Undeafeatable love ( 3 shots ) – daamini -2nd shot , happy birthday chiku

Guys I know what that I’m late …. but first of all …
HAPPY BIRTHDAY MY CHIKU 😘😘😘😘😘
MY UR ALL DESIRES COME TRUE …
YOU’VE BEEN SUCH A GOOD FRIEND TO ME N FOR THAT THNX A LOT… THNX FOR ALWAYS SUPPORTING ME …. LOVE YOU BABY A LOT… U DESERVE ENDLESS LOVE…. KUST LOVE U MY DEARY …. HOPE U HAVE A WONDERFUL DAY .. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
So now a bit back …. I’m really sorry guys .. my exams were going on so wasn’t able to post … really sorry yaar ….. but now back ….. so these r my 3 shots n I’m damn sure no one be remembering this so I’m posting my first part too again … n those who knows read it after “2ND SHOT “ …. in this… there will be my both parts …. love u guys .. hope you enjoy reading this 😘😘😘😘
1st PART
A girl is shown running in the bushes and a group of people running behind her…… she is none other than twinkle , crying scared and a wounded one ….. she is in white saree with no accessories, looking like someone’s death is happen in her house
The crowd is chasing her and taking out her name in infuriate ……
Twinkle is running with her all struggle n pain which her wounds are giving .. tears are gushing out of her eyes and afraid of being caught by the cruel people behind her …
Now it was a journey of jungle and no one is still ready to stop .. some people stopped between in it but some were still running …. twinkle stopped between in it and starting breathing fast and heavily but again started running as the scare of being killed was in her mind and finally after crossing a lil part of jungle there she was now on highway … looking for a lift … she tried her best to stop one but all on the highway denied to give any lift and went away without paying any heed to twinkle ….. now twinkle was left alone with no hope and she started crying … she was a lifeless body walking on the road …. then only a car coming in great speed hit twinkle …… she was lying on the road in a pool of blood….. but the ppl inside the car were genuine and kind so they quickly came outside from the car n went near her … a lady of her mother age was one of them n started tapping her face n quickly took her in the car n drove it to the hospital

#hospital#
One nurse : Dr kunj sarna ko bulao …. it’s a very critical case … only he can handle this … quickly go and call him ….
Twinkle is on the stretcher …. her head is bleeding and not stopping …. her whole body is wounded …

# Kunj cabin#
K : just ready the operation theater n shift patient there I’m coming ……..
Kunj comes out of his cabin is moving towards the operation theater then only a man comes n tap him on his shoulder
Man : kunj let it be … it’s an accident n it should be handle by police first ….
Kunj : come on anuraag!!! Tu kabhi ni badal sakta … n I’m very particular about my patients just let me go
Kunj goes from there frustrated but still with an attitude …. he opens the door of the operation room n saw the examination table surrounded by all the doctors who were worried …… kunj closed his eyes wig some unknown pain n then open them n went inside …….
One doc : finally you are here ….. she is really critical… kuchh samajh mein ni aa raha ….
Kunj looks at the patient who is none other than twinkle n went into a deep thought but in fraction of seconds he came back in his real world n wears his mask n glove ….. he started ordering equipments needed for the operation…. n now it was all momentous period …..
The operation is going on …. kunj is all focused to his role ….. tension is on his face ……

