Uncontrollable feelings (swasan ff)by Mars part 9

Uncontrollable Feelings (swasan ff)
Part 9:
Rajesh’s house:
Swara opened her eyes and saw daffy in her embrace (not Sanskar hihi).She started caressing his hairs and remembered last night confession. She is feeling extreme happiness after knowing that sanskar also love her. A beautiful smile appear on her face as their first kiss flashed in her mind. She is blushing profusely. Someone is looking at her changing expressions and he is daffy who got up.
Swara saw him and said
Swara: u know daffy Sanskar also love me. I can’t believe.
Daffy stare at her.
Swara: u r not happy!?
Daffy made puppy sound. Swara hugged him tightly not able to control her feelings.
Then she went to get ready.

Sanskar’s room:
Sanskar is standing in front of mirror getting ready for office. His face is all blank. No emotions at all. A layer of guilt and regret can be seen in his dark brown eyes. He is lost in his thoughts.
Do he remember what all he did yesterday night in drunken state or he forgot it due to hangover.

Sanskar’s POV:
Ohhh God don’t know why I has made my life so complicated. Why I get out of control when swara come near me.
Ufff SWARA!!! this single little girl has bought storm in my calm life. She always attract me like a magnet. Sometimes I feel strange of my own acts.Whatever happened yesterday should not have happened but I had already committed a mistake but now I will be very careful. I will totally avoid her. As far as I know only her few days are left here then she will go and my life will come back to track. I have act as a sensible man.
I with pretend that I don’t remember what ever happened yesterday night.
This will be best. But the thing which made my heart flutter is swara also love me and she kissed me back. Her taste is still in my mouth. I had brushed three times but her essence is making me crazy. How much I want to taste those Delicious lips of her again…. ohhhhhhh control sanskar just have control for few days then everything will be okay. I have three strong reason which prove that swara is not for me.Firstly, I m going to marry kavita as I had promised baba and I can never deny to baba.Secondly, she is not of my type her living style is different, her status is different may be I will never be able to fulfil her wishes and demands after marriage. Hayeee I started thinking of marriage also now next thought will be of our first night only no no control sanskar control. And the most valid and essential third reason is DAFFY he loves swara a lot and I m not cruel to snatch someone’s true love lol.
I think she started effecting my brain also. Stop thinking all this rubbish sanskar just ignore her and act normally as if you don’t remember anything.(keep his hand on heart): plzz heart Ji don’t flutter seeing her and be in my control.
Sanskar POV ends.
Then he went to hall.
( I tried to made Sanskar’s POV serious one but don’t know what it comes out to be).

Dining Table:
Sanskar came and saw rajesh doing breakfast. He signed in relief and
Sanskar (thinks): thank god swara and his boyfriend didn’t came till now I should eat fast and leave.
Sanskar sit on his chair and silently started having his breakfast.
Then only swara came with daffy and wished rajesh
Swara: good morning hotty
Rajesh:morning angel.
Sanskar listening her voice he buried his face in his plate.
Swara(shyly): good morning sanskar
Sanskar: morning
Rajesh:swara u look very happy?
He asked as Swara’s smile is not leaving her lips. Sanskar not able to control look at her.
Swara(blushes): it’s nothing like that.
Sanskar was gone seeing her pink cheeks.
Sanskar (mentally slapped himself): don’t look at her idiot u will lose.
Sanskar quickly had his breakfast and left to bank.

