmt. Thnx. for everything…..

      1. Amayaa

        Ooooh my God AASHTA DI
        RELAX
        Aapke words explain kar rahe h aap kitni tension me ho
        No AASTHA DI aise dippressed mat feel karo
        Hum sab aapke saath h di
        Koi ho ya na ho
        Puri ISHQBAAZIAN FAMILY especially mai aapke saath hu di
        Aapke aasun pochne ke liye koi bhi na ho kyonki mai God se pray karungi ki aapke aakho me kabhi aasun aai hi nahi
        THORA FILMY HO GAYA NA
        don’t ever try 2 cry from now onwards di
        Mere pass six sense h agar aapne aisa feel kiya to mai hamare SHIVAY BHAIYA ke chopper se aapke pass as jaungi
        Don’t matter aap mahi bhi ho
        UNDERSTAND
        THIS IS MY ORDER DI
        u have de whole ishqbaazian family de 2 take care of u , to luv u
        I will pray ur loneliness in real life soon get away for ever from u di aapke khayal ajeeb ni khaas (special) h
        Di sometimes it is necessary 2 COME out from responsibilities nd stop for a while in taking decisions too
        AASHTA koi machine ni balaki Ek beautiful girl h
        It’s OKKK di aise mujhe to Ye part bhi bahaut pasand aaya koi baat ni di Tanz will definitely understand ur feelings
        Hmmm back with ur usual amazing khirkitor skills soon
        Pahle hi Maine aapke liye bahaut pray kar liya aur upar mentione bhi kiya
        An aur zaada ki to bhagwan hi bhi pareshan hokar apne temple ka gate close kar lenge
        Bhagwan kare meri duaie aapke kaam aa Jan
        Even I feel very nice di ki aapne apni feelings mujse share ki
        No need 2 say thank u
        Remember NO SORRY IN SISTERHOOD IS ALLOWED
        full in ANIKA BHABHI style
        Sorry phir se lamba ho gaya but aaj Maine ye sab bak bak karne ke liye balaki aapko feel good karane ke liye kiya
        COME SOON IN OUR ISHQBAAZIAN GROUP DI
        HOPE U FEEL MUCH BETTER THAN BEFORE
        LUV U DI ???

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        Love you Amayaa…
        I am happy finally I opened up my feelings to some one…which is not my usual self…but this new discovery of sharing problem gave me enough energy….
        This problem is not solved but I am feeling like I got a new pair of wings ……and Astha is recharged …. to power ranger mode…ha ha…

  6. It is awesome dii…. Just love it…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx.Nikku dear…you are not late today…ha ha…

      1. Astha dii… Plz don’t be sad…. Aap ne hamesha rocking… Happy.. Crazy… Full of fun… In short aap jolly mood m acche lagte ho… Ye sad expression wala mood m nhi…. I wish aapki problem jaldi se khatm ho jaaye… Or aap jaldi se apne jolly.. Khidkhi todh comments k saath vapis se mile… With lots of love and care….

      2. Aastha_Reddy

        Nikku….seedha bol na aap to Brahmanandam ho…Prakash Raj mat bano di….lolz…
        I am cherry (Ram charan Teja)fan…I will be back with a double bang…like he does usually…..filmy hogayi na…ha ha…

  7. Superb….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thank you Lilly dear…

  8. Awesome…Loved it…
    Shivru convo was hilarious….
    Shivika as usual amazing….
    waiting fr d nxt…. 🙂

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Shivika….

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. dear Alekhika.

  9. Aasthu gaaru.. just saw ur reply to amayaa.. what’s going dear.. y aren’t u on our usual page? Missing u there..
    Our prayers our wishes.. our love is always ther for u dear..
    u sound quite low.. and is worrying me..
    whatever it is it wil get better dear..
    pls don get weak..

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      I never fell weak in last 12 years of taking risks.. but yesterday…I lost it…so only asked Amayaa to pray God for me….I am alright dear….
      I Will be back tonight………

  10. Awesome

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Rashi dear…

  11. Nyc episode…

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx. Zaveesha… keep reading dear….

  12. Surbhi Sharma

    Kya hua meri astha di ko. Aap Thik toh ho na ?? And we all love you so much .. Aap aisa mat bolo mujhe rona aa rha hai aapka comment padh ke (amaaya wala ) . Sab Thik hai na . I want my old chulbuli si , cute si , mast si , khidkitod astha di back . Not ye sad sad types wali .
    Aap aise sad type bilkul ache nhi lagta . Aur aap tu pg pe bhi jyada comment nhi kar tI . Kya hua . ?

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Little busy with some legal issue .. I will be back with a double bang!!! Soon….Surbhi dear.. don’t worry.. tumhari Astha di is very strong one….

  13. Navz

    Aastha..lil problems in life,dont worry our prayers and love r with u.i know that my frnd aastha will overcome all her issues(by ur straight forward comments and ur analyses i understand that ur strong..)hamesha kush raho yaar.
    Cmng to this part..awesome matlab anika ko gauri ka chirayya avatar ke bare mein patha chal gaya.aww loved their part..and anika didnt understand that gauris husband is omkara. Rudra bhi na ….always naughty.haha.
    And yaar what work does that chudail have with anikas file??what does that file contain????????.i am quite confident that u will unwrap the mystery wid logic..not like our pyaari cvs.??????..atlast gud work ..continue and post d next part soon.
    And aastha ..we both have similar tastes….i too luv virat and ram charan…..same pinch????…… I think by now ur mood is alright…gn aastha.

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      All Izz Well Navya.. you all are with me… i am winner…

  14. Amazing…., Fabulous…., Fantastic…. as usual shivika sence was superb…… U rock it di….. waiting 4 nxt…. btw i hve no frnd in tu page so…. Will u(if u want)??????

    1. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx Banjtha.. no friend in TU page for you.. pata hai kyun … you have a big and loely family of crazy ishquies here…
      I love you dear..don’t feel lonely…ok.

    2. Aastha_Reddy

      Thnx Banitha.. no friend in TU page for you.. pata hai kyun … you have a big and lovely family of crazy ishquies here…
      I love you dear..don’t feel lonely…ok.

  15. Thnk u soo much dear it means a lot……..

  16. Shivika

    Wowwwwwww……..amazing…….superbbbbb…….speechless…..it was mind blowing…..u nailed dear

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