After sometime
One doc : patient pulse is dropping down
Now twinkle is breathing fast… heavily
Kunj looks at her n took out the electric shock appliance
Another doc : we are loosing the patient ……
Kunj puts the electric shock on her heart area ….. n releasing it back…..
The computer was just showing her heart beat dropping
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Doctor: we are loosing her ………
Some ward boys n nurse standing outside the operation room n peeping inside are talking
One nurse : I think so this time Dr kunj sarna will loose the patient ….
Second nurse : yaa me too think so …. look at the state of the patient ……. so much of blood has been lost ….. it’s not possible
One ward boy : come on ! I’m sure he will do this ….. there is no case in which kunj hasn’t saved the patient … this time he again do it
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Inside the room
One doctor : we have loosed the patient ……
Kunj looks at twinkle who was lying on the examination table with no sprit in her body…….
For the first time he was feeling defeated….. in his history there was not even a single case which he had loosed ………. the other doctors present there took out there gloves and mask n covered twinkle with white sheet …….
All the ppl standing outside were suspicious to know the matter ……….
Kunj looked at twinkle who was covered with a blanket n then looked down where he found a pendent…. he took it in his hands n after that he placed it in twinkle’s hand …… ……….
…………………………………………. kunj was about to leave when he heard a noise …. the noise was none other than of pendent hitting the floor surface ….. he turned around n saw the pendent lying on the ground …. he bent down in order to lift it up but then a shock was there for him …..
Twinkle took a long breadth …… kunj was in a shock n in happiness too
Kunj : sandhya…. ajay come fast !!!!!!!
All came worried n were shock when they saw kunj turning on the all electrical appliances n computers …….. kunj was giving electric shocks to twinkle where as twinkle’s pulse rate was increasing ……. after a long procedure kunj team came out of the operation room n were leaving for the preparation of other test which were needed for twinki …
Kunj suddenly got stopped
Kunj : who brought this patient here ??
Ajay : don’t know…. let me ask the nurse or ward boy
Then only a nurse came running
Nurse : sir a lady came with the patient…….. n she did all the payment needed for the treatment but she left ….
The nurse left from there
Kunj : don’t know why these ppl do these things ….. if she is responsible for the state of the patient so how can she leave like this …………..
Kunj went from there in was in his cabin in a deep thought then only he took out a file …….. sandhya entered the cabin n started explaining the report of twinkle
Sandhya ( one doc ) : kunj it’s just urrrggghhhh
K ( raising one eye brow) what’s urrrggghhhh
S : kunj ! The patient of which we did operation today…… u can’t believe that she is physically assault…. n must be mentally too …. the wounds which are on her body are not of car accident ……. it’s something else …. like …… you should examine her once ……
Kunj was keeping his right hand finger below chin n other holding the file……
K : hmmm u r right …. n what about further reports …
S : nothing much…… she will be observe in ice minimum 2 days then only we can come to a conclusion
Sandhya left from there
#12:30pm#
A man wearing doc clothes was going to the twinkle’s room and was none other than kunj
Kunj enters the room n saw twinkle lying on the bed with an oxygen mask and surrounded by a lots of machine …… he looked at twinkle with glassy eyes and then covered his face with the mask n wore gloves
Kunj made the sheet a lil bit aside from her shoulder n found a human bite sign …………… now kunj made whole sheet side and then looked at twinkle with unknown pain … he closed his eyes tightly n the end opened them … he made her apparel clothes which were of top length aside n looked at her belly ……
K : what ! She’s been treated so cruel… I don’t even know her but don’t know I can feel her pain …. she must be given proper treatment… don’t know through how much struggle n pain she has gone… .
Kunj covered her with sheet n was about to go when. he saw a man in a get up of doc was coming but in nervousness …….
Kunj ( slightly) : who is he ? Never seen him before … ( kaun hai yeh……. pehle toh ni dekha kabhi )
Kunj comes out from the icu aaaaaannnnnnnddddddd tap the shoulder of that man
K : ummmmm so who are you…… new to this hospital ?
Man( hesitating n covering his face the mask )
K : what ! I’m asking you something …….
Kunj held his collar n was about to punch him when
Someone from behind : yes kunj he is new….. in fact not new but needed for the patient check up … he is well experienced….
K : which patient….
Sandhya : that only of whom we did operation today ….
Kunj eyeing the man : no there is no need I can handle the patient in fact I examine her too …
S : kunj !!!!!! What kind of behaviour is this…. we have called him from very far n now u r saying that no …. come one ( now looking at the man ) : Dr raj Singh now you can go to that room
The man went inside n saw twinkle lying on the bed with oxygen mask …… and smirks
Outside
A man coming to kunj n sandhya ……
M : Dr sandhya where’s the patient……..
S: Dr raj Singh?
R : yes !
K : then who’s inside ….
Kunj quickly ran into the room when he saw the man removing twinkle oxygen mask ….. kunj hold his collar n started to beat him ……….
K : kon hai tu ???? ( one more punch ) …. kis liye aayaa hai …..