In the village:
Kavita’s house:
Kavita is alone at home and is doing some work. But suddenly door opened and someone came inside. She instantly turn and her foot got twisted.
Kavita: ahhh
The person who entered was sahil. He ran to her and asked
Sahil:u r ok kavita?
Kavita nodded with teary eyes.
Sahil picked her in his arms shocking her.
Kavita: sahil what are u doing?
Sahil made her sit on bed and rub her foot.
Kavita:plzz leave I will manage.
Sahil:keep quite I m doing it.
After massaging her foot he sit beside her and saw tears on her cheeks.
Sahil(wipe her tears): don’t cry plzz.
Kavita nodded and looked in his eyes.
She can find only love in them. She felt like to see in his eyes non stop.
She didn’t find such things in sanskar’s eyes huh!!! She never looked in his eyes till now.
Kavita broke the never ending eyelock and asked
Kavita:u here at this time?
Sahil : yeah was just free so thought to meet you.
Kavita(smiles): I will bring tea.
She was about to go when he held her wrist.
Sahil:I don’t want anything just sit and talk.
Kavita and sahil started talking on random things. They are enjoying each others company. But still sahil didn’t know about sanskar and kavita’s engagement.

Sanskar is coming to his room from kitchen then only swara came from front with daffy(every time he is with her what to tell again and again)
Swara: hi sanskar.
Sanskar(Normally): hello
Sanskar looked at daffy who was glaring him. Then he remembered his last night conversation with daffy and was thinking how idiotically he acted.
Swara: so u enjoyed in the club?
Swara somehow wanted to know that he remember about last night or not.
Sanskar got startled with her question. What he should tell that he is still indulge in that night only.
Sanskar: it was ok.
Swara: but for me it was the best night when I visited club.
She said little huskily and shyly.
Sanskar……. Was about to die when he thought to run away before something happen.
Sanskar: will talk later I have some work.
He quickly went from there.
Swara(mumble):he was also feeling shy.
She said smilingly.
Then went to her room.

Swara’s Room:
Swara is sitting on bed with Daffy in her lap.
Swara: daffy now as I m sure sanskar love me then I think I should propose him in a grand way.
Daffy was looking at her.
Swara: but he is going to marry kavita but neither kavita love him nor he as I know so it won’t be wrong if I propose him.
Daffy nodded.
Swara: and kavita is nice girl. She will understand. So its final that I will propose Sanskar and that tooo tomorrow as I can’t wait more. When he will accept then we will tell dadu and mom dad. Finally marriage…. Ohh god stop your train of thoughts swara.
Daffy is looking down and swara noticed that he is sad. So to cheer him she said
Swara: buttt my love for u will never Change daffy. I love you sooo much
Daffy nuzzles more into her and she also hugged him tightly.
Later they slept planning about the proposal.
To be continued….


Sorry as this is short update.
Kindly ignore mistakes
One more thing as I told that I will give three updates of my stories per day but some times it may be two also so plzz compromise.
Thank you.


  1. SHAN


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    Awesome dr!!! I thought sanskar will forget as he took drinks for the first time!!! But i am happy he remembered!!! Loved it a lot

  2. Darlzz002

    So sweet di…
    Swara is shy….. owww…. so cute…πŸ˜„
    Di… Im damn impressed with ur writing…

  3. NDSG


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    Oh God this boyπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ he is totally become Asanskari. See swara what u made him… 😝😘😘😘😘 kiss k bad to sanskar k desires control he nahi ho rahe… Sidha first nightπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ sanskar is fighting with himself. Mind and heart… Please God ji is buddhu ko akal do so that he will listen to his heart only… 😘😘😘😘

  4. Mica


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    πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ Daffi’s girl friend ki effect, poor sanskar, imagining marriage to first night…

  5. Gayathri.visu


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    Hey Marsuu I don’t think Sanskaar’s POV is serious one(don’t look at me like that)….his third reason…OMG, like seriously, that is also one his reason??
    Amazing update dear…totally loved it. Sanskaar’s confusion….hope soon he will take good decision! Swara n Daffy…..as usual cutied! Precap……oh nooooooo Swara’s heart break!!

    • Mars



      I know gayuu dear Sanskar’s POV was not serious one don’t know what I had written. Thank you dear will post next part soon

  6. Scooby


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    Lovely chapie πŸ€—πŸ€— sanskar pov πŸ€€πŸ€€πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ˜πŸ˜ superb and his comparision with daffy.. omg…

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