Man : twinkle !
Before he could do anything more he ran away from there…… kunj ran after him but the man escaped ….
Outside the hospital
Man : aaj toh tu Bach gayi twinkle ……. but ek baat hamesha yaad rakhiyo yuvraj luthra kabhi ni harta …. kabhi bhi ni .
N he ran away..
Kunj quickly comes back in the room n looks at twinkle
K : twinkle ! Twinkle kaisi hai
S : twinkle ?
K : iska naam twinkle hai …….
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Now it’s been 2 days …. twinkle was observe in icu but still wasn’t in conscious state …. after that attack kunj n all the team decided as twinkle is not treated well …. n she is not even conscious state so she need a safe place ….. after that attack it was crystal clear that someone wants to kill her n according to them she is not the safe in hospital not other ppl ……..
As others were living in small n some on rent house it was decided that kunj will keep twinkle in observation at his home ………. twinkle was shifted to kunj’s house ……… but still was unconscious
Sarna mansion
Kunj was sitting in twinkle’s room n removing all the things happened.. …. he then got up from there n set the sheet of twinj k less bed ….checked the mask ..
N then he left from there n went to his room ….
@2pm
A voice come like vase hitting floor n broken…
Kunj quickly get up …. he was scared n nervous n was tensed too .. he went down n was shocked to see twinkle fallen on the ground blood coming out of her foot …… n crying too
K : twinkle ……
Kunj hurriedly went to her n bent down n started examining her foot
K : yeh kya kartab hai ? …….. abhi kya kum chotein lagi hui hain jo aur harkatein kar ri ho …
T ( scared ) : tumhe mera naam kaise pataa ….. aur main yahaan kya kar ri hun …. main kaise aayi … ( now holding her head ) mujhe kuchh samajh mein ni aa raha yeh kya ho raha hai …..
Kunj was feeling her pain : calm down …… tum stress matt do apne aap ko …. tumhe rest karna chaahiye .. Chalo
Twinkle backing off : nahi mujhe jana …..
K : bas chup ….. ek toh jaan bachayi aur upar se mujhe sunaa ri hun …… agar ek shabd bhi aur bola na toh vaapas chodhhhh aaunga jahaan se layabout hun ….
Kunj make twinkle get your from the floor but before she could manage on her own she again about to fall sown but kunj hold her on time ……
K : wait……….. tum matt utho
Kunj make his hands towards her n lift her up in bridal style ….. he took her into his arms ..kunj was eyeing twinkle but she wasn’t making any eye contact …
For kunj it was clearly visible that how much pain n fear twinkle is carrying……
He went to her room n placed her on the bed but still was opinion the position on her … twinkle looked at him n pushed him away ……. kunj felt guilty Foe being doing silly thing ……
K ( thinks ) : don’t know why but I feel I know her … something is connected …..
Kunj took out the first aid box n did n dressed twinkle….. n whenever twinkle winced in pain kunj became concern ………. twinkle was eyeing him with unknown feelings but then some memories occupied her brain ……. n she suddenly backed off her foot n it hurt her
K : arre !
K : kuchh problem hai toh bataa sakti ho
Twinkle shake her head in nothing
Kunj was leaving from there n about to turn off the light when …
T : light matt off karna …..
Kunj turned around n looked at her in confusion …..
T : darr lagtaa hai Mujhe andnere se …. ..
K : but sleeping keeping the lights on is not good … n there is no ghosts in this house…… it’s just constructed 8 years ago …. aur naaaahi kissi kabristaan par banaya hai ….. so chill
T ( lil bit anger ) tumhe kisne kahaa mujhe bhooto we darr lagata hai … sirf andhere se ….
K : jo tumhaari ichha
T : rukko ! ……………… tumhe mera naam kaise pataa hai ….
K ( thinks) : this is not the right time of telling her the truth
K : so jao …. kal subah baat karte hain …
N he left from there ……………. leaving a confused twinkle behind who later sobbed thinking about her past ………
2ND PART
It was morning but kunj was looking already waken up since hours ….. he was going to twinkle’s room with a plate of food when he noticed some blood marks on the ground n reminds the last night incident when twinkle was escaping but got hurt on her foot due to the broken vase qq…. He thought for a sec the quickle ran to the twinkles room ….. he opened the door n yess … twinkle wasn’t there ….
Kunj : shit ! now where did she go ……
Kunj pov ..
My legs were totally trembling with fear what if something happen to her …. I grabbed my car keys n ran to the car … i was driving when I heard a beeping sound n yeah it was call of ajay ….
Kunj : ajay ! listen …
Ajay : what listen …. Let me tell you one thing tha….
Kunj (in one breadth ): she left …. I don’t know where she went … last night she also tried to escape …
Ajay : what ! ……………………………………… are you kidding me ….. ???????????
Kunj : come on n just help me out …. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Ajay : kunj ! ……………………… kunj ! are you there ……
I stopped the car as someone was just about to get hit …. Stupid ppl …..
Kunj : yeah ! I’ll call you later ……
Ajay : but…………….
I opened the door in great anger coz the stress of missing twinkle was enough for me but … but what ? god wasn’t done with me yet …. I wen out of the car n was shocked to see twinkle lying half conscious on the road …. The word just went out my mouth in slow voice … TWINKLE ! ………………. I ran to her n before I could do something a pair of couple came there ………
Kunj pov ends
Man : look at the girl n see so many injuries r already there on her n he just hit her …
Kunj thinks : ab yeh kya siyapaa hai …….
Kunj : are what are u saying … I I didn’t …
Woman : omg ….. pehle toh galti karte ho aur upar se senazori … ( sorry no translation )
Kunj made puppy face ………… he ingnored them n quickly grabbed twinkle’s arm in order to lift er up but…..
Man : pummy call the police he wont get it …
Woman : yeah sure … why not ….n u just stay away from her …
Kunj joined his hands infron of then in frustration ….
Kunj : cant u both see in what state is she …. She just by mistakly came infront of my car … n I know her .. in fact she lives with me …
Both the man n woman were confused when they heard twinkle mumering …
Twinkle : kunj !
Kunj in concern way looked at her …
Kunj : twinkle ….
Man : oh him really srry … I wasn’t knowing that she is your wife ! ………………………………………….. kunj looked at him on listening wife word than looked at twinkle who was in pain without any thought he took her in bridal style n made her lay on the back seat ……………………….
Kunj pov
I was driving the car n again n again looking at the mirror watching a disturbed twinkle who was moving her head …. Yeah I was worried … so what … koi bhi ho meri jagah … insaaan aise toh ghabrayega hi …… but this wasn’t enough when I saw twinkle crying …. I knw she wasn’t making any sound but I was able to see small tears coming out of her eyes …. It was me who was very patient coz her tears were provoking me but I kept calm n tried to drive as quickly as I could … we reached home but till that twinkle was slept …, yeah… not to worry … of course Thai much pin can let anyone I to a sleep … I can understand how tiered she is … but ….. I took her into my bold n stiff arms n lay on the bed …. I thought I’m doing right thing but not …. but … now if I have taken her responsibility so I have to complete it…..
Kunj pov ends
Jpkunj left from there for first aid where as twinkle was still under conscious… kunj came back in the room n started dressing her wounds ….. ……..
After sometime twinkle woke up n saw kunj standing on the balcony of her room … she tried to be quiet n started thinking of all happened on last two days but kunj was already turned …. he aggressively went near her while twinkle red eyes were just down …. …
Kunj slowly took out his handkerchief n made his hands towards twinkle…. twinkle looked at him n took it
Kunj : if there is anything to say or share u can …. I’m ur doctor ….
Twinkle kept quiet but kunj was becoming frustrated …
Kunj ( angrily ) : r u listening me … ??? …. I’m saying something …. n you ! Humesha koi nayi problem ….
Twinkle closed her eyes …. kunj noticed it n then let his pitch low ….
Kunj: see …. I don’t think so that I have to tell you something … you know everything …, yess I want to know the whole matter but I don’t want to pressurise you….. I’m ur doctor …. in fact doctor bhi nahi dost …. dost toh maan hi sakti ho ….
Kunj looked at twinkle whose eyes were swollen …. who was just lost somewhere …..
Kunj : hello!!!!!! ( sarcastically)
Twinkle looked at kunj with heavy eyes n kunj who was trying to lighten up the mood also melted in those eyes …. he come close to twinkle…. n wiped the tear ….. twinkle who was just sitting full of pain suddenly hugged kunj tightly ….
Kunj pov
I just melted in those eyes … I don’t know why but she carrying a lot of pain within it … before I could do anything she hugged me …… n i was left with no except hugging her back as tightly as I could… don’t know why I did that but it was needed…. she was crying on my chest …. I was rubbing her hairs ….. my cloth was wet with her tears … I couldn’t take it anymore … broke the hug …. n left her there on the bed without saying anything ………
Kunj pov ends .
Twinkle pov
I don’t know what happened to me but ….. but Wilpshire I could tell u kunj …. how I suffered …. just wish …. it seems easy but very difficult ….
Pov ends
Kunj was in his room when he calls someone ….
Kunj: hello sandhya ….
S : haan bolo kunj
Kunj : sandhya …, twinkle is in depression …. Her health is not okay … she really needs a psychiatrist …. she needs to get out of the depression ….
S : come on kunj ….. we can talk let any psychiatrist…. kunj the thing u r telling me is correct but right now twinkle needs only one person …. she can’t share anything with someone … so how can u think she will tell 2 doctors …. kunj u r expert … u can do this ….. don’t be so stubborn ….
Kunj tried to let sandhya understand but she denied …. n at last he agreed to her terms …..
All night kunj was standing in the balcony … n same with twinkle …. both weren’t able to sleep ….
It was morning …. kunj was heading to twinkle’s room but he stops at the door , joined his hands
Kunj: baba ji iss time please …. room mein Haa…
He opened the door n was elated to see twinkle over there ….
Kunj: thank God…. nahi aaj toh kamaal hi ho gaya…. tum air apne room mein …..
Twinkle. : when I’m leaving from here
Kunj : u r not ! ……….. jab tak theek nahi ho jaati tab tak toh bilkul bhi nahi …………
Twinkle was about to say something when….
Kunj : busy the way …. the day till u r with me so I wanted to say that my brother n mom is coming so please ….. they r coming after a long time n i don’t wanna spoil there mood busy showing u infront of them always crying …. so it’s better if u don’t stay like this….. so please be cheerful ….. n yeah remember … for them u won’t be mine patient…. infront of them we will be friends ….
Twinkle narrowed her eyes n gave a what the hell look …
Kunj : I know it’s pretty looking dumb but …… they will be coming by evening…….
Kunj left from there n twinkle was just looking in his direction …….

LAST PART : THE DOOR OPENS …. TWINKLE IS SHOCKED TO SEE KUNJ’S MOM N BROTHER….. A SECRET COMES OUT INFRONT OF KUNJ …. TWINJ ARE BROKEN …………. LET SEE

So here guys I ended … n my chiku baby have a wonderful day … meri duaa hai tum bunny se zaroor Millo ek din 😘😘😘😘😘 n love you all guys …. I know I’m late but ……. I’m really sorry guys mujhe bhi achaa ni lagta aap sabko wait Karana … I will soon end this last part too …. n if agar aap logo ko koi prob hai so I will soon end my ff too …. but please naraaz mat hona …. really sorry for that …. now I hope you like it …. just finger crossed.. 😂😂 nahi pasand aaya toh please batana … I won’t mind ….. but please drop your comments down 😘😘😘😘😘😘
Lub uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu alllllllllllllllll 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

13 comments

  1. Roshini125

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    U r too late as I was reading I remembered the story thanks fr updating last epi also….n it seems quite interesting plz come back soon with next part will be waiting

  2. Jiya_Ani

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    Yaad aya..nahi nahi..vo toh dusra tha…are haan…ye wala…nooooo…its different…

    Pehle part main aisa hi hua mere saath!…hehehe..acha..epi was soooooo amazing… Sooooooo amazing.. Ki kya bolu!!…

    Acha..Y din you replied to my mail?…lagbhag ek maheena ho gya mujhe tumhe epi send kiye hue…check it out …okay…

    😘😘😘

  3. SidMin

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    Loved it I just love the plot and Kunj is so sweet 😘
    Post when ever you are free but dont end 😊
    Love you 😘

  4. Ramya

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    Daamini ki bachi koi itna wait karaya hai kya I was waiting fr ur ff eagerly aur tumne post nahi kiya aur mai approximately bhul bhi gayi jab starting pad rahi thi tab yaad aagaya
    N u know koi bhi suspense mai nahi chodta it’s one of my favourite I just loved it so plsssssss asap next one
    Aur ff ko end karne ke baare mai sochna bhi mat
    Got it
    Love u
    Bye

  5. Chiku

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    Hellllo dams
    Sorry for late comment skool tbain
    Episode is asuaual awesome babes. Its just mindblowing. U showed twijs pain soo well I seriously love ur ff and ur writing skill. U r just mindblowing. Kaise likhti ho itna acha. By the way dont think of ending ur ff ok. 😄😄😄😄

    U know i suck in writing long comments. All i want to say is i am lucky to have a friend like u. Thank u for everything. 😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😘😘😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😍😍😍thank u soooo much.

    Love u💜💜🙈

  6. Priya23

    Hlw…..damini……woww I luv ur both ff and 3 shot…..plssssss its humble request don’t end this…..I always waiting 4 it desperately…..ur truly awesome writer…… And don’t end this shot so early and make it ff ok if its possible……post next epi soon….luv u….

  7. Baby

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    dammi nhi aya pasand itna ganda cheeeeeeee………
    ofco cheeee……..
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    .how dare u say ki if pasand naaa aya ho toh end krdungi mein apni ff bhi matlab kuch bhi..
    haan y n how kun bhi kun yr itna acha likhti hai still u waana end itt ab mein tujhse baat nhi krti dare u end anything warning u haan hahahahahhaaa….. 😀
    acha ye bata dar laga tha kya ki mene cheeeeee……. ka hahahaa soooo sorry yr bas gussa agya ki tune end krne ka socha bhi kun….♥♥
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    .chal ab nhi krungi aisa prank love u lods n haan post asap aise suspense mein choda hai jisme i cant stay for soooooooooo long ☻ :Dapna ff bhi soon soon
    love you♥♥

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